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post May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
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“But sir, if you would only give me a little more time, I am certain you would be interested in my proposition.”

“The answer is still ‘No’, Mr. Beauchamp. I have no desire to listen to anything you have to say. You may leave now.”

“If I gave offense by my earlier remarks, I apologize. It is simply that one sometimes hears things…. I know that financial remuneration is not important to you, but I thought that perhaps the spirit of adventure might be enough to entice you.”

“Mr. Beauchamp, I have everything I need right here. My family is here, my home is here, my life is here. I have no interest in the ‘spirit of adventure’. I have found that ‘adventure’ is simply another way of saying ‘a desperate attempt to survive the situation in which one has stupidly placed oneself’. You will leave now. That is not a request.”

I heard the front door open and close with a finality that punctuated those last words. Then another voice spoke up:

“Weren’t you perhaps a bit hard on him, dear?”

The response was a growl:

“You heard what he said as well as I did- ‘…your well-known talent for getting into and out of tight places….’ He called me a thief, is what he did.”

“Well, yes, but after all, you were a thief, you know. And he did come to you directly, not lurking behind some intermediary.”

“Perhaps I used to be a thief, but I hoped I had put all that behind me. And besides, he came to me arrogantly and rudely, just as if he were a bloody Imperial, instead of a fellow Breton."


“ ’A bloody Imperial?’ ” I could envision the raised eyebrow that accompanied that innocent question.

The voices moved away to another part of the house, and I could not make out the muttered words that I was sure were an apology. But that wasn’t important; I had already heard everything I needed to know. I had a name now and a goal. Louis Beauchamp- and Solstheim!

Leaving home is rarely easy, or at least so I have heard. But I felt as if I had to, as if I was slowly smothering. If I was going to do the things I wanted to do, I must get away. There were places I wanted to explore- places he had never been. How typical of him to disparage the idea of adventure- after he had lived the kind of life others only dreamed of! And then to just…stop. As if he could pretend that none of it had ever happened if he did not speak of it. But others spoke of it- oh yes. Louis Beauchamp certainly had that right- one did “hear things”. It was easy enough to tell others that the meat was no good when you had eaten your fill. But I had tasted nothing but the scraps of someone else’s greatness for my whole life and I could stand it no longer. I would leave that very night- but not for Solstheim, at least not yet. It would not do to arrive in that far place as a penniless beggar. Although we were comfortable, and never wanted for the necessities, money was not given to me in any quantity. And though I knew the location of the family treasury well enough, I would not steal. I would not be named a thief, no matter who my father was.

Once the house had quieted, I gathered a small pack of clothing, the few coins that were my own, and a well-worn quarterstaff. How I longed for a bright blade to hang at my side! How could a ready fellow such as I set off on a grand adventure without a trusty sword? But of course I had never been trained in the use of swords, and I recalled the answer when I asked:

“Violence is the result of a mistake. If you avoid mistakes, you can avoid fights. A good walking stick will serve you better. Anything that cannot be dealt with by a sharp rap on the snout is best avoided.”

As if I had never seen the scars that marked his body, never heard the stories that everyone knew by heart, never gazed at the virtual armory hidden throughout the house.
Most of the hidden weapons appeared to be no more than well-used examples of the crafter’s art…. But some of them seemed to… whisper among themselves and to move of their own volition. I know it sounds foolish, the overheated imagining of a child, but I swear it is true. He had never gotten those swords or those scars sitting in front of the fire, reading books. And yet, when he went to the corner club for a solitary drink, and the other men related their exploits, he said nothing. Instead, he simply sat in the shadows with a glass of wine. Even so, if ever a stranger came through and became too loud or boastful, someone would nod toward the quiet figure in the corner and whisper a few words. And then the braggart would fall silent, perhaps even turn a bit pale.

All of these thoughts and more tumbled through my head as I waited in the pre-dawn darkness for the silt-strider to arrive. Perhaps it was foolish to use such a public means of transport, but I wanted distance. And going to Balmora first would help throw off any pursuit. In any event, I doubted that there would be much concern, at least not for several days. When the strider driver saw me waiting, he grinned and said,

“Going on a trip are ye, young sir? I’ll have you in Balmora before you know it. Just sit back and relax.”

He waved away my offered fare with a jovial snort.

“Oh, no charge for you, young sir. Get yourself on up and we’ll be on our way.”

I took his generosity with bad grace, because I knew that it was not for my own sake that I did not have to pay my passage. I was nobody, nothing- just another who stood in the great man’s shadow. He was the hero of the age- everyone said so. Books and ballads had been written about him. And why not? After all, he was Trey of High Rock, Nerevar Reborn, savior of Vvardenfell. And I was his son.

