Master
Joined: 13-February 05
From: The Smoky Mountains
Sethyas- with pictures! Woo-Hoo! Sorry- couldn't restrain myself- nor did I wish to.
You convey quite effectively the frustrations and atmosphere of the Clockwork City. And that last screenshot is the best cliff-hanger I have ever seen... (wanders off mumbling enviously).
S.G.M.
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The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...
Master
Joined: 13-February 05
From: The Smoky Mountains
Incredible descriptive passages throughout- enhanced by the lovely screenshots. You capture Seth's growing doubts and weariness perfectly, along with Pene's attitude.
The Clockwork City is grueling, frightening, bewildering... And you get all of that in, while still moving toward the final discovery.
And now- Alma is home- so to speak.
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The dreams down here aren't broken, nah, they're walkin' with a limp...