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post Feb 15 2006, 09:42 PM
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Alright, welcome to chapter 2 of my fan fic. For those who haven't read part one, please look here:
Oasis, chapter 1

Well, have fun.

Chapter 2: Trouble with the mages.

,,Come one, you stupid rat. Is that the best you’ve got? Hah, missed me! Oops, there goes your head.”
I held up the soulgem that was now emitting a soft glow.
,,And here’s your soul. Welcome to your new home.”
I was happy. It was the first time I attempted to do something other than just taking out the opposition in battle, and it had worked quite well. With no doubt I could sell the gem and the soul contained within it to Galbedir for a nice price.

Yep, things had never been so good. I spent last night in my old shack in Seyda Neen. No one had even touched the small building. Definitely an improvement from the burglary of last time.

And in my pockets, I had samples of four different mushrooms. Ajira would be pleased. Not to mention the favour she would owe me.

It was when the sun had just passed its peak that I came across a small door embedded into a rock wall. Curious, I got closer. Above the door, old Dunmer markings were carved into the rock.

,,Here….last….dead…” I had begun to learn the written language used by the Dark Eves for a little bit. One thing was sure, this was a tomb and probably loaded with wealth just waiting to be taken. Those silly Dark Elves were too serious about this idea that the spirits of the dead stay behind.

Well, I had her mushrooms and I refused to take the Siltstrider. Ajira probably wouldn’t mind a bit of treasure seeking, would she? With some effort, I opened the ancient door and went inside.

Ok, things didn’t look as nice as I expected them to be. At the bottom of a set of stairs I could see what was obviously the corpse of a previous tomb robber. And the corpse didn’t seemed to have been there for so long. I took out my Katana and continued with a slower, more careful pace. I didn’t wanted to be the next victim.

When I reached the corpse, I still hadn’t noticed any sign of life around here. Maybe whatever killed this guy had left? I sat crouched next to the body and took a good look at it.

No stabwounds, cuts, crushed bodyparts, or signs of death caused by magic. Maybe he just fell down the stairs. I stood up again and looked at the corridor that led further into the tomb. It was then that the ghost attacked me.

I’d never seen an undead being before. If I did, I might’ve been more prepared. I performed a overhead chop at the ghost, only to see my blade pass right through it! I got in two more useless slashes before the thing dove on top of me and began to strangle me.

I dropped my sword and desperately tried to create a fireball. No use, I couldn’t focus properly and the best I got were a few miserable sparks. My vision slowly turned to black as I began to lose consciousness.




Sorry about the lack of humor, but there isn't much joking he can do whith that ghost on top of him. He can do a lot of choking though. laugh.gif


