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> Forever Unwanted., The story of Adatoriel the Bosmer.
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post Nov 21 2009, 01:08 PM
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Well, another fan-fic created by me. Comments and crits are welcome.


Intro:

As I walked along the dirty and scarred streets of Bravil, I noticed the occasional fight inside The Lonely Suitor Lodge. After a few minutes of watching the senseless fighting and shouting, a big nord who I presumed to be the useless bouncer, finally broke up the fight.

I continued My way towards the Archer`s Paradox where Daenlin awaits. I slowly walked towards the door, when suddenly a violet-cloaked figure exited the shop. Our eyes met, and I noticed that she was Breton.

Her face was beautiful, like a pure Aedra, and her hair was fiery red, neck long. Her eyes were that of venomous green, like a serpent`s poison. She smiled when she saw me, and left. I blushed at the thought of a possibly noble breton smiling at a lowly bosmer like me.

After that, I entered the shop to see Daenlin examining some arrows made from unknown origin.

"Ahh, Adatoriel, you`re here. I hope you have the package from Irdamil." he asked, while still examining the unknown arrows.

"Yes, I got them. But Irdamil demands more payment so he can create the next batch of bows, master." I simply said while staring at the arrows. It seems it was made of ebony, due to the ashen look of it.

"Never mind that dumb fetcher, Adatoriel. He wants more gold, despite that the quality of his wares are poor. But I found a new distributor that is good for business. That distributor hails from High Rock, you probably met her on your way here."

The old bosmer said this while opening the package I`ve handed to him.

"Well, you did good my apprentice. Go get some sleep, you look tired. Tomorrow will be a busy day for our shop!" yelled the old bosmer cheerily.

After the conversation with my master, I headed out for Suitor lodge for some dinner. As I entered however I noticed the Breton girl I`ve met before holding the hilt of a curved blade. I also noticed a drunken nord holding an iron dagger. A fight no doubt.


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Djinn: What wish would you like to have, young master?
Random dude: SUPA POWAZ!
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Djinn: Is there anything I could make true, lord?
Old guy: .. Youth and charisma.
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Djinn: Your heart speaks of wanting. I could make it true, milord.
Me: Hmmm. I wish to know what I want. Then you could hook me up in some insidious deal, spirit.
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