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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
haute ecole rider   Actually, he needs to try my Special Equine Brew. ...   Sep 22 2011, 10:00 PM
Acadian   Given the backdrop that Teresa has made huge progr...   Sep 23 2011, 01:12 AM
Grits   Teresa noted that it left a single feather behind ...   Sep 24 2011, 02:32 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Pappy has pretty well done it a...   Sep 26 2011, 04:10 PM
D.Foxy   One thing I've always wondered about having fr...   Sep 26 2011, 04:28 PM
haute ecole rider   Add another Huzzah! for Pappy! Yes, of cou...   Sep 26 2011, 08:13 PM
Acadian   I got more than a faint smile from this episode...   Sep 27 2011, 12:29 AM
ghastley   Let me see. Teresa has no problem with hugging a ...   Sep 27 2011, 04:52 PM
Grits   I’m guessing that Pappy evaluates his chances of g...   Sep 28 2011, 02:39 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Thank goodness that Teresa can heal hersel...   Sep 29 2011, 04:49 PM
haute ecole rider   Finally the first step onto the dance floor! I...   Sep 29 2011, 09:09 PM
Grits   Oh, now I need to slurp some slippery noodles...   Sep 30 2011, 12:09 AM
Acadian   A lovely episode made even better by the slippery ...   Sep 30 2011, 12:48 AM
Jacki Dice   -sniff, sniff- The last part was so touching ...   Sep 30 2011, 05:21 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I really liked that scene becau...   Oct 3 2011, 04:28 PM
haute ecole rider   Aha! A kindred spirit! In social graces, I...   Oct 3 2011, 08:05 PM
Grits   I’m glad the nearby villagers are getting some tra...   Oct 3 2011, 09:28 PM
Acadian   As you so astutely pointed out in your noodle comm...   Oct 4 2011, 12:35 AM
Olen   Well I'm caught up. Sorry it took so long but...   Oct 4 2011, 08:56 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I never thought about it, but I...   Oct 6 2011, 05:20 PM
haute ecole rider   Ya think? I love how you presented the beginning ...   Oct 6 2011, 06:39 PM
Acadian   Of course we know that Teresa did fine handling Mo...   Oct 7 2011, 01:24 AM
Grits   Even if Pappy doesn’t mind that Teresa promoted Ta...   Oct 7 2011, 01:56 AM
Olen   Ah, this quest. One of the better ones from in ga...   Oct 7 2011, 10:33 PM
Thomas Kaira   Whew! Teresa's been through quite an ordea...   Oct 8 2011, 01:30 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I never liked how Bethesda work...   Oct 10 2011, 05:46 PM
haute ecole rider   I knew you were going to put your own twist on thi...   Oct 10 2011, 11:04 PM
Thomas Kaira   One can wonder. I enjoyed Teresa's pondering o...   Oct 11 2011, 01:25 AM
Acadian   I'm scared of Kurdan already! :O ...   Oct 11 2011, 01:59 AM
Grits   "Can ya spare a coin beautiful lady? I's ...   Oct 11 2011, 03:26 AM
liliandra nadiar   And finally caught up after finding this excellent...   Oct 11 2011, 04:26 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Cosmus was fun to write here, a...   Oct 13 2011, 04:28 PM
liliandra nadiar   Teresa found Kurdan sitting in the back of the roo...   Oct 14 2011, 02:51 AM
haute ecole rider   Clancy Brown! I always think of Kurgan every t...   Oct 13 2011, 09:12 PM
Grits   Wearing a full panoply of armor always attracted a...   Oct 13 2011, 10:22 PM
Thomas Kaira   That Altmer is mighty slick, and mighty crooked...   Oct 13 2011, 11:01 PM
Acadian   Wow, Teresa really stepped into the Suitor loaded ...   Oct 14 2011, 01:33 AM
D.Foxy   Rosa my girl - you are a very, very good writer. ...   Oct 14 2011, 07:04 AM
Olen   Hmmm detective work. Depending on how much you...   Oct 15 2011, 12:47 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: It probably was that Inga! ...   Oct 17 2011, 04:10 PM
Grits   He was dressed in dirty, threadbare flax. A line o...   Oct 17 2011, 10:21 PM
Thomas Kaira   And so off we go to Castle Dracula Frankenstein er...   Oct 18 2011, 12:39 AM
Acadian   On the edge of my seat, I am. Ye be weavin’ a fin...   Oct 18 2011, 12:51 AM
liliandra nadiar   Ohh... nice backstory for the Fort/Castle. Though ...   Oct 18 2011, 02:03 AM
SubRosa   Grits: I wanted to paint an icky picture with Daka...   Oct 20 2011, 05:22 PM
Acadian   You weren’t kidding when you said castle! You...   Oct 21 2011, 12:34 AM
Thomas Kaira   A masterfully woven mystery-eventually-solved...   Oct 21 2011, 01:26 AM
liliandra nadiar   Poor Teresa, everything's always underground/i...   Oct 21 2011, 03:48 AM
Grits   My BFF Pam is also a fan, so there are at least fo...   Oct 21 2011, 01:57 PM
