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Chapter 3 Gathering Forces

I decided to take a walk through the beautiful City of Balmora before finding my quarters. It was a rather big city, sturdy houses made of some kind of yellowish stone were scattered on each side of a river. I did meet quite a lot of people strolling on the riverbank, and in the streets. Most of them were very friendly, with few exceptions, who were clad in a strange type of armor and called themselves “guards”.

There seemed to be a lot of service available here, armorer, outfitters, various shops and to my greatest satisfaction I found a book-store. Now I can´t resist visiting a book-store whenever I find one and this time was no exception.

“Balmora Bookstore – owner; Dorisa Darvel” the sign by the door said and I stepped inside, meeting a young Dunmer girl, looking up from a book she was reading, friendly smiling at me.

“Good evening to you” she said, “what can I do for you?”

She was beautiful and the kind tone in her greeting touched me, so I smiled back to her;

“ I love books” I said, not the most intelligent answer, but I was somewhat stunned by the open friendliness with which she addressed me. “I´d like to look around for a while if that´s Ok with you?”

“By all means Muthsera, you´re welcome, take your time” With those words she got back to her reading.

I turned to the books, there were a lot of them, many unknown to me but also some titles I remembered seeing in Cyrodiil, even in the Library of the prison. When strolling among the bookshelves I suddenly heard someone coughing, naturally I got terrified, I didn´t expect someone else to be there besides the lovely Dorisa, but now I spotted a “guard” in that weird armor I´d seen in the streets. “Well naturally”, I thought when my heart stopped pounding, “she had to have some kind of protection, so young and all alone in her store.”

I found a couple of useful books though; A Guide to Balmora, and then there was another one where the name of it caught my interest, it was a Guide to Ald´ruhn, Ald´ruhn…there it was again…..my fate was somewhat bound to this place I imagined, far too many coincidences lately! Then I had to stop buying books, if I should be able to pay for night-quarters. It was obvious that I must try to get some kind of a job because I´d soon run out of the few septims I had.

With my new books in my satchel I then took a hearty godbye of Dorisa Darvel, certain that I´d visit her store again and made my way down the street. I noticed that the Mage´s and the Fighter´s guilds were situated nearly right across the bookstore, that knowledge could eventually come in handy later on…..

Further down, the street broadened a bit, stairs leading down to the river Odai, that I just learnt from the Guide, and also stairs leading upwards, then again I didn´t bother exploring anymore of the city tonight, all I wanted now was a decent meal and a bed for the night.

From a distance you could hear the whereabouts of the inn “Eight Plates”, laughs and raised voices accompanied by some weird kind of “music”…sounded out from a building to the left of the street. I hesitated for a while but decided it couldn´t be all that bad so I went inside…..

It was an Inn alright, but quite different from those back in The Imperial City….This one was dark, there was a distinct mouldy smell oozing from the very walls, and there were not many guests, just two Dunmeri sitting at a table heavily arguing about someone sleeping with someone else´s wife…..another rather drunk man in an ever weirder armor than the outside guards, was pacing back and forth muttering and hissing at some invisible enemy. Then there was the landlady, a tall elderly Dunmeri woman with an extremely dark voice, shouting at the drunken man to shut up and sit down otherwise he would be expelled from the premises.

I stopped at the counter and asked for night-quarters. The landlady stopped yelling at the drunk and turned to me thoroughly examining me before saying;

“Nah look what we have here guys!, an Outlander….and a woman, now that´s quite extraordinary” She laughed and stared at me, undressing me with her looks and I felt quite bad. It was not a good idea of coming here, but what choice did I have?

“Nightquarters” she laughed….”the little lady wants a bed, right?..and maybe some company to go with it?”

“No, I just want somewhere to sleep and something to eat if it´s possible” I tried to keep calm and be polite, despite the rage I felt inside by this insulting comments.

The men who were arguing before sat silent now and watched me with curiousity, the armored drunk had finally given up, lying beside the wall heavily snoring.

“Women don´t come in here unless they want some company”, the landlady snapped at me, “but nevermind, I´ll let you have the room downstairs to the right”. She then handed me the key and turned away.