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jack cloudy   Oasis Chapter 2   Feb 15 2006, 09:42 PM
Taillus   Uh oh.... this is not good. Damn ghosts and their ...   Feb 15 2006, 10:08 PM
Kiln   Great way to start the second chapter. I would be...   Feb 16 2006, 03:22 AM
minque   woah....what a.....disgusting experience, meeting ...   Feb 16 2006, 08:12 PM
jack cloudy   Um yeah, thanks for the comments. Now for the stor...   Feb 16 2006, 08:29 PM
jack cloudy   Ok, The next part is mostly some quick fun with Aj...   Feb 17 2006, 07:15 AM
Elidor   I kicked the remains around a bit. ,,You’re not so...   Feb 17 2006, 10:30 AM
Tellie   Loved it, you are just a GREAT GENIOUS, I liked th...   Feb 17 2006, 12:37 PM
Kiln   Lots of content and alot of detail as well. I lik...   Feb 17 2006, 06:07 PM
minque   Heey nice updates!.....I especially liked your...   Feb 17 2006, 09:28 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you, thank you all. Telendil, are you SURE y...   Feb 17 2006, 09:58 PM
Kiln   Well what can I say? Great update, laced with hum...   Feb 18 2006, 01:25 AM
jack cloudy   Ok, next update. The door took a while to find,...   Feb 18 2006, 01:11 PM
jchamber   yay, more great stuff. btw how and why do you get...   Feb 18 2006, 05:13 PM
jack cloudy   Ok, I'm back. ,,Jchamber, are you referring to...   Feb 18 2006, 08:21 PM
jack cloudy   Ok, another update and all that stuff. And about m...   Feb 19 2006, 06:26 PM
jack cloudy   And another update. Sorry, but I just couldn't...   Feb 20 2006, 05:36 PM
Kiln   Very good updates, soooo much content to read...I ...   Feb 20 2006, 06:45 PM
jchamber   There are lots of things I like about your writing...   Feb 22 2006, 07:00 PM
jack cloudy   Thanks, Kiln. I really need to put the time aside ...   Feb 23 2006, 09:51 PM
jchamber   Sweetness, thanks for not taking it harder than ...   Feb 24 2006, 04:42 AM
jack cloudy   Ok, time to head for Hla Oad. And anyone who has b...   Feb 24 2006, 09:17 PM
jack cloudy   An interesting place, but it really gets on my ner...   Feb 25 2006, 09:22 PM
Kiln   Great job on this part, I really liked that the ch...   Feb 26 2006, 12:06 AM
jack cloudy   Alright, here is the update. In reality, Fjoll nev...   Feb 26 2006, 08:54 PM
jack cloudy   And an early update. Enjoy! ,,Murderer...   Feb 27 2006, 12:05 PM
Kiln   Changing the slave quest to involve Caius was very...   Feb 27 2006, 11:40 PM
jchamber   hmmm I like the last post much more than the initi...   Feb 28 2006, 05:06 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you for the comments and here's another ...   Feb 28 2006, 08:45 PM
jack cloudy   A bit of asking around quickly directed me to the ...   Mar 2 2006, 09:01 PM
Taillus   Loved the ordinator party trick done in true Oasis...   Mar 2 2006, 10:35 PM
Kiln   Great updates here, lots of content and as Taillus...   Mar 3 2006, 12:05 AM
mplantinga   Just caught up on chapter 2. I have really enjoyed...   Mar 3 2006, 01:23 AM
jchamber   I'm liking how the party story took hold...loo...   Mar 3 2006, 01:39 AM
jack cloudy   Thank you. The Tavern owner will come back. I...   Mar 3 2006, 08:05 PM
Taillus   That will learn him. Ha! Good job another well...   Mar 3 2006, 08:15 PM
Kiln   Nice update, glad to see that you can stick to the...   Mar 3 2006, 08:18 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you, and here's another one. My last in...   Mar 4 2006, 06:23 PM
jchamber   yay! the angered tavern man and his unwilling ...   Mar 4 2006, 08:29 PM
jack cloudy   Thanks. Hope you enjoy the update. The guild g...   Mar 5 2006, 07:57 PM
Tellie   Wohoo...rofl :lol:. That was just funny, poor Hiss...   Mar 5 2006, 08:44 PM
Taillus   Hahaha That will teach Hissking. Lets see how toug...   Mar 7 2006, 02:56 PM
jack cloudy   I based that one on Hlomar Wine-Sot. I loved that ...   Mar 7 2006, 08:47 PM
Taillus   *sigh* curse that pond. I lost my very first chara...   Mar 8 2006, 04:09 PM
Tellie   I can say the same Taillus, but it was even worse...   Mar 8 2006, 07:51 PM
jack cloudy   The pond got me too. I just couldn't withstand...   Mar 8 2006, 09:26 PM
Tellie   great jacky, really great...:toungue: it was funny...   Mar 8 2006, 10:14 PM
Taillus   Great update Cloudy. Dwemer ruins are so fun! ...   Mar 8 2006, 11:04 PM
jchamber   lol, 'if this is the best the dwemer had'....   Mar 9 2006, 02:53 AM
mplantinga   Great updates. The use of ice on the centurions wa...   Mar 9 2006, 03:03 AM
jack cloudy   Thank you, thank you. If anyone wanted an update, ...   Mar 9 2006, 10:04 PM
mplantinga   So Luper is getting a bit snitty. Why does everyon...   Mar 10 2006, 12:20 AM
Agent Griff   I must say, this story is great! At first, I t...   Mar 10 2006, 08:35 AM
Taillus   Cloudy and Griff both I root for you guys and will...   Mar 10 2006, 02:43 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you. Hey everyone, please update your storie...   Mar 10 2006, 08:27 PM
Taillus   Uh oh. Those cursed blight creatures managing to e...   Mar 10 2006, 08:37 PM
mplantinga   An interesting development. Those orcs in Mzuleft ...   Mar 10 2006, 09:56 PM
Tellie   Great as always, no remember to be carefull down i...   Mar 10 2006, 10:42 PM
Agent Griff   Wonderful update. I love how you handle the Trebon...   Mar 11 2006, 08:21 AM
jack cloudy   Thank you all for the compliments. At first I trie...   Mar 11 2006, 04:26 PM
Tellie   Oh great jacky, i like that, I guess the slaughter...   Mar 11 2006, 04:47 PM
Agent Griff   Great update. Luper Alkad had a very stylish way o...   Mar 11 2006, 05:04 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you. I don't know if he will get this Di...   Mar 12 2006, 07:25 PM
Tellie   great jacky...I liked this one quite a bit...i jus...   Mar 12 2006, 08:12 PM
Agent Griff   Great update! I liked how Luper smooth talked ...   Mar 12 2006, 09:05 PM
Sirin   ive only read some of these stories, jack, but you...   Mar 13 2006, 02:25 AM
Tellie   I cant agree more with the above ones, you really ...   Mar 13 2006, 03:10 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you for all the compliments and wait no more...   Mar 13 2006, 05:26 PM
Agent Griff   Interesting update. To be honest it wasn't as ...   Mar 13 2006, 07:24 PM
jchamber   sweetness, within a minute or two of first comment...   Mar 13 2006, 07:29 PM
jack cloudy   Glad you all like it. I must say I'm having a ...   Mar 14 2006, 07:44 PM
Tellie   Hmmmm. cultists can be harder than Oasis thinks......   Mar 14 2006, 08:13 PM
Taillus   Yeah I agree with Tele. It did lack some of the ev...   Mar 14 2006, 08:29 PM
Agent Griff   Great update! Now that Luper (you don't mi...   Mar 14 2006, 09:26 PM
jack cloudy   You know the drill, enjoy the update. And you can ...   Mar 15 2006, 06:24 PM
Agent Griff   Great update. You portrayed the battle with the Da...   Mar 15 2006, 06:31 PM
Taillus   Fast thinking coupled with a a desire to live make...   Mar 15 2006, 10:27 PM
jack cloudy   Thank you. Just a short one for today. After the...   Mar 16 2006, 07:23 PM
Tellie   Oh nice new update here Jacky, I'm sorry I did...   Mar 16 2006, 07:50 PM
Agent Griff   Good update. When he said that he was going to put...   Mar 16 2006, 08:35 PM
minque   As usual, I´m not commenting as much as I´d want t...   Mar 17 2006, 09:08 PM
jack cloudy   I apreciate all the nice comments. This is probabl...   Mar 17 2006, 09:32 PM
Tellie   HAHA...that one was truly funny...a real Oasis sol...   Mar 17 2006, 09:55 PM
Taillus   Hahaha case closed, Ghostfence has no top. That ma...   Mar 17 2006, 10:57 PM
Kiln   Hehe, that last bit was pretty funny. I love the ...   Mar 18 2006, 12:20 AM


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