I like where this is going. You've done your best to make us feel like Elessar is thinking carefully about what he is getting himself into, but I think he may be underestimating this woman. If he decides to go with her, he had better be on his guard.
Master
Joined: 11-February 06
From: In a cold place.
I warned you before. Stay on your guard and keep your blade within reach at all times. (But out of her reach. Getting killed with your own weapon is kind of emberassing)
Please keep writing.
--------------------
Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
Forum Bard
Joined: 22-June 05
From: Balmora, Eight Plates
An interesting twist is revealed in the last update, though I wonder what the girl's motive is...I'm a bit suspicious. Maybe its nothing, either way update soon.
--------------------
He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
Wise Woman
Joined: 11-February 05
From: Where I can watch you!!
QUOTE(Kiln @ Mar 26 2006, 07:12 PM)
An interesting twist is revealed in the last update, though I wonder what the girl's motive is...I'm a bit suspicious. Maybe its nothing, either way update soon.
What Mr Oven said.......*waiting eagerly*
--------------------
Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)