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post Feb 4 2007, 07:28 PM
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Hey guys, this isnt a divergence from the main story I have, but rather, I have been trying out a new type of character on my X-Box, a custom class 'Geisha' after seeing the movie 'Memoirs of a Geisha' Recently, and I gotta tell ya, its a lot of fun. Something different to be sure. It inspired this. Enjoy. (I hope.)


“Who was that lady, Sera?” asked Sayuri, looking at Edryno Arethi, her current matron in House Hlaalu.

“No one, get back too your duties, Retainer.” Edrnyo replied, twirling the Black Rose in her hand, a deathly pale in her face, she had been delivered the death message and was in no mood to speak.

Sayuri, the young Bosmer girl had been adopted by House Hlaalu after her parents had been murdered by a Telvanni Mage whilst in Sadrith Mora, and one of the Merchants traveling in his own ship to trade, took pity on the little crying girl, dropping her off in Balmora, and told Nileno Dorvayn of her plight.

She remembered the tsking of Nileno, and the warmth of her palm as she rubbed her cheek affectionately. She was given clothes and a bed, and place to sleep, and she was put to work, alternately being trained in House Hlaalu’s favored skills, for three years she served mostly as a serving girls, performing menial tasks, and occasionally as a thief, or a decoy. She loved it, as it seemed to coincide naturally with her gods-given talents.

Bratheru Oran, Edryno’s lover took the rose from her hand, and threw it on the ground, smashing it underneath his leather boots. His expression showed that of rage and helplessness. Sayuri would not bring it up again for three weeks, but one day, when Edryno gave her a key to her house, and told her that she would be gone for several weeks, she finally explained, as she had never held anything back from her adopted daughter for long.

“Do you remember that Rose, Sayuri? The black one?” she asked, as Sayuri nodded her head, remembering the vivacious Altmer that had delivered it, dressed in exquisite clothing and wearing Telvanni Bug Musk.

“You’ve been chosen, and are being taken from me, under the pain of death, I cannot refuse. The Black Rose Clan is taking you, and you will serve them. I…I am leaving to speak to them, and perhaps negotiate an alternative. But seldom will they refute a selection.”

“Black Rose Clan? Matron, I don’t understand!” Sayuri said nearly on the brink of tears.

“You know of the Morag Tong? They worship the Great Daedra Mephala, the Dark Matron of Murder, Sex, and Secrets. They are a small faction within the Tong, dedicated to the second part of that. Whereas most assassins are dark, aloof, and grim in nature, a Black Rose, or a Dark Petal, also Thorns or Mephala’s Maidens, rely more on Personality and Agility. As every rose have five petals, so does the Clan. When one ‘wilts’ away as they call it, either killed, or grows to old too become pleasing to men, another must be chosen to take their place. You, because you are born under the Sign of ‘The Lover’ which gives you more agility, and the power to freeze people, will become the newest petal in the Black Rose.”

Sayuri’s eyes tried to no avail to hold back the tears of confusion and frustration. For the second time in her life, she was to lose her family. Edyrno ran her hand through the childs raven dark hair, and embraced her, attempting to comfort the shaking Bosmer.

“I know, I promise everything will be all right…”
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post Jul 4 2008, 10:23 PM
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Brilliant Blackie! I liked the issue with the Dwemer Limeware, jeez Sayuri meant so well....in the only way she knew of! I just love that lil' bosmer lassie

And I love your way with words....oh jeez I just wish I would be able to do half as good as you do....