The room was very small, a bed, a chair and a little table at the bedside, and it was filled up. Now I didn´t mind that at all, all I needed was a bed, but I checked the lock on the door very thoroughly, didn´t want any visitors….

After putting my gear on the bed, I went upstairs to investigate the possibility of having something to eat. The landlady was not very pleased with the thought of cooking me a meal so she shook her head in a negative answer on my request.

“Now now Dulnea, what about those kwama-eggs I brought you this afternoon, you haven´t finished them already have you?” A soft voice came out of a dark corner of the inn, and a young man stepped forward. He was a Dunmer, tall and slender, of about my age, maybe a few years older, pointed cheekbones, a complexion fairly light grey, and a tribal tattoo on his forehead, his red-brownish hair glowed in the dim lights from the lanterns on the wall, his eyes were red but then very sad and he looked thoughtfully right into my face.

“Oh heck,” Dulnea snapped at him, “Very well I´ll fry some eggs then, you certainly are a strange kind of man, Sedrane Mirpal, always volunteering to aid, being a woman or an outlander, your father would be ashamed of you”…..

“You know perfectly well that I don´t have a father” he said harshly and then turned to me;

“I bid you welcome to Balmora lady, and do forgive Dulnea, she is a hag sometimes but basicly she has a heart of gold, by the way my name is Sedrane Mirpal” .The young Dunmer reached out his hand to me and looked me straight into the eyes.

I felt weak, my legs trembled as I took his hand; strong and warm…..I was all lost in his earnest gaze, my voice was not but a whisper when I told him my name.

I simply had to sit down, having no idea what was happening to me,…….

“Ok Serene, let´s put you to bed before you pass out”, Sedrane took my hand again and led me down the stairs to my room, “I´ll bring you the food in a minute, but I think you have to
lie down for a while”
Lying on my bed I let my thoughts wander…..No doubt I was attracted to Sedrane Mirpal, he was very handsome, and that dark low voice, so soothing so calming and so sexy……and his hands, strong, warm and supporting. I closed my eyes and let it come to me, the feeling of something not yet experienced but still I knew what it was….Love!