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treydog   Blood on the Moon   May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
The Metal Mallet   I really enjoyed this latest update. The slaps ac...   Jan 5 2008, 08:46 AM
canis216   Heh, welcome home Athlain. And I bet I can guess w...   Jan 5 2008, 12:26 PM
jack cloudy   *BANG BANG* I love you, son! Err.....love you...   Jan 5 2008, 01:03 PM
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minque   uhhhh sweet Azura! TWO updates and not a singl...   Mar 17 2008, 12:53 AM
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jack cloudy   So, despite the utter ridiculousness of the whole ...   Mar 29 2008, 05:24 PM
minque   Ohhhh greatness! We're proceeding here and...   Mar 29 2008, 06:09 PM
treydog   Jack- I shamelessly stole your ideas about Beaucha...   Apr 1 2008, 02:33 AM
canis216   A most satisfying update, treydog. The young folks...   Apr 1 2008, 02:43 AM
mplantinga   I haven't commented in a while, but have been ...   Apr 2 2008, 10:38 PM
treydog   Despite the doubts and disappointments of the prev...   Apr 5 2008, 04:17 PM
jack cloudy   Maximus Rattus? BWAHAHA!!! Man, I love...   Apr 5 2008, 04:51 PM
minque   Wonderful! "Urk" he said spotting Th...   Apr 5 2008, 04:56 PM
treydog   My cheeks burning with embarrassment, I escaped to...   Apr 12 2008, 11:48 PM
mplantinga   I really enjoyed the ending to this latest install...   Apr 14 2008, 05:27 PM
_Hunting_   Very good story you have here treydog. I'm loo...   Apr 16 2008, 04:04 AM
treydog   Mother did not explain her sudden burst of humor, ...   Apr 19 2008, 04:24 AM
_Hunting_   Very good update, this story seems to be getting b...   Apr 20 2008, 07:51 PM
Black Hand   By the by, I have been following your updates trey...   Apr 23 2008, 09:00 PM
The Metal Mallet   You've been building a wonderful sense of emot...   Apr 28 2008, 12:22 AM
minque   At last! I should be ashamed of myself, so man...   Apr 29 2008, 09:10 PM
treydog   At last! I should be ashamed of myself, so ma...   Apr 30 2008, 02:39 AM
redsrock   Hey, Treydog, this is really good. I just started ...   Apr 30 2008, 02:58 AM
treydog   [b]Chapter 4 My return to Fort Darius was trouble...   May 2 2008, 04:30 PM
raggidman   I am going to be really mean here: no matter how ...   May 2 2008, 04:40 PM
BSD-IES   I am going to be really mean here: no matter how...   May 6 2008, 06:38 AM
redsrock   this is a story based on an autobiography :O w...   May 6 2008, 11:49 AM
minque   Solstheim, right? So be it then.... :-/o . Athynae...   May 3 2008, 02:15 PM
treydog   Autobiography? Somewhat- to the extent that Athla...   May 3 2008, 06:45 PM
Kiln   Great job here Trey, there's alot of emotion g...   May 9 2008, 04:47 AM
treydog   I cannot say whether it was because of my dark moo...   May 11 2008, 07:47 PM
Black Hand   Hehehe. BWAHAHAHAH!! I'm sorry f...   May 11 2008, 08:27 PM
minque   Blackie! You quoted exactly what I was going t...   May 17 2008, 08:02 PM
treydog   True to my word, I went to the dock, where I disco...   Jun 1 2008, 08:41 PM
minque   Aww Athlain! It's hard to perform your fir...   Jun 1 2008, 10:22 PM
_Hunting_   Great update, I like how the Conjurer screamed “I...   Jun 2 2008, 12:38 AM
treydog   Although what I most wanted was to be anywhere els...   Jun 14 2008, 01:07 AM
minque   Ok....a daedroth? Awesome..hehe those critters are...   Jun 14 2008, 11:45 AM
mplantinga   I really enjoyed this latest update. I felt like y...   Jun 16 2008, 03:44 PM
RavenMind   Well I've just finished reading about Trey...   Jun 20 2008, 12:05 AM
seerauna   I've been reading the trey and athlain stories...   Jun 29 2008, 03:23 AM
treydog   That is not to say that I was happy to be the “ins...   Jul 13 2008, 01:02 PM
minque   Oh....! My my...So Sason and Malexa are acquai...   Jul 13 2008, 06:56 PM
