The Story Of Telina Delvanni Options

[minque]

You are gifted Tellie! great update as usual!
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[Tellie]

I found the bookstore, and entered. In there I saw tonnes of books, and I had an extreme urge to just stay there for many hours.

-"May, I help you friend", said the kindly bookeeper.

-"Oh, yes please, I'm looking for three books, the first one is Nchunak's fire and faith, the second is the Anteccendants of the dwemer law, and the last is the Chronicles of Nchuleft, do you have any of these books"?

-"I'm afraid I dont have the two last books you are talking about, but fire and faith, will be yours for two-hundred septims".

I counted up twenty ten-septim coins, and layed them down on the desk. She quickly grabbed them, and gave me the book, for after shoving me out of her store.
-"Hlaalu", I mumbled with an angry tone.

Then I came up with an idea, and after some fiveminutes of thinking, I went to the other side of the town, and walked into the house of Caius Cosades. I was met by the stench of a strong narcotic powder, known as moon-sugar. And on the floor lay Caius, gulping up blood, mixed with vomit.

Without thinking, I laid my hand upon his chest, and felt the inside of him, his heart was on its way of stopping, and the lungs was filled with all manner of highly intoxicating drugs. I felt a small warmt through my hands, and I started to move his heart back and forth in my mind, and slowly his heavy breathing eased, and the heart was beating normally again. The lungs aws a different matter, and the only way possible to rid them of the drugs that was feasting on them, was to boil up the toxic bittergreen-petals, mixed with a small but dangerous snake venom, that I had carried with me, and let him brathe in the poisonous clouds.

He harked, and opned his eyes, and with a small look upon me, he suddenly ran out and vomited the few remains of his earlier food. I walked outside, and looked on him in a stern matter, I could not talk with him in this state, so I grabbed him in the arm, and started to walk over to the other side of town again.

When we stood on the middle of the bridge, I suddenly pushed him with all my force, and he toppled and fell into the river. I saw him fight to get really concious for some few minutes, and then I walked over to his house, and started to clean up the mess. I had just finished cleaning when he came in again, and this time, he was as awake as a free spirit.

-"What was the point of that"? he asked angrily.

-"First, I must ask you of something important, so you couldnt be in that statement, secondly i did it for the sheer amusement", I answered with a big smile across my face.

-"Let me see if I got this straight, you come in my house and ripps me out of my good dreams, then you throw me in the river, and then yoo got the nerve to ask me for a favour", he said with a rising voice.

-"Yep, something like that yes", I said in an extremely irritating tone. "You were on the way of dying, so you owe me your life, all I ask for return, is your help on a little task that heve been given me".

I then explained him about the problem I was facing, and he came up with a brilliant idea. I was given a small phial, with some unknown material for me in it. I was then going to head down to the temple in Vivec, and enter the hall of justice. There I had to find a good hiding place for it, and ignite the fuse, and walk into the office of the watch.

When the fuse had burnt up, a large explosion would erup, and I would plai dead, while the rest of the people in the office ran out, to get away. I would then pick the lock of a trapdoor, and find the temple's secret library and get the books.

I had asked if it was no simpler way, but Caius told me that the bookstore of Jobasha, had burned down, and with it the last books left of those I needed.

I was nearly dripping of cold-swet, and was about to start shaking uncrontrollably when I entered the hall of justice. I faked a stumble, so the guard that was watching me wouldn't get suspicious, of me leaning dow, and I quickly hid the phial on a plant, and used a small on-touch fire spell on the fuse. I then walked into the office of the watch.

-"What are you doing here outlander", asked a man in the same golden armour, that I had seen on the other guards in this marvellous city.

-"I'm going to ask you abou.........BOOOOM!!!!!!!

I did not have to fake a deathe, as I was thrown across the room, and hit one of the shelvees with a sickening chrunch. The people in the room, ran as fast as they could out of the room, and after half a minute two more people came out of the trapdoor.

