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Joryn
post May 18 2006, 11:21 PM
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Hey, this is my first ever TES fan fic. Im new to this whole thing, but reading many of the ones posted by people here, I decided to give it a go. As I said, Im not anywhere as good as most people here, in fact the last time I wrote any kind of story was at school.

Anyway, enough excuses, dont mind posting anything negative as Ill just be glad to know if I should or shouldnt continue with this or not. Its late now so I decided to write this and then be off. Enjoy, or dont. tongue.gif

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Crossing the sea of ghosts.

Joryn was pacing around on deck, the sea air helped him fine tune his objectives. Cool moist air and a clear open ocean, which he find profoundly calming. It was hard for him to believe, for the first time he was going to set foot out of his home province. Not that he was particularly brimming with excitement, he was a Dunmer, and as such showed little enthusiasm for the other races or their cultures. He was also a Telvanni to boot, so not the most culturally broad minded specimen to be sure.

Still, Morrowind had been home for his twenty odd years of life so far. Young for a mer, but Joryn had been quick to gain a fair position in his house. An impressive feat, considering the contempt shown to him by many of the higher ranking Telvanni. But this had undoubtedly been made easier as his Masters sphere of influence grew.

Master Aryon, one who had shown a dislike for the old and rigid ways the near corpses on the council ruled, couldn’t have been a better master for Joryn. He and many others like him were given a chance under Aryon. Now their worth was measured by their abilities, and not the centuries they had lived.

But his task beckoned, and he was not going to get the best perspective on it by mulling over his current status within the Telvanni. Master Aryon had summoned him only yesterday and told him of a mission of some importance for the council. A particular amulet rumoured to rest within the ruins of the ancient and extinct Ayleid Empire throughout Cyrodiil.

It stank of personal gain for one of the councillors to get an upper hand, but he had no intentions of letting his master down. Joryn would play fetch and be sure that the trinket landed in the lap of whom it would benefit him most. This would of course be Aryon. Aryon had also mentioned not ruling out aid from the mages guild, a peculiar request, but one that made sense.

It was clear that the Telvanni had no intention of being caught with their exquisite pants down. After another quick look around, it was perhaps time to throw a few encouraging words the captain’s way. “We are making good time, no?” he asked optimistically. “Aye that we are laddy, but I bein sure to keep my nose outta Telvanni business” he chortled “Buncha necromancers to be sure, but they pays well mind you”.

Joryn half smiled at the captain, “I take it we are headed to Blacklight?”
“That we are, after a short stop at Dagon Fel, but we will arrive within the hour laddy”. “Very well” was all Joryn was prepared to finish on, he headed down below deck. “Not much of a talker, eh?” the captain snorted.

Joryn kept himself occupied with his spells and books throughout the rest of the journey. He had no intention of spending time in Dagon Fel, there would be time to waste in Blacklight. But until then Joryn was planning on ways to make his stay in Cyrodiil as short as possible. He was bitter enough about the arrogant humans poking their noses into his home, and not being a hypocrite, was uncomfortable about doing the same to them.

After dozing off in a hammock Joryn was quickly awakened by a loud thud and a familiar loutish voice. “Here we are lady, needn’t you worry bout the payment, you’re keepers saw to that”.With a nod Joryn added “Excellent, now captain it has been a pleasure but I must depart now, perhaps we will meet on my return trip, until then farewell”. “You too laddy!” The captain offered a two fingered salute as Joryn left.

Stepping out into the docks, Joryn’s first priority was to find a tavern. Get something to eat and drink. Weaving his way through the crowded streets with many Dunmer and the odd outlander, wasn’t much trouble. He was hardly packed for a trek, he wore his plain mages robes and carried only a reasonable amount of his gold with him. Also he brought some magical equipment and what little information he could scrape about this amulet. If he needed to make some minor potions on the move he could also manage that.

After a little searching he found a reasonable place to stop, a small tavern called The Unburdened Traveller. The place seemed quiet enough as he entered, and a pretty young Dunmer barmaid smiled pleasantly as he approached. On his way to the bar he was suddenly hit by a strong stench of mead on the air, and eyed a large Nord with his head in his mug, sitting in the corner. Quietly, which was a relief.

