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treydog Blood on the Moon May 13 2007, 12:26 AM Captain Hammer
Yeah, Destri, that's going to work out great.... Aug 24 2011, 03:13 AM![]() minque
Athlain is now learning that he's about to l... Aug 27 2011, 09:41 AM![]() Black Hand Hmmm not quite...He CAN lock her out you know, and... Aug 27 2011, 01:12 PM Olen What he said.
I will add that I loved some of the... Aug 24 2011, 09:56 PM Athynae Really Mother, I thought you were on my side....ho... Aug 27 2011, 01:23 PM![]() minque
Really Mother, I thought you were on my side....h... Aug 27 2011, 02:24 PM treydog @D.Foxy- Thank you for that endorsement. The thin... Sep 11 2011, 02:31 PM haute ecole rider Not to mention all the mudcrabs that are bigger a... Sep 11 2011, 05:32 PM D.Foxy :blink:
Hell's FIRE, girl - that was FREAKING... Sep 11 2011, 06:04 PM Black Hand Wowsers, that was intense!
@Trey Perhaps I wo... Sep 12 2011, 01:22 PM Grits Don’t think, DO!!! Let your instinct g... Sep 12 2011, 04:51 PM Olen
This line made me smile, it also worked well as a... Sep 17 2011, 09:12 PM treydog Since the previous post was Athynae's work, I ... Sep 18 2011, 05:04 PM haute ecole rider What a delightful interlude!
First a lovely p... Sep 18 2011, 05:59 PM Black Hand That was like the perfect blend of Melodrama Bard ... Sep 18 2011, 06:06 PM Athynae GREAT!!! Trey is home. I have a feelin... Sep 18 2011, 08:04 PM Grits Lovely poem, and I guess I should stop teasing abo... Sep 20 2011, 12:13 AM Destri Melarg I am left speechless! It is hard to escape th... Sep 20 2011, 10:09 PM mALX Athynae, oh Athynae
How great the day
You came ou... Sep 25 2011, 05:55 AM D.Foxy AHEM....athenae mah girl...
two redhead twins wit... Sep 26 2011, 01:43 PM treydog @haute- Thank you so much. The poem was one of th... Oct 2 2011, 02:46 AM haute ecole rider And now the suspense builds even more.
So Athlain... Oct 2 2011, 05:24 PM Black Hand I'd imagine he'll bumble across her good-n... Oct 2 2011, 10:51 PM Grits Then all was silent once more, but I felt somethin... Oct 4 2011, 12:45 AM Thomas Kaira Caught up again.
Gulp! You have me at the edg... Oct 6 2011, 11:51 PM Olen Well things have certainly moved forward with that... Oct 7 2011, 11:08 PM minque Hi all!
Yes I'm still alive and kicking..... Oct 9 2011, 01:38 AM treydog @haute- There will be a few more turns of the susp... Oct 9 2011, 12:37 PM Thomas Kaira Emotions run deep and strong in this segment as At... Oct 9 2011, 02:46 PM minque OMG!!! OMG...this was amazing, you rea... Oct 9 2011, 05:36 PM Grits Athynae’s internal struggle was absolutely grippin... Oct 10 2011, 01:27 AM Black Hand LOL! Sorry, but I could totally see Seth sayin... Oct 10 2011, 09:34 AM treydog All responses are from Athynae, as is the post tha... Oct 14 2011, 02:27 AM D.Foxy And now, the denoument is in place
And for a post ... Oct 14 2011, 03:21 AM Thomas Kaira What's this? Even when one is in mortal peril,... Oct 14 2011, 03:27 AM Black Hand "Really, I can't help it, its just my nat... Oct 14 2011, 04:39 AM Grits “What is that supposed to mean? I wake up in the m... Oct 15 2011, 11:18 AM minque OMG!!! You've done it AGAIN! B... Oct 15 2011, 11:53 PM mALX Oh Athynae
Please don't bay
Or howl at the moo... Oct 18 2011, 07:44 PM treydog @Foxy- It never ceases to amaze me…..I love poetry... Oct 22 2011, 09:42 PM Black Hand Rest, child. We were never promised carefree exist... Oct 22 2011, 10:27 PM D.Foxy A small, confusing nit...if Athynae is immobilized... Oct 23 2011, 02:34 AM![]() Black Hand
A small, confusing nit...if Athynae is immobilize... Oct 23 2011, 02:36 AM mALX
@mALX- HEHE thanks for the ditty, and thanks for ... Oct 23 2011, 05:15 AM treydog
A small, confusing nit...if Athynae is immobilize... Oct 23 2011, 02:02 PM![]() mALX
A small, confusing nit...if Athynae is immobiliz... Oct 23 2011, 03:48 PM Grits I enjoyed Korst’s ritual to find Athynae. It would... Oct 25 2011, 03:42 PM Olen Excellent couple of parts - its always a pleasure ... Oct 27 2011, 11:32 PM treydog BH- I am afraid Athynae has taken her early experi... Nov 5 2011, 01:02 PM Black Hand Looks at Trey "Spoiled isn't the right te... Nov 5 2011, 01:15 PM haute ecole rider Ah, so now we're leaving Solstheim, are we? I ... Nov 5 2011, 01:57 PM McBadgere Wow... :blink: ...
