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	  haute ecole rider   Old Habits Die Hard   Mar 17 2010, 09:57 PM    SubRosa   Into the breach once more! Your pacing of the ...   Apr 11 2010, 07:39 PM    mALX   This is one of my favorite parts of the main quest...   Apr 11 2010, 08:14 PM    minque   Oohhh I have now read through this and I must admi...   Apr 11 2010, 10:26 PM    Acadian   Yes!  That's our Julian!  Well done ag...   Apr 12 2010, 01:23 AM    D.Foxy   “The churls are really big, and heavily armored. T...   Apr 12 2010, 01:45 AM    Remko   Had to comment; your German is atrocious. so is D....   Apr 12 2010, 05:02 PM    D.Foxy   Was? Meinen Deuschlish is nicht gut, ya? 
Hmmph...   Apr 13 2010, 03:24 AM    Destri Melarg   I especially enjoyed Matius forming the battle-pla...   Apr 13 2010, 09:33 AM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Let me see . . . "pain in the can....   Apr 13 2010, 03:48 PM![]()     Destri Melarg   Chapter 4.6:
I really enjoyed this chapter.  Your...   Apr 17 2010, 10:04 AM    Olen   Kvatch is retaken...  Good change of atmosphere at...   Apr 13 2010, 04:32 PM    haute ecole rider   Thanks, Olen. I really appreciate your comments.
...   Apr 15 2010, 06:40 PM    SubRosa   I finally have time to get back to reading again. ...   Apr 15 2010, 08:37 PM    mALX   That last paragraph is so powerful!  Sorry I w...   Apr 16 2010, 07:13 PM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Again you have picked out the importance...   Apr 18 2010, 08:08 PM    Olen   You handled Martin well there, his slowness to rea...   Apr 18 2010, 08:52 PM    mALX   
@mALX: So sorry to hear about your PC problems. Y...   Apr 18 2010, 09:05 PM    SubRosa   The big Orsimer was working on a [b]mail cuirass. ...   Apr 18 2010, 09:16 PM    minque   Ahhh nice conversation with Martin! I so like ...   Apr 18 2010, 11:05 PM    Destri Melarg   
I reminds me of when Mace Windu said to Anakin: ...   Apr 19 2010, 01:18 AM    haute ecole rider   @Olen: Thanks for the comment about how full a cha...   Apr 21 2010, 02:13 AM    SubRosa   You set the scene with a strong description of the...   Apr 21 2010, 04:04 AM    mALX   The last paragraphs are so powerful!  Julian...   Apr 21 2010, 05:34 AM    Acadian   Caught up again.  Wonderful stuff.  I'm coveri...   Apr 22 2010, 03:15 AM    haute ecole rider   Hey all, I'm in St. Louis this weekend visitin...   Apr 23 2010, 04:10 AM    mALX   This was one of my favorite chapters before, and i...   Apr 23 2010, 04:22 AM    Olen   Excellently done.  A description of magic with mor...   Apr 23 2010, 01:01 PM    SubRosa   “If I’m not ready to cast this spell, how can you ...   Apr 23 2010, 03:58 PM    Winter Wolf   The way you build up your scene and characters is ...   Apr 24 2010, 01:16 AM    minque   This is great...two wonderful updates! Oh haut...   Apr 25 2010, 11:34 PM    haute ecole rider   Hello all, back after a fun weekend in St. Louis:
...   Apr 26 2010, 02:41 AM    SubRosa   I always like seeing Aelwin. You make him a much m...   Apr 26 2010, 04:33 AM    Olen   It's nice to see a return to Aelwin rather tha...   Apr 26 2010, 12:01 PM    mALX   This chapter gave Martin some insight into Julian...   Apr 26 2010, 01:53 PM    Acadian   Two very nice chapters!  I very much enjoyed t...   Apr 27 2010, 04:36 PM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: I enjoyed watching Aelwin make Julian sq...   Apr 27 2010, 07:27 PM    SubRosa   A very exciting play of words here:
I recovered th...   Apr 27 2010, 11:31 PM    D.Foxy   Entering behind him, I took in the chaos of the sm...   Apr 28 2010, 02:04 AM    Olen   I like this piece a lot.  It's coming to life ...   Apr 28 2010, 12:09 PM    mALX   The first time I came up on this part of the quest...   Apr 29 2010, 01:03 PM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Only once during my playthroughs did I o...   Apr 29 2010, 08:53 PM    SubRosa   The battle with the bandits was exciting. More imp...   Apr 29 2010, 11:19 PM    mALX   The last lines in this chapter hit me then and now...   May 1 2010, 02:56 AM    Olen   Hmm it appears I haven't commented on this one...   May 1 2010, 10:00 AM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: I'm glad you picked up on Julian...   May 1 2010, 10:55 PM    SubRosa   Ahh, Paint's homecoming. I have been waiting f...   May 1 2010, 11:17 PM    Olen   Woo update :) 
I loved the description of cloud r...   May 1 2010, 11:34 PM    mALX   That is one of the scenes I love in the game, when...   May 3 2010, 04:10 PM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Paint is a living, breathing character t...   May 3 2010, 05:20 PM    SubRosa   Why so rough? Old injury? Sore throat? 
