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post May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
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“But sir, if you would only give me a little more time, I am certain you would be interested in my proposition.”

“The answer is still ‘No’, Mr. Beauchamp. I have no desire to listen to anything you have to say. You may leave now.”

“If I gave offense by my earlier remarks, I apologize. It is simply that one sometimes hears things…. I know that financial remuneration is not important to you, but I thought that perhaps the spirit of adventure might be enough to entice you.”

“Mr. Beauchamp, I have everything I need right here. My family is here, my home is here, my life is here. I have no interest in the ‘spirit of adventure’. I have found that ‘adventure’ is simply another way of saying ‘a desperate attempt to survive the situation in which one has stupidly placed oneself’. You will leave now. That is not a request.”

I heard the front door open and close with a finality that punctuated those last words. Then another voice spoke up:

“Weren’t you perhaps a bit hard on him, dear?”

The response was a growl:

“You heard what he said as well as I did- ‘…your well-known talent for getting into and out of tight places….’ He called me a thief, is what he did.”

“Well, yes, but after all, you were a thief, you know. And he did come to you directly, not lurking behind some intermediary.”

“Perhaps I used to be a thief, but I hoped I had put all that behind me. And besides, he came to me arrogantly and rudely, just as if he were a bloody Imperial, instead of a fellow Breton."


“ ’A bloody Imperial?’ ” I could envision the raised eyebrow that accompanied that innocent question.

The voices moved away to another part of the house, and I could not make out the muttered words that I was sure were an apology. But that wasn’t important; I had already heard everything I needed to know. I had a name now and a goal. Louis Beauchamp- and Solstheim!

Leaving home is rarely easy, or at least so I have heard. But I felt as if I had to, as if I was slowly smothering. If I was going to do the things I wanted to do, I must get away. There were places I wanted to explore- places he had never been. How typical of him to disparage the idea of adventure- after he had lived the kind of life others only dreamed of! And then to just…stop. As if he could pretend that none of it had ever happened if he did not speak of it. But others spoke of it- oh yes. Louis Beauchamp certainly had that right- one did “hear things”. It was easy enough to tell others that the meat was no good when you had eaten your fill. But I had tasted nothing but the scraps of someone else’s greatness for my whole life and I could stand it no longer. I would leave that very night- but not for Solstheim, at least not yet. It would not do to arrive in that far place as a penniless beggar. Although we were comfortable, and never wanted for the necessities, money was not given to me in any quantity. And though I knew the location of the family treasury well enough, I would not steal. I would not be named a thief, no matter who my father was.

Once the house had quieted, I gathered a small pack of clothing, the few coins that were my own, and a well-worn quarterstaff. How I longed for a bright blade to hang at my side! How could a ready fellow such as I set off on a grand adventure without a trusty sword? But of course I had never been trained in the use of swords, and I recalled the answer when I asked:

“Violence is the result of a mistake. If you avoid mistakes, you can avoid fights. A good walking stick will serve you better. Anything that cannot be dealt with by a sharp rap on the snout is best avoided.”

As if I had never seen the scars that marked his body, never heard the stories that everyone knew by heart, never gazed at the virtual armory hidden throughout the house.
Most of the hidden weapons appeared to be no more than well-used examples of the crafter’s art…. But some of them seemed to… whisper among themselves and to move of their own volition. I know it sounds foolish, the overheated imagining of a child, but I swear it is true. He had never gotten those swords or those scars sitting in front of the fire, reading books. And yet, when he went to the corner club for a solitary drink, and the other men related their exploits, he said nothing. Instead, he simply sat in the shadows with a glass of wine. Even so, if ever a stranger came through and became too loud or boastful, someone would nod toward the quiet figure in the corner and whisper a few words. And then the braggart would fall silent, perhaps even turn a bit pale.

