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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
haute ecole rider   I see Mad Josse's back! And Saya! Oooh...   May 19 2012, 09:13 PM
Acadian   "And you two… just keep your clothes on until...   May 20 2012, 12:13 AM
Jacki Dice   Standing within it was a Dunmer in gleaming black ...   May 20 2012, 03:39 AM
Grits   Saya seems like she can instantly find the weak sp...   May 20 2012, 01:04 PM
ghastley   ... And... maybe dessert? :P Oooh yes! Pre...   May 21 2012, 03:31 PM
SubRosa   McBadgere: Who can resist Denver Pyle? I have had ...   May 26 2012, 05:53 PM
haute ecole rider   Let's get the nits out of the way: Looks like...   May 26 2012, 07:36 PM
Acadian   Well, with Teresa, Julian and Buffy all poised for...   May 27 2012, 01:31 AM
Olen   And now we know why Mad Josse is there, but what a...   May 27 2012, 11:31 AM
King Coin   I gotta say, I was a little underwhelmed when afte...   May 27 2012, 02:24 PM
liliandra nadiar   *is late to the game* Welcome back Rosa, good to s...   May 27 2012, 10:05 PM
ghastley   If I remember right Raminus is running the Univers...   May 28 2012, 02:52 AM
Grits   Nice touch to have Josse representing the miners. ...   May 28 2012, 03:59 PM
McBadgere   Oh that was cool... :D ... Clusterfetch!...Br...   May 29 2012, 04:36 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Pappy has been to this particul...   Jun 2 2012, 06:40 PM
haute ecole rider   Interesting summation of the pre-goblin preparatio...   Jun 2 2012, 09:00 PM
Acadian   A quiet opening, filled with rumination of Tadrose...   Jun 3 2012, 02:01 AM
McBadgere   Fantastic stuff!!... :D ... That was sw...   Jun 3 2012, 05:19 AM
King Coin   Now there was a real mountain man, Teresa thought...   Jun 3 2012, 07:22 PM
Grits   Teresa’s “I suck at being a forester” thought was ...   Jun 4 2012, 03:09 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: That was actually supposed to b...   Jun 9 2012, 06:18 PM
haute ecole rider   Gobble Gobble! What a groaner! Wonder what...   Jun 9 2012, 06:44 PM
King Coin   Hah! Stopping at the Lady for some good luck. ...   Jun 9 2012, 08:26 PM
Grits   Gobblin’! Oh, Vincent. :P A caravan, ho...   Jun 10 2012, 12:35 AM
Acadian   Even though I well remember Teresa’s first encount...   Jun 10 2012, 01:28 AM
McBadgere   Noooo, surely not... :P ... An excellent chapt...   Jun 11 2012, 01:13 PM
ghastley   I keep liking the way you make the world so much l...   Jun 13 2012, 02:26 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I know what you mean about fore...   Jun 16 2012, 06:46 PM
haute ecole rider   My, my, things are kinda quiet today! I've...   Jun 17 2012, 01:50 AM
King Coin   But what were they doing camping at night? Shouldn...   Jun 17 2012, 02:17 PM
Grits   Yikes, the goblins really are vicious monsters her...   Jun 17 2012, 10:51 PM
Acadian   ‘The branches seemed to bend around her as she mov...   Jun 20 2012, 06:55 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Bethesda really does not tell u...   Jun 23 2012, 06:41 PM
haute ecole rider   It was a great plan Pappy came up with! But ...   Jun 23 2012, 07:54 PM
Acadian   Teresa was so true to form as she fretted and over...   Jun 24 2012, 12:45 AM
Taaron   Forgive me, but I missed a few chapters(that means...   Jun 24 2012, 04:47 AM
liliandra nadiar   Teresa's in Oblivion era Cyrodiil just followi...   Jun 24 2012, 05:07 AM
King Coin   I was a little worried when none of the fighters h...   Jun 24 2012, 02:16 PM
Grits   I just loved every word of this episode! If ...   Jun 24 2012, 11:01 PM
Taaron   People should check out my story. It's just st...   Jun 26 2012, 02:21 AM
McBadgere   As brilliant as ever... :D ... Love the internal ...   Jun 28 2012, 01:07 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Pappy is definitely not going t...   Jun 30 2012, 06:19 PM
Grits   The beating of great leathery wings sounded in the...   Jun 30 2012, 11:50 PM
Acadian   The discipline as Teresa’s guild advanced on line ...   Jul 1 2012, 12:31 AM
Taaron   I love this story and I love the way you write. So...   Jul 1 2012, 08:25 AM
King Coin   When they encountered a lean-to, they simply sma...   Jul 1 2012, 02:01 PM
haute ecole rider   So Teresa found herself in the same situation as J...   Jul 1 2012, 05:33 PM
McBadgere   Ooooh!!... Love that save by the Winged T...   Jul 1 2012, 07:52 PM
SubRosa   Grits: The rest of the goblins are indeed going to...   Jul 7 2012, 06:39 PM
Acadian   ’But even though Saya had prolonged the summoning,...   Jul 8 2012, 12:57 AM
