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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Captain Hammer   Great chapter. I really appreciated the way you ha...   Feb 19 2011, 04:36 AM
Thomas Kaira   Kudos to Hammer for getting the 1000th post! :...   Feb 19 2011, 05:16 AM
SubRosa   mALX: Pappy is always fun to write. These chapters...   Feb 20 2011, 06:27 PM
haute ecole rider   On the subject of eggs - hens don't need a roo...   Feb 20 2011, 07:38 PM
Grits   She had to wait until the men had taken their turn...   Feb 20 2011, 08:49 PM
ghastley   Vanilla, chamomile, apricots? You've written a...   Feb 20 2011, 11:35 PM
Olen   I was more thinking the blokes would bathe first b...   Feb 21 2011, 12:46 AM
Thomas Kaira   A wonderfully relaxing episode after the intense, ...   Feb 21 2011, 02:04 AM
Acadian   Another lovely segment in the 'day in the life...   Feb 21 2011, 02:16 AM
SubRosa   hen ecole rider: I forgot that about hens! Tha...   Feb 22 2011, 05:39 PM
haute ecole rider   Luuurved the description of the food! And yes,...   Feb 22 2011, 06:51 PM
Thomas Kaira   Rat and wild rice? Can't say I've tried th...   Feb 22 2011, 10:05 PM
Olen   Hmmm the food sounded good. It seems Pappy is qui...   Feb 23 2011, 01:39 AM
Acadian   What a fabulous day in the life this continues to ...   Feb 23 2011, 03:03 AM
Captain Hammer   Excellent pair of chapters for the "Day in th...   Feb 23 2011, 03:14 AM
Jacki Dice   That's a beautiful description ♥ I e...   Feb 23 2011, 04:12 AM
Grits   I enjoyed the screenshots, Tadrose is especially l...   Feb 23 2011, 06:03 PM
mALX   The awkwardness of trying to get to know someone y...   Feb 24 2011, 04:31 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Eventually Teresa will get to t...   Feb 24 2011, 05:53 PM
Olen   Good part, I enjoyed Teresa's awkwardness at b...   Feb 24 2011, 07:27 PM
haute ecole rider   Another great chapter, and a nice recap of Teresa...   Feb 24 2011, 08:50 PM
ghastley   The fact that they're serving wine and not th...   Feb 25 2011, 09:36 PM
Grits   Yay, Vincent!! :) Does this taste funn...   Feb 24 2011, 10:32 PM
Acadian   I'm so pleased that this dinner covered more t...   Feb 25 2011, 01:57 AM
Zalphon   I loved the 'it brought a chorus of laughter...   Feb 25 2011, 02:38 AM
Captain Hammer   Spoken like a true fighter. Maybe not an ethicis...   Feb 25 2011, 05:27 AM
mALX   First, I have to add that screenie of Teresa to my...   Feb 25 2011, 09:16 AM
SubRosa   Olen: Tadrose does seem to be pleased with the kno...   Feb 26 2011, 07:10 PM
haute ecole rider   And Vols is baaaaack! As baaaad as evah! ...   Feb 26 2011, 08:21 PM
Olen   I'm liking this, Vols is a great character. V...   Feb 26 2011, 08:49 PM
ghastley   Let's get the nits out of the way first: Now o...   Feb 26 2011, 09:47 PM
Grits   Yaaaaaaay, Vols! The small statue of Akatosh w...   Feb 26 2011, 11:07 PM
Acadian   Yay, Vols!!! I'm with Rider. Whe...   Feb 27 2011, 02:28 AM
Thomas Kaira   A very heartwarming moment between Vols and Brekke...   Feb 27 2011, 03:12 AM
mALX   I love this chapter - Vols trying to redeem his pa...   Feb 27 2011, 06:41 AM
Jacki Dice   Awww Brekke! I love seeing her again. Good thi...   Feb 28 2011, 04:54 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I don't know that he's ...   Feb 28 2011, 06:52 PM
haute ecole rider   That. Right. There. Is. My. Dad. When I told hi...   Feb 28 2011, 08:20 PM
Olen   Excellent part, it was really fun to read. Giving...   Feb 28 2011, 10:52 PM
ghastley   Olen has a point about the reading, but I imagine ...   Mar 1 2011, 01:31 AM
mALX   I need to come back and read this when the house i...   Mar 1 2011, 02:23 AM
Thomas Kaira   Sometimes I feel the same way. Our pup Sunshine se...   Mar 1 2011, 02:27 AM
Acadian   Lovely! Vols, Calindil and little Brekke all ...   Mar 1 2011, 02:44 AM
Grits   I love all the magical glowing things in Mystic Em...   Mar 1 2011, 03:28 AM
Thomas Kaira   Another heart-warming segue into Brekke's life...   Mar 1 2011, 09:18 PM
mALX   I love these lines, what a great way to explain...   Mar 1 2011, 09:33 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Yep, whenever I read that last ...   Mar 2 2011, 08:48 PM
Jacki Dice   "I think they are wonderful Julia," Te...   Mar 3 2011, 06:51 AM
haute ecole rider   Yay, new stuff! Not that it wasn't fun se...   Mar 2 2011, 09:20 PM
ghastley   Well, I managed to find a missing word in the firs...   Mar 2 2011, 09:29 PM
Acadian   I really did a double take to make sure I was read...   Mar 3 2011, 02:51 AM
