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> Hajima the ninja ronin, belated chapter 2, I hope this is at least as good as the first chapter
jchamber
post Jul 6 2006, 04:41 PM
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I now can post pictures of hajima but I can't seem to get my picture function on the game to work so if anyone has suggestions i would appreciate them. anyway i am deeply sorry for making you all wait for so long. I am going to pick up the pase a good bit b/c I actually meant to be here back when Hajima was originally in this setting of heading toward Casius cosades's home.

I went to the nearest person I could find which happened to be an Argonian and asked directions to the local pub that the guard had directed me to for information regarding the location of Mr. Cosades. I got to the pub and the owner said that I could find the man over the next row of houses, so I said my thanks and got moving which turned otu to be a good thing because he was about to leave his house.

"...So you were able to..." The old man in front of me had no volume to my ears as I saw the man who had left me by boat not so long ago and my body filled with rage at being betrayed and left behind and abandoned. I warped, using my new ring, behind the old man and began to take a swing at my new rival. I had pulled my arm back when a blade came around my neck from behind me it took me a second to stop and it cost me a papercut small cut across my throat, "And just who would you be? Are you a member of the Sixth house?"

"It is fine Cash, He and I have met before and I believe he is mad because I hit him with a dagger to the ....was it the leg or shoulder? Well anyway, I left him when i was up north a couple days ago." I felt the man behind me relax and I warped back out of the middle of them and took a defensive stance as naturally as if I was to be drinking a goblet of water.



Ok, I now realize that I have to go back through my whole story up to this point and refresh my meemory because i dont remember what kinda narritive I wrote in and what all epuiptment Hajima has et cetera so I should be back either later today or tommorrow, hope this was enough to whet your whistle for some more storytelling i know my writers bliock has definitely washed away;


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post Jul 6 2006, 09:35 PM
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Well I'd like to see you continue. It's been a while, so I'll have to refresh my mind myself.


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post Jul 6 2006, 10:46 PM
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I remember the teleporting ring, everyone in the Council Club being murdered by the dagger weilding guy, and the trip to Dagon Fel.

Oh yea, and it was a teleporting specialist that gave Hajima the ring.

Wow, my memory isn't too bad, just probably specific details I forget about this one.


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post Jul 7 2006, 03:38 AM
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that is about what i could remember along with some stuff that hasn't come up in the story yet that I have had in the back of my head for months, hopefully it wasn't rotting back there, lol. welcome to the fold metal mallet always always always happy to hear from new/other people, I got caught up doing over 7 pages of review for the 'the kingdom' mod since I was behind and I have to go to a college interview/tour tomorrow so i am about to turn in and have no time to go over my older parts of the story but I am hopeing to add in some new stuff tomorrow and btw I like both of your's avatars, although I will miss jack's old one, heh heh.... well that's about all I got to say short of:
GOOD NIGHT ALL!


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post Jul 7 2006, 08:57 AM
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You miss my old one? I didn't had an avatar before I got this one. laugh.gif


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post Jul 8 2006, 04:39 AM
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Thanks for the warm welcome. I can't wait to hear more about Hajima's exploits.


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