D.Foxy   Yay Stalk-battle scene coming up! Teresa m...   Oct 22 2011, 02:01 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: I never understood the whole "fort...   Oct 24 2011, 05:19 PM
liliandra nadiar   Yay Teresa! Birds may not be grizzlies in term...   Oct 25 2011, 01:16 AM
Grits   The Green Man was amazing! Too bad he didn’t h...   Oct 25 2011, 02:19 PM
ghastley   Nits, to get them out of the way... "The m...   Oct 25 2011, 03:45 PM
Glargg   I kind of like the "quick and light," th...   Oct 25 2011, 07:48 PM
Acadian   This was quite the nail biter. I could feel poor ...   Oct 27 2011, 12:17 AM
liliandra nadiar   I believe I saw a mod on TESnexus for modifiying m...   Oct 27 2011, 01:05 AM
D.Foxy   All that I wanted, and more. Hooray! Now show ...   Oct 27 2011, 02:31 AM
Thomas Kaira   Quite an intense episode. I see you are continuing...   Oct 27 2011, 03:41 AM
SubRosa   liliandra nadiar: Ra'jhera does indeed have a ...   Oct 27 2011, 04:45 PM
Grits   Intense and exciting. The sylph was awesome, and T...   Oct 28 2011, 12:40 AM
Acadian   I really enjoy the way scrolls work in TF as well ...   Oct 28 2011, 12:54 AM
King Coin   Another lured by Kurdan, but with a significant di...   Oct 28 2011, 12:58 AM
D.Foxy   Setting up a 'masked' shot - and then shoo...   Oct 28 2011, 02:54 AM
Thomas Kaira   One by one the hunters fall to our stringy Bosmer...   Oct 28 2011, 06:09 AM
haute ecole rider   First I apologize for not keeping up with my comme...   Oct 30 2011, 02:18 AM
SubRosa   Grits: I had a lot of fun portraying the summoned ...   Oct 31 2011, 05:37 PM
King Coin   Teresa bought herself a little time in the last ep...   Oct 31 2011, 09:31 PM
Grits   Drawing the bow to full extension, she took aim on...   Oct 31 2011, 10:30 PM
liliandra nadiar   Poor Ra'j. By now he has to be wondering if th...   Nov 1 2011, 12:06 AM
Acadian   And the SageRosa opens with some SagePappy advice ...   Nov 1 2011, 01:48 AM
King Coin   @KC: Dispel is an odd effect and I would be exce...   Nov 1 2011, 02:22 AM
haute ecole rider   Grits: As I understand it, Ravenfeeder is a recur...   Nov 1 2011, 03:17 PM
ghastley   Ra'jhera is beginning to resemble the Terminat...   Nov 1 2011, 04:55 PM
McBadgere   Can I add my applause to the ovation here?... :D ....   Nov 2 2011, 01:56 PM
Thomas Kaira   Ra'Jhera is one cooked kitty now! I'm ...   Nov 2 2011, 09:30 PM
SubRosa   King Coin: Like the old saying goes: "Sometim...   Nov 3 2011, 05:51 PM
haute ecole rider   Death by Undine! What a mystery that would mak...   Nov 3 2011, 06:14 PM
Olen   Woo I've caught up. Quite the epic. Apologie...   Nov 3 2011, 10:06 PM
Grits   "Then she'll kill us with her bare hands...   Nov 3 2011, 10:23 PM
McBadgere   Loving it...Fantastic story... More excellently w...   Nov 3 2011, 10:25 PM
liliandra nadiar   MB, Aedra are sort of the opposit of the Deadra. S...   Nov 4 2011, 12:25 AM
Acadian   "Stop talking like an old woman Ofonius!...   Nov 4 2011, 01:34 AM
King Coin   Teresa’s really putting up a heck of a fight. Gett...   Nov 4 2011, 04:39 AM
Thomas Kaira   Cowardice: like luck, it has a nasty tendency to r...   Nov 4 2011, 05:48 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Teresa was going to let the und...   Nov 7 2011, 06:55 PM
ghastley   "Some people wish to throw their weapons. Tha...   Nov 7 2011, 10:03 PM
haute ecole rider   Fancy pants, indeed! :P And Lord Hoity Toi...   Nov 7 2011, 10:33 PM
Olen   The cavelry arrive with great effect. Still I...   Nov 8 2011, 12:39 AM
Grits   I’m afraid I missed it before, but why do people c...   Nov 8 2011, 12:56 AM
liliandra nadiar   Tadrose cavalry to the resc--- oh, Teresa already ...   Nov 8 2011, 01:52 AM
Acadian   ’The whimper of pain that issued from his lips bro...   Nov 8 2011, 02:00 AM
King Coin   Wellll… The lord wasn’t as valuable as she had hop...   Nov 8 2011, 02:53 AM
Thomas Kaira   And now I get to rejoice for predicting exactly wh...   Nov 9 2011, 02:22 AM
McBadgere   Most excellent... Right, so that's three figh...   Nov 9 2011, 05:16 AM
SubRosa   ghastley: Maiq says that about children too. But t...   Nov 10 2011, 08:42 PM
haute ecole rider   First the nit: Silverhome was too stuffy for the ...   Nov 10 2011, 09:44 PM
Grits   "So I hear that Lord Albinus Herennius died a...   Nov 11 2011, 02:01 AM
Acadian   How sweet of Teresa to buy a nice meal for Cosmus...   Nov 11 2011, 02:21 AM
King Coin   If he wanted to belch, then as far as she was con...   Nov 11 2011, 03:13 AM
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