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SubRosa Teresa of the Faint Smile Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM D.Foxy My heart has stepped up a gear, and a deep GRRRRRR... Jun 5 2010, 12:57 AM Destri Melarg Wow. This was one of the few times in a chapter o... Jun 5 2010, 08:28 PM Olen I like the hooks you've laid for the forthcomi... Jun 5 2010, 09:39 PM SubRosa haute ecole rider: You were not just speaking figu... Jun 6 2010, 06:15 PM D.Foxy Pappy was too lenient.
In my day, if any soldier ... Jun 6 2010, 06:22 PM haute ecole rider I'm not sure that Pappy was too lenient.
Now ... Jun 6 2010, 07:15 PM Olen Nice bit of characterisation there, it gives a bet... Jun 6 2010, 07:22 PM Broken-Scale Wow, I sure have missed alot. I love all of this n... Jun 7 2010, 12:16 AM Destri Melarg The first time I read Pappy’s name in the last cha... Jun 8 2010, 08:33 AM D.Foxy Right on, Destri.
Crimes committed out of fear m... Jun 8 2010, 01:39 PM SubRosa D.Foxy: I had considered Pappy killing Calva then ... Jun 8 2010, 04:41 PM Remko I'd say the "alchemist" is amongst ... Jun 8 2010, 04:44 PM D.Foxy Then why did you ask in the first place? Pappy tho... Jun 8 2010, 04:50 PM haute ecole rider
And if I recall correctly, something many old-ti... Jun 8 2010, 05:25 PM D.Foxy Alas, it seems that you did not see the subtle inn... Jun 8 2010, 06:43 PM Olen I did have a comment, then what passes for interne... Jun 8 2010, 11:02 PM Destri Melarg Pappy is a man of many parts. In addition to bein... Jun 9 2010, 12:56 AM Acadian Well done Sub Rosa!
Regarding how Pappy han... Jun 9 2010, 04:02 PM SubRosa Remko: We will just have to wait and see what happ... Jun 10 2010, 04:32 PM D.Foxy Cavalry charge before the infantry step up?
:blin... Jun 10 2010, 04:50 PM SubRosa Well, the cavalry on the right have three options.... Jun 10 2010, 05:07 PM haute ecole rider Well written. I liked returning to the overview fo... Jun 10 2010, 08:50 PM Destri Melarg I have learned a great deal through reading both t... Jun 11 2010, 12:18 AM Olen Woo the battle. I can't comment on tactics as... Jun 11 2010, 02:44 PM SubRosa haute ecole ouroboros: Thank you h.e.o.
Destri ... Jun 12 2010, 05:54 PM Olen You show the prebattle tension well among the men ... Jun 12 2010, 06:08 PM haute ecole rider Oh man, like O said, the pre-battle tension was pa... Jun 12 2010, 06:53 PM D.Foxy "And here I thought it was only women you cou... Jun 13 2010, 04:21 AM SubRosa Olen: Thank you Olen. Worked for the netch refere... Jun 14 2010, 04:14 PM D.Foxy Regarding the Berserker, or more correctly, the Ba... Jun 14 2010, 04:46 PM haute ecole rider Very good description of CQ combat medieval style.... Jun 14 2010, 05:43 PM Destri Melarg Chapter 10f & 10g – The Battle of Bruma
I enj... Jun 15 2010, 12:19 AM D.Foxy I don't imagine that fact makes it onto the re... Jun 16 2010, 05:24 PM Acadian Several chapters, and all caught up again. I love... Jun 16 2010, 06:07 PM SubRosa D.Foxy: Njall is not really based on the Norse ber... Jun 16 2010, 09:40 PM haute ecole rider Excellent! I'm going to have to refer to t... Jun 16 2010, 11:14 PM D.Foxy I thought someone had stuck four feet of sword up ... Jun 17 2010, 02:05 AM Acadian Wow! It all really came together here! B... Jun 17 2010, 02:26 AM SubRosa the worm hauteboros: Thank you hatue. Please feel ... Jun 18 2010, 04:10 PM D.Foxy Wrestling trips and throws!!! YESSSSS... Jun 18 2010, 05:08 PM Remko Oh my... that was beautifulterribleawesomegruesome... Jun 18 2010, 05:17 PM Olen Well I'm caught up now and that was indeed exc... Jun 18 2010, 06:21 PM haute ecole rider The battle reaches a peak! And what an awesome... Jun 18 2010, 07:04 PM Destri Melarg This is simply damn good writing! I especially... Jun 19 2010, 01:33 AM D.Foxy Hwut he said! Jun 19 2010, 02:17 AM Acadian The overall impact here of power, blood, tears was... Jun 19 2010, 03:39 AM SubRosa D.Foxy: Thank you Fox. Pappy's throw was a Jud... Jun 20 2010, 05:45 PM ureniashtram Wow. Just.. wow. That, my dear SubRosa, is one of ... Jun 20 2010, 06:12 PM haute ecole rider Well done!
