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treydog
post May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
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Prologue


“But sir, if you would only give me a little more time, I am certain you would be interested in my proposition.”

“The answer is still ‘No’, Mr. Beauchamp. I have no desire to listen to anything you have to say. You may leave now.”

“If I gave offense by my earlier remarks, I apologize. It is simply that one sometimes hears things…. I know that financial remuneration is not important to you, but I thought that perhaps the spirit of adventure might be enough to entice you.”

“Mr. Beauchamp, I have everything I need right here. My family is here, my home is here, my life is here. I have no interest in the ‘spirit of adventure’. I have found that ‘adventure’ is simply another way of saying ‘a desperate attempt to survive the situation in which one has stupidly placed oneself’. You will leave now. That is not a request.”

I heard the front door open and close with a finality that punctuated those last words. Then another voice spoke up:

“Weren’t you perhaps a bit hard on him, dear?”

The response was a growl:

“You heard what he said as well as I did- ‘…your well-known talent for getting into and out of tight places….’ He called me a thief, is what he did.”

“Well, yes, but after all, you were a thief, you know. And he did come to you directly, not lurking behind some intermediary.”

“Perhaps I used to be a thief, but I hoped I had put all that behind me. And besides, he came to me arrogantly and rudely, just as if he were a bloody Imperial, instead of a fellow Breton."


“ ’A bloody Imperial?’ ” I could envision the raised eyebrow that accompanied that innocent question.

The voices moved away to another part of the house, and I could not make out the muttered words that I was sure were an apology. But that wasn’t important; I had already heard everything I needed to know. I had a name now and a goal. Louis Beauchamp- and Solstheim!

Leaving home is rarely easy, or at least so I have heard. But I felt as if I had to, as if I was slowly smothering. If I was going to do the things I wanted to do, I must get away. There were places I wanted to explore- places he had never been. How typical of him to disparage the idea of adventure- after he had lived the kind of life others only dreamed of! And then to just…stop. As if he could pretend that none of it had ever happened if he did not speak of it. But others spoke of it- oh yes. Louis Beauchamp certainly had that right- one did “hear things”. It was easy enough to tell others that the meat was no good when you had eaten your fill. But I had tasted nothing but the scraps of someone else’s greatness for my whole life and I could stand it no longer. I would leave that very night- but not for Solstheim, at least not yet. It would not do to arrive in that far place as a penniless beggar. Although we were comfortable, and never wanted for the necessities, money was not given to me in any quantity. And though I knew the location of the family treasury well enough, I would not steal. I would not be named a thief, no matter who my father was.

Once the house had quieted, I gathered a small pack of clothing, the few coins that were my own, and a well-worn quarterstaff. How I longed for a bright blade to hang at my side! How could a ready fellow such as I set off on a grand adventure without a trusty sword? But of course I had never been trained in the use of swords, and I recalled the answer when I asked:

“Violence is the result of a mistake. If you avoid mistakes, you can avoid fights. A good walking stick will serve you better. Anything that cannot be dealt with by a sharp rap on the snout is best avoided.”

As if I had never seen the scars that marked his body, never heard the stories that everyone knew by heart, never gazed at the virtual armory hidden throughout the house.
Most of the hidden weapons appeared to be no more than well-used examples of the crafter’s art…. But some of them seemed to… whisper among themselves and to move of their own volition. I know it sounds foolish, the overheated imagining of a child, but I swear it is true. He had never gotten those swords or those scars sitting in front of the fire, reading books. And yet, when he went to the corner club for a solitary drink, and the other men related their exploits, he said nothing. Instead, he simply sat in the shadows with a glass of wine. Even so, if ever a stranger came through and became too loud or boastful, someone would nod toward the quiet figure in the corner and whisper a few words. And then the braggart would fall silent, perhaps even turn a bit pale.

