Memoirs of a Morag Tong Assassin: Mournhold Volume, Chapter Three: At the King's Command. Options

[Black Hand]

Deleted.

This post has been edited by Black Hand: Sep 21 2013, 12:54 AM

[minque]

Yes...what is his true purpose? I must admit I haven't a clue, so I guess I'll have to wait and see, (til tuesday?)

Aaaaanyway so he's going out with Rayne? A decent thing to do, the poor girl must have been sick with worry.

A Seth-ish quote:

So our little friend was a bit of a drinker. They wanted me to do what to him exactly? Try to drink him under the table? Poison his drink? Get into a barfight? No. Helseth would be watching me ever closer then usual. None of these things warranted killing a man outside of honorable combat. Assassin I may be, but something about eliminating Karrod prior to the duel just left a bad taste in my mouth. Perhaps it was the Redoran in me.

Awesome..just awesome

[Black Hand]

Deleted.

This post has been edited by Black Hand: Sep 21 2013, 12:54 AM

[mplantinga]

“This buys you my service, and a bit of loyalty too.”

If only true loyalty could be bought. I do hope his new companion doesn't cause him any trouble.

[minque]

I didn't think Seth was suicidal, but now I don't know...If I was Raynie I'd be terrified for him or at least I'd try to talk him out of it.

But of course you can't talk Sethyas out of something he's in for, so let's hope he and his "loyal" companion really makes it.

Honestly I think they do.

‘If I stick you with a pointy object enough times, you’ll still die.’

I hope nobody will do just that to him....


So I'll be patiently waiting....for what?

You know what Blackie....you know!

[Black Hand]

Deleted.

This post has been edited by Black Hand: Sep 21 2013, 12:54 AM

[canis216]

Damn good work here, Black Hand. I mean, I go off on this little canoe trip of mine, and come back with about 8.23 billion updates to read, and every one is bloody wonderful.

[Colonel Mustard]

I read this over the last couple of days and what can I say? Bloody brilliant, that's what!

You have managed to craft words with the skill of a truly gifted author, making the plot of both games into something truly special. You have moments of humour, romance, action, tension and philosophy throughout, whilst Sethyas is a brilliantly developed character. Ruthless enough to be an assassin, yet human enough to be likeable, Sethyas seems to be a loveable rogue and one of my favourite characters.

Good show!

[Black Hand]

Deleted.

This post has been edited by Black Hand: Sep 21 2013, 12:54 AM

[minque]

I read this over the last couple of days and what can I say? Bloody brilliant, that's what!

You have managed to craft words with the skill of a truly gifted author, making the plot of both games into something truly special. You have moments of humour, romance, action, tension and philosophy throughout, whilst Sethyas is a brilliantly developed character. Ruthless enough to be an assassin, yet human enough to be likeable, Sethyas seems to be a loveable rogue and one of my favourite characters.

Good show!

Ok Mr Bean! You just said all what I was thinking of saying, I do second every word of it, since Sethyas really IS my favourite charachter, and Serene' as well..

Your poetic, yet intriguing writing style appeals to me very much. I'm so eager to see where this is going, the tension build-up make me shiver from anticipation

And my date with death was still a few hours off.

Oh Sethyas....

[Black Hand]

deleted.

This post has been edited by Black Hand: Sep 21 2013, 12:54 AM

[mplantinga]

That was an excellent update. The interplay between Sethyas and Helseth at the end is truly superb. I'm really looking forward to seeing how they handle things from here, and what the nature of their relationship becomes.

[canis216]

Wow!

[Colonel Mustard]

That was an awesome duel there. Not quite as awesome as the one between Sethyas and Venim, but awesome nonetheless.

And whls we're a bit in the vein of picking favourite characters, mine has got to be Rayne.

[canis216]

To clarify my earlier response (Wow!), I'd like to say that I direct it (Wow!) to the transformation of Sethyas and Helseth's dispositions towards one another. It is a radical shift, and yet you make it fit, taking total ownership of the Tribunal storyline. The duel was nice too, though I think you've done better. So I guess I'm saying...

Wow!

[minque]

Yes....oh yes you've done it again! An excellent read after a hard day's work. And as have been pointed out by the rest of your fan-club, the interaction between Helseth and Sethyas was really very well described.

But..can the King be trusted?

In my opinion Seth will have to be alert, he must watch his back, because if I was him...I wouldn't trust His Royal Highness for one lousy bit!

Hmmm waiting very patiently....again

I still wondered why warriors would want to attract attention in these things, you couldn’t sneak up on a deaf and blind guar.

[Black Hand]

deleted.

This post has been edited by Black Hand: Sep 21 2013, 12:55 AM

[minque]

You're not the only one! My battles are normally written by experts ..like Mallie..

But leave it as is! No actual need to change it...

[Apophis2412]

Nice dialog between Helseth and Sethyas.


What will happen now? Will he begin to actually like Helseth?

[seerauna]

This took awhile to read through including Volume One, but it was well worth it!

The Tale of Sethyas Velas is masterfully written with romance, comedy, and action...usually all within one update. I thought I was going to cry when Ilmeni died. Anyways, loved it! Keep all the updates coming and as many say, postmachine!