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SubRosa
post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
D.Foxy   Once again I meet an old friend in the words that ...   Jul 10 2010, 01:17 PM
Acadian   How wonderfully 'mystical' that Teresa kne...   Jul 10 2010, 02:48 PM
Olen   The last two segments very much captured the essan...   Jul 10 2010, 08:26 PM
haute ecole rider   This segment is even better than the way I remembe...   Jul 10 2010, 09:30 PM
SubRosa   All: I went back and put in pics of Jensine and Ge...   Jul 12 2010, 04:36 PM
D.Foxy   Yes, I feel for Simplica. Love IS hard.   Jul 12 2010, 04:50 PM
haute ecole rider   Aye, poor Simplicia. She nearly lost her foster-da...   Jul 12 2010, 05:11 PM
Acadian   What a joy to tune in for another episode of the T...   Jul 12 2010, 06:18 PM
Destri Melarg   Teresa is beginning to display the hallmarks of a ...   Jul 13 2010, 09:48 AM
Olen   Ah, this makes more sense... When you called the ...   Jul 13 2010, 12:07 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: That it is. Thank you Fox. haute ecole ...   Jul 14 2010, 06:05 PM
Acadian   I loved this the first time, and I love it this ti...   Jul 14 2010, 06:49 PM
haute ecole rider   It was wonderful to see the start of this quest ag...   Jul 14 2010, 11:14 PM
Remko   Loved the way you caught Umbaccano being creepy. I...   Jul 15 2010, 11:12 AM
Olen   I like Unbaccano and can see why you chose this qu...   Jul 15 2010, 11:58 PM
Destri Melarg   What is it about Umbacano Manor that makes all of ...   Jul 16 2010, 12:58 AM
SubRosa   Acadian & h.e.o. & Remko: Thank you. I wor...   Jul 16 2010, 04:26 PM
D.Foxy   Ah, how seamlessly have you blended the character ...   Jul 16 2010, 05:14 PM
Acadian   This was wonderful, and I'm glad you left it a...   Jul 16 2010, 05:16 PM
haute ecole rider   Well, what can I say? I loved how you have descri...   Jul 16 2010, 06:36 PM
Olen   Ohh if there were any more hooks in this piece I w...   Jul 16 2010, 11:20 PM
Winter Wolf   An awesome write from our awesome Sage. :D Nobody...   Jul 17 2010, 05:03 AM
SubRosa   D. Foxy: Thank you Foxy. I am not red anymore thou...   Jul 18 2010, 06:12 PM
Acadian   WooHoo! What a lovely episode. It was wonder...   Jul 18 2010, 07:04 PM
SubRosa   Ooooh! I know. We simply must have a contes...   Jul 18 2010, 07:35 PM
haute ecole rider   I am never good at coming up with gang names, so I...   Jul 18 2010, 07:47 PM
Olen   Is that not the idea? The Tautology Club would b...   Jul 18 2010, 10:44 PM
D.Foxy   The Quay QueenZ!!! Waterfront Warrior...   Jul 19 2010, 04:47 PM
Winter Wolf   The waterfront is my fav place in the IC. It is li...   Jul 20 2010, 08:19 AM
Remko   Nice to see Methredel and Teresa are still the bes...   Jul 20 2010, 09:44 AM
ureniashtram   Oooh, gang names! I just love naming a bunch. ...   Jul 20 2010, 10:45 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you A. We will be seeing more Methr...   Jul 20 2010, 03:42 PM
haute ecole rider   Just as priceless now as it was the first time I ...   Jul 20 2010, 04:23 PM
Olen   Good part, I shan't requote what haute has alr...   Jul 20 2010, 05:03 PM
Acadian   Much to love here! Your rich detail of the ...   Jul 20 2010, 05:42 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 12.3 – Aftermath My favorite part of this...   Jul 22 2010, 02:36 AM
Winter Wolf   This was one of my favourite chapters over at Beth...   Jul 22 2010, 06:44 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: You mean because he is a blackg...   Jul 22 2010, 04:57 PM
Acadian   As beautiful as it was during your first telling, ...   Jul 22 2010, 06:02 PM
haute ecole rider   I loved this chapter the first time around, and I ...   Jul 22 2010, 06:06 PM
Olen   Wow... that last part changes things and fills a l...   Jul 22 2010, 06:56 PM
ureniashtram   Ooh, nice chapter here! Got's to agree wi...   Jul 23 2010, 05:34 AM
Winter Wolf   Awesome chapter, no doubt about it. One second you...   Jul 23 2010, 07:55 AM
D.Foxy   Yes...this is the part I remember well, and I stil...   Jul 23 2010, 04:05 PM
Destri Melarg   I find it interesting that Cyrodiil’s healers woul...   Jul 23 2010, 11:36 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you Vols. I did intend for that rea...   Jul 24 2010, 06:47 PM
haute ecole rider   Wonderful follow-up to Teresa's conversation w...   Jul 24 2010, 07:18 PM
Olen   Well you've certaily kept with filling in back...   Jul 24 2010, 08:17 PM
Destri Melarg   Destri Melarg: I think you are giving Vols much m...   Jul 24 2010, 09:07 PM
