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Memoires of Rales Sarethi, A Morrowind fanfic |
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Mar 18 2010, 01:12 PM
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From: Ald'ruhn, Vvardenfell

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Dear readers, I posted this in the unnamed forum but since you were so kind to invite me here, I thought I'd "grace" you with my drivel. Without further adue, I present you the adventures of Rales Sarethi.
Part I Homecoming
Chapter 1: Seyda Neen.
Day 1
Over thirty-five years ago, I think I was about nineteen, maybe twenty, I got pulled from my bunk in the cell in Imperial City and was told I was to be deported to Vvardenfell immediately. First by carriage and then by boat. Gods, even up to this day I resent carriage rides, they’re bumpy, dusty and tiresome, I prefer a horseback ride anyday.
The seajourney is pretty much a blur in my recollection, the gentle relaxing motion of the boat made me drift into a careless and refreshing slumber. I briefly opened my eyes at times the sea was exceptionally rough and I remember a gentle yet compelling voice speaking to me. Can’t remember the words though, just the sound of the voice that stuck with me.
I woke up when a fellow Dunmer, one donning a huge scar across his face, told me we had arrived and that I needed to get off the boat. He called himself Jiub and asked what my name was. I politely answered my name was Rales. I didn’t bother telling him my last name, after all, he hadn’t told his either. I never saw the guy again after I disembarked. A shame really, he was kind of like-able. A grumpy Redguard legionnaire ordered me to report in at the Census and Excise office outside. Like I had a choice. On the boardwalk towards the offices, an Imperial officer asked me several random questions, like my race. Like he couldn’t see for himself. Sjeezzz…. I had to refrain myself from rolling my eyes and possibly insulting or upsetting the guy. Instead, I acted like the good Dunmer they wanted me to be, I played along and answered his questions.
After I had satisfied his curiosity he ordered me to report in at the office for my release form. ‘Release form? I was going to be released?’ I could hardly believe my pointy ears at that time. Let me tell you; looking back on what they had me go through, sometimes I wished they had left me to rot in prison. With a straight face I walked towards the rickety wooden structure that was the consensus and excise office. I couldn’t be showing surprise about my release, what if they had made a mistake and changed their mind?
Quickly I proceeded into the building. An elderly Imperial was sitting behind a desk, going through piles and piles of documents. Pre-occupied as he seemed to be, he hadn’t noticed me yet or maybe he was just ignoring me. Perhaps it had been my body-odour? Figuring that was hardly my fault, they were the ones that had plucked me from my cell, dropped me on a boat and had me report into an office without the chance to clean myself up. I shrugged and softly cleared my throat to get his attention, I didn’t want to startle the old man lest he would die from a heart-attack. Knowing my luck, they’d probably blame me and I’d be back where I started, in jail. The following conversation with the old git almost felt like a job-interview. Socusius Ergalla, the census and excise officer, asked me all sorts of questions; like my starsign, my skills and whatnot. I didn’t have a clue what they wanted with the info but since it was hardly a secret, I just answered them while the Imperial wrote it all down on some sort of form. After the interview, Socusius told me to take my release form (that’s what the form turned out to be) to Selles Gravius where I’d receive orders. I was almost speechless - almost. ‘Orders? Whatfor?’ I remember exclaiming. He just shrugged. Apparantly he hadn’t a clue either. Well, that made two of us so I went to Gravius, hoping he would tell me more.
Halfway to Selles Gravius I got distracted by a hallway behind a sturdy looking wooden door that led to some sort of a basement where I found a variety of items. Some silverware, some bottles containing local booze, an iron dagger and a bag to put in the items I had “found”. Ofcourse, only then I realised I still had to see that Gravius guy. He would notice me carrying a bag, suspiciously tingling with all sorts of gear a newly released prisoner shouldn’t have yet. I put the bag next to the table where I had found the dagger, checked my release form was still in my pocket and went to see Selles Gravius.
Gravius wasn’t much of a talker and looked like a formidable warrior. In fact; it made me wonder what in Sheogorath’s name he was doing here in this lousy office. When I asked him while handing him the form he almost bit off my head saying it was none of my busines and unpatiently snatched the release form from my hands. He glimpsed me over for a while with one eyebrow raised and ordered me to wait for a moment while he looked up some documents I was going to need. A few moments later he handed me a letter, some gold I quickly pocketed and a mysterious package for a certain Caius Cosades in Balmora, who-ever that may be. I figured I’d find out soon enough and didn’t ask any more questions.
