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SubRosa
post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Acadian   Fabulous! The conversation with Marius was gr...   Aug 5 2011, 01:32 AM
MyCat   Gripping cliff hanger! Nit. I'd use cry i...   Aug 5 2011, 03:35 AM
Grits   "Teresa!" the Nibenean exclaimed as ...   Aug 5 2011, 10:52 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I thought the same thing about ...   Aug 8 2011, 04:27 PM
Grits   Oh no! Shot by accident, or something more sin...   Aug 8 2011, 06:00 PM
Olen   Well new cuirass I suspect I know the source of, b...   Aug 8 2011, 08:37 PM
haute ecole rider   What an intense fight! Fast and overwhelming, ...   Aug 8 2011, 08:57 PM
Acadian   Wow. Just wow. I could visualize every bloody, f...   Aug 9 2011, 01:15 AM
King Coin   Chapter 34.1 Woohoo! TOA! Teresa has been...   Aug 9 2011, 07:38 PM
Destri Melarg   37.1 Teresa displays an excellent tactical sense ...   Aug 10 2011, 12:49 AM
SubRosa   Grits: The reason for those trolls being so close ...   Aug 11 2011, 05:22 PM
haute ecole rider   Absolutely awesome! :blink: When I'm wri...   Aug 11 2011, 06:07 PM
Olen   Another powerful part in what's becoming a def...   Aug 11 2011, 09:39 PM
Acadian   Old business: Ah, I see now. As much as I will m...   Aug 12 2011, 01:26 AM
Grits   Oh, I love how you showed us this episode through ...   Aug 12 2011, 02:32 AM
Destri Melarg   Turns out that the ton of bricks wasn’t needed. A...   Aug 12 2011, 05:01 AM
D.Foxy   If you think that life's predictable With stor...   Aug 13 2011, 04:06 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I was originally going to write...   Aug 15 2011, 04:53 PM
haute ecole rider   It seems that Tadrose is just as blind as Teresa i...   Aug 15 2011, 05:46 PM
Grits   Oops, I was completely wrong about Tadrose’s age. ...   Aug 15 2011, 07:06 PM
Destri Melarg   Survivor's guilt, indeed. The fact that Mariu...   Aug 15 2011, 08:41 PM
ghastley   Teresa will be fat(ter) and smiling faintly again...   Aug 15 2011, 08:45 PM
Acadian   Old business: Thanks for helping with Tadrose...   Aug 16 2011, 01:28 AM
Olen   Well I didn't see that coming. Ancondil, I su...   Aug 16 2011, 11:09 PM
Kazaera   Ooh I caught up I caught up I caught up! The ...   Aug 17 2011, 06:30 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: This was indeed the first time ...   Aug 18 2011, 03:45 PM
haute ecole rider   Julian is asking where in 'blivion was this Ca...   Aug 18 2011, 09:22 PM
Acadian   This was beautifully done! Nothing good happe...   Aug 19 2011, 01:46 AM
Grits   Oh dear, a bender. I’m sure her friends at the FG ...   Aug 19 2011, 02:12 PM
ghastley   Nit: brace herself against the walls of the buildi...   Aug 19 2011, 02:13 PM
Destri Melarg   This segment was wonderfully written, and I though...   Aug 19 2011, 09:58 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: We will find out just where Cas...   Aug 22 2011, 04:43 PM
haute ecole rider   Well, to the best of my knowledge, Julian never qu...   Aug 22 2011, 06:32 PM
Grits   At that moment Teresa realized the full enormity o...   Aug 22 2011, 08:05 PM
Destri Melarg   "On our next episode of Scared Straight: Impe...   Aug 22 2011, 10:07 PM
SubRosa   Just out of curiosity, did anyone guess that Cassi...   Aug 22 2011, 11:13 PM
Grits   I had no idea!! Total surprise. :goodjob...   Aug 22 2011, 11:28 PM
Destri Melarg   I agree with Grits. Your clues were clear enough,...   Aug 23 2011, 12:00 AM
haute ecole rider   Me three. It's the best kind of surprise, thou...   Aug 23 2011, 12:27 AM
ghastley   Except for Looking back, she saw that Cassius was ...   Aug 23 2011, 12:54 AM
Acadian   By Mara, there is so much goodness stuffed into th...   Aug 23 2011, 01:16 AM
Olen   A fine couple of episodes to come back to. Sorry ...   Aug 23 2011, 11:04 PM
Captain Hammer   By the Golden Gaze of Akatosh, has it really been ...   Aug 24 2011, 02:47 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: The occasional crucifixion by t...   Aug 25 2011, 05:05 PM
ghastley   Well if the armor still fits perfectly, it would a...   Aug 25 2011, 06:31 PM
Destri Melarg   I remember Morghak from the pictures that you have...   Aug 25 2011, 08:46 PM
haute ecole rider   I agree that it looks fabulous on Teresa! It i...   Aug 25 2011, 09:32 PM
Olen   An intreguing title you have there. Ominous almos...   Aug 25 2011, 10:52 PM
Grits   Well, considering what ravens eat, I’m guessing th...   Aug 25 2011, 11:49 PM
Acadian   I’ve been chomping at the bit for some time for Te...   Aug 26 2011, 12:59 AM
