 The Beast, Shakur's Greatest Foe... |
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| Dantrag |
 Aug 12 2005, 04:07 PM
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 Councilor  Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz  |
This is a bit of a humorous short story about Red's character. shakur "The Red" Ir Shin. Yes, I have his permission to write about him. Enjoy.
----- Facing assassins was nothing compared to this foe. A mage that had the potential to kill a god was as easy as swatting a fly compared to this foe. No matter how many times you get rid of it, it always comes back. It is always around me. When I sleep, it is there. When I eat, it is there. Its unbridled power threatens my very being. It makes me cough and sneeze, just breathing around this beast. For the first time in my life, I am afraid. For the first time in my life, a sword cannot kill my enemy. -Shakur Ir Shin ---- "It is in our house." Shakur said to his wife Heddvild. "The demon has a short time remaining in this world." he said determinedly. "Yes, I am in here." it called to Shakur, mocking him. "The bedroom!" he exclaimed, running towards the room. He took a rag out of his pocket and scanned the room looking for the beast. Where could it be? "Come out and face me!" Shakur yelled. If the beast wouldn't fight fair, neither would he. He put the rag back in his pocket and took a deep breath to strengthen his resolve. He had to use the new power he had discovered. In all his years of being an Ansei, he never would have guessed that he could summon something other than a sword - or more useful. He quickly summoned his new weapon and gripped it tightly as he searched under the bed - there it was! With three swift strokes of his new weapon, the beast was gone, but it would soon return. Shakur didn't know how long he had to live. The demon always chased him, always mocked his efforts to rid himself of it... He began coughing - just being around the beast seemed to make it hard to breathe. He ran out of the room, away from that foul air. Heddvild looked down at Shakur's new glowing weapon. "What is that?" she asked, confused. Shakur held it up proudly. "This, my dear, is my spirit duster." "So you got the dust in the bedroom?" "Yes, but we must find a new place to live!" Shakur said, traces of fear apparent in his voice. "I don't want to be killed by it." "Alright." Heddvild conceded. "But only because of your allergies." ---- enjoy. -------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| Kell-Reevor |
Aug 12 2005, 04:11 PM
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 Finder  Joined: 7-July 05 From: surrounded by old people |
*Points at Shakur* Ha Ha
Dust sucks, great story.  |
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| minque |
Aug 12 2005, 04:13 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Haha...very good Dantrag!! You have talent.....really.....
Have a  -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Megil Tel-Zeke |
Aug 12 2005, 04:58 PM
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 Master  Joined: 25-June 05 From: Wilmington NC |
LMAO
it was great I can just picture it too. -------------------- "By keeping others at a distance you avoid a betrayal of your trust.
But while you may not be hurt that way you musnt forget that you must endure the loneliness." Friendly Hostility Fanboi |
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| BobV |
Aug 12 2005, 05:04 PM
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 Mouth  Joined: 28-June 05 From: Mordor/Netherlands |
Lmao
-------------------- Slackers of the world, unite!
"And, brave Romans, remember this above all: The owls have promised me help in this fight, how can we lose?!" - R:TW  |
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| Neck' Thall |
Aug 12 2005, 05:50 PM
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 Finder Joined: 2-August 05 From: Ebonheart |
What they said* Points to BobV and Megil...I know what Shakur feels like...im almost alergic to everything...
This post has been edited by Neck' Thall: Aug 12 2005, 05:50 PM -------------------- |
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| Aki |
Aug 12 2005, 07:05 PM
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 Mouth Joined: 10-March 05 |
 Funny. --------------------  "You’ve put up a good fight, but I’m through playing. Now I’m going to kick your [censored] and tell of my glory under the next full moon. Die well.” |
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| treydog |
Aug 12 2005, 08:02 PM
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 Master Joined: 13-February 05 From: The Smoky Mountains |
"Bring out the Broom of Mighty Cleaning! Let no foul dust bunny stand against our righteous wrath!"
I can see the new RP now- The Cleaning Crew, led by Shakur. Brilliant. -------------------- The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
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| Kiln |
Aug 12 2005, 09:22 PM
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Forum Bard Joined: 22-June 05 From: Balmora, Eight Plates |
Very nice Dantrag, is it hard writing about someone else's character?
-------------------- He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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| minque |
Aug 12 2005, 09:24 PM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
yeah....I think I´ll let him have a go with Serene....he´s read about her...and she´s been in the rp soooo
It would be fun..... -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Konji |
Aug 12 2005, 09:26 PM
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 Mouth Joined: 24-May 05 From: Behind you! |
.....Okaaaay....
Good though.  --------------------   |
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| Dantrag |
Aug 13 2005, 01:27 AM
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Councilor Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz |
QUOTE(minque @ Aug 12 2005, 04:24 PM) yeah....I think I´ll let him have a go with Serene....he´s read about her...and she´s been in the rp soooo It would be fun.....  any suggestions on something weird about Serene? I can't think of anything... I would be glad to do it though. I find it rather fun. -------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| Channler |
Aug 13 2005, 03:44 AM
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 Master Joined: 20-March 05 From: Nashville, North Carolina |
lol, brilliant Dantrag...
-------------------- “I'm not insensitive, I just don't care.”
-Anonymous  |
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| BobV |
Aug 13 2005, 04:05 AM
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Mouth Joined: 28-June 05 From: Mordor/Netherlands |
Dantrag...Could you think of something involving Anthanes maybe? I can think up enough oddities for him..
-------------------- Slackers of the world, unite!
"And, brave Romans, remember this above all: The owls have promised me help in this fight, how can we lose?!" - R:TW |
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| Dantrag |
Aug 13 2005, 04:09 AM
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Councilor Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz |
QUOTE(BobV @ Aug 12 2005, 11:05 PM) Dantrag...Could you think of something involving Anthanes maybe? I can think up enough oddities for him.. Sure. PM me some stuff. (Dantrag's parody sories, get one free, get another free! what a deal!) -------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| Red |
Aug 13 2005, 08:26 PM
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 Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
Amazing Danny, The opening paragraph was really good. Also, you did it tastefully and with my permission, well donezorz!
 How about Serene, cracker salting extrodinair? Or Serene, ash yam befriender? -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| Wolfie |
Aug 13 2005, 08:28 PM
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 Mage Joined: 14-March 05 From: Dublin, Ireland |
Lol that was great. You now have my permission to do that one about Jonacin the Dad
--------------------  D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton EnsamVarg |
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| minque |
Aug 14 2005, 11:32 AM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
And certainl you have my permission to involve Serene the supermommy!!!!
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Red |
Aug 25 2005, 02:33 PM
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Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
QUOTE(minque @ Aug 14 2005, 11:32 AM) And certainl you have my permission to involve Serene the supermommy!!!! I still think we should go with Ash Yam befriender. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| The Wolf |
Sep 29 2005, 04:31 PM
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Excellent stuff
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