Having been through that, - what I still consider a bureaucratical ordeal - as I went to retrieve my bag, I suddenly remembered there was a rainbarrel outside I hadn’t looked into. I had little gold and a dagger but no water, no food, no nothing so anything I could find would be useful and most of all; for free. Turned out it only contained a ring with some engraving. Unfortunately I couldn’t make out what it was saying so I put it in my pocket, again wandered through the offices with an air like nothing was out of the ordinary, fetched the bag and made my way into Seyda Neen. I was my own man again. I was free to go where I wanted.
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My first steps outside were, well, quite frankly, disappointing. You’d expect a town with the main docks into Vvardenfell would be a big, prospering town. Suffice to say it wasn’t. As a matter of fact, it was just the opposite. Most of the houses were run-down, shabby shacks, trading was limited to one tradinghouse and a swamp surrounded it so flies swarmed the town. I won’t even mention the smell.
Still, I was in Morrowind, I could finally look up relatives I knew to still live here. My mother had told me plenty of stories of her and her cousin Athyn playing together. I couldn’t remember which town though, but from what I’ve been taught, the Sarethi family is well-known and shouldn’t be too hard to track down.
My sense of pride prevented me running off to find them right away, I could hardly arrive wearing nothing but the raggedy clothes, looking like a bum. I wanted to make a name for myself first. I wanted them to be proud to hail back a long-lost relative For now, my pride would have to wait, I had more pressing matters, like finding somewhere to stay the night.
While looking around and - metaphorically speaking - sniffing up the atmosphere a Woodelf came upto me grinning child-like. The chap introduced himself as Fargoth and extended his hand which I grabbed. From moment one I knew I was going to like this friendly little fellow. Turned out he had been bullied and his family heirloom, a ring, had been taken from him. He told me it was magical and allowed the wearer to heal himself.
‘Would it have engraving, like this?’ I remember asking him while pulling the ring I had found in the barrel outside the office from my pocket and held it in front of his nose. Fargoth frantically shook his head and told me that was the one. I was happy to give it back to him. Trinkets are easier to find than good friends and the gods know I could use some friends being a stranger in a strange land. Singing happily he wandered off but not before he told me he was going to tell his friend Arrille a kind Darkelf had returned his ring to him and how happy he was to have it back. I simply smiled. My rumbling stomach made me aware that I needed to find something to eat as well. After some asking around I soon found out Arrille’s establishment was the only tradehouse around. If I wanted to survive any trip outside of town, I needed some sort of protection, I needed armour and a weapon and some supplies so I headed off to Arrille’s.
Politely the High Elf, Arille, greeted me and was quick to realize I must have been the stranger that had given Fargoth his ring back. He confirmed what I suspected, Fargoth was slightly retarded, he had the mind of a child and was almost chronically happy.
I removed the items from the bag I wanted to sell and displayed them on the counter in front of Arrille. We came to an agreement, he would gladly take all the items from my hands and I would buy the chitin cuirass, pauldrons and gauntlets, some food, a couple of useful spells and some scrolls. Even with those purchases I had more gold in my pocket than when I had entered the tradehouse. I had kept the dagger. Then it hit me, I still didn’t have a real weapon, the iron dagger I had kept was hardly any more use than as a butterknife. In the excitement I had forgotten to buy a real weapon. I double backed into Arrille’s and bought a chitin bow and some arrows. Now I was set to face whatever was coming to me in the wild, or at least, that’s what I thought at that time.
I nibbled on a Kwama egg on a loaf of bread and adressed some inhabitants. Some locals mentioned Ergalla Socucius was looking for a missing tax collector, Processus Vitellius. I wasn’t really feeling like heading back into the Census and Excise office, I had just left the damn thing, I decided to do some looking around myself. How hard would it be to find an Imperial tax collector?
Since it is always a good idea getting at least an idea where someone missing could hang out, I asked around for him. Ofcourse, blabbermouth Fargoth had heard rumours the Dunmer in the watchtower, Thavere Vedrano, was the only being able to stomach him. Apparantly, the guy was somewhat obnoxious. It was a start so I headed off to the lighthouse when in the corner of my eye I caught a glimpse of something shiny – a weapon perhaps? – in a hollow stump. It cost me a pair of wet feet and trousers getting the item from the stump but it was well worth it. The enchanted axe would get me quite some gold, I never cared for axes, they are too heavy and too encumbring, so I intended on selling it but it would have to wait until I solved this mystery.