Thomas Kaira   Delightful dinner. Nothing wrong with crab and fri...   Mar 3 2011, 03:11 AM
Grits   I think I hid the answer properly --> Pride ...   Mar 3 2011, 03:59 AM
Olen   Hmmm, sounds tasty. I also noticed that you'v...   Mar 3 2011, 07:59 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Maybe the soju comes from what ...   Mar 4 2011, 10:57 PM
haute ecole rider   Talk about coming full circle! Now we go way b...   Mar 5 2011, 12:36 AM
Acadian   I agree with Rider about the full circle! ...   Mar 5 2011, 04:21 AM
ghastley   You've certainly opened a lot of new ways for ...   Mar 6 2011, 03:42 AM
Winter Wolf   I finally made it! Hopeless I am :sleep: Ver...   Mar 6 2011, 04:22 AM
Olen   Well that was quite a part. The first bit with he...   Mar 6 2011, 11:30 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Ever since I wrote The Witch of...   Mar 6 2011, 05:44 PM
haute ecole rider   Loved the boat ride up the Upper Niben toward the ...   Mar 6 2011, 06:32 PM
ghastley   I like how you make the whole place seem so much b...   Mar 6 2011, 07:03 PM
Thomas Kaira   O' Destri, where art thou? I've seen you l...   Mar 6 2011, 11:48 PM
Acadian   Thank you for lavishing quite a bit of attention t...   Mar 7 2011, 02:35 AM
Grits   In 31.2 I loved the cozy scene in the common area....   Mar 8 2011, 01:09 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: That sprit rigged sail is hard ...   Mar 8 2011, 05:39 PM
haute ecole rider   What a wonderful description of the arrival at the...   Mar 8 2011, 07:12 PM
Thomas Kaira   The mood of the last two chapters combined with th...   Mar 8 2011, 09:51 PM
Grits   I love the vast scale of Teresa’s Imperial City. I...   Mar 9 2011, 12:13 AM
Acadian   This was very immersive and a pleasure to read. ...   Mar 9 2011, 01:20 AM
ghastley   Again the world is a larger place. It's nice t...   Mar 9 2011, 03:04 AM
Olen   Good parts (they're certainly coming quickly j...   Mar 9 2011, 08:02 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: For a long time I have wanted t...   Mar 10 2011, 05:47 PM
haute ecole rider   I thoroughly enjoyed Teresa's 'homecoming...   Mar 10 2011, 09:48 PM
Acadian   Plenty to like here. Chance is quite the charm...   Mar 11 2011, 02:58 AM
Thomas Kaira   Jensine at her finest! A very humble Nord she ...   Mar 11 2011, 04:35 AM
Winter Wolf   I loved the trip up the Niben and back to the maje...   Mar 12 2011, 02:47 AM
Grits   "Hrmph," Simplicia breathed, clearly not...   Mar 12 2011, 12:10 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Yep, the only thing Teresa is n...   Mar 12 2011, 07:14 PM
Rihanae   I love reading about Teresa and her adventures. I ...   Mar 12 2011, 07:37 PM
haute ecole rider   Now why did I picture Simplicia and Vols when you ...   Mar 12 2011, 08:46 PM
Acadian   WooHoo! A bag of holding! Let's go s...   Mar 13 2011, 03:39 AM
TheOtherRick   As is the case with a few other stories that have ...   Mar 14 2011, 04:04 AM
Destri Melarg   I have to go all the way back to Chapter 25.2 (pg....   Mar 14 2011, 08:49 AM
SubRosa   Rihanae: Hi Rihane and Lissa! Welcome to the T...   Mar 14 2011, 04:33 PM
haute ecole rider   I really loved this segment - the return to Vilver...   Mar 14 2011, 05:10 PM
Thomas Kaira   Chapter 31.6: Old habits really do die hard, don...   Mar 14 2011, 09:20 PM
Grits   "Well, I don't forget who my friends are,...   Mar 15 2011, 01:22 AM
Acadian   The glimpse into the IC guild hall was a fine affi...   Mar 15 2011, 02:28 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: That is my swashbuckling blackg...   Mar 16 2011, 03:07 PM
haute ecole rider   Once again you enchant us with beautiful descripti...   Mar 16 2011, 03:23 PM
Thomas Kaira   How fun, an adventure! Teresa gets to explore ...   Mar 17 2011, 12:25 AM
Acadian   Hauntingly ominous! The approach to Culotte ...   Mar 17 2011, 12:45 AM
Grits   Yet she could just not shake the feeling that she ...   Mar 17 2011, 02:45 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Score one for the buddy system ...   Mar 18 2011, 04:18 PM
haute ecole rider   An excellent summation of how the buddy system wor...   Mar 18 2011, 04:49 PM
Grits   I love that the zombies are easily recognizable as...   Mar 18 2011, 06:40 PM
Thomas Kaira   How fun! We're fighting zombies of former ...   Mar 19 2011, 12:18 AM
Acadian   'she re-corked the bottle and tucked it into h...   Mar 19 2011, 01:36 AM
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