 Some sort of poem. |
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| Eldar |
 Jun 22 2005, 02:27 AM
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Under the dark skies Elestar held his sword against his chest, his thoughts whiting his blade, he saw them all standing there, like the shadow of a star on a demons heart, with their twisted minds and broken souls. The black swords and the red eyes coming toward him, he did not tremble for he was a man with nothing left.
Once he was a mighty warrior, now he is a scarred ghost, seeking revenge against the denizens of hell, they where now within a blades swing but he waited for their souls to be felt, his blade moved like a tortured soul, possessing their bodies and quenching their entrails. When the sun rose he wasn’t a man anymore, but just a memory in a demons mind. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I wrote it for the fan fiction sub forum because i hadnt seen this one, it just came to my mind, now i am triying to write a story around this character. |
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| Troika |
Jun 24 2005, 04:05 PM
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Nice work... looks like you have the beginnings for a nice character their... some kind of demon-hunter not quite of this world...
Looking forward to how this turns out. |
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| Intestinal Chaos |
Aug 3 2005, 02:19 AM
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 Mouth  Joined: 9-July 05 From: Portland, Oregon |
poetry is a nice addition
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| Konji |
Aug 3 2005, 09:08 AM
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 Mouth Joined: 24-May 05 From: Behind you! |
Wasn't this done ages ago?
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