Goosebumps...
Much impressed.... Nov 5 2011, 02:46 PM Grits Athlain’s inner struggle seems to be coming to a b... Nov 5 2011, 03:22 PM mALX You are at your absolute best when writing Korst a... Nov 5 2011, 07:30 PM minque *Looks from Trey to Sethyas*
"Yes it hurt me... Nov 13 2011, 10:48 PM Olen Wow. :blink: So rather powerful forces are movin... Nov 14 2011, 10:12 PM treydog Black Hand- You hit upon Serene’s- and Trey’s- dil... Nov 26 2011, 03:41 PM haute ecole rider Once again I am transported to the memories of old... Nov 26 2011, 04:19 PM Olen Now that really brought the Glenmoril Wyrd to life... Nov 26 2011, 06:22 PM McBadgere Wow... :huh: ...
Again... :D ...
My grasp of sup... Nov 26 2011, 07:51 PM mALX Oooh, great descriptions brought this scene to lif... Nov 27 2011, 02:11 AM Black Hand Darkness overpowering. Nov 27 2011, 02:41 AM minque Oh my.....As Hautie said...celtic myths and dark p... Nov 28 2011, 11:06 PM Grits The Rite is a complex piece of dark magicka, invol... Nov 30 2011, 12:02 AM treydog @haute- The atmosphere was important in this one- ... Dec 4 2011, 02:12 PM Olen Wooo update :) So Athynae isn't exactly offsc... Dec 4 2011, 06:01 PM mALX Athynae's inner dialogue throughout even the f... Dec 5 2011, 08:58 PM minque So she fights....like I kinda knew she would..amaz... Dec 6 2011, 12:15 AM Grits But the beloved voice of my mentor was lost in the... Dec 6 2011, 03:37 AM![]() minque
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The many facets of Athynae. :)
Yes...isn... Dec 7 2011, 02:22 AM McBadgere Love it mate... :D ...
Brilliant fight scene...
... Dec 7 2011, 04:53 AM treydog @Olen- You always manage to get at the heart of wh... Dec 30 2011, 04:12 PM mALX
First: Great line! The struggle to follow... Dec 30 2011, 05:47 PM Olen Woo update. :)
You did a good job of capturing hi... Dec 30 2011, 06:13 PM Grits The thing that stands out the most for me in this ... Dec 30 2011, 09:07 PM McBadgere Excellent chapter...Loved it...
I like the way h... Dec 31 2011, 05:00 AM minque YESSS! he can hear Athynae, he CAN read her mi... Dec 31 2011, 02:56 PM treydog @mALX- As ever, you find the lines that meant the ... Jan 8 2012, 02:22 PM Athynae To each of you THANK YOU so much for your continue... Jan 8 2012, 02:22 PM mALX It's like taking a step down into the depths o... Jan 8 2012, 03:07 PM D.Foxy Ohh! Ohhh! Oh-oh-oh! That piece of her... Jan 8 2012, 03:13 PM McBadgere If my typing goes awry, I apologise...I sliced my ... Jan 8 2012, 06:46 PM Olen Very nicely written. I like the slightly feverish... Jan 8 2012, 09:36 PM minque Ok...Ok...Ok...after reading this part the third t... Jan 10 2012, 11:05 PM Grits Riveting is the word, the whole way through. I lov... Jan 11 2012, 03:36 AM treydog Responses from Athynae:
@mALX- Thanks, even thoug... Jan 15 2012, 04:03 PM Olen That was good, but you know that already. Both th... Jan 15 2012, 05:53 PM Grits Athlain tracing Athynae’s script on the label went... Jan 15 2012, 06:43 PM Black Hand Now that was descriptive and an evocative display ... Jan 15 2012, 07:23 PM McBadgere So excellent!!...
Nice one... :D ...
Whe... Jan 15 2012, 07:30 PM minque Hehe..firs a quote from one of the previous commen... Jan 16 2012, 12:49 AM mALX GAAAAH !!! Those Glenmoril witches a... Jan 16 2012, 03:07 AM treydog @Olen- My thanks. I have come to trust your “ear”... Jan 18 2012, 02:41 AM McBadgere Oh my... :huh: ...Oh my freaking God that was inte... Jan 18 2012, 04:51 AM mALX Holy Cow! This has to be the most powerful wr... Jan 18 2012, 02:35 PM Grits A very moving and powerful segment. Hearing the ev... Jan 19 2012, 01:30 AM Black Hand A picture is worth a thousand words, so I'll l... Jan 19 2012, 06:40 AM Athynae [size=5]"FINE! [size=5]I won't, [size... Jan 19 2012, 12:53 PM minque Soooo you guys made me speechless....AGAIN! Wh... Jan 19 2012, 09:09 PM Olen Very powerful part. The opening had a strange tim... Jan 19 2012, 11:40 PM
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