Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter Two: In Service to Our Lady Options

[minque]

whoopsies! I use TIL for direct dialogue from the game, and the PC for the text is Faern Sargtlin.

i know dear! I justthought I'd point it out...maybe you don't want Faern in your story? Faern is Sinder Velvin's creation

But you know I love it anyway...

[mplantinga]

My favorite part of the last few updates was the glint in Rayne's eye after talking with Barenziah, and the conversation that Seth and Rayne have when she gets back. Something about that just felt truly great.

[Black Hand]

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[canis216]

An excellent update. I like that little reflection back to the training of Master Indarys. Most excellent.

[minque]

Aaaaalrighty then....Lexie the great next! I wonder..mmmm I wonder, that lady is known for her devious manners. What if she eats Seth alive? I never played the part with the Band, Serene never met Barilzar, and she probably never will!

Oh a humorous quote:

Don’t rely on your eyes, especially when you can’t see. Especially when we work at night.”

More:

“When we first met, you were pretty good at it. Remember? You were blindfolded kicking the training dummy.”

“That was training. This is real life.”

“We were being trained for real life.” I said with a smirk.

The words of wisdom from my favourite Assassin!

Thank you Blackie, for the dedication, I'm touched, really I am!

[mplantinga]

I especially enjoyed the fight between Sethyas and Barilzar; you described fighting blind in a very compelling way. I'm looking forward to seeing how you describe Sethyas' thoughts when he finally meets Almalexia.

[Black Hand]

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[bbqplatypus]

Yes! Another update! I'd love to see more, but I know you're busy. I know exactly what that's like. I'm still glad for every new bit of this story I see. This one was really good. The quote at the end summed it up nicely.

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[Black Hand]

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[bbqplatypus]

This update was a really thoughtful and reflective one. I actually tend to like those sorts of updates because it allows for deeper and more poetic prose. Again, it's good to see more from you.

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[mplantinga]

Hooray for introspection. It was satisfying to see how deeply Sethyas understands the socio-political motivations of the power-hungry Mournhold elites and his centrality to the furtherance of their schemes. His past has certainly taught him how to be careful, a lesson I hope he doesn't forget in the coming days.

[Black Hand]

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[Black Hand]

Here ends Chapter 2

[bbqplatypus]

Awesome! Now we're getting to the juicy part! All these posts in a row...just like old times, eh?

[minque]

I'm stunned....four updates in a row....then a darn CLIFFIE!!!!

A couple of quotes:

the clash of rodent versus mer was over quite quickly.

Made me nearly spit out my wine.... (you know what I came to think of, right?)

Almalexia, our lady of grace, bride of Nerevar, and one of the most beautiful creatures I had ever laid eyes upon.

Seth! What are you getting at? Don't you know that Lady is a Maneater?

Anyway these four updates are as classy as usual! Your work really is very impressive.

I've just loved reading about Sethyas' life and I'm looking forward to chapter 3....

Thank you soo much dear Blackie for a most entertaining eve....just the thing I needed after a very loooong day