The Dragon Lands/chapters 3-6 Options

[Fuzzy Knight]

Ah great Andric... very nice, keep it up :goodjob:

[MerGirl]

[quote=Dantrag]good work Andric!

Just a question...why are you already talking baout chapter ten when we're only on 6?[/quote]

Er, because he's still writing it? He posted only chapter six, but he's still writing the next few chapters.

Anyway, Andric, awesome job. Just be careful with the whole conversation stuff. I can't always identify who's saying what all the time. But that could be just me, and it was only a tiny bit of it, so, uh, good job! :goodjob: Continue writing and *gives cake*!

[Fuzzy Knight]

Hehe, guess me and Anderic is the only one that has control on the conversation here then.. But do as MerGirl says, its important to have it all clear who is saying or doing what

:goodjob:

[MerGirl]

[quote=Fuzzy Knight]Hehe, guess me and Anderic is the only one that has control on the conversation here then.. But do as MerGirl says, its important to have it all clear who is saying or doing what

:goodjob:[/quote]

Er, I have a bad memory when it comes to multiple characters and different POV's, so that maybe why. (I'm not used to that.) The thing is, my mind cannot switch main characters so easily, because I'm used to one character's POV and that's the only POV I can remember (which is hard enough). Especially when it's an interesting character(s_. I then forget the rest of the other characters (not on purpose, though!). :ashamed:

Not to mention I read multiple stories, so I sometimes forget lots of stuff.

Question to Andric:

“It is an item so powerful, it had to be sealed away to protect it.”
“Which is exactly why my friends couldn’t let Duke Winston get his hands on it.” <--Who was saying that? Was that Kai? (If he's referring something to the past, let me know which chapter/POV the 'friends' and 'Duke Winston' were mentioned, because I don't remember).

“I don’t really know. Lots of rumors are flying over the city. At night, we hear the dead rise and walk the streets. Many think that the end of the world is coming. My sister transferred me to the temple in Skyrim for my own safety.” <-- that's Kai, right? (Sorry, again, fuzzy memory!)

I think I may have to re-read your story, Andric, due to my horrible memory.

[Andric]

[quote="MerGirl"][quote=Fuzzy Knight]
“I don’t really know. Lots of rumors are flying over the city. At night, we hear the dead rise and walk the streets. Many think that the end of the world is coming. My sister transferred me to the temple in Skyrim for my own safety.” <-- that's Kai, right? (Sorry, again, fuzzy memory!) [/quote]

Its Isabel.

[MerGirl]

[quote=Andric]
Its Isabel.[/quote]

Ack, no! My memory! It's gone! I thought Kai had the sister! :shocked: Oh, my goodness, my bad. :paperbag2: