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SubRosa
post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
ghastley   I'm still liking the way you're writing Sa...   Aug 26 2012, 03:26 AM
McBadgere   :lol: ... "Hey kid, you look strong enoug...   Aug 26 2012, 08:42 AM
King Coin   I was wondering if there would be casualties. Tere...   Aug 27 2012, 04:15 PM
mALX   This was such a Teresa moment, it is just like h...   Aug 28 2012, 06:26 AM
Colonel Mustard   Well, I've spent the last week or so squirelli...   Aug 30 2012, 08:37 PM
SubRosa   hazmick: It would have been just too easy if not o...   Sep 1 2012, 06:36 PM
liliandra nadiar   And that sounds like a wrap of Hand of Fire. Great...   Sep 1 2012, 07:17 PM
hazmick   A cliffhanger!? Oh you are cruel Rosa :lol: ...   Sep 1 2012, 07:19 PM
Acadian   ’Teresa was glad when they finally emerged into th...   Sep 2 2012, 12:26 AM
King Coin   "Good judgment comes from experience," ...   Sep 2 2012, 01:39 AM
Colonel Mustard   Hmm, never really thought to think of it as a seri...   Sep 2 2012, 09:59 AM
Grits   Teresa’s rumbling stomach under a calm sky was a g...   Sep 2 2012, 06:44 PM
McBadgere   Oooh, fantastic!... Loved the dressing down S...   Sep 4 2012, 12:41 PM
haute ecole rider   @McB: Wenyandawik is in game. It's one of the ...   Sep 5 2012, 11:49 PM
ghastley   Well having just been down to Leyawiin in my game,...   Sep 6 2012, 04:14 AM
Olen   Well I've caught up, as ever it was a pleasure...   Sep 9 2012, 09:35 PM
mALX   * I loved Teresa's inner thoughts as she...   Sep 13 2012, 08:40 PM
mALX   Treydog back ... check. Destri back ... check. S...   Jan 16 2013, 01:36 AM
Colonel Mustard   Treydog back ... check. Destri back ... check. ...   Jan 17 2013, 12:48 PM
mALX   Treydog back ... check. Destri back ... check. ...   Jan 17 2013, 01:28 PM
SubRosa   Maybe in a few weeks I might have something. But I...   Jan 17 2013, 09:17 PM
mALX   Maybe in a few weeks I might have something. But ...   Jan 17 2013, 09:24 PM
Glargg   Maybe in a few weeks I might have something. But...   Jan 18 2013, 07:16 PM
King Coin   Maybe in a few weeks I might have something. But ...   Jan 18 2013, 07:54 PM
Colonel Mustard   Maybe in a few weeks I might have something. But...   Jan 18 2013, 07:56 PM
McBadgere   Maybe in a few weeks I might have something. But I...   Jan 18 2013, 07:38 PM
Grits   OK, so I won’t expect an update, but I sure can ho...   Jan 18 2013, 08:59 PM
SubRosa   OK, so I won’t expect an update, but I sure can h...   Jan 20 2013, 04:41 AM
Destri Melarg   Ah, good. It seems that I've come back just i...   Jan 22 2013, 05:13 AM
SubRosa   After a long absence, Teresa is back to smile fain...   Jan 22 2013, 08:56 PM
mALX   What a wonderful surprise, thank you so much SubRo...   Jan 22 2013, 09:13 PM
PhonAntiPhon   Cracking update. I love your style and there's...   Jan 22 2013, 10:23 PM
McBadgere   Dear gods, even I raised an eyebrow (and that is a...   Jan 23 2013, 04:46 AM
Colonel Mustard   I believe that my reaction to seeing that this had...   Jan 23 2013, 12:09 PM
Acadian   A warm welcome back to you! Your talent sets ...   Jan 23 2013, 03:10 PM
Grits   Wheee, Teresa is back! Now I’m Grits of the Ob...   Jan 24 2013, 08:05 PM
King Coin   I’ve been interested in Storm-Tail ever since he c...   Jan 24 2013, 10:01 PM
SubRosa   mALX: It is good to be back. I wanted to show that...   Jan 28 2013, 06:27 PM
Acadian   Old news: Well, a three episode chapter is much b...   Jan 29 2013, 03:56 AM
McBadgere   Aw hell yeah!!... :D ...Lets face it, y...   Jan 29 2013, 04:41 AM
King Coin   Simplicia tells it straight. Perhaps a little too ...   Jan 30 2013, 03:58 AM
Colonel Mustard   Eee, update! I loved this chapter; an interes...   Feb 1 2013, 11:46 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Well-meaning but counter-productive is ex...   Feb 5 2013, 07:17 PM
Acadian   What a fabulous vision greeted Teresa as she parte...   Feb 6 2013, 12:35 AM
McBadgere   *Whimpers a little*...Damn I miss that series.....   Feb 6 2013, 04:47 AM
Grits   I love the ravens in Teresa’s vision along with th...   Feb 6 2013, 04:52 PM
Colonel Mustard   Ooh, an update! One with visions of a city, og...   Feb 6 2013, 06:00 PM
King Coin   The vision of the city was unexpected; I wonder wh...   Feb 8 2013, 05:22 AM
mALX   I’m sorry it took so long to catch up, having a to...   Feb 8 2013, 10:08 AM
ghastley   Good to see this one back in action! Is the r...   Feb 8 2013, 05:45 PM