Perhaps li...   May 3 2010, 05:40 PM    Olen   Great as ever.  I like your description of cloud r...   May 3 2010, 06:45 PM    Acadian   Well, I am caught up again.  I am finding that ded...   May 5 2010, 06:32 PM    haute ecole rider   @all: Thanks for reading and for the comments.
Mo...   May 5 2010, 08:03 PM    mALX   I'm hungry after reading this!  Great Writ...   May 5 2010, 09:25 PM    SubRosa   The Return of the Hypocaust! I could swear tha...   May 6 2010, 01:05 AM    D.Foxy   * has visions of HE Rider being on a diet, and me ...   May 6 2010, 05:42 PM    Winter Wolf   Awesome write Haute, the dialogue flowed oh so smo...   May 7 2010, 07:38 AM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa:  It's good to see that my hypocaust ...   May 7 2010, 06:06 PM    mALX   I loved all of it, but this line stood out because...   May 7 2010, 11:23 PM    SubRosa   A tasty breakfast. Good thing I read this after di...   May 7 2010, 11:28 PM    Destri Melarg   I should start by warning you that this is going t...   May 8 2010, 12:43 AM    Olen   Good couple of parts, I'd never noticed the su...   May 8 2010, 01:34 PM    haute ecole rider   @mALX: heh heh he - hiding from the telepathic gua...   May 9 2010, 08:09 PM    SubRosa   Now I have Willie Nelson on the mind, thanks to yo...   May 9 2010, 08:59 PM    Olen   You show how at home she feels in cloud ruler well...   May 9 2010, 09:06 PM    minque   Ahhh, what a good read, now just before bedtime...   May 9 2010, 10:51 PM![]()     SubRosa   
Ahhh, what a good read, now just before bedtime...   May 9 2010, 11:51 PM    mALX   On the road again...just can't wait to get on ...   May 10 2010, 05:22 AM    Winter Wolf   Cloud ruler temple is an amazing place. The only t...   May 10 2010, 07:16 AM    Destri Melarg   In this chapter I see the same quality in Paint th...   May 10 2010, 09:54 AM    haute ecole rider   @SubRosa: Thanks for your insights. I can not read...   May 12 2010, 04:46 PM    Destri Melarg   Once again we see the easy fashion in which Julian...   May 12 2010, 07:11 PM    mALX   Julian ROCKS!  She comes across so natural the...   May 12 2010, 07:28 PM    SubRosa   Chapter 6 has been all about laying foundations. T...   May 12 2010, 07:35 PM    Olen   I can't really think of what to say except exc...   May 12 2010, 08:26 PM    Acadian   Just caught up again with 6.4 - 6.7.  Julian's...   May 13 2010, 01:20 AM    haute ecole rider   @Destri: I'm glad you picked up on the multipl...   May 14 2010, 06:38 PM    Olen   I good description of the Imperial City but still ...   May 14 2010, 07:06 PM    SubRosa   A Watchman met my gaze
So was that The Comedian? N...   May 14 2010, 07:51 PM    Destri Melarg   My first impression upon reading this chapter was ...   May 15 2010, 12:42 AM    mALX   I like Julian's inner dialogue.  She doesn...   May 15 2010, 03:05 AM    minque   Hautie! This is amazing! Julian really is ...   May 15 2010, 10:27 PM    haute ecole rider   @Olen: Ahh, the smell of sun on lichen - I wanted ...   May 16 2010, 06:06 PM    Olen   Woo, good part, that back of the knee slash is bec...   May 16 2010, 08:17 PM    SubRosa   Baurus, James Baurus meets Julian Powers, the Inte...   May 16 2010, 08:55 PM    mALX   I'm glad you changed this one, I like this ver...   May 17 2010, 12:13 AM    D.Foxy   Somebody's been reading too much Ian Fleming.   May 17 2010, 02:16 AM    Destri Melarg   
Sorry, I can't resist:
- We have learned tha...   May 18 2010, 01:34 AM    haute ecole rider   @Olen: I agree about reaching a milestone when ent...   May 18 2010, 05:59 PM    Olen   Good part, I loved this bit of the main quest (whi...   May 18 2010, 06:40 PM    mALX   I love how you gave Tar-Meena a slight hiss, I pic...   May 19 2010, 04:53 AM    SubRosa   The wench probably would get rich off of Teresa......   May 19 2010, 04:50 PM    Acadian   7.1 - 7.3
Woohoo!  This continues to be wonde...   May 19 2010, 05:55 PM    haute ecole rider   @Olen: When I roleplayed Julian's walk through...   May 20 2010, 05:12 PM    mALX   Poor Gwinas!!!  
Julian then goes ...   May 20 2010, 06:20 PM    SubRosa   Good description of the busy streets of the Market...   May 20 2010, 07:33 PM    Destri Melarg   First you give me Tar-Meena and her sssybilant ess...   May 20 2010, 10:04 PM    minque   Oh my...what can I say that's not been said be...   May 21 2010, 10:39 PM    haute ecole rider   @mALX: No, that's not Julian being spoultry...   May 22 2010, 05:28 PM    SubRosa   More of James Baurus and Julian Powers! I can ...   May 22 2010, 06:39 PM
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