All of these thoughts and more tumbled through my head as I waited in the pre-dawn darkness for the silt-strider to arrive. Perhaps it was foolish to use such a public means of transport, but I wanted distance. And going to Balmora first would help throw off any pursuit. In any event, I doubted that there would be much concern, at least not for several days. When the strider driver saw me waiting, he grinned and said,

“Going on a trip are ye, young sir? I’ll have you in Balmora before you know it. Just sit back and relax.”

He waved away my offered fare with a jovial snort.

“Oh, no charge for you, young sir. Get yourself on up and we’ll be on our way.”

I took his generosity with bad grace, because I knew that it was not for my own sake that I did not have to pay my passage. I was nobody, nothing- just another who stood in the great man’s shadow. He was the hero of the age- everyone said so. Books and ballads had been written about him. And why not? After all, he was Trey of High Rock, Nerevar Reborn, savior of Vvardenfell. And I was his son.

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treydog   Blood on the Moon   May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
Olen   I echo Acadian's comments. That the time...   Sep 7 2010, 11:51 AM
SubRosa   Yaay more Julian! Skipping ahead to Fort Frost...   Sep 7 2010, 05:07 PM
haute ecole rider   I've waited to comment because I don't wan...   Sep 8 2010, 05:39 PM
treydog   @hazmick- Thank you. I think you caught a signifi...   Sep 9 2010, 05:01 PM
mALX   WOO HOO !!!! While the cats away,...   Sep 9 2010, 05:24 PM
D.Foxy   I heard he came while her husband was out !...   Sep 9 2010, 05:29 PM
mALX   [quote name='mALX' post='118444' date='Sep 9 2010...   Sep 9 2010, 05:34 PM
haute ecole rider   Do I detect a certain - ahm - affair that would be...   Sep 9 2010, 05:24 PM
hazmick   this must be CSI:Solstheim! awesome! A gre...   Sep 9 2010, 05:34 PM
Acadian   This is an occasion where I am delighted to claim ...   Sep 9 2010, 07:21 PM
Black Hand   I always liked this quest, no 'Go here and kil...   Sep 9 2010, 07:55 PM
Remko   Loved the part Acadian quoted too :D I can't...   Sep 10 2010, 09:55 AM
SubRosa   It looks to me like perhaps Rigmor and Risi were k...   Sep 10 2010, 06:08 PM
treydog   Everyone- This episode sees the return of LCIS: Sk...   Sep 11 2010, 03:03 AM
Acadian   Wonderful, as always! So Athlain capably handl...   Sep 11 2010, 03:43 AM
SubRosa   So Athlain not only has to be investigator, but al...   Sep 11 2010, 06:15 PM
mALX   This was a very powerful chapter before Julian of ...   Sep 12 2010, 04:45 AM
D.Foxy   This was a very powerful chapter before Julian of ...   Sep 12 2010, 04:53 AM
mALX   This was a very powerful chapter before Julian of...   Sep 12 2010, 05:03 AM
Destri Melarg   The only advantage I can see in coming back to thi...   Sep 14 2010, 10:22 AM
D.Foxy   And, of course, Julian’s cameo . . . it is not sur...   Sep 14 2010, 02:43 PM
Destri Melarg   There can be NO DOUBT about it anymore - IT...   Sep 14 2010, 07:20 PM
hazmick   Julian nearly frightened the life out of me at the...   Sep 14 2010, 09:31 PM
minque   Sorry sorry for not commenting for a while! he...   Sep 14 2010, 10:17 PM
