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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
ghastley   " collected more of Umbacano's statues. ...   Jun 22 2011, 08:23 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I think the glass armor is ugly...   Jun 23 2011, 04:23 PM
mALX   Sorry it took so long to get over here and read, t...   Jun 23 2011, 04:35 PM
haute ecole rider   And we have another wonderful snippet of Teresa...   Jun 23 2011, 09:07 PM
Acadian   'Granted, the City Guardsmen probably all knew...   Jun 24 2011, 01:34 AM
King Coin   I haven't had a chance to really sit down and ...   Jun 24 2011, 03:57 AM
hazmick   A brilliant chapter! Teresa battling with one ...   Jun 24 2011, 02:23 PM
Grits   Realizing that she is better off for not following...   Jun 24 2011, 07:17 PM
King Coin   Finished 29 29.5 Shock would have been better but...   Jun 24 2011, 07:59 PM
Ceidwad   Like all of the city's soldiers, he wore mail ...   Jun 24 2011, 11:09 PM
Olen   Like Acadian said for the words with Marius I foun...   Jun 25 2011, 02:00 PM
SubRosa   mALX: I did not make either of those armor mods. T...   Jun 27 2011, 05:55 PM
hazmick   Teresa's school of archery. How wonderful...   Jun 27 2011, 06:24 PM
Grits   I love the fortifications around the Maplemill com...   Jun 27 2011, 08:27 PM
Olen   Nice bit of worldbuilding there, and without even ...   Jun 28 2011, 12:39 AM
Acadian   What a lovely interlude. I could feel and almost ...   Jun 28 2011, 12:58 AM
haute ecole rider   What a lovely walk from Bravil! That is one of...   Jun 28 2011, 02:15 AM
ghastley   On the teaching question. It's often good to b...   Jun 28 2011, 02:25 PM
SubRosa   hazmick: Hopefully what Teresa finds will be a sur...   Jun 30 2011, 05:20 PM
haute ecole rider   For once, a pleasant encounter with one of those g...   Jun 30 2011, 05:49 PM
Grits   What an enchanting encounter among the trees. Afte...   Jun 30 2011, 06:09 PM
hazmick   *cough* Fangorn *cough* :D I loved this chapter...   Jun 30 2011, 06:15 PM
Glargg   And the whole story has been as enchanting as the ...   Jun 30 2011, 06:24 PM
Olen   A short part but a good one. Now we know why they...   Jun 30 2011, 08:18 PM
Acadian   Firstly, thanks for the hearty meal, courtesy of M...   Jul 1 2011, 01:43 AM
King Coin   30.1 Read the first word and was excited! Ano...   Jul 1 2011, 06:01 AM
Jacki Dice   Her stomach was filled by cornbread biscuits, frie...   Jul 2 2011, 04:20 AM
King Coin   31.1 Who is Teresa with now? Is she back in that ...   Jul 2 2011, 04:59 AM
mALX   I got goosebumps from the meeting with the sprigga...   Jul 2 2011, 04:36 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: The best thing about playing on...   Jul 4 2011, 07:08 PM
Doommeister   Ouch those spriggans were nasty, but how nice of t...   Jul 4 2011, 11:07 PM
Acadian   This was delicious! I could feel you building...   Jul 4 2011, 11:54 PM
haute ecole rider   I also noticed the same thing as DM, as well as t...   Jul 5 2011, 12:05 AM
ghastley   Just to pile on that nit. So were Maplemill and ...   Jul 5 2011, 12:40 AM
Grits   "I'm Teresa," she proclaimed, ...   Jul 5 2011, 02:06 AM
Olen   An interesting blend of wooo and sinister. I can...   Jul 5 2011, 08:37 PM
hazmick   Hooray! Nature-1 Bandits-0. Someone needs to d...   Jul 6 2011, 04:22 PM
Thomas Kaira   How much fun is that? A battle between Bandits and...   Jul 7 2011, 01:06 AM
King Coin   31.4 I wonder how Tadrose is going to turn out fo...   Jul 7 2011, 04:41 AM
SubRosa   Doommeister: Thank you finding my missing 'l...   Jul 7 2011, 04:55 PM
hazmick   nightshade tea Delicious! :D Teresa mak...   Jul 7 2011, 05:22 PM
haute ecole rider   What a wonderful chapter exploring a ruin I am com...   Jul 7 2011, 06:26 PM
ghastley   ... welkynd stones had on{c}e perched atop their ...   Jul 7 2011, 06:46 PM
Olen   Indeed I like how you've changed the setting a...   Jul 7 2011, 08:53 PM
Grits   She ought to know, having learned the hard way aft...   Jul 7 2011, 11:37 PM
Acadian   Wonderful how you turned this Arimer ruin into a l...   Jul 8 2011, 12:57 AM
mALX   Teresa's reaction to the skooma - and why ... ...   Jul 11 2011, 11:05 PM
Jacki Dice   His staw-colored hair hung down beyond his shoulde...   Jul 12 2011, 07:13 AM
Thomas Kaira   Good riddance to Teresa's decision. I wonder h...   Jul 13 2011, 09:49 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: I knew you would love the nightshade tea...   Jul 14 2011, 04:20 PM
