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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
D.Foxy   My heart has stepped up a gear, and a deep GRRRRRR...   Jun 5 2010, 12:57 AM
Destri Melarg   Wow. This was one of the few times in a chapter o...   Jun 5 2010, 08:28 PM
Olen   I like the hooks you've laid for the forthcomi...   Jun 5 2010, 09:39 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: You were not just speaking figu...   Jun 6 2010, 06:15 PM
D.Foxy   Pappy was too lenient. In my day, if any soldier ...   Jun 6 2010, 06:22 PM
haute ecole rider   I'm not sure that Pappy was too lenient. Now ...   Jun 6 2010, 07:15 PM
Olen   Nice bit of characterisation there, it gives a bet...   Jun 6 2010, 07:22 PM
Broken-Scale   Wow, I sure have missed alot. I love all of this n...   Jun 7 2010, 12:16 AM
Destri Melarg   The first time I read Pappy’s name in the last cha...   Jun 8 2010, 08:33 AM
D.Foxy   Right on, Destri. Crimes committed out of fear m...   Jun 8 2010, 01:39 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: I had considered Pappy killing Calva then ...   Jun 8 2010, 04:41 PM
Remko   I'd say the "alchemist" is amongst ...   Jun 8 2010, 04:44 PM
D.Foxy   Then why did you ask in the first place? Pappy tho...   Jun 8 2010, 04:50 PM
haute ecole rider   And if I recall correctly, something many old-ti...   Jun 8 2010, 05:25 PM
D.Foxy   Alas, it seems that you did not see the subtle inn...   Jun 8 2010, 06:43 PM
Olen   I did have a comment, then what passes for interne...   Jun 8 2010, 11:02 PM
Destri Melarg   Pappy is a man of many parts. In addition to bein...   Jun 9 2010, 12:56 AM
Acadian   Well done Sub Rosa! Regarding how Pappy han...   Jun 9 2010, 04:02 PM
SubRosa   Remko: We will just have to wait and see what happ...   Jun 10 2010, 04:32 PM
D.Foxy   Cavalry charge before the infantry step up? :blin...   Jun 10 2010, 04:50 PM
SubRosa   Well, the cavalry on the right have three options....   Jun 10 2010, 05:07 PM
haute ecole rider   Well written. I liked returning to the overview fo...   Jun 10 2010, 08:50 PM
Destri Melarg   I have learned a great deal through reading both t...   Jun 11 2010, 12:18 AM
Olen   Woo the battle. I can't comment on tactics as...   Jun 11 2010, 02:44 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole ouroboros: Thank you h.e.o. Destri ...   Jun 12 2010, 05:54 PM
Olen   You show the prebattle tension well among the men ...   Jun 12 2010, 06:08 PM
haute ecole rider   Oh man, like O said, the pre-battle tension was pa...   Jun 12 2010, 06:53 PM
D.Foxy   "And here I thought it was only women you cou...   Jun 13 2010, 04:21 AM
SubRosa   Olen: Thank you Olen. Worked for the netch refere...   Jun 14 2010, 04:14 PM
D.Foxy   Regarding the Berserker, or more correctly, the Ba...   Jun 14 2010, 04:46 PM
haute ecole rider   Very good description of CQ combat medieval style....   Jun 14 2010, 05:43 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 10f & 10g – The Battle of Bruma I enj...   Jun 15 2010, 12:19 AM
D.Foxy   I don't imagine that fact makes it onto the re...   Jun 16 2010, 05:24 PM
Acadian   Several chapters, and all caught up again. I love...   Jun 16 2010, 06:07 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Njall is not really based on the Norse ber...   Jun 16 2010, 09:40 PM
haute ecole rider   Excellent! I'm going to have to refer to t...   Jun 16 2010, 11:14 PM
D.Foxy   I thought someone had stuck four feet of sword up ...   Jun 17 2010, 02:05 AM
Acadian   Wow! It all really came together here! B...   Jun 17 2010, 02:26 AM
SubRosa   the worm hauteboros: Thank you hatue. Please feel ...   Jun 18 2010, 04:10 PM
D.Foxy   Wrestling trips and throws!!! YESSSSS...   Jun 18 2010, 05:08 PM
Remko   Oh my... that was beautifulterribleawesomegruesome...   Jun 18 2010, 05:17 PM
Olen   Well I'm caught up now and that was indeed exc...   Jun 18 2010, 06:21 PM
haute ecole rider   The battle reaches a peak! And what an awesome...   Jun 18 2010, 07:04 PM
Destri Melarg   This is simply damn good writing! I especially...   Jun 19 2010, 01:33 AM
D.Foxy   Hwut he said!   Jun 19 2010, 02:17 AM
Acadian   The overall impact here of power, blood, tears was...   Jun 19 2010, 03:39 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Thank you Fox. Pappy's throw was a Jud...   Jun 20 2010, 05:45 PM
ureniashtram   Wow. Just.. wow. That, my dear SubRosa, is one of ...   Jun 20 2010, 06:12 PM
haute ecole rider   Well done! Julian would hate how you made her...   Jun 20 2010, 07:17 PM
Olen   A great conclusion to a very well written battle p...   Jun 20 2010, 11:13 PM