Acadian   Another very powerfully emotional episode! I...   Jul 24 2010, 10:16 PM
D.Foxy   Destri, I have the feeling that you are using ...   Jul 25 2010, 01:56 PM
Remko   Those two last chapter were friggin' awesome. ...   Jul 26 2010, 11:45 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.o. This has alway...   Jul 27 2010, 05:36 PM
Destri Melarg   Destri Melarg: What Foxy said. I strive to make a...   Jul 27 2010, 08:48 PM
SubRosa   Next: Teresa pays a visit to a part of the city we...   Jul 29 2010, 11:44 PM
haute ecole rider   Hmm, this is new! I like your description of ...   Jul 30 2010, 05:12 AM
Olen   I agree with Huate that the palace district feels ...   Jul 30 2010, 10:57 AM
Acadian   Oh, a new mystery! I'm curious to find ou...   Jul 30 2010, 01:02 PM
Destri Melarg   We are of the same mind when it comes to our appro...   Jul 30 2010, 08:14 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Lots more new stuff coming for ...   Aug 1 2010, 06:00 PM
Acadian   Set within your backdrop of the immense palacial g...   Aug 1 2010, 06:47 PM
Olen   Now there's scale, sort of put me in mind of d...   Aug 1 2010, 07:26 PM
Destri Melarg   In the space of just a few paragraphs you are able...   Aug 1 2010, 07:55 PM
haute ecole rider   Little to add, other than to echo the others. I r...   Aug 1 2010, 08:40 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you Acadian. Olen: Thank you Olen...   Aug 3 2010, 05:22 PM
haute ecole rider   And? And? And? I hope you don't leave me hang...   Aug 3 2010, 05:41 PM
Acadian   What a neat scene within a richly described settin...   Aug 3 2010, 05:55 PM
Olen   And another subplot developing, 'Sister'.....   Aug 3 2010, 06:54 PM
Destri Melarg   To quote mALX: AARGH!!! CLIFFHANGER...   Aug 3 2010, 11:48 PM
D.Foxy   And also in honour of our (temporarily) missing Ma...   Aug 4 2010, 02:35 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: And next the conclusion of the ...   Aug 5 2010, 06:03 PM
Acadian   I love how you wove the Main Quest in and out of t...   Aug 5 2010, 06:50 PM
Ornamental Nonsense   As with every other story on this forum, I am desp...   Aug 5 2010, 06:55 PM
D.Foxy   Why am I getting a horrible feeling that Sextus Cl...   Aug 5 2010, 07:06 PM
haute ecole rider   But Teresa would be perfect as a spy! :blink: ...   Aug 5 2010, 07:21 PM
Destri Melarg   [b]Destri Melarg: Cliffhanger? I'm not the on...   Aug 6 2010, 10:13 AM
Remko   Now, that is an interesting twist. Brother Piner a...   Aug 6 2010, 03:14 PM
Olen   I had expected her to refuse (and suspect her reas...   Aug 7 2010, 11:18 AM
MyCat   I finally caught up! Simplicia's story had...   Aug 7 2010, 04:53 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you Acadian. I was worried about th...   Aug 8 2010, 06:47 PM
hazmick   first things first, hello. after reading about Aca...   Aug 8 2010, 09:20 PM
Acadian   @ hazmik: Yes, Teresa's story is a gem! ...   Aug 8 2010, 10:12 PM
Winter Wolf   Delicious writing SubRosa. :) The way you tied u...   Aug 10 2010, 07:12 AM
treydog   There is so much for me to catch up on, that I do ...   Aug 14 2010, 01:57 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: Thank you haz. Teresa is glad you like it...   Aug 15 2010, 05:39 PM
hazmick   A relaxing stroll in the woods with Methredhel giv...   Aug 15 2010, 06:20 PM
Acadian   SubRosa, this was beautiful! You did wonderfu...   Aug 15 2010, 06:45 PM
hazmick   Thanks Acadian. I've never played Morrowind. L...   Aug 15 2010, 07:29 PM
Olen   Back into the wilds then, but with Methredhel. Yo...   Aug 15 2010, 08:23 PM
haute ecole rider   A wonderful break from the hustle and bustle of th...   Aug 15 2010, 09:11 PM
D.Foxy   B'wana, Kwama be an insect - in the TES world...   Aug 16 2010, 02:04 AM
treydog   Still reading as fast as I can while still doing j...   Aug 16 2010, 10:53 PM
Destri Melarg   Yes! You decided to explore more of Teresa an...   Aug 16 2010, 11:50 PM
SubRosa   hazmick: Thank you haz. I see Acadian already hand...   Aug 17 2010, 01:17 PM
hazmick   Aaw, poor Teresa. so near yet so far away from Met...   Aug 17 2010, 01:46 PM
Acadian   SubRosa, this is a lovely piece - er, um. . . I me...   Aug 17 2010, 02:51 PM
haute ecole rider   So now we get to see how Teresa and Methredhel bec...   Aug 17 2010, 04:04 PM
Olen   Poor Teresa, she'll find someone suitable even...   Aug 17 2010, 04:58 PM
D.Foxy   I think you have captured Love which in its teenag...   Aug 17 2010, 05:03 PM
Kazaera   I love this story so much. Not only does Teresa fe...   Aug 18 2010, 04:53 PM
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