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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Olen   Good part. I agree with mALX that while not that ...   May 17 2011, 11:00 PM
ghastley   I wonder if Lady Scaurus remembers that nice Lars ...   May 18 2011, 12:07 AM
Acadian   ' Teresa opened her mouth to reply, then shut ...   May 18 2011, 02:35 AM
Grits   'Teresa of the corpse-white skin' This had...   May 18 2011, 11:54 PM
King Coin   21.1 Ah I'm happy Simplicia continued talking...   May 20 2011, 01:31 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: You just touched on one of the ...   May 20 2011, 05:13 PM
mALX   Love that screen on Teresa, her hair is beautiful...   May 20 2011, 05:47 PM
haute ecole rider   Way to go Teresa! Apologizing to Vincent and ...   May 20 2011, 07:46 PM
Captain Hammer   Ah, the curse upon all mankind. And by that, I mea...   May 20 2011, 09:15 PM
Olen   Perfect timing... still I rather suspect Tadrose ...   May 20 2011, 09:55 PM
haute ecole rider   I doubt it'd be that quick, they normally t...   May 20 2011, 09:58 PM
Thomas Kaira   What good fun we had today! I agree with mALX,...   May 20 2011, 11:33 PM
Acadian   How fun was this?!? Well for us readers anywa...   May 21 2011, 01:13 AM
King Coin   24.1 Yes! The Faregyl Inn! I think it...   May 22 2011, 05:06 AM
mALX   GAAAAH! Vincent should have punched her in th...   May 22 2011, 05:47 AM
minque   Lovely Teresa! So many wonderful words to read...   May 22 2011, 10:26 PM
Grits   Yikes, it seems that Vincent can’t take a joke, bu...   May 23 2011, 04:52 PM
SubRosa   mALX: Teresa was hoping for the rest too! Well...   May 23 2011, 04:59 PM
mALX   What magic you wove into this scene as Teresa ente...   May 23 2011, 05:14 PM
haute ecole rider   I love the haughty Lady Scaurus! Class all the...   May 23 2011, 05:36 PM
Grits   Oh my goodness, Teresa is in the thick of it now. ...   May 23 2011, 05:47 PM
Olen   An excellent part. I enjoyed everyting about it, ...   May 23 2011, 06:03 PM
Acadian   Gosh, I was smiling the whole way through this...   May 24 2011, 01:17 AM
Jacki Dice   All caught up once more! ♥ From what I...   May 24 2011, 05:47 AM
Captain Hammer   So Lady Scaurus has known Nerussa, in the biblical...   May 24 2011, 06:17 AM
SubRosa   mALX: Nerussa does get around, eyebrows or not. ;...   May 26 2011, 05:42 PM
haute ecole rider   Uhh, two stud muffins under one roof? I'm not ...   May 26 2011, 07:25 PM
mALX   My son is drumming in my ear, and it is thundering...   May 26 2011, 07:35 PM
Olen   Giving her the history with Valerius certainly pai...   May 26 2011, 10:20 PM
Jacki Dice   Before she knew it, his lips had pressed against h...   May 26 2011, 10:25 PM
Acadian   'She now had the distinct impression that the ...   May 27 2011, 01:49 AM
mALX   This chapter is an awesome display of the range yo...   May 27 2011, 03:20 AM
King Coin   25.1 This is a pleasant turn of events! Simpl...   May 27 2011, 07:57 AM
Thomas Kaira   What a great ball Teresa has found. It is really g...   May 27 2011, 08:24 AM
Rihanae   I love this chapter! I thought it was very ro...   May 27 2011, 03:34 PM
Captain Hammer   So Teresa's first knight wants to join the Bra...   May 28 2011, 02:36 AM
Grits   I enjoyed Teresa’s thoughts very much in this epis...   May 28 2011, 01:43 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I am thinking you meant Valeriu...   May 29 2011, 04:42 PM
Olen   A good way to show snippets of her past, very well...   May 29 2011, 05:36 PM
haute ecole rider   In response to your comment: The first Vincent (t...   May 29 2011, 06:05 PM
Grits   It will be a privilege to watch Teresa take this j...   May 29 2011, 06:39 PM
mALX   The shadow over Simplicia being her true mother (i...   May 29 2011, 06:50 PM
Acadian   What a neat journey! Teresa's keen inte...   May 30 2011, 01:46 AM
Burnt Sierra   So, after Julian and Maxical, this was the next st...   May 30 2011, 09:33 AM
Lady Syl   Chapter 5 review Teresa's dream was most int...   May 30 2011, 03:17 PM
King Coin   26.1 A very leisurely walk along a river. I reall...   May 31 2011, 05:35 AM
Lady Syl   Chapter 6 It is with this chapter that we can re...   Jun 1 2011, 05:27 PM
hazmick   Greetings Rosa! I have spent what I can only d...   Jun 2 2011, 04:33 PM
Ceidwad   A beautiful episode which captures the sweetness a...   Jun 2 2011, 09:48 PM