King Coin   I like the way Tadrose shows her concern. A firm w...   Jul 8 2012, 03:58 AM
ghastley   The idea of a braying donkey in the middle of a s...   Jul 8 2012, 02:11 PM
Grits   Riveus walked on into the camp and repeated his re...   Jul 9 2012, 03:54 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Yep, Kireteki had to return to her carrie...   Jul 14 2012, 06:17 PM
liliandra nadiar   And there's Teresa's temper again, thankfu...   Jul 14 2012, 10:16 PM
Acadian   A wonderfully rich description of the area outside...   Jul 15 2012, 12:17 AM
Grits   Teresa’s search through the damaged buildings made...   Jul 15 2012, 04:06 AM
Silver Dreamcatcher2525   I am really enjoying reading this story.   Jul 17 2012, 12:19 PM
King Coin   What a gruesome scene at the mine. Riveus made the...   Jul 17 2012, 09:49 PM
McBadgere   That reminds me of that place in Fallout New Veg...   Jul 21 2012, 05:22 PM
SubRosa   liliandra nadiar: You are right, for once Teresa...   Jul 22 2012, 06:37 PM
King Coin   I suppose my surprise at Teresa’s stronger reactio...   Jul 22 2012, 07:46 PM
Grits   Raising one fist into the air, she thought of Rave...   Jul 22 2012, 10:13 PM
Acadian   ‘Yesterday's episode was preempted by work.’ ...   Jul 23 2012, 01:56 AM
ghastley   I find myself thinking "a summoned bat would ...   Jul 23 2012, 03:00 PM
McBadgere   Ew...Skin loincloths...But then again...I suppose ...   Jul 28 2012, 04:55 AM
SubRosa   King Coin: The hawk companion might be doable. But...   Jul 28 2012, 06:03 PM
McBadgere   Aw hell yeah!!...Peter Jackson, eat yer he...   Jul 28 2012, 09:37 PM
Acadian   I’m enjoying the continuing evolution of Teresa’s ...   Jul 29 2012, 12:45 AM
King Coin   Hmm, perhaps when they are done with their fortifi...   Jul 29 2012, 01:18 AM
Grits   Teresa knew the latter was good practice, and vowe...   Jul 30 2012, 10:17 AM
liliandra nadiar   Saya's going to pull a last minute rescue, isn...   Jul 31 2012, 04:18 AM
SubRosa   McBadgere: I was going for a Peter Jacksonish mome...   Aug 4 2012, 06:03 PM
McBadgere   Aw hell yeah!!... Amazing fight!...   Aug 4 2012, 06:23 PM
King Coin   I bet Teresa was thankful for her armor, getting h...   Aug 4 2012, 10:16 PM
Acadian   Old business: What a brilliant idea to have someo...   Aug 5 2012, 12:24 AM
ghastley   I'm thinking we might have seen the Shaman, bu...   Aug 5 2012, 12:35 AM
Grits   It was fun to see the plan working! Mad Josse ...   Aug 5 2012, 02:02 AM
haute ecole rider   This has been an exciting and exhilarating romp th...   Aug 8 2012, 10:07 PM
SubRosa   McBadgere: Amazing fight it what I was hoping for....   Aug 11 2012, 05:41 PM
Acadian   ’Saya stared dumbfounded, until Teresa grabbed her...   Aug 12 2012, 01:09 AM
haute ecole rider   Pappy's hard training of the guild really pays...   Aug 12 2012, 01:11 AM
Grits   I enjoyed every part of the organized march into t...   Aug 12 2012, 01:45 AM
McBadgere   Loved the intensity of this...I was almost as scar...   Aug 12 2012, 03:46 AM
King Coin   Ha! It was amusing at first to see Saya out of...   Aug 12 2012, 04:52 AM
ghastley   I love the pacing of all this battle. The goblins ...   Aug 14 2012, 01:20 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Saya's being lost as the guild snappe...   Aug 18 2012, 06:19 PM
haute ecole rider   Excellent showing by Saya, including making the mo...   Aug 18 2012, 09:15 PM
King Coin   Teresa’s going to snipe the shaman? :D Sounds like...   Aug 19 2012, 12:26 AM
McBadgere   Excellent stuff!!.... Still love that Win...   Aug 19 2012, 03:54 AM
Grits   I loved the salamander, of course! :D And Kire...   Aug 19 2012, 01:51 PM
Acadian   "Damn you stupid slitch!" Oh my good...   Aug 22 2012, 12:57 AM
Captain Hammer   I'm with Acadian on the censor-detector-defeat...   Aug 22 2012, 05:38 AM
hazmick   Things have gotten a lot more exciting for Teresa ...   Aug 24 2012, 12:07 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Teresa is indeed a veteran now....   Aug 25 2012, 06:40 PM
hazmick   Good to be back, you know me: nightshade tea all r...   Aug 25 2012, 07:06 PM
haute ecole rider   I had to smile at your comment about Teresa and th...   Aug 25 2012, 07:53 PM
SubRosa   That last paragraph made me think. Hmm, I only co...   Aug 25 2012, 08:25 PM
Grits   First things first: I counted Aela as number three...   Aug 25 2012, 08:51 PM
Acadian   ’Let it be anyone but her.’ How well you’v...   Aug 26 2012, 12:34 AM
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