Agree with Orumus, this one definitely has potential! Treat it like a good wine, let it lay and gather dust to mature your thoughts. Once the other one has run its course I am sure you will find you actually want to continue this one. And beware - if you take too long the urge to interfere might just become too much for me and I might find my pen continuing the tale - totally without any awareness on my part of course. I suspect there is a Daedra bound into my pen
