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SubRosa
post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
haute ecole rider   Loved the description of the cohort on the road. Y...   May 4 2010, 05:46 PM
Remko   Very nice! The description of the army was gre...   May 4 2010, 06:17 PM
treydog   "She had never been there before. That seemed...   May 4 2010, 10:47 PM
Olen   Good update. I loved the description of the legio...   May 5 2010, 12:18 PM
Acadian   Caught up again. The fight in Vilverin was rivett...   May 5 2010, 07:26 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.r. :) Once more P...   May 6 2010, 06:40 PM
Olen   Lovely description of the land, it really came ali...   May 6 2010, 07:36 PM
haute ecole rider   Beautiful description of the land. I especially lo...   May 6 2010, 09:02 PM
Winter Wolf   Now this was my sort of chapter. Vivid description...   May 7 2010, 08:01 AM
D.Foxy   Why am I so lucky? Many of the writers I love are ...   May 7 2010, 11:58 AM
Destri Melarg   Okay, I have finally caught back up with the TF. ...   May 8 2010, 10:08 PM
SubRosa   Olen: Thank you. I was inspired to use the potato ...   May 8 2010, 11:15 PM
Olen   Excellent as ever, a refreshing view on what a wit...   May 9 2010, 12:04 AM
ureniashtram   I finally caught up with this. And I must say, you...   May 9 2010, 12:20 AM
Winter Wolf   I sense a real opening up of your personality with...   May 9 2010, 01:55 AM
D.Foxy   *sings* If you knew Tsume...like I knew Tsu-u-u-m...   May 9 2010, 02:07 AM
ureniashtram   I never thought D.Foxy could sing! Anyway abou...   May 9 2010, 03:01 AM
haute ecole rider   wonderful chapter about meeting the so-called witc...   May 9 2010, 05:06 AM
minque   ohh so many chapters to read! I must say your ...   May 9 2010, 11:21 PM
Destri Melarg   I believe so; it went right along with the ‘Mich...   May 10 2010, 09:58 AM
SubRosa   Olen: Thank you Olen. It is not just Witchcraft I ...   May 10 2010, 05:31 PM
Remko   Nice! some things were really familiar. Don...   May 10 2010, 05:45 PM
haute ecole rider   Well done! I loved the history lesson there...   May 10 2010, 06:02 PM
Destri Melarg   Nice! some things were really familiar. Don...   May 11 2010, 08:36 AM
D.Foxy   If that is what you did to Destri, I pray you may ...   May 11 2010, 11:57 AM
Olen   I second Destri's comments on Morcant. She...   May 11 2010, 04:58 PM
Remko   Yeah, I liked that too. The fragility of the Alemb...   May 12 2010, 10:33 AM
SubRosa   Remko: Looks like h.e.r. and Destri covered all th...   May 12 2010, 05:04 PM
D.Foxy   Ewww!!! I had better not annoy you, th...   May 12 2010, 05:11 PM
haute ecole rider   Ahh, another wonderful post, with beautiful countr...   May 12 2010, 06:21 PM
Olen   Good update and more rounding of Morcant, she...   May 12 2010, 06:32 PM
Destri Melarg   Once again you amaze me with the way that you can ...   May 12 2010, 06:41 PM
Acadian   I just read 8b,c,d,e. This is very, very rich and...   May 13 2010, 12:30 AM
Remko   Oh, it was awesome if the witch turns out to be re...   May 14 2010, 11:46 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: I use aloe every day on my face, after I w...   May 14 2010, 06:01 PM
haute ecole rider   What a beautiful scene between Attius and Morcant...   May 14 2010, 06:19 PM
Remko   That was heartbreakingly wonderful. :wacko: I fe...   May 14 2010, 07:41 PM
Olen   Morcant continues to become a more intreguing char...   May 15 2010, 12:08 AM
Destri Melarg   This is an excellent example of ‘playing the sub...   May 15 2010, 12:39 AM
D.Foxy   Beauty sings in every line. Once again, Kudos.   May 15 2010, 02:40 AM
minque   Rosie! Pure beauty in this....I'm kinda sp...   May 15 2010, 10:23 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: That is pretty much an obligato...   May 16 2010, 09:16 PM
haute ecole rider   And so we come to the end of the Third Era. This ...   May 16 2010, 11:07 PM
Jacki Dice   Nice use of the tarot cards! It's a great ...   May 17 2010, 01:08 AM
Olen   Agreed, it's an interesting technique telling ...   May 17 2010, 09:25 AM
Remko   I really liked the laying of cards. Very well writ...   May 17 2010, 10:39 AM
Destri Melarg   I think that this chapter could have served as a t...   May 18 2010, 01:30 AM
Acadian   8f - Wonderfully poignant interaction between Morc...   May 19 2010, 05:39 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Yep, tons of foreshadowing. I h...   May 19 2010, 05:41 PM
haute ecole rider   Yup, that armor was def designed by a man. Oh well...   May 19 2010, 09:19 PM