After hearing the door close, I rose myself up, and walked slowly towards the trap door, and walked down. When I had walked through the second door there, I found the empty library, and after a few minutes, I had found the books I was searching for. I stuffed them in my bag, but just as I was about to walk away, the title of another book caught my eye, on it stood the irresistible title How to become a GOD.....I was greatly atracted to this book, so I took that one as well.

Just as I said the spellthat would take me to Gnisis, the door opned and one of the guards came in. I just hoped that he had'nt got a good look at me, as I walked up the steps to the upper room in Baladas tower.

-"Ahh so good to see you, Telina". "Do you want a cup of tea"?

We sat down by his table, and soon he had explained a great bit about himself and his good frien Aryon. And my eyes filled themselves with tears, as I left the second man in this place, that had acted lice a friend to me.

After arriving in Vos, i nearly sprinted ut the hill towards Tel-Vos, and I realised that my shape was getting increasingly better. I walked into the study room to Master Aryon, only to be met by Master Aryon, who looked extremely happy with himselves, I noticed the three huge chest's filled with gold and diamonds. also in the room stood the master who I guessed was Neloth, and the mer who looked more happy and thriumphant than anyone else was Arch-Magister Gothren.



This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Feb 9 2006, 10:13 PM

[Tellie]

Edit: sorry, i thought i had pushed the edit button, but aparently i pushed the Add New Reply button. Sorry for double posting.

-"Ahh Telina I have decided that I need not a new mouth, as i can go good with this", Master aryon said, with a small smile in his eyes.

-"I told you, lawman Delvanni, that to cross me was going to be your undoing", said Gothren "so since there are no councillors wiling to take you as their mouth, I'm afraid that you will only be a lawman for the rewst of your life".

i was nearly heartbroken, here stood the mer who had promisedto become my patron, and which Baladas had spoken so greatly off, I was betrayed, and i now felt a small part, of what my earlier victims had felt, when one they thought as a friend betrayed them, and I hated it.

-"No", said a voice from the door, "i shall be her patron". In the door stood Baladas, with a staff that shoved a powerfull enchantment. "Telina Delvanni, I request that you be my mouth in the telvanni council, do you accept"? he asked with a voice that showed big amusement.

-"Yes, my Master, I accept that you become my master and patron in the house", I answered with the greatest effort from keeping me run over and give him a big hug.

He then gave ma a silver-staff-of-peace, to showe my position as a mouth.

-"Come Telina, I have need for you at my house". i took his hand, and we were instantly transported to Arvs-Drelen, and i nearly fell over, with the sight of horror, and dissapointment in the faces of Neloth and Gothren.




© Telendil Delvanni.
Here ends chapter one.

Replyes of the whole chapter is welcome as always, i shall soon start posting the second chapter, of Telina's adventure through the house of telvanni. I hope you've enjoied the chapter, and that you liked reading it as much as I enjoied writing it, and seing your replyings.

Thanks to: OverrideB1.
Minque.
Alexander.
Treydog. all of those who inspired me to write this story.


Tanks to: planty.
ellie.
jona.
MerGirl.
Minque. For giving me the inspiring comments and critisism.

Thanks to: Everyone else who have read this first chapter, all of you, replyer or not, you are amzing people, thanks everyone.

This post has been edited by Telendil Delvanni: Apr 20 2006, 06:45 PM

[minque]

Oh Tellie!! You are amazing! (En kempe-go Norsk pike!) Now I laughed out loud when reading about Telina´s handling of Caius....yes yes the pushing-him-in-the Odai river!!! That was really amusing......Also Telina makes Baladas her friend! Neat....Serene did the same......Mr Demnevanni is a nice man...deep inside and I´m happy Telina and Serene both discovered that..not many others have you know!

Now I will give you my compliments of this first chapter of your story. It is really good and I think I´ll speak for the other readers here that we all really enjoyed it and are waiting eagerly for the next chapter!


So go for it Tellie!

[mplantinga]

That was truly an amazing installment. I laughed several times, but hardest after the description of Caius and how Tilina treated him. You've done an excellent job of using artistic license to change people and events in a way that brings new life to the story. Thanks for continuing to write for us; I will be looking forward to chapter 2.