Horses, mud, missery and her to make it bearable Options

[minque]

Well horses would be wrong....that´s about it and you may use guars or nix-hounds or whatever.....

name? dont have any in mind

last content? ok but remember the policy here.....no xxx

edit and b grammar check? Jona will certainly help out if you ask him nicely

[NEO256]

Yes I know horses in Morrowind would be wrong acording to the lore so there are some options.

1 One an exception on the horse part.

2 An exception on the location (slaves any where else then Morrowind).

Or I did mention it before they aren't in Vardenfell they are in the mountains left of Vardenfell on the mainland...Can this peas of land contain horses?

And whats up with this censuring, whats up with the triple cross thing turned in xylophone?

[minque]

[quote=NEO256]Yes I know horses in Morrowind would be wrong acording to the lore so there are some options.

1 One an exception on the horse part.

2 An exception on the location (slaves any where else then Morrowind).

Or I did mention it before they aren't in Vardenfell they are in the mountains left of Vardenfell on the mainland...Can this peas of land contain horses?

And whats up with this censuring, whats up with the triple cross thing turned in xylophone?[/quote]

don´t know about horses on the mainland

autocensor changes x.x.x. to xylophone

[MerGirl]

Are the horses really essential to the story? Or are they an important source of transportation for the characters? How long do you plan on using the horses?

[jonajosa]

I say drop that part of the lore and go with the horses. Don't let some pathetic peice of info keep you from writing a piece of good work. Horses should be in.

[Soulseeker3.0]

yes the horses are fun, If some people aren't happy then build something in to help, like to imported food idea earlyer.

[NEO256]

Well horses are a peas of of propery of the slaves owner, they are way of transport for the full length of the story and a lot of stuf happens on the horse itself while traveling. There is absolutly NO way I could just write horses out off this story because it would completly ruwen it.

Update (again): I am writing at it know and I think I am going to finish this story any minute now

[MerGirl]

Oh, I see. Hmmm... That would be a little difficult to remove them...

Anyway, continue writing and do the best you can! :goodjob:

[Sinder Velvin]

Your story has been removed. Repost it here after you remove the naughty bits.

[NEO256]

Ok Im totaly speechless, a month of work gone. First that stuf with the horse now all triple X content, what am I saying every thing related to seks needs to be removed. And thats a lot and I don't feel like doing that. I need to rewrite whole parts of the story because of a not marked guideline.

Ok if any one does have to time to do something like that, convince me of your good intensions and you can edit my story to make it match the devs critria.

To discribe how I'm feeling now, I felt missarble today but now I'm sometime between realy angry to close of colapse. It's not because of those darn triple X thingys but I have to rewrite the stuf I have been working on for a very long time. I was finally satisfied with the story and now, because something not stated anywhere on this forum...

[minque]

Ok so send it to me and I´ll help you with those parts....

If you wish to do it pm me and i give you my email-address

[Alexander]

[quote=NEO256]Ok Im totaly speechless, a month of work gone. First that stuf with the horse now all triple X content, what am I saying every thing related to seks needs to be removed. And thats a lot and I don't feel like doing that. I need to rewrite whole parts of the story because of a not marked guideline.

Ok if any one does have to time to do something like that, convince me of your good intensions and you can edit my story to make it match the devs critria.

To discribe how I'm feeling now, I felt missarble today but now I'm sometime between realy angry to close of colapse. It's not because of those darn triple X thingys but I have to rewrite the stuf I have been working on for a very long time. I was finally satisfied with the story and now, because something not stated anywhere on this forum...[/quote]

I'm sorry we had to remove it, however this is a 13 and over forum, so when writing anything or posting anything, it's something to take into account always

[jonajosa]

I warned you. But if you need help rewriting some of that stuff im here to help with that

[Dantrag]

yeah, you can always email the actual story to us, and post the edited. I would like to read it, but I came too late (missed deleted posts :/ )

[Sinder Velvin]

[quote=NEO256]Ok Im totaly speechless, a month of work gone. First that stuf with the horse now all triple X content, what am I saying every thing related to seks needs to be removed. And thats a lot and I don't feel like doing that. I need to rewrite whole parts of the story because of a not marked guideline.
[/quote]

We're talking about common sense here.

[NEO256]

[quote]e're talking about common sense here.[/quote]
Then probably the problem is that I lack that...

[NEO256]

Seems the story dies with the final judgment that sexual related content is not permited at all. It rips out the heart, lungs and brains out of this story...It's dead, I cannot write out all the things that are asked... for so it ends here I think. I just didn't want to put this much sexuel content in it but on the way some things could be solved by putting things like these in.
Unless minque can write it out (I have send minque the story) this story is finished. To bad, all written for nothing.

[jonajosa]

Do you mean to tell me the heart to your story was the sex scenes? Im sure there is a way to keep this going.

[NEO256]

No, but the sex scenes and all the other scenes containing some sexual material are equel important for the story.

Tell me how and I will write it....

For example, the part with the boner. I can't think up another way, the slave boy is much to afraid to provocate her again so he is not going to touch her. Then maybe a whole other aproach like what...? Maybe him telling her something she doesn't like on first thought, that's a cliche... Something else leeding to this part: impossible....So I should delete the scene wich would mean rewriting 20% of the story.

Because what happens after that is so crucial for the story that it almost can't be taking out. The relation between these 2 just changes dramaticly.

[minque]

[quote=NEO256]Seems the story dies with the final judgment that sexual related content is not permited at all. It rips out the heart, lungs and brains out of this story...It's dead, I cannot write out all the things that are asked... for so it ends here I think. I just didn't want to put this much sexuel content in it but on the way some things could be solved by putting things like these in.
Unless minque can write it out (I have send minque the story) this story is finished. To bad, all written for nothing.[/quote]

NEO!
hope you forgive me for not responded to you for a time but things are completely chaotic here

Now I´m pretty sure I can do something about your story, really, so if you will be patient with me I´ll give it a shot

Now It may take some time but it will be ok......as far as the regulations, then again it´s your story and I´ll send it back to you edited so you can give your opinion on it

It will take some days unfortunately.......