“What can I get you, sera?” the young barmaid asked. “Just a mazte, some hound meat and slaughterfish scales if you please”. After quickly preparing his order, she laid the food and drink down in front of Joryn as he passed her the 15 gold. The barmaid's pleasant smile disappeared in an instant. Joryn was too busy stuffing his food down to take notice of the Nord no longer occupied by his cups in the corner, and had walked up behind him. Joryn, with a chunk of hound meat sticking out of his mouth, was taken by surprise as the brutish Nord flipped him around to face him. Joryn’s jaw dropped along with the hound meat, which slapped onto the stone floor.

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Enjoy it or not, thanks if you took the time to read it. I look forward to hearing if Im good enough to continue with this. biggrin.gif


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Joryn   Joryn's annoying new world   May 18 2006, 11:21 PM
Kayla   Aaaw! Poor Joryn! Continue! I must kno...   May 19 2006, 03:58 AM
TheStranger   I like it. Only thing is, i'd make what one pe...   May 19 2006, 09:49 AM
Joryn   Okay here is another part of my little story. Ill ...   May 19 2006, 11:44 AM
treydog   An imaginative plot, with good descriptive element...   May 19 2006, 04:33 PM
DarkHunter   Heh, a Nord Mage's Guild... That'd be funn...   May 19 2006, 08:18 PM
Kayla   Excellent way to defeat someone! Set their pan...   May 20 2006, 06:45 PM
Joryn   Well I decided to post another update. Ill try to ...   May 20 2006, 07:59 PM
DarkHunter   hmmmm... I... oh never mind. Just keep writing...   May 20 2006, 08:03 PM
Joryn   One last update for anyone interested before I fin...   May 20 2006, 11:20 PM
Mazelure   That was good... I really like Joryn's persona...   May 21 2006, 12:21 AM
DarkHunter   no worries! kinda like me... (real me) neh, it...   May 21 2006, 12:56 AM
Kayla   This story is coming along very nicely. ^_^ I like...   May 21 2006, 05:52 PM
Joryn   Hey thanks again for all the positive comments peo...   May 21 2006, 06:18 PM
Mazelure   Nice battle... I like how it all went down... mage...   May 21 2006, 08:24 PM
DarkHunter   heh heh heh... serious fight! I wonder what wi...   May 21 2006, 10:00 PM
Mazelure   By the way DarkHunter I also think Joryn might hav...   May 22 2006, 01:51 AM
DarkHunter   *giggle* I think he's a little... attracted :P   May 22 2006, 03:04 AM
Kayla   :D Nice battle! I think I'm falling in lo...   May 22 2006, 04:36 AM
Joryn   Here is another update. And by the way, I took int...   May 23 2006, 02:06 PM
Kayla   I read your update at school! ^_^ Joryn is my...   May 23 2006, 02:48 PM
DarkHunter   Heh heh heh, good ol' Telvanni charm... what? ...   May 23 2006, 04:13 PM
Kayla   Telvanni ftw though. :D   May 23 2006, 09:31 PM
Kiln   Wow Joryn, I didn't know you had a talent for ...   May 23 2006, 11:30 PM
Mazelure   You tell them Kayla... if I lived in morrowind I c...   May 23 2006, 11:30 PM
Joryn   Another update here. I was thinking the other day ...   May 25 2006, 12:16 PM
DarkHunter   *Giggle* heh heh heh... Who said Dumner couldn...   May 25 2006, 04:49 PM
Mazelure   Alright... I like where this is going... by the wa...   May 26 2006, 02:50 AM
Joryn   Newlands lodge in Cheydinhal. Joryn slowly opened...   May 26 2006, 04:46 PM
Mazelure   Ouch... that must have hurt... falling from the sk...   May 26 2006, 04:54 PM
DarkHunter   Heh heh heh... Telvanni always getting ripped off....   May 26 2006, 08:16 PM
Joryn   On the streets of Cheydinhal. Joryn sat at a tabl...   May 27 2006, 10:25 PM
DarkHunter   :O A Breton... He has magic too, usually... Uh oh...   May 28 2006, 12:13 AM
Mazelure   You do?... cause I dont... and I would like to add...   May 28 2006, 12:49 AM


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