mALX   One thing though....as being a truly native Nord...   Sep 15 2010, 03:47 AM
Remko   "Don't leave the fort..." *gulp* ...   Sep 15 2010, 09:46 AM
treydog   All- Based on minque’s note about “Nordic” names, ...   Sep 16 2010, 09:36 PM
hazmick   I really liked this chapter. I could feel the weig...   Sep 16 2010, 09:52 PM
Acadian   Wow. Powerful, indeed. Three comments on this wo...   Sep 16 2010, 11:17 PM
mALX   This is probably the most powerful chapter so far....   Sep 16 2010, 11:34 PM
Destri Melarg   As someone who had ‘lived’ (if one could call it t...   Sep 17 2010, 12:07 AM
SubRosa   It appears Julian has a Dwemer-journal, who else w...   Sep 17 2010, 01:55 AM
D.Foxy   Dang! Sub Rosa, I was just about to quote that...   Sep 17 2010, 02:14 AM
Remko   I loved the question you raised: Isn't life al...   Sep 17 2010, 11:19 AM
treydog   @hazmick- My thanks- and there is a bit of busines...   Sep 18 2010, 01:44 PM
minque   Whohooo! Me like! I remember doing that qu...   Sep 18 2010, 03:16 PM
Acadian   This was a wonderful self-contained story! I ...   Sep 18 2010, 03:33 PM
mALX   ARGH !!! I love it !!! T...   Sep 18 2010, 04:27 PM
D.Foxy   Oh my! Treydog earns his own 'no beverages...   Sep 18 2010, 04:49 PM
hazmick   oooh! that was brilliant! Athlain handled ...   Sep 18 2010, 05:04 PM
SubRosa   Basks is going to Raven Rock? He's with the En...   Sep 18 2010, 09:04 PM
Black Hand   Sorry for not commenting and feeding the Ego dear ...   Sep 18 2010, 10:39 PM
Destri Melarg   I won't start quoting the passages in this cha...   Sep 18 2010, 11:08 PM
haute ecole rider   Ditto to all the above! :D Everyone has quote...   Sep 19 2010, 02:15 AM
treydog   @minque- Captain Egnatius is fun, because you real...   Oct 2 2010, 04:44 AM
Cardboard Box   “For example, it is said that the brave Captain Eg...   Oct 2 2010, 08:53 AM
Destri Melarg   Julian’s presence is anything but silent. The que...   Oct 2 2010, 10:30 AM
Acadian   Ahh. . . more doggie snacks to savor! I agree...   Oct 2 2010, 03:45 PM
mALX   This chapter gives the feel that we are glimpsing ...   Oct 2 2010, 04:06 PM
hazmick   I can now count myself among the lucky people who ...   Oct 2 2010, 05:58 PM
SubRosa   Athlain is back to work for the East India Empire ...   Oct 2 2010, 08:17 PM
Black Hand   The sea captain soooo reminds me of an old joke. ...   Oct 2 2010, 11:30 PM
mALX   The sea captain soooo reminds me of an old joke. ...   Oct 6 2010, 06:32 AM
D.Foxy   And soon Athlain will be getting an Argonian nickn...   Oct 5 2010, 02:24 AM
haute ecole rider   Don't worry, I'm keeping an eye on Julian ...   Oct 5 2010, 07:53 PM
treydog   @Cardboard Box- Considering that you inspired the ...   Oct 8 2010, 02:07 AM
SubRosa   I love your description of the tunnel, and those d...   Oct 8 2010, 02:24 AM
Acadian   Another wonderful reference to Athlain's grow...   Oct 8 2010, 03:18 AM
mALX   I agree with Acadian on that descriptive paragraph...   Oct 8 2010, 04:45 AM
Destri Melarg   Athlain’s unwavering sense of duty won’t allow him...   Oct 8 2010, 09:32 AM
treydog   @SubRosa- I have spent a fair amount of time under...   Oct 9 2010, 01:43 PM
D.Foxy   'Then, out of consideration for the fact that ...   Oct 9 2010, 03:03 PM
haute ecole rider   I'm with Fox here - that line about twining a ...   Oct 9 2010, 03:28 PM