SubRosa   Olen: I have about eight scenes planned out of Ter...   Jun 2 2011, 11:15 PM
Rihanae   Great chapter, once again! Teresa sits anxiou...   Jun 2 2011, 11:25 PM
Grits   Standing next to her was Lum gro-Baroth, still wit...   Jun 2 2011, 11:51 PM
Olen   You certainly have a way with words. That was abso...   Jun 2 2011, 11:54 PM
Acadian   By Mara this was good! What a delightful port...   Jun 3 2011, 01:30 AM
haute ecole rider   This chapter is most delightful. Even though we kn...   Jun 3 2011, 01:35 AM
Ceidwad   Teresa's heart pounded in her chest like a cha...   Jun 3 2011, 01:58 AM
hazmick   You've really brought this tournament alive an...   Jun 3 2011, 11:50 AM
Jacki Dice   I loved your latest chapters but 34.20 was my favo...   Jun 4 2011, 07:41 AM
mALX   I wondered if Teresa realized subconsciously that ...   Jun 5 2011, 09:12 PM
King Coin   27.1 I Teresa really misread Pappy. He's not ...   Jun 6 2011, 04:45 AM
SubRosa   Rihanae: Thank you. This first segment of the fina...   Jun 6 2011, 04:34 PM
mALX   I didn't mean that as a complaint and hope i...   Jun 6 2011, 05:39 PM
haute ecole rider   I've done enough hobby shooting with a BB rifl...   Jun 6 2011, 10:38 PM
hazmick   OH NO! Poor Teresa! She thought too hard f...   Jun 7 2011, 12:10 AM
Olen   I agree with Haute, I was holding my breath from t...   Jun 7 2011, 12:35 AM
Acadian   This was such a joy to read! It was wonderful...   Jun 7 2011, 01:02 AM
Grits   Too bad Methredhel was not here, Teresa thought, s...   Jun 7 2011, 02:49 PM
Lady Syl   Chapter 7a-7b As one chapter of her life closes, ...   Jun 7 2011, 04:45 PM
Doommeister   Subrosa... I have just finished reading the whole ...   Jun 9 2011, 06:52 PM
SubRosa   mALX: It is true that there are a number of things...   Jun 9 2011, 08:34 PM
Doommeister   "But that's not what I was going to say,...   Jun 9 2011, 10:32 PM
haute ecole rider   Aww Kurz went all gruff and brotherly on Teresa...   Jun 9 2011, 10:25 PM
King Coin   28.1 :blink: what the hell is Pappy doing in Tere...   Jun 10 2011, 05:26 AM
Jacki Dice   Thankfully one was not too far distant. [snip] Rev...   Jun 10 2011, 07:50 AM
Olen   Woo, another cross-overy thing. I suspect I'v...   Jun 10 2011, 01:29 PM
ghastley   Clearly Teresa needs to regard that ranged target ...   Jun 10 2011, 04:23 PM
Grits   Working alone behind the counter was a Bosmer with...   Jun 12 2011, 02:15 PM
hazmick   Comfort eating ftw! :D I hope Teresa listen...   Jun 13 2011, 12:23 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I was glad to finally show that...   Jun 13 2011, 04:39 PM
Ceidwad   Teresa needs to stop being so altruistic and enjoy...   Jun 13 2011, 06:40 PM
haute ecole rider   Now that's damn fine shootin'! This i...   Jun 14 2011, 02:12 AM
ghastley   This has been a good contest for the teachers. Bot...   Jun 14 2011, 03:06 PM
Grits   "We can still do it for ourselves," Tere...   Jun 14 2011, 08:30 PM
Olen   Good episode, she shot fairly well and though she ...   Jun 14 2011, 09:40 PM
Acadian   Forgive the tardiness caused by my travels. Gosh,...   Jun 15 2011, 11:19 PM
SubRosa   Ceidwad: Lum is definitely too sexy for his shirt...   Jun 16 2011, 04:28 PM
hazmick   "Well poisons yeah," Lum said, "b...   Jun 18 2011, 01:52 AM
Olen   Hmmm I'd thought the last night's celebrat...   Jun 16 2011, 10:38 PM
Acadian   A hearty congratulations on bringing the magnifice...   Jun 17 2011, 12:53 AM
Ceidwad   "The honor of the Fighters Guild was at stake...   Jun 17 2011, 01:42 AM
Rihanae   "Well poisons yeah," Lum said, "but...   Jun 18 2011, 12:28 PM
Grits   I loved the front porch chat with the gro-Baroth b...   Jun 18 2011, 01:58 PM
SubRosa   Olen: I did not want to post the same thing that w...   Jun 20 2011, 04:51 PM
Jacki Dice   "Let's get you out of these clothes, shal...   Jun 21 2011, 08:16 PM
haute ecole rider   Ahh, the warrior's dilemma! The good stuff...   Jun 20 2011, 06:08 PM
Ceidwad   Enchanted armour from Valenwood - exotic! Too ...   Jun 20 2011, 06:20 PM
hazmick   I am loving that leaf armor! It's always i...   Jun 20 2011, 11:08 PM
Acadian   It was great fun to see Teresa get excited about t...   Jun 21 2011, 01:19 AM
Olen   From the chapter title (and her declined invatatio...   Jun 21 2011, 05:56 PM
Grits   I like Val’s color so much better. In the game, I ...   Jun 22 2011, 12:52 AM
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