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post Jun 27 2005, 10:29 PM
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Okay, here are four poems (Haiku's) written for a possible book. They are all related to battle and is written as if an adventurer/soldier wrote his war experiences after battle. anyways, there she blows:

The pessimist

Red, the rivers ran.
For a great battle was won.
Won, but also lost.

Ode to the wind

In, out, all around.
The winds of Tava flowing.
My sail will be short.

The rush

My sight fills with blood.
Running on adrenaline,
I kill my target.

The coming horror

The old birds scatter,
They know the coming horrors,
Killing will come soon.


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//LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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Red   Meditations on War   Jun 27 2005, 10:29 PM
Dantrag   cool.   Jun 28 2005, 02:07 AM
Megil Tel-Zeke   like em all   Jun 28 2005, 02:18 AM
Red   Thank you. They took a while to perfect the words...   Jun 28 2005, 02:43 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Cool Red.. :goodjob:   Jun 28 2005, 09:57 AM
Mazuk   Cool.   Jun 28 2005, 08:30 PM
Harry Dresden   Re: Meditations on War   Jul 4 2005, 05:12 PM
jonajosa   Wars are won. But they come at a price.   Jul 4 2005, 08:00 PM
Wolfie   "War has no winners, only losers" can...   Jul 17 2005, 01:09 PM
Red   Re: Meditations on War   Jul 9 2005, 04:41 PM
Blinx636   I liked the haikus a lot. They were very well thou...   Jul 10 2005, 10:02 PM
Red   Thanks for the praise.   Jul 14 2005, 02:55 PM
Red   Make someone up, that's what they do on the TE...   Jul 17 2005, 04:06 PM
vaanic~one   "Only the dead see the end of war" ...   Jul 22 2005, 01:58 PM


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