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minque   Serene of Cyrodiil, chapter 3 "Gathering Forces"   May 8 2005, 11:02 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I'll join the crowd. "update! update...   Jul 13 2005, 03:25 AM
Dantrag   I heard update!! *sits down, smiling at ...   Jul 13 2005, 04:41 AM
minque   ok....sit down and get amazed....here comes..an up...   Jul 18 2005, 10:00 AM
jonajosa   *shakes head and chukles to himself* .... Remind...   Jul 28 2005, 07:38 AM
Wolfie   hehe cool :D   Jul 18 2005, 10:54 AM
Lucidarius   Great update. And this is the first time she sees ...   Jul 18 2005, 01:09 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Good job Minque. The long awaited update was worth...   Jul 18 2005, 02:47 PM
Kiln   Great update! Been waiting but it was well wo...   Jul 18 2005, 07:22 PM
Soulseeker3.0   LOL most of the time that is true   Jul 18 2005, 07:42 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Good as always Minque... Nice writing and its just...   Jul 19 2005, 07:42 PM
Ze Milanio   Ahhhh... the plot starts to thicken :D Wooyay ...   Jul 21 2005, 12:48 PM
burntsierra   So a few new plot strands start to open. Oh, and I...   Jul 24 2005, 10:25 AM
Dantrag   Super update! So we finally see Trey, huh?   Jul 25 2005, 03:56 PM
Neck' Thall   Hey Ummm This is My First Post But Minque PLEEEEEE...   Aug 5 2005, 05:15 AM
Kiln   Minque's on some sort of trip right now...she ...   Aug 5 2005, 05:29 AM
Dantrag   She comes back the fifth....which is tomorrow, or ...   Aug 5 2005, 05:40 AM
Mazuk   Well the last update was good and since I am behin...   Aug 5 2005, 06:37 PM
treydog   Can't believe I haven't commented on this ...   Aug 11 2005, 02:58 PM
minque   Long time, no update.....but here it is..at last...   Aug 11 2005, 08:33 PM
Kiln   YEAH! Update! The long awaited update...ti...   Aug 11 2005, 08:36 PM
Neck' Thall   Awsome Minque.... have some cake and jonjosas. ...   Aug 11 2005, 09:26 PM
Dantrag   I was wondering when you would gift us with your w...   Aug 11 2005, 09:30 PM
Soulseeker3.0   :goodjob: great addition Minque   Aug 11 2005, 10:40 PM
Florodine of Hlaalu   wow great job, this new chapter was very good, i l...   Aug 12 2005, 12:00 AM
treydog   Each installment is a wonderful immersion in the p...   Aug 12 2005, 08:05 PM
Lucidarius   Great update. I like your attention to the charact...   Aug 13 2005, 12:07 PM
burntsierra   Analogy time. What is this story to me? Well, it...   Aug 14 2005, 08:10 AM
minque   I arrived at the Training camp after the sun had s...   Aug 15 2005, 12:00 AM
BobV   Exxxcelent update.   Aug 15 2005, 12:05 AM
Kiln   Very nice Minque...I can't wait till the next ...   Aug 15 2005, 12:59 AM
Neck' Thall   Nice Minque...you can have a cake and eat it too ...   Aug 15 2005, 01:01 AM
Soulseeker3.0   Good job Minque! have a jonajosa :goodjob:   Aug 15 2005, 01:25 AM
Wolfie   Cool update Minque :D   Aug 15 2005, 11:31 AM
treydog   I just love your skillful touch with human interac...   Aug 15 2005, 04:57 PM
Lucidarius   Great update, mingue. I know that Mundus would be...   Aug 16 2005, 10:13 PM
minque   Thank you all for your very nice comments..it´s re...   Aug 16 2005, 10:44 PM
Dantrag   Minque! Don't do that to me! I see ...   Aug 17 2005, 12:59 AM
Konradude   Awww Danny. Great story minquey. I can't wait ...   Aug 17 2005, 01:05 AM
Kiln   Yeah...earlier I saw Minque had posted last so I w...   Aug 17 2005, 02:38 AM
Fuzzy Knight   I have some catching up to do I see... :D   Aug 17 2005, 05:38 PM
minque   Ok Dantrag!! This time it´s really an upda...   Aug 17 2005, 08:50 PM
BobV   A good update. The ruling update. The one update.....   Aug 17 2005, 09:51 PM
Florodine of Hlaalu   i can't wait to see what kind of revenge seren...   Aug 17 2005, 10:53 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I agree with Florodine I wonder what kind of reven...   Aug 17 2005, 11:01 PM
Neck' Thall   I think those soldiers are going to be missing a f...   Aug 18 2005, 12:15 AM
Dantrag   good update, but I feel really sorry for Serene. :...   Aug 18 2005, 02:28 AM
BobV   May I suggest casting Evan's Spiked Tentacles ...   Aug 18 2005, 12:18 PM
