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SubRosa
post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Grits   I love the screenshots with this episode. Also Met...   Mar 27 2013, 04:43 PM
McBadgere   Babylon 5... ;) ...Aaaaah Jeff... Sorry, still ca...   Mar 28 2013, 06:33 AM
SubRosa   ghastley: I figure Methredhel is sort of the Danny...   Apr 1 2013, 04:40 PM
ghastley   The food's not all that important, but you go...   Apr 1 2013, 05:06 PM
Acadian   Old news: Very right you are about Sisko calling ...   Apr 1 2013, 10:42 PM
mALX   I didn't get to read that last chapter yet (bu...   Apr 6 2013, 08:49 PM
King Coin   Witches and mages have everything better. Weather ...   Apr 7 2013, 03:50 AM
Grits   I really enjoyed the snowy IC after Bravil’s green...   Apr 7 2013, 04:52 PM
McBadgere   Well, that was some pretty impressive magicks righ...   Apr 8 2013, 08:14 AM
SubRosa   ghastley: Ever since she met Jauffre, Teresa has n...   Apr 8 2013, 06:50 PM
Acadian   A wonderful planning session! Each of the pla...   Apr 8 2013, 10:51 PM
Grits   Ooo, I want a castle maid’s uniform! Irlav Jar...   Apr 9 2013, 02:33 PM
SubRosa   Ooo, I want a castle maid’s uniform! Irlav Ja...   Apr 9 2013, 03:42 PM
ghastley   And you addressed the Fathis Aren problem, as I...   Apr 9 2013, 04:52 PM
McBadgere   Um...Firstly... ...It reminds me a bit of McBadge...   Apr 11 2013, 08:28 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you for the nits again. That first ...   Apr 15 2013, 05:42 PM
ghastley   If you want a Brewers name that sounds applicable ...   Apr 15 2013, 07:33 PM
Acadian   ‘She shivered as the cold air bit through her clot...   Apr 15 2013, 09:02 PM
Grits   What a fun reminiscence about good times in Cheydi...   Apr 17 2013, 11:22 PM
McBadgere   The thing that I loved with that, was that, to sta...   Apr 19 2013, 04:47 AM
SubRosa   ghastley: Aela and Ungarion have a lot of history ...   Apr 22 2013, 07:09 PM
Acadian   What fun as this ultimate heist continues! I ...   Apr 22 2013, 10:34 PM
ghastley   And you had a guard say that! You're ser...   Apr 23 2013, 06:21 PM
haute ecole rider   Sorry to be gone so long, but I'm caught up no...   Apr 25 2013, 05:33 AM
Colonel Mustard   I'm all caught up! Really been enjoying th...   Apr 25 2013, 10:57 AM
McBadgere   I object!!... :O ... You write these part...   Apr 27 2013, 04:30 PM
Grits   I love how Methredhel of the stone-built Imperial ...   Apr 29 2013, 02:51 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: Those detect life amulets are pretty simp...   Apr 29 2013, 04:56 PM
Acadian   I like how scrolls are the non-mage’s path to wiza...   Apr 29 2013, 10:54 PM
haute ecole rider   What a wonderful continuation of this latest episo...   Apr 29 2013, 11:48 PM
ghastley   When you described Methie dropping the sword down ...   Apr 30 2013, 03:18 AM
mALX   * First off, I am so sorry it took so long to get...   May 1 2013, 10:05 PM
mALX   * EDIT: * 46.1: I've always loved your cha...   May 1 2013, 10:06 PM
mALX   * 46.3: Fathis Aren is going to go nuts seeing p...   May 1 2013, 10:47 PM
mALX   * 46.4 Love the open friendship and trust betwee...   May 1 2013, 11:07 PM
mALX   * 46.5 SPEW! When in doubt, claim needin...   May 1 2013, 11:43 PM
McBadgere   ^ Someone's been busy... :D ... Aaaamywho... ...   May 3 2013, 04:23 AM
Grits   Well, the color discussion has been dun already, s...   May 4 2013, 05:49 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: If only I used scrolls in the game to suc...   May 6 2013, 07:08 PM
mALX   My own throat constricted remembering how his de...   May 6 2013, 10:31 PM
ghastley   For the gods sake don't give that sword to ...   May 7 2013, 06:28 PM
Acadian   What a crappy job poor Teresa had. Both literally...   May 6 2013, 11:34 PM
haute ecole rider   What a fun and delightful adventure of misdirectio...   May 8 2013, 04:07 PM
McBadgere   *Bites knuckle and worries*...So many jokes we cou...   May 11 2013, 10:48 AM
SubRosa   mALX: Since this whole necronovella revolves aroun...   May 13 2013, 05:22 PM
mALX   Now that is interesting, I didn’t think about tha...   May 13 2013, 06:08 PM
Acadian   As delightful as the previous few episodes have be...   May 13 2013, 06:46 PM
ghastley   It took me a couple of reads before I saw what it ...   May 13 2013, 07:29 PM
Grits   In the last one… Ugh, Teresa really got the crapp...   May 19 2013, 04:48 PM
King Coin   46.3 there was Chance, who seemed to have glued h...   May 20 2013, 04:27 AM
SubRosa   mALX: I imagine overcasting the Bloom spell would ...   May 20 2013, 04:28 PM
ghastley   Looks like Teresa's found her aim again. Drels...   May 20 2013, 05:57 PM
Acadian   I loved the magic battle! Wonderful display o...   May 20 2013, 07:15 PM
haute ecole rider   Sorry that I've been remiss in replying to las...   May 20 2013, 07:42 PM
Grits   Only the Nordic zombie remained, staring at Aela....   May 20 2013, 10:37 PM
King Coin   46.5 Wow, life detection amulets everywhere. He mu...   May 21 2013, 05:39 AM
McBadgere   What?...I deliberately waited for the end of the f...   May 22 2013, 03:46 AM
King Coin   46.7 Teresa’s going to scrub for hours after this,...   May 23 2013, 04:52 AM
mALX   This melee fight is just as it should be, so many ...   Jun 2 2013, 05:25 AM
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