Lady Saga   Post 100, page 5   Feb 11 2013, 08:41 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: As I have often suggested to other writer...   Feb 12 2013, 06:52 PM
Colonel Mustard   Quoted for the awesome imagery. Superb descriptio...   Feb 13 2013, 12:45 AM
McBadgere   Superb description of Umbra there. Of course it w...   Feb 13 2013, 02:15 PM
Acadian   Courtly intrigue! ‘Around them stretched o...   Feb 13 2013, 03:09 PM
King Coin   Bravil’s court. I’m with Teresa, nowhere I would w...   Feb 15 2013, 01:05 AM
mALX   * Gotta agree with Mustard on that being an AWESO...   Feb 15 2013, 06:45 AM
SubRosa   Colonel Mustard: The count's sword is not Umbr...   Feb 19 2013, 07:07 PM
Acadian   What a lovely interlude! There was an element...   Feb 19 2013, 09:34 PM
ghastley   She wore her green velvet gown, in spite of how it...   Feb 19 2013, 09:55 PM
McBadgere   Blimey...I never thought of Bravil of being cultur...   Feb 20 2013, 05:37 AM
Grits   Catching up: I just love the descriptions of Teres...   Feb 22 2013, 03:18 PM
Colonel Mustard   Oh, it wasn't Umbra? Well, I look forward to s...   Feb 23 2013, 03:22 PM
King Coin   She bought the house? :D Fighter’s guild house cl...   Feb 24 2013, 04:58 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: It is hard to believe that was years ago ...   Feb 26 2013, 09:12 PM
King Coin   [b]King Coin: I am glad more than one person inst...   Feb 27 2013, 05:08 AM
Acadian   A powerful episode, where Teresa confronts her sha...   Feb 27 2013, 02:32 PM
McBadgere   Blimey... :huh: ...Heavy stuff indeed... Speaking...   Mar 1 2013, 05:29 AM
Grits   I loved this intimate scene in the dark. Tadrose i...   Mar 5 2013, 03:15 PM
SubRosa   King Coin: You had me laughing at the idea of Anon...   Mar 5 2013, 11:17 PM
Acadian   A wonderful review of Teresa’s archery is interrup...   Mar 6 2013, 03:29 PM
Colonel Mustard   I enjoyed this chapter, and enjoyed it a lot. Mael...   Mar 6 2013, 09:13 PM
Grits   I love Pappy’s office! Getting a look at a cha...   Mar 6 2013, 07:31 PM
ghastley   I do like a plot and counter-plot! After the ...   Mar 6 2013, 10:38 PM
mALX   * First off, I am so very sorry for the delay in ...   Mar 9 2013, 03:01 AM
King Coin   Finally I can read! I apologize for taking so ...   Mar 9 2013, 07:10 PM
McBadgere   Hey! I was going to apologize for being late.....   Mar 10 2013, 08:10 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: Interesting that you brought up the possi...   Mar 12 2013, 05:29 PM
ghastley   "Jalbert, is that you?" A female voice ...   Mar 12 2013, 05:57 PM
Colonel Mustard   And that entire affair would have no doubt been mu...   Mar 12 2013, 06:26 PM
SubRosa   ...Just out of interest, what was the big, skinne...   Mar 12 2013, 06:44 PM
Colonel Mustard   ...Just out of interest, what was the big, skinn...   Mar 12 2013, 06:55 PM
Acadian   It seems Pappy has some of his fighters detailed t...   Mar 12 2013, 11:57 PM
Grits   I like the way Teresa handled Carandial. That cou...   Mar 13 2013, 01:58 AM
King Coin   The mage nodded, and Teresa saw him swallow hard....   Mar 13 2013, 02:46 AM
mALX   * Carandial had me laughing arguing with Teresa...   Mar 13 2013, 07:03 AM
Silver Dreamcatcher2525   I really enjoyed reading the last few chapters, th...   Mar 15 2013, 09:18 PM
McBadgere   Always liked this Ayelid ruin place...Thing... Mi...   Mar 16 2013, 12:10 PM
SubRosa   ghastley: The raven unsuccessfully pecking out the...   Mar 18 2013, 08:47 PM
Acadian   What a wonderful tale you are weaving with this ne...   Mar 19 2013, 03:31 PM
ghastley   ... A tantalizing theory as to why Count Pompousn...   Mar 19 2013, 05:05 PM
Grits   I love the story behind Soul Rattle! Bravil’s ...   Mar 19 2013, 03:53 PM
King Coin   Ah, looking through what the necromancers left… th...   Mar 20 2013, 01:54 AM
Colonel Mustard   Called it! The Guilds definitely aren't ...   Mar 20 2013, 12:33 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: A necronovella! I had not thought of ...   Mar 25 2013, 04:14 PM
ghastley   Irlav Jarol, and maid's outfits? We're goi...   Mar 25 2013, 05:22 PM
King Coin   Oh I loved this one. :) I completely forgot about ...   Mar 25 2013, 06:28 PM
Acadian   Nice to see Teresa’s old friends, Methie and Aela...   Mar 25 2013, 11:53 PM
SubRosa   Forgot to add. "Hello old friend." is ...   Mar 26 2013, 01:19 AM
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