Julian would hate how you made her... Jun 20 2010, 07:17 PM Olen A great conclusion to a very well written battle p... Jun 20 2010, 11:13 PM D.Foxy The technique and facts of battle - you didn't... Jun 21 2010, 12:58 AM Acadian I normally don't enjoy reading about organized... Jun 21 2010, 02:59 AM Remko *swallows chunk in throat* Wow. Jun 21 2010, 04:47 PM Destri Melarg
Destri Melarg: No more horn?
The horn is official... Jun 22 2010, 12:32 AM SubRosa ureniashtram: Thank you U. I drew upon a great dea... Jun 22 2010, 03:01 AM haute ecole rider Take your time.
Chapter 10 was one of the most in... Jun 22 2010, 03:16 AM Acadian If you're going to take a break, this point in... Jun 22 2010, 03:37 AM Destri Melarg I know exactly what you are going through. I have... Jun 22 2010, 05:22 AM SubRosa I got inspired Thursday and finished the first dra... Jun 27 2010, 02:40 AM Acadian What a pleasure this was!
I know that the b... Jun 27 2010, 04:26 AM Winter Wolf To say that your writing has gone to the next leve... Jun 27 2010, 08:04 AM haute ecole rider Well done!
I hear you about the marathon writ... Jun 27 2010, 06:49 PM Olen Good to see this updating again, as ever it's ... Jun 27 2010, 10:05 PM SubRosa Acadian: Thank you paladin. Big is definitely what... Jun 28 2010, 05:22 PM haute ecole rider I loved that Julian recognized Teresa from that so... Jun 28 2010, 05:59 PM Acadian This was great! I loved how you anchored the ... Jun 28 2010, 09:33 PM Destri Melarg I fell in love with Simplicia in this chapter. Sh... Jun 29 2010, 02:00 AM Winter Wolf The memory of this chapter stays with one long aft... Jun 29 2010, 07:02 AM Olen Excellent part, I echo Wolf's comments on the ... Jun 29 2010, 10:20 AM SubRosa haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.o. Simplicia is w... Jun 30 2010, 04:58 PM D.Foxy Damn.
You got it in one, girl. Yep, he looks the... Jun 30 2010, 05:26 PM haute ecole rider Yup, that's the way I always pictured Vols, on... Jun 30 2010, 05:48 PM Acadian This was great!
Wonderful, almost majestic o... Jul 1 2010, 02:52 AM Winter Wolf I always loved this chapter from Beth and I still ... Jul 1 2010, 06:55 AM Olen Well you introduce Vols interestingly, I'm fas... Jul 1 2010, 12:38 PM Remko You, my dear, are truly a miracle worker. Loved th... Jul 1 2010, 02:23 PM SubRosa D.Foxy: Thank you Fox.
haute ecole rider: Thank... Jul 2 2010, 04:30 PM D.Foxy HELL YEAH!!!
That final dialogue...it... Jul 2 2010, 05:01 PM haute ecole rider Way to go, Vols, Teresa, Jensine, and Simplicia... Jul 2 2010, 06:46 PM Acadian The action was immersive and heartpounding.
Buf... Jul 2 2010, 06:51 PM Olen That was quite a part, one of the best I'd go ... Jul 3 2010, 03:56 PM SubRosa D.Foxy: Thank you Fox. That line was very importan... Jul 4 2010, 05:05 PM haute ecole rider It was wonderful to see the citizen rally with the... Jul 4 2010, 05:58 PM Acadian This was magnificent! Character interaction a... Jul 4 2010, 07:37 PM Olen I like how you protrayed the awkwardness that Tere... Jul 4 2010, 11:50 PM Winter Wolf From where she lay on the floor they seemed more l... Jul 5 2010, 07:15 AM SubRosa haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.o. I invoked the ... Jul 6 2010, 04:44 PM haute ecole rider Talk about the chaos of war.
You have captured t... Jul 6 2010, 05:25 PM Acadian gRRRRRRitty! Wow! Let my heart slow, whe... Jul 6 2010, 05:59 PM D.Foxy Who makes this old warrior's heart pound, lips... Jul 6 2010, 06:04 PM Olen Wow... That was gritty, violent, and real. The f... Jul 6 2010, 07:35 PM Remko I agree with Olen on the steelpart however; seeing... Jul 7 2010, 11:44 AM SubRosa haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.o. Fast-paced is ... Jul 8 2010, 05:53 PM haute ecole rider And with that, we can now catch our breaths and al... Jul 8 2010, 06:13 PM Acadian Wonderful SubRosa. Powerful stuff indeed. Poor T... Jul 8 2010, 06:20 PM D.Foxy I know something of Ursus Horriblis from personal ... Jul 9 2010, 02:22 AM Remko I once saw a demonstration of a Grizzly Bear's... Jul 9 2010, 11:21 AM haute ecole rider Like I said, never underestimate Kynareth's ki... Jul 9 2010, 03:23 PM Destri Melarg Chapter 11c
So Ray Stevenson as Vols, eh? I can... Jul 9 2010, 11:57 PM SubRosa haute ecole rider: Not finished yet. There is stil... Jul 10 2010, 01:11 PM
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