Acadian   Wonderful, treydog! I loved your cleverness...   Oct 9 2010, 03:53 PM
mALX   To me, more romantic than the sprig of holly (alth...   Oct 9 2010, 04:07 PM
SubRosa   As the others said, the holly on Elberoth's sw...   Oct 9 2010, 09:18 PM
Destri Melarg   I agree with mALX. The holly was the crowning tou...   Oct 10 2010, 09:43 PM
Black Hand   Very touching in all aspects of these latest insta...   Oct 10 2010, 10:56 PM
D.Foxy   Dear Black Hand....try combining a six foot nord w...   Oct 11 2010, 01:03 AM
Black Hand   Dear Black Hand....try combining a six foot nord ...   Oct 11 2010, 11:30 PM
treydog   @D.Foxy- The holly was one of those “happy acciden...   Oct 13 2010, 10:28 PM
haute ecole rider   Oooh, a Stephen King mystery! So where is Odd...   Oct 13 2010, 10:35 PM
mALX   A cliffhanger !!! Oh, something tells...   Oct 13 2010, 11:51 PM
Acadian   Wonderful, treydog! As mALX noted, you have ...   Oct 14 2010, 01:34 AM
D.Foxy   Without spoiling anything...let's just say tha...   Oct 14 2010, 02:37 AM
SubRosa   I liked how you portrayed Geilir. His every action...   Oct 14 2010, 03:21 AM
Destri Melarg   Typical Elder Scrolls, to gain a favor you must do...   Oct 14 2010, 09:46 AM
SubRosa   Funny that he didn’t foresee Oddfrid’s kidnapping...   Oct 14 2010, 11:34 PM
Black Hand   Oddfrid is neither he nor she, yet has a full set ...   Oct 14 2010, 10:38 PM
mALX   Oddfrid is neither he nor she, yet has a full set...   Oct 14 2010, 10:48 PM
Black Hand   "...without the hero, there is no prophecy......   Oct 15 2010, 03:40 AM
treydog   @haute- Thank you for the wonderful endorsement. ...   Oct 16 2010, 04:05 AM
mALX   ARGH! Hircine...and Oblivion forcast? ARGH ...   Oct 16 2010, 06:33 AM
Burnt Sierra   ARGH! Hircine...and Oblivion forcast? ARGH ...   Oct 16 2010, 09:19 AM
D.Foxy   DITTO! DITTO! DITTO!!!!   Oct 16 2010, 06:56 AM
Destri Melarg   Well, at least Geilir didn’t name the skull ‘Wilso...   Oct 16 2010, 10:19 AM
Acadian   Me four! Fascinating! There is so much t...   Oct 16 2010, 11:33 PM
SubRosa   It is a neat twist that Oddfrid is the seer, rathe...   Oct 17 2010, 12:55 AM
Black Hand   Only one word can suffice this. Wow. The imagery ...   Oct 17 2010, 11:32 PM
treydog   Let's see if I can add some pictures to entert...   Oct 22 2010, 01:44 PM
treydog   The desk where Julian interviews Athlain: http://...   Oct 22 2010, 01:50 PM
mALX   I love the screenies! The Fort really looks l...   Oct 22 2010, 02:08 PM
haute ecole rider   Julian would never interview (interrogate?) a fell...   Oct 22 2010, 03:33 PM
SubRosa   Wow, those werewolves have really good siege engin...   Oct 22 2010, 04:44 PM
mALX   The interrogation room looks very inviting. Comfo...   Oct 22 2010, 04:48 PM
treydog   @mALX and D. Foxy- More is on the way. Glad this ...   Oct 22 2010, 07:08 PM
SubRosa   They were most likely correct in every particular,...   Oct 22 2010, 09:09 PM
Black Hand   Nope. Silver Spikes. Wolfys going down. Also. WOOO...   Oct 22 2010, 10:49 PM
SubRosa   I remember Werewolf! Wasn't Lance LeGault ...   Oct 23 2010, 03:44 AM
Doommeister   Treydog maaaaaaate This story is riveting. I love...   Oct 23 2010, 08:37 AM
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