treydog   As ever, the grace and beauty of your writing ench...   Aug 18 2005, 02:37 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree with Trey, Minque your writing is great, as...   Aug 18 2005, 05:30 PM
Kiln   I just logged on and saw you had updated....very n...   Aug 18 2005, 06:57 PM
Konradude   Awesome update. Really enjoyed the flow.   Aug 18 2005, 07:31 PM
minque   Though I´d post some pictures...... Serene and Sh...   Aug 19 2005, 10:49 PM
Lucidarius   Disturbing to read your update, I must say. You w...   Aug 20 2005, 03:42 PM
Soulseeker3.0   ooooh pretty :D nice robe were'd ya get it?   Aug 19 2005, 11:25 PM
minque   It´s The Robe of the Hortator , the mod origins ...   Aug 19 2005, 11:41 PM
Soulseeker3.0   oh I see, now i think I will have a female theif n...   Aug 20 2005, 02:26 AM
minque   Ah Lucidarius! I assure you she will get her r...   Aug 20 2005, 04:04 PM
Soulseeker3.0   nice I like the hair style in the last pic better   Aug 20 2005, 06:03 PM
Lucidarius   Great to hear that - about the female way of getti...   Aug 20 2005, 06:49 PM
OverrideB1   I realise, to my horror, that it's been far to...   Aug 21 2005, 09:35 AM
minque   So here it is......the latest update...Enjoy! ...   Aug 21 2005, 05:17 PM
Neck' Thall   Sweet!!! I bet you the potion is for ...   Aug 21 2005, 05:35 PM
BobV   You'd like that wouldn't ya... Very nioce...   Aug 21 2005, 05:59 PM
Soulseeker3.0   nice update Minque   Aug 21 2005, 07:13 PM
Florodine of Hlaalu   as always very good minque, it was a very interest...   Aug 21 2005, 09:21 PM
Lucidarius   I liked the scene with Baladas and his mind-readin...   Aug 21 2005, 10:30 PM
minque   Hehe....let´s say...I´m working on it!!...   Aug 21 2005, 10:41 PM
Kiln   Very nice update, surprised I hadn't caught it...   Aug 22 2005, 12:18 AM
treydog   Love your portrayal of Baladas. As always, you ad...   Aug 22 2005, 03:15 PM
minque   Besides appropriate clothing I also had to learn h...   Aug 28 2005, 10:50 PM
Soulseeker3.0   YAY!!! nie update Minque :embarrased:...   Aug 28 2005, 11:24 PM
Neck' Thall   Nice update...exactly what soul said.   Aug 29 2005, 01:24 AM
Lucidarius   The fear and hesitation are portrayed really well....   Aug 29 2005, 08:42 AM
treydog   You know, one of the things that makes your writin...   Aug 29 2005, 02:59 PM
Dantrag   I missed an update!?!?! I will get yo...   Aug 30 2005, 03:34 AM
Soulseeker3.0   wow don't know why but that sounded so cool t...   Aug 30 2005, 11:59 PM
Kiln   Very nice Minque, the fear and lack of confidence ...   Aug 30 2005, 02:46 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Have missed a few FF updates on this forum so deci...   Aug 31 2005, 01:49 PM
minque   Of course I couldn’t give it up; I repressed my fe...   Sep 5 2005, 08:21 PM
Dantrag   yay for updates!   Sep 5 2005, 08:25 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Wonderful as always Minque - One thing, its not ev...   Sep 5 2005, 08:34 PM
Neck' Thall   Ditto.   Sep 5 2005, 08:36 PM
BobV   Cliffhanger alert, cliffhanger alert! Nice upd...   Sep 5 2005, 08:41 PM
Soulseeker3.0   yay good job Minque   Sep 5 2005, 09:30 PM
minque   I think I promised you pics of Serene in her secon...   Sep 6 2005, 09:26 PM
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Wolfie   Nice pics Minque :D   Sep 6 2005, 09:46 PM
BobV   Shexay! :P   Sep 7 2005, 01:08 PM
Neck' Thall   cool! Nice Pics   Sep 11 2005, 04:55 PM
Kiln   Nice update minque, I'm looking forward to rea...   Sep 11 2005, 05:16 PM
minque   At last, this is the final part of chapter 3, now ...   Sep 11 2005, 06:41 PM
Fuzzy Knight   OoOoOoOh.. This is good Minque, this is goooood...   Sep 11 2005, 06:44 PM
Neck' Thall   Nice update! I hope you like Russia and can u...   Sep 11 2005, 06:51 PM
minque   Yeah..it looks like that on my word document, i...   Sep 11 2005, 07:31 PM
Fuzzy Knight   It should work by writing YourText just take away...   Sep 11 2005, 08:07 PM
Soulseeker3.0   WOO HOO! Another update, good job Minky!   Sep 11 2005, 08:28 PM
minque   YAYYYYYYYYY Fuzzy....it worked ..look I edited.....   Sep 11 2005, 08:42 PM
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minque   the daedric fonts ....look the red text in the sto...   Sep 11 2005, 08:58 PM
Soulseeker3.0   uh not for me... I guess my pc doesn't know de...   Sep 11 2005, 09:37 PM
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