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Zalphon Blood and Corruption Aug 28 2010, 03:51 AM hazmick :D I am gonna love this. Marsh Knights sound grea... Aug 28 2010, 11:04 AM Acadian Nice start. Your hero seems to have some depth th... Aug 28 2010, 01:17 PM mALX I have to agree with Acadian - really nice start -... Aug 28 2010, 01:20 PM treydog This has a lot of promise. Interesting characters... Aug 29 2010, 03:43 AM Zalphon Hazmick, this is almost six-hundred years later.
... Aug 29 2010, 04:37 AM Zalphon Chapter One: Voyage to Vvardenfell
I awoke to t... Sep 1 2010, 07:40 PM hazmick ooh, another good chapter. We can see small parts ... Sep 1 2010, 07:50 PM mALX I have to agree with Hazmick, this chapter was ver... Sep 1 2010, 11:37 PM Acadian Nice. I see a revealing flashback. Also what app... Sep 2 2010, 01:01 AM Zalphon Chapter Two: Nightmares
When we reached Vvarden... Sep 7 2010, 04:01 PM hazmick A strange dream is the best way to start an advent... Sep 7 2010, 04:37 PM mALX Woo Hoo! I am intrigued by the shared dream -... Sep 7 2010, 09:10 PM Destri Melarg ‘Strike and J’Cat are back! At least this tim... Sep 8 2010, 09:40 AM Acadian So Vvardenfell is different, but just as dangerous... Sep 9 2010, 03:26 AM Zalphon Thanks, Acadian. A Kwama Worker? Remember, this ... Sep 9 2010, 04:31 AM Zalphon Chapter Three: Divayth’s Tower
J’skooma telepor... Sep 11 2010, 01:11 AM Acadian Uh-oh. Shadow Racers.
Tome of. . . a mystery... Sep 11 2010, 03:23 AM![]() mALX
Uh-oh. Shadow Racers.
Tome of. . . a mystery... Sep 12 2010, 05:15 AM Zalphon Sorry it has been so long lately. I've been b... Sep 22 2010, 02:18 AM![]() mALX
Sorry it has been so long lately. I've been ... Sep 22 2010, 03:47 AM Acadian Thanks, Z for checking in and letting us know what... Sep 22 2010, 04:00 AM Zalphon I'm also writing a short story for the school ... Sep 24 2010, 02:41 AM Zalphon Chapter Four: Discovery and Despair
The ghosts ... Sep 28 2010, 04:40 AM mALX My fave part in this is the letter from Divayth Fy... Sep 28 2010, 01:48 PM Acadian My goodness. This episode is some your finest wri... Sep 28 2010, 03:41 PM Destri Melarg I agree with Acadian. All of this was good, but t... Sep 29 2010, 05:21 PM Zalphon Thanks guys :) Sep 30 2010, 01:46 PM Zalphon Chapter Five: Aboard the Dragon’s Moon
I awoke ... Oct 7 2010, 02:29 AM Acadian Poor QS. His young charges never seem to learn. .... Oct 7 2010, 02:38 AM Destri Melarg It seems that Quick-Strike has overestimated Divay... Oct 7 2010, 09:53 AM Zalphon Divayth Fyr, we knew you well... You cured our co... Oct 8 2010, 01:56 AM mALX I'm in tears over poor Divayth's head...GA... Oct 8 2010, 03:44 AM Zalphon Chapter Six: Knight-Captain Raynil Sarethi
I aw... Oct 9 2010, 02:32 AM mALX Your writing feels natural, I saw several places I... Oct 9 2010, 02:36 AM Acadian A rather dire situation here. . . gulp indeed... Oct 9 2010, 03:19 AM Zalphon Good point, Acadian. And Malx, I'm glad you... Oct 9 2010, 06:12 AM Zalphon Chapter Seven: The Transformation
