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post May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
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“But sir, if you would only give me a little more time, I am certain you would be interested in my proposition.”

“The answer is still ‘No’, Mr. Beauchamp. I have no desire to listen to anything you have to say. You may leave now.”

“If I gave offense by my earlier remarks, I apologize. It is simply that one sometimes hears things…. I know that financial remuneration is not important to you, but I thought that perhaps the spirit of adventure might be enough to entice you.”

“Mr. Beauchamp, I have everything I need right here. My family is here, my home is here, my life is here. I have no interest in the ‘spirit of adventure’. I have found that ‘adventure’ is simply another way of saying ‘a desperate attempt to survive the situation in which one has stupidly placed oneself’. You will leave now. That is not a request.”

I heard the front door open and close with a finality that punctuated those last words. Then another voice spoke up:

“Weren’t you perhaps a bit hard on him, dear?”

The response was a growl:

“You heard what he said as well as I did- ‘…your well-known talent for getting into and out of tight places….’ He called me a thief, is what he did.”

“Well, yes, but after all, you were a thief, you know. And he did come to you directly, not lurking behind some intermediary.”

“Perhaps I used to be a thief, but I hoped I had put all that behind me. And besides, he came to me arrogantly and rudely, just as if he were a bloody Imperial, instead of a fellow Breton."


“ ’A bloody Imperial?’ ” I could envision the raised eyebrow that accompanied that innocent question.

The voices moved away to another part of the house, and I could not make out the muttered words that I was sure were an apology. But that wasn’t important; I had already heard everything I needed to know. I had a name now and a goal. Louis Beauchamp- and Solstheim!

Leaving home is rarely easy, or at least so I have heard. But I felt as if I had to, as if I was slowly smothering. If I was going to do the things I wanted to do, I must get away. There were places I wanted to explore- places he had never been. How typical of him to disparage the idea of adventure- after he had lived the kind of life others only dreamed of! And then to just…stop. As if he could pretend that none of it had ever happened if he did not speak of it. But others spoke of it- oh yes. Louis Beauchamp certainly had that right- one did “hear things”. It was easy enough to tell others that the meat was no good when you had eaten your fill. But I had tasted nothing but the scraps of someone else’s greatness for my whole life and I could stand it no longer. I would leave that very night- but not for Solstheim, at least not yet. It would not do to arrive in that far place as a penniless beggar. Although we were comfortable, and never wanted for the necessities, money was not given to me in any quantity. And though I knew the location of the family treasury well enough, I would not steal. I would not be named a thief, no matter who my father was.

Once the house had quieted, I gathered a small pack of clothing, the few coins that were my own, and a well-worn quarterstaff. How I longed for a bright blade to hang at my side! How could a ready fellow such as I set off on a grand adventure without a trusty sword? But of course I had never been trained in the use of swords, and I recalled the answer when I asked:

“Violence is the result of a mistake. If you avoid mistakes, you can avoid fights. A good walking stick will serve you better. Anything that cannot be dealt with by a sharp rap on the snout is best avoided.”

As if I had never seen the scars that marked his body, never heard the stories that everyone knew by heart, never gazed at the virtual armory hidden throughout the house.
Most of the hidden weapons appeared to be no more than well-used examples of the crafter’s art…. But some of them seemed to… whisper among themselves and to move of their own volition. I know it sounds foolish, the overheated imagining of a child, but I swear it is true. He had never gotten those swords or those scars sitting in front of the fire, reading books. And yet, when he went to the corner club for a solitary drink, and the other men related their exploits, he said nothing. Instead, he simply sat in the shadows with a glass of wine. Even so, if ever a stranger came through and became too loud or boastful, someone would nod toward the quiet figure in the corner and whisper a few words. And then the braggart would fall silent, perhaps even turn a bit pale.

All of these thoughts and more tumbled through my head as I waited in the pre-dawn darkness for the silt-strider to arrive. Perhaps it was foolish to use such a public means of transport, but I wanted distance. And going to Balmora first would help throw off any pursuit. In any event, I doubted that there would be much concern, at least not for several days. When the strider driver saw me waiting, he grinned and said,

“Going on a trip are ye, young sir? I’ll have you in Balmora before you know it. Just sit back and relax.”

He waved away my offered fare with a jovial snort.

“Oh, no charge for you, young sir. Get yourself on up and we’ll be on our way.”

I took his generosity with bad grace, because I knew that it was not for my own sake that I did not have to pay my passage. I was nobody, nothing- just another who stood in the great man’s shadow. He was the hero of the age- everyone said so. Books and ballads had been written about him. And why not? After all, he was Trey of High Rock, Nerevar Reborn, savior of Vvardenfell. And I was his son.