Thanks for giving me a really good read before bedtime! tongue.gif


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Black Hand   Mephala's Maiden: Black Rose Clan   Feb 4 2007, 07:28 PM
lord_wanhoop   Interesting. A touching first chapter. I'd tel...   Feb 4 2007, 07:57 PM
minque   Oh yeah....Blackie, you´ve done it again! This...   Feb 4 2007, 08:39 PM
The Metal Mallet   Looks like we'll be seeing a different techniq...   Feb 4 2007, 09:08 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, fascinating. I don't know if the Black Ro...   Feb 4 2007, 09:40 PM
canis216   There's a reason why I like to mess around wit...   Feb 4 2007, 11:24 PM
Black Hand   Edryno Arethi returned two weeks later, the time p...   Feb 5 2007, 01:28 AM
The Metal Mallet   Looks like her normal life is about to change. An...   Feb 5 2007, 03:00 AM
minque   Oh aye, poor Sayuri....what will become of her? I ...   Feb 5 2007, 09:56 PM
jack cloudy   Beautiful descriptions. And the last sentence: ,,T...   Feb 5 2007, 11:03 PM
Black Hand   Sayuri made it to a small port city that she had r...   Feb 6 2007, 12:30 AM
The Metal Mallet   Crafty, very crafty. I've certainly been enjo...   Feb 6 2007, 01:32 AM
Black Hand   Sayri was taken to a mushroom Villa of sorts on th...   Feb 7 2007, 05:46 AM
The Metal Mallet   Haha, funny way to end this update Black. I enjoy...   Feb 7 2007, 05:14 PM
jack cloudy   Oops, caught through your own escape. Man, that mu...   Feb 7 2007, 10:29 PM
Black Hand   Horror soon gave way to fascination. Sayuri was en...   Apr 26 2008, 07:46 PM
jack cloudy   I had to reread the first part before I understood...   Apr 26 2008, 08:35 PM
Black Hand   "Yes, now you see. Your rite of passage shall...   Apr 26 2008, 09:34 PM
Black Hand   How long had it been since he had last been here? ...   Apr 30 2008, 07:48 PM
BSD-IES   Splendid indeed. I only saw this for the first tim...   Apr 30 2008, 08:30 PM
jack cloudy   Hmm, the slow approach. Ah well, there won't b...   Apr 30 2008, 08:44 PM
Black Hand   Well, to answer the question, if someone gets in h...   Apr 30 2008, 08:49 PM
Black Hand   Errisa twirled the kreshweed flower between her fi...   Apr 30 2008, 09:32 PM
jack cloudy   A boat?.....Well that's perfect! It's ...   Apr 30 2008, 09:52 PM
Black Hand   The journey was a short one, within the sun’s desc...   Apr 30 2008, 11:29 PM
Black Hand   Errisa and Sayuri left Sadrith Mora on a small ski...   May 1 2008, 10:42 PM
Black Hand   Errisa and Sayuri set in the port town of Suran, s...   May 2 2008, 12:21 AM
minque   I'm stunned, Blackie! And I'm NOT sayi...   May 2 2008, 01:12 AM
Black Hand   Sayuri followed Errisa’s gaze over her shoulder, a...   May 2 2008, 08:59 PM
Black Hand   The foursome entered into the House of Earthly Del...   May 5 2008, 06:11 PM
minque   Ahhh these two latest updates were so very very go...   May 5 2008, 07:27 PM
Black Hand   The drinking of the cultists ended soon after, and...   May 9 2008, 05:18 AM
treydog   This has to be your best work ever. There is a po...   May 9 2008, 06:18 PM
Black Hand   Evolution of Reaction: :mellow: :blink: :) ...   May 9 2008, 07:52 PM
minque   Ohhhh.....Your description of Genevieve was just m...   May 10 2008, 11:25 PM
Black Hand   Ahh, thanks minque! With everyone so busy IRL ...   May 11 2008, 05:45 PM
Kiln   Ahh, thanks minque! With everyone so busy IRL...   May 11 2008, 05:56 PM
Black Hand   Genevieve began her walk slowly to Sayuri, letting...   May 23 2008, 05:05 AM
raggidman   lol - evolution of emoticons :salute: QUOTE ...   May 23 2008, 11:45 AM
Black Hand   Yes, the statement was intended to be confusing. I...   May 23 2008, 04:38 PM
Black Hand   Genevieve stood up, and gave Errisa a knowing nod....   May 23 2008, 06:13 PM
raggidman   :lol: boo!   May 23 2008, 06:29 PM
Black Hand   Sayuri took the lead, nervously looking at the gre...   May 27 2008, 07:54 PM
minque   lol - evolution of emoticons :salute: It...   May 28 2008, 01:07 PM
Black Hand   The Ritual of the Mother began, and dark robes wer...   Jun 3 2008, 06:14 PM
minque   Ohhh.....eerie! I promise I saw Mephala for my...   Jun 3 2008, 10:28 PM
Black Hand   Sayuri returned to her position, staring with appr...   Jun 6 2008, 06:46 PM
minque   Ahh the ring of surroundings..hmmm sweet! I wo...   Jun 7 2008, 03:56 PM
Black Hand   She was given a little bit of gold, and told what ...   Jun 14 2008, 05:30 PM
minque   Poor girl...now she's a bit confused, right? M...   Jun 14 2008, 07:32 PM
mplantinga   This is certainly an ambitious story, and while yo...   Jun 18 2008, 10:44 PM
Black Hand   She sat in a corner to herself enjoying some sort ...   Jul 4 2008, 09:31 PM


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