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haute ecole rider
post Mar 17 2010, 09:57 PM
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This is the story I have been posting on the Unnamed Forum. I'm in the process of moving it over here for those who have not yet seen it. Enjoy!

Chapter 1.1a Escape

Waking up vomiting nothing but a small amount of bile, I gagged on the burning in the back of my throat. Coughing the last of it from my mouth, I curled on my right side on the foul cot, knees drawn to my chest. The rough wood of the cot’s frame pressed into my cheek. The smith’s hammer pounding on the inside of my skull sent stars shooting across the backs of my eyes. Grinding the heels of my hands into my closed lids in an attempt to drive the lights away only made the damn hammer pound even harder. Groaning, I turned until I lay on my back, opening my eyes.

Ignoring the taste of moldy stones on my tongue, I gulped down deep breaths of the damp air. The stars subsided as I stared at the stone blocks rising into the gloom above my head. The hammering slowed to once every shaky breath. Raising my thin wrists, I looked at the iron shackles encircling their ache. The prominent veins in the backs of my hands disappeared as the blood drained from them. Turning them so their palms faced me, I studied the ghosts of rough calluses, dark skin pale in the dim light of the window above my head.

Shouting. Clashing of steel on steel. A dark room spinning around me. Pitchers breaking, fluid flying everywhere. The helmed face of the Legion rider before me, his gauntleted hand holding my shoulder in an implacable grip, shouting something at me. My empty hands between us, palms facing the rider, my voice drowned by the chaos around us. Then the cold night air, my bare feet cringing from the rough cobblestones. Falling through the paving into darkness.

“Ach, what happened?” I muttered softly to myself. In spite of my whisper, the smith’s hammer pounded hard for a couple of heartbeats before slowing down again. Struggling to a seated position, I ignored the familiar stabbing pain in my left side, the hard throbbing in my right knee. Scooting my rump along the cot, I reached the pitcher sitting on the rickety table at the foot of the cot. Looking into the mug next to it, I grimaced at the dirty fluid inside. Picking up the pitcher, I raised it to my lips. Trying to avoid tasting it, I gulped the stale water hurriedly. Taking another mouthful and setting the pitcher down, I rinsed my furry teeth with it. Rising to my feet and leaning my right hand on the wall, I limped to the privy at the rear of the cell, spitting the foul water out.

“Awake now, are you, pretty Redguard?” the sarcastic, biting voice sounded behind me. Shooting a glare over my shoulder, I took in the barred door, the Dunmer in his cell across the way. “How do you like your cell?” he continued, his voice still mocking. Pretty, am I? Disheveled, filthy, thin and weak - no, pretty would be the last word I’d use to describe myself.

Turning around, I took a limping step through the trickle of faint moonlight falling from a window too small to show stars. Another limp took me past the table, its pathetic candle shedding little additional light. One more step brought me to the cell door.

“Roomy enough for you?” the mocking continued as I studied the Dunmer. He looked as unhealthy as I felt. Turning away from him, I limped around the small room, hunched against the sharp pain in my left side. Nausea roiled in my stomach, and my muscles quivered uncontrollably, their former strength forgotten. “I can’t even imagine what it’s like for you,” the other’s voice followed me on my limited perambulation. “No more sunshine, no more open seas. Just a box and a dirty sunbeam for the rest of your sorry life. Bet you’re glad it won’t last long, eh?”

“What?” I returned to the barred door, squinting at the Dunmer across the way. “I won’t be here long?” my voice cracked, weak in my still-burning throat. My dry lips split as I spoke.

“Oh, didn’t you know?” The Dunmer’s voice turned bitter along with his faded red eyes. “They put you here to forget about you. They don’t care if you die, Redguard.” His sharp-edged voice grated on my already raw nerves. The sound of a bolt being drawn back, a heavy door creaking open somewhere down the passage reached us. “Hear that Redguard?” the Dunmer’s tone became strident. “They’re coming for you!” He drew back into the shadows of his cell as I heard voices.

“Tell me what happened to my sons,” an old man’s voice reached me, heavy with grief.

“Sire, all we know is that they were attacked,” a woman’s voice, clipped with authority and respect, responded as booted steps drew nearer the cells. “We must hurry, Sire, we need to get you to safety.” I heard the slightest undertone of anxiety in her voice.

A tall figure, clad in steel armor with blue enamel and brass trim marking him as one of the Blades, lifted his torch at me. He stopped outside my cell, his Redguard features scowling at me in the guttering light. The woman, a little shorter than I and clad in the same armor, paused at the sight of me. Her blue eyes sparked angrily beneath the helm. “This cell was supposed to be empty!” she exclaimed softly under her breath.

