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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Destri Melarg   Okay, here we go: Beginning with Chapter 25.2, Te...   Mar 20 2011, 10:05 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I wish I could get the companio...   Mar 20 2011, 05:34 PM
Olen   Wooo, lots of parts. And all brilliant. Sorry fo...   Mar 20 2011, 07:15 PM
haute ecole rider   Cue the Raiders of the Lost Ark march! And t...   Mar 21 2011, 12:25 AM
Acadian   This was fabulously heart-pounding! Another...   Mar 21 2011, 01:00 AM
Winter Wolf   Mmm, dungeon diving in Culotte. It has literally b...   Mar 21 2011, 05:52 AM
ghastley   Looks like Chance is starting to come out of his f...   Mar 21 2011, 02:55 PM
Grits   I love this episode!! Waiting with Teresa ...   Mar 22 2011, 01:35 AM
Thomas Kaira   Action! Lots of fun action here! And anot...   Mar 22 2011, 02:23 AM
SubRosa   Olen: Thank goodness you escaped the greedy jaws o...   Mar 22 2011, 06:42 PM
haute ecole rider   Back in Bravil already? Just as well. I'm not...   Mar 22 2011, 06:54 PM
Olen   I might follow that quote into the tub. 10/10 for...   Mar 22 2011, 07:45 PM
ghastley   The practical difference between the use of a Reto...   Mar 22 2011, 09:19 PM
Thomas Kaira   Tadrose takes no whipper-snapping from Vincent...   Mar 22 2011, 11:20 PM
Acadian   This was a delightful time at the guild! Som...   Mar 23 2011, 01:50 AM
Destri Melarg   First thing’s first: Of course I don...   Mar 24 2011, 08:52 AM
Grits   Love the P&P discussion between T&T. Vince...   Mar 24 2011, 02:35 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole kitty: I figure Teresa for being a slo...   Mar 24 2011, 04:59 PM
mALX   GAAAAAK! ... never ... eat ... corn ... again...   Mar 24 2011, 05:38 PM
D.Foxy   Obviously, my dear MalX, you have not heard about ...   Mar 24 2011, 07:04 PM
mALX   Obviously, my dear MalX, you have not heard about...   Mar 24 2011, 07:12 PM
ghastley   Obviously, my dear MalX, you have not heard about...   Mar 24 2011, 09:44 PM
haute ecole rider   @mALX: I believe those wings are limited to men on...   Mar 24 2011, 07:32 PM
mALX   GAAAAH! Foxy, get your clipboard out ... time...   Mar 24 2011, 07:39 PM
Olen   A good description of using multiple crops to get ...   Mar 25 2011, 12:34 AM
Acadian   Old business. On the alchemy stuff, I'll take...   Mar 25 2011, 02:40 AM
Thomas Kaira   Now there's an image I will be taking to my gr...   Mar 25 2011, 04:01 AM
Destri Melarg   I, for one, am glad that you found a way to give O...   Mar 25 2011, 08:42 AM
mALX   And Egyptian Pharaohs supposedly became divine b...   Mar 25 2011, 08:50 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: I love my Red Wings. They beat the Leafs t...   Mar 26 2011, 06:29 PM
Olen   A well written part. You managed to make the ritu...   Mar 26 2011, 07:42 PM
Acadian   I quite simply loved this! I found it both na...   Mar 27 2011, 12:41 AM
mALX   Oh, I believe the female face is the force that ...   Mar 27 2011, 02:25 AM
Thomas Kaira   Drusilla? Being a fan of Jean Auel books myself ...   Mar 27 2011, 03:55 AM
SubRosa   Olen: You hit the nail right on the head concernin...   Mar 28 2011, 04:22 PM
mALX   Below is from the last episode, I meant to quote i...   Mar 28 2011, 04:51 PM
Olen   I agree with mALX, that screenie is brilliant. I ...   Mar 28 2011, 05:42 PM
haute ecole rider   What will Teresa do next? I know what I would do...   Mar 28 2011, 07:19 PM
Destri Melarg   I missed two chapters this weekend? Chapter 33.3 ...   Mar 28 2011, 08:56 PM
ghastley   ...I’m curious, is Mara the only deity with a liv...   Mar 28 2011, 09:55 PM
Acadian   'Teresa wished she could be so cheerful, but t...   Mar 29 2011, 02:00 AM
Thomas Kaira   Oh noes! By the looks of that bear, the Ancien...   Mar 29 2011, 02:20 AM
Grits   From 33.2, I love your lush depiction of Olava. It...   Mar 29 2011, 06:18 PM
SubRosa   mALX: That screenshot was not very difficult. I ju...   Mar 30 2011, 05:05 PM
Destri Melarg   I did want the she there. But if noon does stem f...   Mar 30 2011, 07:33 PM
haute ecole rider   It's very appropriate that Bear come to Teresa...   Mar 30 2011, 09:24 PM
Acadian   This was powerful, poignant and spiritual all at t...   Mar 31 2011, 01:32 AM
Thomas Kaira   This harkens to the search for a certain White Gua...   Mar 31 2011, 01:47 AM
SubRosa   Destri Melarg: Could Teresa someday be part of Aes...   Apr 1 2011, 04:48 PM
haute ecole rider   And quite the enjoyable interlude this has been...   Apr 1 2011, 06:52 PM