I stood there... Oct 12 2010, 02:51 AM mALX Your timing, descriptions, dialogue - everything i... Oct 12 2010, 09:24 AM Zalphon Good news, guys! Oblivion's Edge is going... Oct 13 2010, 02:18 AM mALX Congrats, Zalphon !!!! Oct 13 2010, 02:45 AM Acadian Chapter 7: Out of the frying pan into the fire. ... Oct 13 2010, 03:16 AM Zalphon Chapter Eight: Reborn
I awoke in a dark, dome-l... Oct 16 2010, 04:12 AM mALX WOOOOOOOOOOOOOT !!!!!! I... Oct 16 2010, 06:38 AM Acadian WooHoo! Kalarn joins the dark side! Hmm,... Oct 17 2010, 12:18 AM Zalphon Chapter Nine: The Elders
I looked into the mirr... Oct 18 2010, 01:42 AM mALX Oh, it was the blade talking !!!!... Oct 18 2010, 01:47 AM Acadian Clever to riposte with the talking sword! :P Oct 18 2010, 02:23 AM Zalphon Chapter Ten: The Beginning of a New Empire
Soul... Nov 4 2010, 03:44 AM mALX NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Don't let... Nov 5 2010, 01:19 AM Acadian The talking sword is very clever - and what a wond... Nov 6 2010, 01:27 PM Zalphon Anyone noticed this is an anti-hero fanfic, yet? Nov 6 2010, 05:40 PM Zalphon Chapter Eleven: Heritage
I looked into the mirr... Nov 11 2010, 11:39 PM Acadian Nice flashback. Sheds some light on the past. Nov 12 2010, 01:30 AM mALX Really great flashback! But would J'Skoom... Nov 12 2010, 06:56 PM Zalphon Zalphon still lived, until the strike by our heroi... Nov 12 2010, 07:06 PM Zalphon Chapter Twelve: Heritage II – Pilgrimage
“Your ... Nov 28 2010, 11:01 PM mALX Really powerful ending on that - Kalarn is impress... Nov 29 2010, 03:04 AM Acadian I still like the talking sword.
Some effectivel... Dec 2 2010, 03:19 AM Zalphon Thank you, Acadian and Malx :) Well, well...Obliv... Dec 2 2010, 04:45 AM![]() mALX
Thank you, Acadian and Malx :) Well, well...Obli... Dec 2 2010, 04:49 AM Zalphon Not by anyone important, just by the school magazi... Dec 2 2010, 04:50 AM![]() mALX
Not by anyone important, just by the school magaz... Dec 2 2010, 04:56 AM Zalphon They may not, because it's so big. Dec 2 2010, 05:02 AM![]() mALX
They may not, because it's so big.
Can it ... Dec 2 2010, 05:04 AM Zalphon They want around 5-10 pages, that'd mean cutti... Dec 2 2010, 03:27 PM Zalphon Chapter Thirteen: Magicka
Nightmare stopped at ... Dec 2 2010, 03:29 PM Zalphon Epilogue
Kalarn died in the Castle of the Black... Dec 2 2010, 03:31 PM mALX Holy Cow, Zalphon !!!!! The e... Dec 2 2010, 04:30 PM Zalphon FYI, just because in (i.e.) New Skyrim doesnt mean... Dec 3 2010, 03:31 AM![]() mALX
FYI, just because in (i.e.) New Skyrim doesnt mea... Dec 3 2010, 03:36 AM Acadian A rather epic ending, Zalpon. Well done! :) Dec 3 2010, 04:09 AM Zalphon Eastern Skyrim is New Skyrim, silly Malx :)
I... Dec 3 2010, 04:16 AM![]() mALX
Eastern Skyrim is New Skyrim, silly Malx :)
I... Dec 3 2010, 04:29 AM Zalphon Well here it's safe for Zalphon. Over there m... Dec 3 2010, 04:33 AM![]() mALX
Well here it's safe for Zalphon. Over there ... Dec 3 2010, 04:36 AM Zalphon Just read it Malx! I think I may submit it to... Dec 3 2010, 04:40 AM![]() mALX
Just read it Malx! I think I may submit it t... Dec 3 2010, 04:53 AM Zalphon Two Worlds in the Bethsoft forums. Dec 3 2010, 04:58 AM mALX
Two Worlds in the Bethsoft forums.
Before I re... Dec 3 2010, 05:00 AM
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