 The Writers Guild: Order of the Schola, Welcome to the Temple of Lore |
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| Black Hand |
 Oct 11 2006, 01:22 AM
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 Master  Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell.  |
Ahhh, another sign-up. Yes Welcome Canis216, Welcome! I have just finished reading your stories, and I am pleased that you would see fit to join our humble Order.
I should post comments on your stories too, huh? Sorry, I rarely do post in others stories, even though I do read nearly everything that pases through here, I realize that the posts can be a source of encouragement and drive for most if not all the writers. Relax, I'm the same way, there is nothing wrong with a little vanity  |
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 17 2006, 09:06 PM
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 Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
Just read your latest addition to the Temple, canis. I just have to say it is wonderfully written. I especially liked the little hint at your previous release you added. I'm really curious about what happened to the smugglers at that mansion. Hopefully I'll get to find out sometime.
-------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| jack cloudy |
Oct 17 2006, 10:19 PM
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 Master Joined: 11-February 06 From: In a cold place. |
Interesting with lots of blank spots that let our imagination run wild. I personally think that those smugglers won't leave the house. At least not with a beating heart.
-------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 23 2006, 12:00 AM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
Read your addition to the Temple, Black. I thought it was funny, especially when describing the hero that infiltrated the base. Saying that he was a vigilante, and an ex-superhero and cop and such. Nice playing up on the stereotypes. I wouldn't mind being Pete in this case.
-------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| canis216 |
Oct 24 2006, 01:25 AM
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 Knower  Joined: 28-March 06 From: Desert canyons without end. |
Heh. Good work with the stereotyping Black. Thoroughly amusing.
-------------------- Read about Always-He-Lingers-in-the-Sun, a Blades assassin, in Killing in the Emperor's Name and The Dark Operation. And elsewhere.
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| Black Hand |
Oct 28 2006, 07:55 AM
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Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
Very Nice update Canis! I sense a series forming. Rethyas...Rethyas...where have I heard that name before?
Nice turnaround of making ones strength into ones weakness! |
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 28 2006, 02:44 PM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
I, too, enjoyed your new update canis. We get a little bit of interesting intrigue with the Imperial and the Argonian (I have a feeling I know who that Imperial is
).The Arena fight was especially well written as well, with a thrilling finale. Keep up the good stuff! -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| canis216 |
Oct 30 2006, 02:09 AM
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Knower Joined: 28-March 06 From: Desert canyons without end. |
I appreciate the kind remarks. I don't like to think of what I'm doing here as a series; it suggests a level of narrative continuity and purpose which I don't have time to fulfill. I think I'm using this character more as a (rough) probe into the dirty, risky, darkly humorous, tragic, and outright dangerous business of everyday life in Morrowind. If I tried to make this work a coherent series I'd take more time and create a (no doubt) richer narrative, but I wouldn't be able to let as many ideas flow out unspoiled by my often too-harsh internal critic's nitpicking.
-------------------- Read about Always-He-Lingers-in-the-Sun, a Blades assassin, in Killing in the Emperor's Name and The Dark Operation. And elsewhere.
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| The Metal Mallet |
Oct 30 2006, 04:27 AM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
You got a crafty Argonian there, Canis. I can see why you enjoyed writing that one. It was excellent.
I like the different approach you're taking with writing your "story". It allows you to do different things with your writing yet it still has some sense of direction, at least I fell there's still a direction to it. Your new update displays the fact you can switch things up if you wished. If I suddenly started writing 'Bloodlust' in first person, everyone would be wondering what the hell just happened. With yours, you can do that and no one is confused by it. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| The Metal Mallet |
Nov 1 2006, 03:00 AM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
Nice updates from both Black Hand and Canis. Enjoyed both of them, Black's particularly reminded me of "A Hypothetical Treachery". And canis's is solid as usual, now involving the Morag Tong into his "series".
Now, if only that water had been distilled water, then poor Redoran wouldn't have electricuted herself. As it's the minerals dissolved in water that conducts the electricity rather than the water itself. CHEMISTRY! The more you know! :rainbow with a shooting star tailing it: -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| minque |
Nov 1 2006, 10:37 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
Great stories here! I enjoyed reading them very much...hmmm got to come up with one myself soon......
 -------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Taillus |
Nov 1 2006, 11:52 PM
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 Knower Joined: 30-January 06 |
I would love to join this Writer's guild if you all would have me! It seems like an amazing idea and I would like nothing more than to be a part of it. I do not know what my rank would be... Maybe I will go low for now and build up over time.
-------------------- “Worry not, young Breton. This will be over very quickly but I wish I could say that it would be painless. You will suffer greatly before you join the countless other souls that fuel my power.” - Taillus
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| Black Hand |
Nov 2 2006, 01:25 AM
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Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
QUOTE Ok Folks, I had this thought. A new non-exclusive, non-elitist club of sorts, guild in this case, complete with ranks and a cool siggy 'privlege', I put that in quote marks because anyone can join for any reason, and call themselves any rank they want. Welcome Aboard! |
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| jack cloudy |
Nov 2 2006, 07:46 PM
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Master Joined: 11-February 06 From: In a cold place. |
Man, you've all been busy. I've got to get something short on the drawing board soon.
Hmmm..........*runs off, frantically scribbling down notes.* -------------------- Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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| The Metal Mallet |
Nov 16 2006, 11:50 PM
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Master Joined: 18-June 06 From: Kitchener, ON, Canada |
Just read your first edition to The Temple, Taillus, and I just have to say it's quite good. Sometimes youths are just too ignorant
 I was just wondering though. Since the kid is basically heir to the throne of Kvatch, wouldn't his father been able to release him from prison? Or was this gentleman's friends THAT high up? Other than that, I really liked what ya started there. -------------------- I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola.
Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus" "This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones) |
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| Taillus |
Nov 17 2006, 05:25 AM
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Knower Joined: 30-January 06 |
Well Mallet, Papa Kvatch is a very proud man. Let us just leave things at that until I finish my story
 -------------------- “Worry not, young Breton. This will be over very quickly but I wish I could say that it would be painless. You will suffer greatly before you join the countless other souls that fuel my power.” - Taillus
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| Black Hand |
Nov 17 2006, 08:05 AM
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Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
OoooH! Assassin Stories!
I like Assassin stories! Thusly I like Taillus Stories, but I would like them even if they werent about assassins, so well written! |
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| Kiln |
Nov 17 2006, 06:03 PM
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Forum Bard Joined: 22-June 05 From: Balmora, Eight Plates |
I just read both Mallet's "A Vicious Haze" and Jack's "Left Behind and Forgotten" and I'm very impressed by these two stories, I haven't read any others as of yet but these two were simply amazing.
I wasn't sure where to comment but I guess this is the right place. Anyways great work guys. -------------------- He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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| Black Hand |
Nov 19 2006, 04:08 PM
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Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
Ahh, the Argonian Assassin's tale continues, I am most satisfied. Well done, Canis!
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| Black Hand |
Nov 23 2006, 02:40 AM
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Master Joined: 26-December 05 From: Where the sun shines everyday in hell. |
So you answered the question as to why Caius lives next door to the Tong traitor, and the Camonna Tong scum. Very creative, and a wonderful read.
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