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Strength and honour, stranger!
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@Destri:The Imperial was too s... May 10 2010, 10:43 AM Remko ‘This must be the worst night I ever spend with yo... May 10 2010, 04:32 PM Destri Melarg See!!! I knew that Trama Root got you ... May 11 2010, 08:29 AM Remko Yes, you did mention it and I forgot to change it ... May 11 2010, 10:56 AM Olen I love it, good as ever. His continuing interest ... May 11 2010, 03:19 PM SubRosa That was a truly epic campaign through the tomb in... May 11 2010, 04:36 PM haute ecole rider The aftermath is as real as it gets! Talk abou... May 11 2010, 06:57 PM Remko This was a very hard part. I had to use parts of t... May 12 2010, 11:41 AM haute ecole rider Though you may have felt constrained by the in-gam... May 12 2010, 03:51 PM Destri Melarg I couldn’t agree more. It would be an easy thing ... May 12 2010, 05:08 PM mALX Zerina's hints to Rales to slow down and prepa... May 12 2010, 07:24 PM Acadian Caught up with the last four updates now. Plenty ... May 13 2010, 01:01 AM SubRosa Destri gave us the Sweetroll Negotiations, and now... May 13 2010, 02:52 PM Remko @SubRosa: I kinda agree with you but hoped it was ... May 14 2010, 11:34 AM SubRosa That works much better! I especially liked Zer... May 14 2010, 06:14 PM Remko Glad to hear (read ;) ) you like it. Makes me feel... May 14 2010, 07:45 PM SubRosa ‘So, that’s who those grumpy people are.’
I love t... May 14 2010, 09:21 PM Olen Good stuff. I like this piece, and I like that se... May 15 2010, 12:00 AM Destri Melarg I like the new paragraph in the last chapter. It ... May 15 2010, 12:43 AM mALX Zerina ROCKS! She is going to drag Rales thro... May 15 2010, 03:20 AM Remko Sorry Destri, it was etiher gonna be huge or a bit... May 15 2010, 04:09 PM minque Nice Remmie! I honestly like your approach....... May 15 2010, 10:08 PM Remko It is another Ashlander prophecy of the Nerevarine... May 17 2010, 11:40 AM SubRosa Very cool. So it looks like Rales will be visiting... May 17 2010, 05:03 PM haute ecole rider So it looks like Rales will be visiting a cave in ... May 17 2010, 05:55 PM mALX This part gets fascinating to me, because it is a ... May 17 2010, 06:14 PM Destri Melarg
Sorry Destri, it was etiher gonna be huge or a bi... May 18 2010, 01:29 AM Acadian I don't know from prophecies, so this is all n... May 19 2010, 07:06 PM minque ohh now he's into it! i'm very fond of... May 21 2010, 10:29 PM Remko A short one but that's because I am still work... May 26 2010, 11:32 AM Olen It's been wholly too ling since I replied here... May 26 2010, 12:48 PM SubRosa Ahh, the ever adorable Rales. :) Good to see him (... May 26 2010, 04:44 PM Destri Melarg
I am 100% with Rales on this, some images are bes... May 26 2010, 05:17 PM mALX A turkey shoot with cliffracers!!!... May 26 2010, 05:59 PM haute ecole rider This made me smile:
Glad to see an update of Rale... May 26 2010, 06:13 PM Acadian This short story was stuffed with names that are f... May 26 2010, 08:10 PM Remko Thanks for the kind words everyone :)
PC isn... May 27 2010, 11:20 AM Olen
A couple of suggestions:
AbiWord is very much lik... May 27 2010, 01:00 PM Remko Thanks Olen! Will have a look at that tonight ... May 27 2010, 03:11 PM Zalphon Wow, Rales. You've changed so much over the t... May 31 2010, 10:19 PM Remko An update. (yes really hehe) Let me know what you ... Jun 1 2010, 05:41 PM mALX Oooh! You really stepped it up in this one... Jun 1 2010, 05:59 PM haute ecole rider Now this is new to me! Are we now up to new st... Jun 1 2010, 06:10 PM Remko The wandering around in the Grazelands was a doubl... Jun 1 2010, 06:26 PM SubRosa Yay! Rales returns!
Things are pushing on... Jun 1 2010, 09:20 PM
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