Yesterday's Shadow Options

[Jac]

I agree with BBQ that the ending seems a bit flat. It's a good story, though.

[Olen]

Thanks for the comments. I agree the ending is weak and I wasn't wholly happy with it but I couldn't think how else to end it. As far as a moral goes, if you choose to see one, I'd say it's cynical and about the futility of trying to improve youself, or possibly about the lure of self destruction being greater than any 'higher' motive.

In all honesty there may be a continuation but having a break there fits what's likely to happen (if there is to be a break at all) and emphasises the above. I wouldn't hold you breath for it though, I'm writing some non-tes stuff just now.

[Remko]

Ye olde thread excavated

All I can say is that I loved it. Now I understand what happened to Varnan and Renera. The ending was a bit abrupt but I understand why having read your Today's burning.

The scene in the ruin was truly terrifying. Tense a lute string indeed.