haute ecole rider   What an enjoyable chapter! But first, let...   Jul 14 2011, 06:16 PM
Olen   There was some wonderful description in that piece...   Jul 14 2011, 06:20 PM
hazmick   Mudcrab invasion is not a good way to go. The ch...   Jul 14 2011, 09:30 PM
Acadian   How interesting! A wonderful description of A...   Jul 15 2011, 12:10 AM
mALX   SPEW! Teresa's inner thoughts - she nev...   Jul 17 2011, 02:30 PM
Grits   What an enthralling episode. Aela makes quite an e...   Jul 18 2011, 05:00 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Nits picked. Is any cat ordinar...   Jul 18 2011, 04:36 PM
haute ecole rider   I used the term cross dresser because I couldn...   Jul 18 2011, 07:17 PM
Olen   Aela is a truely interesting character, I didn...   Jul 18 2011, 08:54 PM
SubRosa   Normally I do not comment until posting the next s...   Jul 18 2011, 09:49 PM
mALX   Normally I do not comment until posting the next ...   Jul 18 2011, 10:25 PM
haute ecole rider   What she said. All correct. XXY mares behave like...   Jul 18 2011, 10:02 PM
Acadian   First off, I loved it! A wonderful and gentle...   Jul 19 2011, 12:04 AM
mALX   All joking aside, this is a wonderful chapter - an...   Jul 19 2011, 12:16 AM
Grits   I think the mudcrab migration captured my imaginat...   Jul 19 2011, 12:55 PM
hazmick   Aela is a brilliant character! Her and Teresa ...   Jul 21 2011, 10:23 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: As Tadrose says in the game: ...   Jul 21 2011, 04:25 PM
Grits   What happens in Bawnwatch, stays in Bawnwatch...   Jul 21 2011, 05:11 PM
haute ecole rider   Wella! Some slash for the morning after? Love...   Jul 21 2011, 05:39 PM
Olen   What Grits said. No that Tadrose could really com...   Jul 21 2011, 07:51 PM
Jacki Dice   Teresa woke to the feeling of a sharp paw against ...   Jul 21 2011, 11:46 PM
Acadian   An elegantly exotic, erotic and enticing episode...   Jul 22 2011, 01:15 AM
Thomas Kaira   Hmm... Tadrose has competition now! You paint...   Jul 22 2011, 01:58 AM
haute ecole rider   They only reason people oppose it is because it i...   Jul 22 2011, 03:33 AM
hazmick   :D Brilliant. First of all, I loved Teresa's ...   Jul 22 2011, 06:22 PM
King Coin   Chapter 32.2 Ugh zombies. I hope Chance doesn’t f...   Jul 22 2011, 07:50 PM
Glargg   Wow. I believe in your characters. I believe in ...   Jul 22 2011, 08:24 PM
SubRosa   Grits: Teresa hopes that what happens in Bawnwatch...   Jul 25 2011, 02:36 PM
D.Foxy   Deep are the fathoms of love, sandbars too abound ...   Jul 25 2011, 04:18 PM
hazmick   A wonderful chapter. I loved Aela's list of su...   Jul 25 2011, 05:42 PM
Olen   That didn't seem too awkward. Summoning Aedra...   Jul 25 2011, 06:25 PM
Grits   Because there was nothing to lose with Aela, Teres...   Jul 25 2011, 07:12 PM
haute ecole rider   First I want to comment on the link you included i...   Jul 25 2011, 10:28 PM
Acadian   "No one can stop a thunderstorm," Neruss...   Jul 26 2011, 12:22 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Beautifully done my foxy friend. :) ha...   Jul 28 2011, 09:18 PM
haute ecole rider   You know, that's pretty darn close to what I h...   Jul 28 2011, 10:05 PM
Glargg   That went well, didn't it? :-/o Good confr...   Jul 28 2011, 10:08 PM
Acadian   Wow! I don't know as I've ever seen o...   Jul 29 2011, 01:20 AM
Grits   Near the back of the room three armored men were h...   Jul 29 2011, 01:52 AM
Olen   Most of what I might say has been said, but I did ...   Jul 29 2011, 09:00 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: The Counts being appointed for ...   Aug 1 2011, 04:58 PM
Olen   Well that is a twist. I suppose it was an obvious...   Aug 1 2011, 09:54 PM
haute ecole rider   So the Summerset Isle is the first to break away, ...   Aug 1 2011, 10:34 PM
Destri Melarg   I won’t comment on all the chapters that I have re...   Aug 1 2011, 11:15 PM
Acadian   You do a nice job painting Teresa's conflicted...   Aug 2 2011, 12:45 AM
King Coin   Chapter 33.1 :lol: I get the impression that Vince...   Aug 3 2011, 05:45 AM
Grits   Teresa took a deep breath, and willed her hand to ...   Aug 3 2011, 02:40 PM
SubRosa   Olen: I think the only real option the Elder Counc...   Aug 4 2011, 05:28 PM
haute ecole rider   Oh, I do hope that Teresa and Marius make it throu...   Aug 4 2011, 07:23 PM
Olen   Exciting stuff, there's nothing like ignoring ...   Aug 4 2011, 08:02 PM
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