All of these thoughts and more tumbled through my head as I waited in the pre-dawn darkness for the silt-strider to arrive. Perhaps it was foolish to use such a public means of transport, but I wanted distance. And going to Balmora first would help throw off any pursuit. In any event, I doubted that there would be much concern, at least not for several days. When the strider driver saw me waiting, he grinned and said,

“Going on a trip are ye, young sir? I’ll have you in Balmora before you know it. Just sit back and relax.”

He waved away my offered fare with a jovial snort.

“Oh, no charge for you, young sir. Get yourself on up and we’ll be on our way.”

I took his generosity with bad grace, because I knew that it was not for my own sake that I did not have to pay my passage. I was nobody, nothing- just another who stood in the great man’s shadow. He was the hero of the age- everyone said so. Books and ballads had been written about him. And why not? After all, he was Trey of High Rock, Nerevar Reborn, savior of Vvardenfell. And I was his son.

This post has been edited by Burnt Sierra: Jan 4 2009, 07:10 PM


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treydog   Blood on the Moon   May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
treydog   Pictures! I figured out how to do pictures...   Aug 8 2010, 05:21 PM
SubRosa   Athlain with his back to the wall, beset by a scor...   Aug 8 2010, 05:33 PM
haute ecole rider   I echo everyone! Too bad this forum doesn...   Aug 8 2010, 05:42 PM
Black Hand   In Morrowind, SubRosa, there is no limit to the am...   Aug 8 2010, 06:46 PM
Olen   Woo updates :) And Athynae returns to the rescue ...   Aug 9 2010, 12:06 PM
treydog   @Acadian- Thank you, paladin. I chose to write th...   Aug 13 2010, 11:39 PM
haute ecole rider   Ah! The mystery of the note quite a few interl...   Aug 14 2010, 12:04 AM
Acadian   Trey, this is positively cruel! To cliffhang ...   Aug 14 2010, 12:12 AM
SubRosa   Athynae has not changed a bit I see! You reall...   Aug 14 2010, 12:51 AM
D.Foxy   Hey Athlain...stop being Hamlet, and just march of...   Aug 14 2010, 03:48 AM
Olen   Hmmm... Now if I recall Athynae's mother has c...   Aug 14 2010, 08:06 PM
minque   O_o....this was both expected and unexpected! ...   Aug 14 2010, 10:59 PM
treydog   @haute ecole rider- If I had it to do over again, ...   Aug 15 2010, 08:22 PM
SubRosa   Another good segment, and Athlain has a plan that ...   Aug 15 2010, 08:58 PM
haute ecole rider   Oh great. Now all sorts of things are going to go...   Aug 15 2010, 09:22 PM
Black Hand   ....from the mind of Sethyas: "Great, now the...   Aug 15 2010, 09:56 PM
minque   ....from the mind of Sethyas: "Great, now th...   Aug 15 2010, 11:02 PM
Olen   Oooh more parts to this, please do keep it up :). ...   Aug 15 2010, 10:43 PM
Acadian   Whew, I feel better now. At least Athlain has a p...   Aug 15 2010, 11:46 PM
D.Foxy   I scan a Man with a Plan in his hand on Norse Land...   Aug 16 2010, 01:44 AM
mALX   Not caught up yet, but getting there!!...   Aug 17 2010, 12:33 AM
treydog   Since I have several installments written for a ch...   Aug 20 2010, 02:22 AM
SubRosa   A good meal and good company. Perhaps not Athynae...   Aug 20 2010, 02:38 AM
haute ecole rider   QFT! This, and the line Sage Rose quoted, mad...   Aug 20 2010, 04:03 AM