“I don’t know, Captain,” the tall Redguard shrugged, keeping his cold black eyes on me. “Some mix-up with the City Watch.”

“It doesn’t matter,” the captain responded. Beyond her, another armored figure and an old Imperial man in royal purple robes appeared. The third Blade matched my height, and like me, turned out to be Redguard as well.

“Prisoner!” the captain’s voice crackled between the stone walls. My back straightened involuntarily, painfully, at the unmistakable command in the woman’s voice. “Stand back beneath the window!”

Although I had been out of the Legion for four years, old habits die hard. Complying with her order, I limped to the back of the cell, behind the moonbeam. The captain unlocked my cell door while I squinted through the grey light. Opening the door, she stepped back to let the other two Blades enter. The tall one advanced to stand between me and the others. Sensing his dislike of me, thick as molasses in a Skyrim winter, I accepted it, as I accepted the captain’s authority, since I could do nothing else.

“Watch the prisoner, Glenroy,” the captain ordered, moving to the side wall opposite my cot.

The slim sword whickered as Glenroy drew it. “Aye, Captain,” he growled, turning the blade so it shimmered in the moonlight between us. “You stay where you are,” he snarled at me. “Don’t even breathe.” Breathing slowly and shallowly, I stayed put. Looking past him, I regarded the other Redguard. Standing at ease near the door, his impassive expression scared me in its implacability. Years of combat in the Legion had taught me that the most deadly enemies are the ones you can’t read.

The captain started muttering under her breath, and I felt the unmistakable tingle of magicka shimmer over the plain rock face. Catching my breath, I realized the captain was a Breton, with high innate magicka. Probably trained as a battlemage.

The old man, his dark fur-lined robe a shadow in the shadows of the cell, stepped past the impassive soldier and peered at me, his sad eyes puzzled. “Come closer,” his voice smoothing from a grieved coarseness to a commanding tone.

Glancing at Glenroy, I hesitated, but he fell back to stand beside the old man, keeping his blade between me and the other. Acutely aware of the shimmering sword, I stepped forward into the light.

The old man’s eyes widened. “Ah, yes, I’ve seen you before.” His dark gaze held mine, once again becoming sad and resigned. “That means today is the day, and the hour is near.” Suddenly aware that the smith’s hammer had stopped pounding in my head, I stared at the old man.

Licking my dry lips, I remembered how the captain had addressed him. “Pardon me, Sire?” He can’t be - no, not the Emperor, not here, not in my cell! My eye fell on the large red amulet on his brocaded chest. The Amulet of Kings? The Emperor! Stiffly against the pain in my left side, I bowed. “How may I serve you, Sire?” Old habits die hard, very hard, indeed. Looking up, I saw a faint smile touch Uriel Septim’s eyes.

“I have served Tamriel all my life,” he answered. “You too, shall serve Tamriel in your own way. But you have your own path to follow.” His eyes grew even darker. “Be warned, though. There will be blood and death before the end.”

“Blood and death are not new to me, Sire,” I spoke softly, surprised by the weariness I heard in my cracking voice.

The wall of my cell crumbled beneath the captain’s hands, falling away in a cloud of dry, choking dust. A passageway appeared beyond. “Sire,” her voice cut between us. “We must go now, there is little time.” She disappeared into the darkness beyond the jagged stone edges.

Glenroy turned the top of the slender blade toward me as the Emperor started toward the opening. “What of the prisoner, Sire?”

“Leave her be,” the command voice was quietly unmistakable as Uriel Septim stepped through the opening, following the captain. “Her path may yet lie with ours.” Glenroy gave me one last glare, sheathing his sword and following the Emperor. The third Blade turned his back on me and brought up the rear.

Listening to the sound of their booted feet fading away, I glanced around the cell again. Something coiled in my belly, just below the breastbone. On my discharge from the Legion, I had once hoped to find peace and health after decades of blood and death. Peace and health had avoided me, and now a mere hint of blood and death had found me.


