I liked the updates. Xander is on his way to clear the name of his body, which is a good thing seeing as he is stuck with it for a while.
Griff, not all story characters are perfect. I like the ones that have weaknesses. Here's a list of my own.
Luper Alkad: Rude, and easily distracted by the idea of loot. He also has a small problem with the people in charge.
Aureus Lucis: Ok, he is an Uber god and damn good for his age, but there are things he doesn't like to talk about. Not to mention that he kind of freaked out in the vampire lair. (Notice the difference in how he talks.)
Jana: Geez, a though one. Well, she hates vampires, herself for being one and she tends not to think before rushing into something. (Entering a vampire's lair, bad idea.
Jack Cloudy (yes, I based my name on this forum on a character from a bad story of mine): He hates aliens, is surrounded by aliens and he finally has a few problems with controlling his god powers. He is a god in the allmighty, immortal kind, but he doesn't know it and tends to cause trouble at the worst moments.
Umm yeah, I'm getting off-topic. Good story, Taillus. Too bad the bandit didn't want to listen.
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Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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