Olen   A good couple of sections. The new spirit guide i...   Apr 1 2011, 07:21 PM
Acadian   I love how Teresa is embracing her wood elfness...   Apr 2 2011, 01:57 AM
mALX   As powerful as the scene was in the last chapter w...   Apr 2 2011, 11:11 AM
Ceidwad   I am late to the party, but also have to congratul...   Apr 2 2011, 06:00 PM
Thomas Kaira   So Teresa wishes to wander the sands of Elsweyr fo...   Apr 2 2011, 10:47 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: It is a bit dense to read, but ...   Apr 4 2011, 04:50 PM
mALX   My heart will be in my throat with nerves (RE: h...   Apr 4 2011, 05:09 PM
haute ecole rider   Absolutely! It pretty much goes without sayin...   Apr 4 2011, 07:11 PM
SubRosa   The description of his evening wear was enticing ...   Apr 4 2011, 11:18 PM
Grits   This could be the “I ♥ Pappy” episode! ...   Apr 4 2011, 07:38 PM
ghastley   You're playing with mods, aren't you? I ...   Apr 4 2011, 09:53 PM
Acadian   'Now it seemed as if all those city dwellers h...   Apr 5 2011, 01:52 AM
Lady Syl   Ooh, I like your prologue to Teresa's story......   Apr 5 2011, 05:55 PM
Olen   The TF gets richer. 20,000 people is a sale I wou...   Apr 5 2011, 10:48 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 34.1 It is fitting that, after the profou...   Apr 6 2011, 02:10 AM
mALX   [b]Chapter 34.1 Oh, and did you mean Clingman’s ...   Apr 6 2011, 02:38 AM
King Coin   ... Teresa was taking a shortcut through the alle...   Apr 6 2011, 07:23 AM
SubRosa   mALX: Well, Teresa did not work up the nerve yet...   Apr 7 2011, 04:09 PM
Olen   I'd say Tadrose is interested. Seems to me th...   Apr 7 2011, 06:57 PM
Destri Melarg   I agree with Olen, the mystery surrounding Tadrose...   Apr 7 2011, 08:59 PM
haute ecole rider   You know, I had completely forgotten about the tim...   Apr 7 2011, 09:52 PM
mALX   I'm not able to view the first two screens, bu...   Apr 7 2011, 10:38 PM
Acadian   Simply beautiful! I love the feel you gave ...   Apr 8 2011, 01:39 AM
Thomas Kaira   What a very tender moment between Teresa and Tadro...   Apr 8 2011, 02:41 AM
D.Foxy   Most will defenitely need binoculars - or the...   Apr 8 2011, 02:48 AM
Lady Syl   Chapter 2a. Excellently written. I especially like...   Apr 8 2011, 05:20 PM
SubRosa   Olen: The Mysterious Tadrose Helas™ does seem inte...   Apr 10 2011, 05:58 PM
haute ecole rider   So Parwen has a recurve composite bow? I've be...   Apr 10 2011, 09:04 PM
Thomas Kaira   A newcomer! And a most intriguing one at that....   Apr 11 2011, 12:37 AM
Acadian   Once again, Teresa displays her value as the guild...   Apr 11 2011, 01:23 AM
mALX   Thank you for the trouble you went through so I co...   Apr 11 2011, 03:57 AM
Ceidwad   Some nice descriptive touches here. I enjoyed the ...   Apr 11 2011, 11:45 PM
Olen   Finely crafted as ever. Parawen is exactly the ch...   Apr 11 2011, 11:46 PM
Grits   From 34.3: I love the way Tadrose handles Teresa...   Apr 12 2011, 02:45 PM
ghastley   I'm staying out of this, because if Gudrun not...   Apr 12 2011, 06:38 PM
Lady Syl   Chapter 2b--I like that you added some of your own...   Apr 12 2011, 08:59 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I have decided to make all the ...   Apr 13 2011, 04:30 PM
Olen   That's just not fair, you promise shopping the...   Apr 13 2011, 05:09 PM
haute ecole rider   Maybe that's what Julian should have done...   Apr 13 2011, 05:30 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 34.4 Parwin indeed makes Valenwood sound ...   Apr 13 2011, 06:34 PM
mALX   You did a wonderful job on Fathis, and an amazing ...   Apr 14 2011, 02:02 AM
Thomas Kaira   They have said it before, so I will say it again. ...   Apr 14 2011, 02:16 AM
Acadian   What a wonderful job of capturing the renaissance ...   Apr 14 2011, 03:19 AM
Ceidwad   A very colourful description of the Tournament of ...   Apr 14 2011, 12:26 PM
Grits   It’s a good thing Parwen dragged Teresa into the d...   Apr 14 2011, 07:42 PM
King Coin   9a - 10e I really enjoyed these chapters. It was ...   Apr 16 2011, 03:59 PM
SubRosa   Olen: Teresa would indeed sooner fight Dread Zombi...   Apr 16 2011, 06:24 PM
haute ecole rider   First impressions count. Or do they? I see that y...   Apr 16 2011, 06:41 PM
mALX   * GAAAH! I didn't see a mod to make the ...   Apr 16 2011, 09:00 PM
Acadian   What a fabulous job you do with the speech and man...   Apr 16 2011, 10:14 PM
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