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haute ecole rider   Old Habits Die Hard   Mar 17 2010, 09:57 PM
SubRosa   Into the breach once more! Your pacing of the ...   Apr 11 2010, 07:39 PM
mALX   This is one of my favorite parts of the main quest...   Apr 11 2010, 08:14 PM
minque   Oohhh I have now read through this and I must admi...   Apr 11 2010, 10:26 PM
Acadian   Yes! That's our Julian! Well done ag...   Apr 12 2010, 01:23 AM
D.Foxy   “The churls are really big, and heavily armored. T...   Apr 12 2010, 01:45 AM
Remko   Had to comment; your German is atrocious. so is D....   Apr 12 2010, 05:02 PM
D.Foxy   Was? Meinen Deuschlish is nicht gut, ya? Hmmph...   Apr 13 2010, 03:24 AM
Destri Melarg   I especially enjoyed Matius forming the battle-pla...   Apr 13 2010, 09:33 AM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Let me see . . . "pain in the can....   Apr 13 2010, 03:48 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 4.6: I really enjoyed this chapter. Your...   Apr 17 2010, 10:04 AM
Olen   Kvatch is retaken... Good change of atmosphere at...   Apr 13 2010, 04:32 PM
haute ecole rider   Thanks, Olen. I really appreciate your comments. ...   Apr 15 2010, 06:40 PM
SubRosa   I finally have time to get back to reading again. ...   Apr 15 2010, 08:37 PM
mALX   That last paragraph is so powerful! Sorry I w...   Apr 16 2010, 07:13 PM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Again you have picked out the importance...   Apr 18 2010, 08:08 PM
Olen   You handled Martin well there, his slowness to rea...   Apr 18 2010, 08:52 PM
mALX   @mALX: So sorry to hear about your PC problems. Y...   Apr 18 2010, 09:05 PM
SubRosa   The big Orsimer was working on a [b]mail cuirass. ...   Apr 18 2010, 09:16 PM
minque   Ahhh nice conversation with Martin! I so like ...   Apr 18 2010, 11:05 PM
Destri Melarg   I reminds me of when Mace Windu said to Anakin: ...   Apr 19 2010, 01:18 AM
haute ecole rider   @Olen: Thanks for the comment about how full a cha...   Apr 21 2010, 02:13 AM
SubRosa   You set the scene with a strong description of the...   Apr 21 2010, 04:04 AM
mALX   The last paragraphs are so powerful! Julian...   Apr 21 2010, 05:34 AM
Acadian   Caught up again. Wonderful stuff. I'm coveri...   Apr 22 2010, 03:15 AM
haute ecole rider   Hey all, I'm in St. Louis this weekend visitin...   Apr 23 2010, 04:10 AM
mALX   This was one of my favorite chapters before, and i...   Apr 23 2010, 04:22 AM
Olen   Excellently done. A description of magic with mor...   Apr 23 2010, 01:01 PM
SubRosa   “If I’m not ready to cast this spell, how can you ...   Apr 23 2010, 03:58 PM
Winter Wolf   The way you build up your scene and characters is ...   Apr 24 2010, 01:16 AM
minque   This is great...two wonderful updates! Oh haut...   Apr 25 2010, 11:34 PM
haute ecole rider   Hello all, back after a fun weekend in St. Louis: ...   Apr 26 2010, 02:41 AM
SubRosa   I always like seeing Aelwin. You make him a much m...   Apr 26 2010, 04:33 AM
Olen   It's nice to see a return to Aelwin rather tha...   Apr 26 2010, 12:01 PM
mALX   This chapter gave Martin some insight into Julian...   Apr 26 2010, 01:53 PM
Acadian   Two very nice chapters! I very much enjoyed t...   Apr 27 2010, 04:36 PM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: I enjoyed watching Aelwin make Julian sq...   Apr 27 2010, 07:27 PM
SubRosa   A very exciting play of words here: I recovered th...   Apr 27 2010, 11:31 PM
D.Foxy   Entering behind him, I took in the chaos of the sm...   Apr 28 2010, 02:04 AM
Olen   I like this piece a lot. It's coming to life ...   Apr 28 2010, 12:09 PM
mALX   The first time I came up on this part of the quest...   Apr 29 2010, 01:03 PM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Only once during my playthroughs did I o...   Apr 29 2010, 08:53 PM
SubRosa   The battle with the bandits was exciting. More imp...   Apr 29 2010, 11:19 PM
mALX   The last lines in this chapter hit me then and now...   May 1 2010, 02:56 AM
Olen   Hmm it appears I haven't commented on this one...   May 1 2010, 10:00 AM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: I'm glad you picked up on Julian...   May 1 2010, 10:55 PM
SubRosa   Ahh, Paint's homecoming. I have been waiting f...   May 1 2010, 11:17 PM
Olen   Woo update :) I loved the description of cloud r...   May 1 2010, 11:34 PM
mALX   That is one of the scenes I love in the game, when...   May 3 2010, 04:10 PM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Paint is a living, breathing character t...   May 3 2010, 05:20 PM