D.Foxy   The technique and facts of battle - you didn't...   Jun 21 2010, 12:58 AM
Acadian   I normally don't enjoy reading about organized...   Jun 21 2010, 02:59 AM
Remko   *swallows chunk in throat* Wow.   Jun 21 2010, 04:47 PM
Destri Melarg   Destri Melarg: No more horn? The horn is official...   Jun 22 2010, 12:32 AM
SubRosa   ureniashtram: Thank you U. I drew upon a great dea...   Jun 22 2010, 03:01 AM
haute ecole rider   Take your time. Chapter 10 was one of the most in...   Jun 22 2010, 03:16 AM
Acadian   If you're going to take a break, this point in...   Jun 22 2010, 03:37 AM
Destri Melarg   I know exactly what you are going through. I have...   Jun 22 2010, 05:22 AM
SubRosa   I got inspired Thursday and finished the first dra...   Jun 27 2010, 02:40 AM
Acadian   What a pleasure this was! I know that the b...   Jun 27 2010, 04:26 AM
Winter Wolf   To say that your writing has gone to the next leve...   Jun 27 2010, 08:04 AM
haute ecole rider   Well done! I hear you about the marathon writ...   Jun 27 2010, 06:49 PM
Olen   Good to see this updating again, as ever it's ...   Jun 27 2010, 10:05 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you paladin. Big is definitely what...   Jun 28 2010, 05:22 PM
haute ecole rider   I loved that Julian recognized Teresa from that so...   Jun 28 2010, 05:59 PM
Acadian   This was great! I loved how you anchored the ...   Jun 28 2010, 09:33 PM
Destri Melarg   I fell in love with Simplicia in this chapter. Sh...   Jun 29 2010, 02:00 AM
Winter Wolf   The memory of this chapter stays with one long aft...   Jun 29 2010, 07:02 AM
Olen   Excellent part, I echo Wolf's comments on the ...   Jun 29 2010, 10:20 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.o. Simplicia is w...   Jun 30 2010, 04:58 PM
D.Foxy   Damn. You got it in one, girl. Yep, he looks the...   Jun 30 2010, 05:26 PM
haute ecole rider   Yup, that's the way I always pictured Vols, on...   Jun 30 2010, 05:48 PM
Acadian   This was great! Wonderful, almost majestic o...   Jul 1 2010, 02:52 AM
Winter Wolf   I always loved this chapter from Beth and I still ...   Jul 1 2010, 06:55 AM
Olen   Well you introduce Vols interestingly, I'm fas...   Jul 1 2010, 12:38 PM
Remko   You, my dear, are truly a miracle worker. Loved th...   Jul 1 2010, 02:23 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Thank you Fox. haute ecole rider: Thank...   Jul 2 2010, 04:30 PM
D.Foxy   HELL YEAH!!! That final dialogue...it...   Jul 2 2010, 05:01 PM
haute ecole rider   Way to go, Vols, Teresa, Jensine, and Simplicia...   Jul 2 2010, 06:46 PM
Acadian   The action was immersive and heartpounding. Buf...   Jul 2 2010, 06:51 PM
Olen   That was quite a part, one of the best I'd go ...   Jul 3 2010, 03:56 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Thank you Fox. That line was very importan...   Jul 4 2010, 05:05 PM
haute ecole rider   It was wonderful to see the citizen rally with the...   Jul 4 2010, 05:58 PM
Acadian   This was magnificent! Character interaction a...   Jul 4 2010, 07:37 PM
Olen   I like how you protrayed the awkwardness that Tere...   Jul 4 2010, 11:50 PM
Winter Wolf   From where she lay on the floor they seemed more l...   Jul 5 2010, 07:15 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.o. I invoked the ...   Jul 6 2010, 04:44 PM
haute ecole rider   Talk about the chaos of war. You have captured t...   Jul 6 2010, 05:25 PM
Acadian   gRRRRRRitty! Wow! Let my heart slow, whe...   Jul 6 2010, 05:59 PM
D.Foxy   Who makes this old warrior's heart pound, lips...   Jul 6 2010, 06:04 PM
Olen   Wow... That was gritty, violent, and real. The f...   Jul 6 2010, 07:35 PM
Remko   I agree with Olen on the steelpart however; seeing...   Jul 7 2010, 11:44 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.o. Fast-paced is ...   Jul 8 2010, 05:53 PM
haute ecole rider   And with that, we can now catch our breaths and al...   Jul 8 2010, 06:13 PM
Acadian   Wonderful SubRosa. Powerful stuff indeed. Poor T...   Jul 8 2010, 06:20 PM
D.Foxy   I know something of Ursus Horriblis from personal ...   Jul 9 2010, 02:22 AM
Remko   I once saw a demonstration of a Grizzly Bear's...   Jul 9 2010, 11:21 AM
haute ecole rider   Like I said, never underestimate Kynareth's ki...   Jul 9 2010, 03:23 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 11c So Ray Stevenson as Vols, eh? I can...   Jul 9 2010, 11:57 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Not finished yet. There is stil...   Jul 10 2010, 01:11 PM
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