D.Foxy   just a quick note - Subrosa, that armour is BEAUTI...   Aug 26 2011, 02:35 AM
SubRosa   ghastley: Well Teresa does not have to get into sh...   Aug 29 2011, 04:50 PM
haute ecole rider   That's a beautiful bow! Is that a mod you ...   Aug 29 2011, 05:53 PM
D.Foxy   Excellent screenshot. Only one nit - at full draw ...   Aug 29 2011, 05:54 PM
Destri Melarg   Only Pappy could force a grudging bit of humor to ...   Aug 29 2011, 09:14 PM
ghastley   Not too far from an earlier scenario in a shop i...   Aug 29 2011, 09:37 PM
Grits   Wonderful screenshots, Teresa is well-equipped now...   Aug 29 2011, 10:47 PM
Acadian   A wonderful episode! The coulda woulda should...   Aug 30 2011, 01:29 AM
Olen   I'd missed Pappy. His manner is exacty what T...   Aug 30 2011, 10:04 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I see Acadian beat me to the pu...   Sep 1 2011, 04:27 PM
haute ecole rider   And here we go, confronting the Shadow, which has ...   Sep 1 2011, 05:03 PM
Olen   More facing her shadow. That it extends to the pr...   Sep 1 2011, 07:40 PM
ghastley   I'm reluctant to speculate, but she's just...   Sep 1 2011, 09:59 PM
Acadian   ’Teresa could smell the dampness of Niben Bay beyo...   Sep 2 2011, 01:36 AM
Grits   Now that Raven and Barenziah have said their piece...   Sep 2 2011, 07:26 PM
Destri Melarg   [i][/i] I just love this sentence; it is wonderful...   Sep 3 2011, 01:32 AM
SubRosa   All: Wow, I was very pleased to read everyone...   Sep 5 2011, 05:29 PM
haute ecole rider   Whoa, that's not Daenlin! I know, I know, ...   Sep 5 2011, 05:58 PM
D.Foxy   All shooting is like - well, it's like golf. Y...   Sep 6 2011, 12:52 AM
Acadian   I enjoyed your description of the stable and (form...   Sep 6 2011, 01:16 AM
Grits   Just a quick refresher for my memory, are the Bosm...   Sep 6 2011, 03:55 PM
ghastley   Teresa's thinking about the bow, not the targe...   Sep 6 2011, 06:37 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: You are right, that is not the ...   Sep 8 2011, 05:20 PM
D.Foxy   The moral dilemma is subtle indeed. It will be har...   Sep 8 2011, 06:11 PM
haute ecole rider   It had occurred to me early in this post that Daen...   Sep 8 2011, 06:34 PM
Acadian   ’The ages of humans on the other hand, were so eas...   Sep 9 2011, 12:45 AM
ghastley   One could always see the tracks of the Time Dragon...   Sep 9 2011, 01:13 AM
Grits   "Yes," Daenlin said. "Sila grows no...   Sep 9 2011, 10:46 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: That dilemna of which way to go is somethi...   Sep 12 2011, 04:26 PM
Grits   Pappy rolled his eyes. "A bard couldn't p...   Sep 12 2011, 05:10 PM
haute ecole rider   Mad Jack!! *looks around* Where's Ada...   Sep 12 2011, 05:38 PM
ghastley   Denver Pyle had a monopoly on the "Old Mounta...   Sep 12 2011, 06:55 PM
Acadian   Two very distinct scenes. In the first, I felt ...   Sep 13 2011, 02:02 AM
MyCat   I'm old enough (I turn 58 on Friday), I did ha...   Sep 13 2011, 03:32 AM
Cardboard Box   <fart type="old"> Yep, Number Seve...   Sep 13 2011, 04:37 AM
Destri Melarg   Three chapters to comment on: 38.4 So I see you’...   Sep 14 2011, 07:25 PM
SubRosa   Grits: Push Teresa out in the woods? Would Pappy a...   Sep 15 2011, 04:26 PM
haute ecole rider   That is as accurate a representation of PTSD as an...   Sep 15 2011, 05:05 PM
Acadian   This episode has a lovely natural flow to it. We ...   Sep 16 2011, 12:54 AM
Jacki Dice   I wanted to wait until I was caught up (I fall beh...   Sep 16 2011, 08:51 AM
Grits   It was nice to see Teresa musing that her figure i...   Sep 17 2011, 02:24 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Shied away indeed! ;) We s...   Sep 19 2011, 05:38 PM
haute ecole rider   YAAAY! It felt soo good to see Teresa fall int...   Sep 19 2011, 06:41 PM
ghastley   OK, bow tested - kills trolls in two shots - even ...   Sep 19 2011, 09:42 PM
Grits   Whew! Teresa was not the only one holding her ...   Sep 20 2011, 12:03 AM
Acadian   Teresa, with a little help from Raven and Pappy, ...   Sep 20 2011, 12:38 AM
Destri Melarg   39.2 – It behooves me to inform our young wood e...   Sep 20 2011, 08:35 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I see we know the same bear saf...   Sep 22 2011, 04:00 PM
haute ecole rider   Wonderful little natural history lesson here! ...   Sep 22 2011, 06:05 PM
ghastley   That typo reminded me of Ye Olden Days of Dungeons...   Sep 22 2011, 07:26 PM
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