SubRosa   Why so rough? Old injury? Sore throat? Perhaps li...   May 3 2010, 05:40 PM
Olen   Great as ever. I like your description of cloud r...   May 3 2010, 06:45 PM
Acadian   Well, I am caught up again. I am finding that ded...   May 5 2010, 06:32 PM
haute ecole rider   @all: Thanks for reading and for the comments. Mo...   May 5 2010, 08:03 PM
mALX   I'm hungry after reading this! Great Writ...   May 5 2010, 09:25 PM
SubRosa   The Return of the Hypocaust! I could swear tha...   May 6 2010, 01:05 AM
D.Foxy   * has visions of HE Rider being on a diet, and me ...   May 6 2010, 05:42 PM
Winter Wolf   Awesome write Haute, the dialogue flowed oh so smo...   May 7 2010, 07:38 AM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: It's good to see that my hypocaust ...   May 7 2010, 06:06 PM
mALX   I loved all of it, but this line stood out because...   May 7 2010, 11:23 PM
SubRosa   A tasty breakfast. Good thing I read this after di...   May 7 2010, 11:28 PM
Destri Melarg   I should start by warning you that this is going t...   May 8 2010, 12:43 AM
Olen   Good couple of parts, I'd never noticed the su...   May 8 2010, 01:34 PM
haute ecole rider   @mALX: heh heh he - hiding from the telepathic gua...   May 9 2010, 08:09 PM
SubRosa   Now I have Willie Nelson on the mind, thanks to yo...   May 9 2010, 08:59 PM
Olen   You show how at home she feels in cloud ruler well...   May 9 2010, 09:06 PM
minque   Ahhh, what a good read, now just before bedtime...   May 9 2010, 10:51 PM
SubRosa   Ahhh, what a good read, now just before bedtime...   May 9 2010, 11:51 PM
mALX   On the road again...just can't wait to get on ...   May 10 2010, 05:22 AM
Winter Wolf   Cloud ruler temple is an amazing place. The only t...   May 10 2010, 07:16 AM
Destri Melarg   In this chapter I see the same quality in Paint th...   May 10 2010, 09:54 AM
haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Thanks for your insights. I can not read...   May 12 2010, 04:46 PM
Destri Melarg   Once again we see the easy fashion in which Julian...   May 12 2010, 07:11 PM
mALX   Julian ROCKS! She comes across so natural the...   May 12 2010, 07:28 PM
SubRosa   Chapter 6 has been all about laying foundations. T...   May 12 2010, 07:35 PM
Olen   I can't really think of what to say except exc...   May 12 2010, 08:26 PM
Acadian   Just caught up again with 6.4 - 6.7. Julian's...   May 13 2010, 01:20 AM
haute ecole rider   @Destri: I'm glad you picked up on the multipl...   May 14 2010, 06:38 PM
Olen   I good description of the Imperial City but still ...   May 14 2010, 07:06 PM
SubRosa   A Watchman met my gaze So was that The Comedian? N...   May 14 2010, 07:51 PM
Destri Melarg   My first impression upon reading this chapter was ...   May 15 2010, 12:42 AM
mALX   I like Julian's inner dialogue. She doesn...   May 15 2010, 03:05 AM
minque   Hautie! This is amazing! Julian really is ...   May 15 2010, 10:27 PM
haute ecole rider   @Olen: Ahh, the smell of sun on lichen - I wanted ...   May 16 2010, 06:06 PM
Olen   Woo, good part, that back of the knee slash is bec...   May 16 2010, 08:17 PM
SubRosa   Baurus, James Baurus meets Julian Powers, the Inte...   May 16 2010, 08:55 PM
mALX   I'm glad you changed this one, I like this ver...   May 17 2010, 12:13 AM
D.Foxy   Somebody's been reading too much Ian Fleming.   May 17 2010, 02:16 AM
Destri Melarg   Sorry, I can't resist: - We have learned tha...   May 18 2010, 01:34 AM
haute ecole rider   @Olen: I agree about reaching a milestone when ent...   May 18 2010, 05:59 PM
Olen   Good part, I loved this bit of the main quest (whi...   May 18 2010, 06:40 PM
mALX   I love how you gave Tar-Meena a slight hiss, I pic...   May 19 2010, 04:53 AM
SubRosa   The wench probably would get rich off of Teresa......   May 19 2010, 04:50 PM
Acadian   7.1 - 7.3 Woohoo! This continues to be wonde...   May 19 2010, 05:55 PM
haute ecole rider   @Olen: When I roleplayed Julian's walk through...   May 20 2010, 05:12 PM
mALX   Poor Gwinas!!! Julian then goes ...   May 20 2010, 06:20 PM
SubRosa   Good description of the busy streets of the Market...   May 20 2010, 07:33 PM
Destri Melarg   First you give me Tar-Meena and her sssybilant ess...   May 20 2010, 10:04 PM
minque   Oh my...what can I say that's not been said be...   May 21 2010, 10:39 PM
haute ecole rider   @mALX: No, that's not Julian being spoultry...   May 22 2010, 05:28 PM
SubRosa   More of James Baurus and Julian Powers! I can ...   May 22 2010, 06:39 PM
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