mplantinga   Here I will once again show my bias on author styl...   Jul 14 2008, 07:57 PM
Black Hand   Ahh. Sorry I missed this one Trey. The new subfour...   Jul 17 2008, 05:28 AM
treydog   [color=#3366FF][size=4]Chapter 5 Of my sea voyage...   Jul 26 2008, 05:31 PM
minque   Awww, what a "nice" welcome, Athlain b...   Jul 26 2008, 05:45 PM
Black Hand   We're finally on the frozen Island!! Y...   Jul 26 2008, 06:30 PM
mplantinga   “I asked for a competent sub-officer to investigat...   Jul 28 2008, 04:17 PM
treydog   I feared that it was too late to correct the Capta...   Aug 24 2008, 05:35 PM
canis216   Niiiice. “Busted me back to trooper, all because...   Aug 24 2008, 06:04 PM
minque   Oh yay! Athlain's back! Niiiiiiice...   Aug 24 2008, 09:41 PM
mplantinga   True to my usual preferences, I liked the introspe...   Aug 25 2008, 05:35 AM
treydog   If my assumed role was to work, it would require m...   Sep 15 2008, 04:34 PM
Black Hand   Excellent! Nice to see you writing again Trey...   Sep 15 2008, 10:08 PM
mplantinga   Seems like a confrontation with the priest is like...   Sep 18 2008, 07:40 PM
minque   Ahaha.....hilarious! Athlain lurking around in...   Sep 18 2008, 08:35 PM
seerauna   I wonder what will happen from here. The priest wi...   Sep 19 2008, 01:02 AM
treydog   Now that a second soldier had confirmed that it wa...   Oct 3 2008, 01:16 PM
seerauna   “You can explain to me why you have been fomentin...   Oct 4 2008, 03:50 PM
canis216   Very nice, Treydog. Funny--and so appropriate--how...   Oct 3 2008, 07:57 PM
minque   Haha....so old Trey didn't want his son to go ...   Oct 3 2008, 10:25 PM
mplantinga   Excellent update, as always. I particularly like...   Oct 4 2008, 11:02 PM
treydog   As soon as I reached my bunk, I followed Captain C...   Oct 11 2008, 05:44 PM
canis216   Ah, that Carnius Magius is crafty one. Athlain bes...   Oct 11 2008, 06:27 PM
treydog   I considered Magius’ request for a moment. It was...   Oct 17 2008, 04:44 PM
minque   Eeeeeeeviiiiil! A cliffie!!!!...   Oct 17 2008, 10:52 PM
canis216   Ah yes, the cliffhanger. Keeps stringing us along,...   Oct 18 2008, 12:46 AM
treydog   I stifled a most unheroic scream as I realized tha...   Oct 22 2008, 05:24 PM
mplantinga   Oh dear; it sounds like our dear Athlain is beginn...   Oct 24 2008, 04:58 PM
minque   O_o....now what? I must confess I didn't under...   Oct 26 2008, 11:51 PM
treydog   O_o....now what? I must confess I didn't unde...   Oct 27 2008, 03:01 PM
The Bean   Ey'up Trey, just popping in to say I've re...   Oct 29 2008, 09:16 PM
Olen   I think I understand exactly whats happening and I...   Oct 31 2008, 12:13 AM
treydog   [b]Interlude Six [i]From the records of the Impe...   Oct 31 2008, 09:18 PM
minque   Okey now, that settles it! Someone just have t...   Oct 31 2008, 10:04 PM
treydog   [center]Chapter 6 In the years after the defeat o...   Nov 3 2008, 07:23 PM
seerauna   Yay new update! Poor Athlain. Carnius will pay...   Nov 4 2008, 12:01 AM
minque   Beautiful....you really have managed to let us cre...   Nov 4 2008, 12:05 AM
Olen   This is great, you portray Athlain's conflicti...   Nov 4 2008, 05:22 PM
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minque   Ahhh, most welcome! Now what Athlain? You sure...   Dec 4 2008, 09:43 PM
contureh   I can't seem to find chapter 3. Does anybody k...   Dec 11 2008, 02:49 AM
BSD-IES   Terrific, as usual. Is it my imagination though, o...   Dec 29 2008, 07:46 PM
canis216   Terrific, as usual. Is it my imagination though, ...   Dec 29 2008, 07:48 PM
minque   WHAT??? oh my my.......that was most unfortunate...   Dec 29 2008, 09:08 PM
treydog   Oops. I am a bad doggie. Did not mean to short-c...   Dec 30 2008, 09:35 PM
seerauna   Good doggie :lol:! Great update as usual. Funn...   Dec 31 2008, 04:50 AM
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