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treydog   Blood on the Moon   May 13 2007, 12:26 AM
Olen   Oooh nicely done. Putting that complicating and r...   Jun 25 2011, 02:20 PM
Grits   It sounds like more than strength will be tested h...   Jun 26 2011, 05:57 PM
mALX   I would have sworn it was the Bloodmoon Prophecy ...   Jun 26 2011, 10:05 PM
minque   This...calls for immediate action, right! OK s...   Jun 26 2011, 11:01 PM
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SubRosa   As Olen said, a very clever tying of two events to...   Jun 27 2011, 07:49 PM
minque   Athynae! As I said it calls for immediate acti...   Jun 27 2011, 11:21 PM
Athynae   You are there Mother, as you have always been. I a...   Jun 28 2011, 12:11 AM
Black Hand   "I don't miss anybody being in my head......   Jun 28 2011, 02:33 AM
Athynae   Well it is sometimes a little annoying, but Uncle ...   Jun 28 2011, 11:19 AM
minque   Sethyas! Athynae! There is no time arguing...   Jun 29 2011, 09:41 PM
Athynae   Yes we do Mother. But I don't know what to do....   Jun 30 2011, 01:58 AM
treydog   @haute- The Bloodmoon Udyrfrykte is somewhat less ...   Jul 3 2011, 09:53 PM
haute ecole rider   Go Athynae, go! The gathering of the personal...   Jul 3 2011, 10:03 PM
Black Hand   "Udyrfrykte" is simply two Norwegian wor...   Jul 3 2011, 10:36 PM
minque   You're like my one remaining fan, you should...   Jul 4 2011, 09:14 PM
Olen   Firstly: The occasional humour in this piece is s...   Jul 3 2011, 10:37 PM
Athynae   UM Yes!!! If I could count on Athlain ...   Jul 3 2011, 11:02 PM
mALX   Powerful paragraph! WOO HOO !!...   Jul 4 2011, 02:04 AM
Athynae   Yes Mother I have the journal and I will take it w...   Jul 4 2011, 10:04 PM
Grits   Making a medicine bag of tokens from the Skaal hun...   Jul 5 2011, 02:49 AM
Khajiit_Thief01   These last few portions have been an absolute joy ...   Jul 6 2011, 01:28 AM
treydog   @haute- There will be a bit of Athynae in this one...   Jul 9 2011, 01:37 AM
Khajiit_Thief01   Well done, as always, Treydog! This part below...   Jul 10 2011, 11:22 PM
Black Hand   Well done, sir! Well done. I liked the descrip...   Jul 9 2011, 02:32 AM
Athynae   Deep sigh, he's safe for the moment, I'm ...   Jul 9 2011, 03:14 AM
haute ecole rider   And here I am thinking of the song of Beowulf...   Jul 9 2011, 04:18 AM
Athynae   As well they should!!!! neither of...   Jul 9 2011, 04:28 AM
Olen   I had wondered which he would persue first. This...   Jul 9 2011, 09:43 AM
treydog   Author's Note: As my long-suffering readers k...   Jul 9 2011, 09:13 PM
Black Hand   : 0 Im actually speechless!   Jul 9 2011, 10:55 PM
haute ecole rider   What a wonderful peek inside the head of a delight...   Jul 10 2011, 12:48 AM
mALX   * GAAAAH! I just made the connection ... Sve...   Jul 10 2011, 05:40 AM
Athynae   Thanks guys!!! You have no idea how mu...   Jul 10 2011, 05:47 AM
Olen   I must say that worked extremely well. The change...   Jul 10 2011, 09:58 AM
Acadian   A powerfully poignant telling of Svenja's plig...   Jul 11 2011, 02:01 AM
minque   OK so I'm speechless...and that's very unc...   Jul 12 2011, 12:38 AM
Athynae   I am so glad you are home safe and sound!...   Jul 12 2011, 04:54 AM
minque   I am so glad you are home safe and sound!...   Jul 12 2011, 08:16 AM
Athynae   I know Mother, it is never far from my thoughts or...   Jul 12 2011, 01:21 PM
Grits   LOL baldness. It was so real that I turned, expec...   Jul 12 2011, 06:48 PM
Thomas Kaira   Athynae... more story... NOW. That's all I ca...   Jul 13 2011, 02:19 AM
Athynae   TK-Thank you, again, ditto to all I replied to you...   Jul 13 2011, 08:30 PM
minque   I just wanna say that never in my wildest imaginat...   Jul 13 2011, 09:45 PM
Athynae   And I KNOW that I can speak for Trey on this...WE ...   Jul 13 2011, 11:24 PM
SubRosa   As others have remarked, Athlain taking a token of...   Jul 14 2011, 05:20 PM
treydog   First, I want to thank everyone for the warm welco...   Jul 16 2011, 02:06 AM
Black Hand   Hmmm. Seems like being a morning person is not t...   Jul 16 2011, 03:26 AM
mALX   *snip* WOO HOO! Nice new Avatar Blackie ...   Jul 16 2011, 03:52 PM
Olen   I've said it before and I'm sure I'll...   Jul 16 2011, 04:18 PM