Black Hand   It really is the little touches like ideas for mea...   Aug 20 2010, 04:42 AM
Olen   More dry wit and humour bring this to life, and he...   Aug 20 2010, 10:43 AM
Acadian   What indeed? Thanks for bringing me out of the c...   Aug 20 2010, 12:55 PM
mALX   Chapter 12: Reading the Captain's journal m...   Aug 20 2010, 07:10 PM
treydog   @SubRosa- Those were fun scenes to write- I wanted...   Aug 21 2010, 01:15 PM
D.Foxy   Oh, delightful, Trey!! I think that you a...   Aug 21 2010, 01:29 PM
mALX   Oh, you really hit on something there with: The p...   Aug 21 2010, 01:36 PM
D.Foxy   What about Captain, abstain, chaplain, mad bane???...   Aug 21 2010, 03:56 PM
haute ecole rider   Oh Athlain misses Athynae - FINE! Athlain find...   Aug 21 2010, 04:46 PM
mALX   Oh Athlain misses Athynae - FINE! Athlain fin...   Aug 21 2010, 05:30 PM
D.Foxy   But Athlain is a land where he is SURROUNDED by Gr...   Aug 21 2010, 05:38 PM
mALX   But Athlain is a land where he is SURROUNDED by G...   Aug 21 2010, 05:45 PM
Acadian   Wonderful, treydog. I enjoyed what you did with...   Aug 21 2010, 06:01 PM
Black Hand   Hehehe. Nice reminders that in spite of the events...   Aug 21 2010, 06:30 PM
SubRosa   Ahh, back to the mead hall. I loved the song about...   Aug 23 2010, 01:08 AM
Olen   Grand as ever, and now with singing. It went to s...   Aug 23 2010, 10:06 PM
hazmick   Drama, action, passion, nords, imperials, skooma, ...   Aug 24 2010, 04:50 PM
treydog   @D. Foxy- No fear of that; fortunately we have a b...   Aug 26 2010, 09:54 PM
mALX   Athlain is growing up. The hard things he has bee...   Aug 26 2010, 10:16 PM
SubRosa   Truth be told, prepositions had given me trouble i...   Aug 26 2010, 10:22 PM
hazmick   Poor Athlain, Grammar is a fickle mistress who wil...   Aug 26 2010, 10:25 PM
haute ecole rider   This is a great pause in the events of the story, ...   Aug 27 2010, 12:43 AM
D.Foxy   Our hero is also suffering from the separation wit...   Aug 27 2010, 02:35 AM
Acadian   I have mentioned enjoying the accent you bring to ...   Aug 27 2010, 03:31 AM
Black Hand   Honestly..... http://www.users.globalnet.co.uk/~p...   Aug 27 2010, 05:22 AM
Olen   A good bit of background snuck in there, as well a...   Aug 27 2010, 12:06 PM
treydog   @mALX- Yes, he is a wiser man than he was when he ...   Aug 28 2010, 02:11 PM
D.Foxy   And I thought ROSA was clever at scheming... ......   Aug 28 2010, 02:33 PM
Acadian   Ah, an ode to Nordic mead. Like the morning after...   Aug 28 2010, 03:46 PM
mALX   Athlain, you surprise me once again For now you ar...   Aug 28 2010, 04:09 PM
hazmick   what is a story if not the set up for a great clif...   Aug 28 2010, 04:31 PM
Black Hand   Brynjolfr sounds JUST like my EMT teacher, she eve...   Aug 28 2010, 05:16 PM
haute ecole rider   Agreed. Getting between a sow and her feed troug...   Aug 28 2010, 05:22 PM
hazmick   "Getting between a sow and her feed trough is...   Aug 28 2010, 06:07 PM
haute ecole rider   Ah, but a freight locomotive doesn't need to b...   Aug 28 2010, 06:29 PM
mALX   Ah, but a freight locomotive doesn't need to ...   Aug 28 2010, 06:38 PM
Olen   I loved this part, the kwama egg was inspired, far...   Aug 28 2010, 07:52 PM