Remko   I love how you bring NPC's to life :) For a mo...   May 20 2010, 10:40 AM
Destri Melarg   I find it interesting that, in her exasperation, T...   May 20 2010, 10:02 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.r. At least it is...   May 21 2010, 04:36 PM
haute ecole rider   I loved your description of Cheydinhal. It is one ...   May 21 2010, 05:32 PM
Destri Melarg   I agree with haute. One of the things I like most...   May 21 2010, 07:11 PM
minque   ohhhh.....I read the last three chapters with grea...   May 21 2010, 09:49 PM
Olen   I've caught up now and, as ever, I'm lovin...   May 23 2010, 04:13 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.r. I like the loo...   May 23 2010, 06:56 PM
haute ecole rider   Ah, I remember Ancondil! And did you change B...   May 24 2010, 12:30 AM
D.Foxy   minque: Thank you minque. I am afraid what Foxy mi...   May 24 2010, 06:26 AM
haute ecole rider   minque: Thank you minque. I am afraid what Foxy m...   May 24 2010, 05:10 PM
Destri Melarg   Looking at the glowing crystals in the display ca...   May 25 2010, 06:21 AM
Olen   I liked the development of Chedynhal. I agree wit...   May 25 2010, 01:10 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: One of the fun things about ree...   May 25 2010, 04:22 PM
D.Foxy   Teresa made her way back to her room and returned ...   May 25 2010, 04:28 PM
haute ecole rider   Poor Teresa! It never crossed my mind that Ro...   May 25 2010, 05:17 PM
D.Foxy   Great minds think lewdly alike. :D   May 25 2010, 05:23 PM
haute ecole rider   As always! :hubbahubba: BD   May 25 2010, 05:26 PM
Olen   I'm sure I had something to say about the part...   May 25 2010, 10:54 PM
Verlox   Good stuff, Subrosa.   May 26 2010, 12:30 AM
Remko   Ah, one of my favourite NPC's has made his app...   May 26 2010, 12:25 PM
Destri Melarg   Back to the mortar and pestle! I don’t think i...   May 26 2010, 05:21 PM
Acadian   Caught up with 8h, 9a, 9b, 9c. What a pleasure yo...   May 26 2010, 07:10 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: oi! haute ecole rider: So far as I kn...   May 27 2010, 04:50 PM
haute ecole rider   Yay for the Pony Express! Wonderful touch on ...   May 27 2010, 05:21 PM
Destri Melarg   At last we come to the dispatch chapter! I hav...   May 28 2010, 09:06 AM
Olen   That it was and that it did. I agree with Destri...   May 28 2010, 10:27 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I guess my having watched The Y...   May 29 2010, 05:12 PM
D.Foxy   Whoa! :blink: Teresa pet the horse...and the...   May 29 2010, 05:32 PM
haute ecole rider   wonderful description of the ferry's mechanics...   May 29 2010, 07:24 PM
Destri Melarg   A number of things stood out to me in this chapter...   May 30 2010, 10:54 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: It is another one of her visions, only thi...   May 31 2010, 04:58 AM
D.Foxy   With a WOO and a HOO and HELL and a YEAH We now al...   May 31 2010, 06:58 AM
Remko   True; his brother is the funny one. "Ooh, I a...   May 31 2010, 10:57 AM
haute ecole rider   Oh , I did notice the Black Beauty homage! It ...   May 31 2010, 02:21 PM
Acadian   Teresa's world is very big! The need for ...   Jun 2 2010, 03:26 PM
SubRosa   Oops, don't mind me, I was just testing what s...   Jun 2 2010, 03:36 PM
D.Foxy   But, my dear, I SWEAR I don't see any bad word...   Jun 2 2010, 03:58 PM
Olen   Great chapter, you really developed the world in c...   Jun 2 2010, 05:43 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: I added some swear words! :D Remko...   Jun 2 2010, 08:46 PM
haute ecole rider   Great setup! Just awesome! I think you...   Jun 2 2010, 09:03 PM
Destri Melarg   Using Teresa’s dream flight to get a panoramic vie...   Jun 3 2010, 12:22 AM
haute ecole rider   It's modified for minimal tissue trauma. Not t...   Jun 3 2010, 12:58 AM
SubRosa   It's modified for minimal tissue trauma. Not ...   Jun 3 2010, 02:11 AM
haute ecole rider   Well, not exactly rabid. More like soprano Twilig...   Jun 3 2010, 02:43 AM
D.Foxy   Rosa, congratulations. I suspect you have taken t...   Jun 3 2010, 02:43 AM
Olen   I second the comments on how well the 'eagle e...   Jun 3 2010, 05:34 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you haute. An epic feel i...   Jun 4 2010, 06:32 PM
haute ecole rider   Nice shift from the panorama of the battlefield to...   Jun 4 2010, 07:43 PM
Verlox   To think some of these characters could die pretty...   Jun 4 2010, 08:51 PM
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