minque   Yess yess yess! Lovely just sheer joy to read ...   Jul 16 2011, 08:27 PM
Athynae   Nah, not a chance she'd let something like tha...   Jul 16 2011, 09:10 PM
treydog   OK- post-machine time. Thanks to the wonderful At...   Jul 16 2011, 09:20 PM
Black Hand   Indeed.   Jul 17 2011, 03:10 AM
mALX   SPEW !!! Love this line !! ...   Jul 17 2011, 01:49 PM
minque   Uhhhh, Thyna for Nirn's sake! Be brave but...   Jul 17 2011, 11:11 PM
treydog   @Black Hand- Athlain is most certainly not a “morn...   Jul 23 2011, 04:58 PM
Athynae   Of course telling you to wait wouldn't help, w...   Jul 23 2011, 05:29 PM
Olen   Now there's a cliff hanger... so as not to spo...   Jul 23 2011, 07:15 PM
haute ecole rider   After living five years in Minnesota while attendi...   Jul 23 2011, 09:25 PM
Black Hand   With fond familiarity, I raised the flap on the sa...   Jul 24 2011, 01:02 AM
D.Foxy   AT LAST I'M BACK!!! Trey - you an...   Jul 24 2011, 06:03 PM
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Grits   I absolutely loved this whole section. An idea be...   Jul 25 2011, 04:16 PM
SubRosa   Hmm, This is what happened the last time I was ent...   Jul 25 2011, 05:43 PM
Athynae   SubRosa I am glad you enjoyed Thyna's thoughts...   Jul 26 2011, 12:16 AM
mALX   Lol, that sums it all up in one concise sentence...   Jul 29 2011, 05:16 PM
treydog   @Olen- Yes, I could not help myself. And we will ...   Jul 30 2011, 02:24 PM
haute ecole rider   Well, another great post from 'Thyna! I ha...   Jul 30 2011, 05:39 PM
mALX   This is universal, and readily understood by man...   Jul 31 2011, 01:06 AM
Grits   The interview was great fun. I love Athynae’s red ...   Aug 1 2011, 04:31 PM
SubRosa   More Athynae! I loved the recollection of her ...   Aug 1 2011, 07:37 PM
Olen   It's all been said really. Athynae's part...   Aug 1 2011, 10:08 PM
treydog   @haute- Thank you so much for your words- they mea...   Aug 6 2011, 02:26 AM
haute ecole rider   And the mystery of the fire on the lake thickens...   Aug 6 2011, 03:12 AM
Captain Hammer   Okay, it's officially been far, far too long s...   Aug 6 2011, 03:36 AM
Olen   Yay more BotM. Good part, you caught Aeslip exact...   Aug 6 2011, 05:08 PM
minque   yay! Got me thinking of Grey's Anatomy, ...   Aug 6 2011, 05:39 PM
mALX   Yes, never get two redheads together in the same...   Aug 7 2011, 04:10 PM
Grits   The voice sounded of spiders and clotted soil and...   Aug 7 2011, 04:30 PM
SubRosa   “You are brave or foolish to enter this place, Imp...   Aug 7 2011, 06:37 PM
Destri Melarg   There is one good thing about having to catch up o...   Aug 9 2011, 10:05 AM
treydog   Well, as we close in on 100 forum pages of this (g...   Aug 13 2011, 01:23 AM
Black Hand   Dear Gods, she takes waaay too much after her moth...   Aug 13 2011, 01:41 AM
minque   Dear Gods, she takes waaay too much after her mot...   Aug 13 2011, 05:52 PM
haute ecole rider   'Tis a very, very good thing I finished all of...   Aug 13 2011, 03:26 AM
D.Foxy   Trey - While I may not have been visible, I have ...   Aug 13 2011, 03:40 AM
mALX   The internal communication between Athynae and Ath...   Aug 13 2011, 05:36 PM
Athynae   Blackie I do believe that is the greatest complime...   Aug 13 2011, 06:52 PM
Olen   Great part. We got to see a bit more of Athynae t...   Aug 14 2011, 12:05 PM
SubRosa   Well that was a both confusing and delightful tele...   Aug 14 2011, 08:39 PM
Destri Melarg   Guess that's why I prefer [i]When Harry Met S...   Aug 14 2011, 10:57 PM
Grits   Well, this started off with an “uh-oh,” but happil...   Aug 15 2011, 07:24 PM
treydog   @Black Hand- Yes, she does. Athlain might have do...   Aug 20 2011, 03:00 AM
D.Foxy   Good tactics are now beginning to complement your ...   Aug 20 2011, 04:05 AM
Black Hand   Did I detect a hint of Donald Rumsfeld in there? R...   Aug 20 2011, 04:30 AM
haute ecole rider   I really, truly enjoyed the effect the - erm - ...   Aug 20 2011, 02:46 PM
mALX   Aesliip's comments on Athlain's "dial...   Aug 21 2011, 12:26 PM
Grits   I found myself viewing part of this scene from Aes...   Aug 21 2011, 05:44 PM
Destri Melarg   Everyone else commented on the things that struck ...   Aug 22 2011, 10:00 PM
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