SubRosa   Such cunning culinary tactics on the part of Athla...   Aug 28 2010, 09:51 PM
D.Foxy   btw, on the subject of pigs, here in Michigan ther...   Aug 29 2010, 02:37 AM
Black Hand   Shades of that Hannibal Lecter Sequel Story!...   Aug 29 2010, 04:44 PM
mALX   Shades of that Hannibal Lecter Sequel Story!...   Aug 29 2010, 04:54 PM
D.Foxy   Yes, I have seen - DANG!!! My Red R...   Aug 29 2010, 05:06 PM
mALX   Yes, I have seen - DANG!!! My Red ...   Aug 29 2010, 05:26 PM
D.Foxy   Oh, and... -Viewer Warning not intended for Child...   Aug 29 2010, 05:29 PM
treydog   @D.Foxy- Thank you. That is high praise indeed. ...   Sep 1 2010, 09:31 PM
Olen   Wooo more Athlain :) A good part, showing him beg...   Sep 1 2010, 09:59 PM
SubRosa   So is night eye green in Morrowind? I never played...   Sep 1 2010, 10:03 PM
Acadian   I was wondering how Athlain was going to deal with...   Sep 1 2010, 10:14 PM
Black Hand   Trey may not be in the story but he's still th...   Sep 1 2010, 10:19 PM
hazmick   another enjoyably enjoyable chapter. :D I recent...   Sep 1 2010, 10:36 PM
mALX   This must explain why Maxical failed alchemy...   Sep 1 2010, 11:22 PM
D.Foxy   Damn! Bestest Friend Acadian beat me to the ...   Sep 2 2010, 02:33 AM
Remko   I have a feeling flower is a metaphore in this se...   Sep 2 2010, 11:25 AM
treydog   @Olen- At times, I think I have gone too far in ma...   Sep 5 2010, 02:05 AM
hazmick   The first sentence was beautiful, it's hard to...   Sep 5 2010, 02:44 AM
Acadian   As ever, such beautiful writing and a joy to read,...   Sep 5 2010, 03:18 AM
mALX   Wait, was that a thu’um when he gave his battlecry...   Sep 5 2010, 03:29 AM
D.Foxy   Many writers can describe the fury of combat, but ...   Sep 5 2010, 03:32 AM
minque   Treydoggie, my oldest writing-friend, at last I go...   Sep 5 2010, 06:30 PM
Olen   Now back to the Skaal, certainly the test of loyal...   Sep 5 2010, 06:55 PM
treydog   @hazmick- Thank you- every now and again I like to...   Sep 5 2010, 10:06 PM
hazmick   Julian of Anvil, Pilus Prior, Legio VI, Skyrim ...   Sep 5 2010, 10:21 PM
mALX   [quote name='treydog' post='118249' date='Sep 5 2...   Sep 5 2010, 10:27 PM
Acadian   trey, how can you drop so many questions and intri...   Sep 5 2010, 11:32 PM
haute ecole rider   And how! :P I've been remiss in commenti...   Sep 5 2010, 11:38 PM
SubRosa   Oh noes! I was so busy blasting super-mutants ...   Sep 6 2010, 12:00 AM
minque   AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! So Thyna ...   Sep 6 2010, 01:45 AM
Remko   Loved the Julian of Anvil cameo :) The rest was ...   Sep 6 2010, 10:36 AM
Olen   Well you managed a fairly high revelation density ...   Sep 6 2010, 02:17 PM
mALX   It will be a great day When Athynae Meets Julian o...   Sep 6 2010, 03:52 PM
treydog   Everyone- I considered delaying this a bit longer,...   Sep 6 2010, 08:07 PM
hazmick   Yes, yes and a thousand times yes! I found Ath...   Sep 6 2010, 08:23 PM
mALX   ...Maybe that is how Julian's knee got inju...   Sep 6 2010, 08:29 PM
Acadian   This was great fun. I care not a whit for makin...   Sep 7 2010, 02:47 AM
Black Hand   Wow! Thats one heck of a character cameo/inclu...   Sep 7 2010, 04:07 AM
Remko   That is one serious hearing. Love how you have con...   Sep 7 2010, 11:17 AM
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