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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
treydog   10a The entire description of the armies arrayed ...   Aug 19 2010, 02:12 AM
D.Foxy   Kurosawa could not have done it better. So you...   Aug 19 2010, 06:36 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: Thank you haz. You never know what might ...   Aug 19 2010, 04:43 PM
hazmick   :O seeing Valen Dreth makes me wish I had joined t...   Aug 19 2010, 05:25 PM
hazmick   :O seeing Valen Dreth makes me wish I had joined t...   Aug 19 2010, 05:26 PM
haute ecole rider   You have really highlighted the racism that is ram...   Aug 19 2010, 05:55 PM
Acadian   Oh my. Now I certainly see where Teresa came by h...   Aug 19 2010, 06:43 PM
Olen   A dark little episode in her past certainly, it go...   Aug 19 2010, 08:13 PM
MyCat   Now I know why I love the Dark Brotherhood quest l...   Aug 20 2010, 02:59 AM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 15.2 – Old Friends, Not Forgotten Teresa’...   Aug 20 2010, 06:07 PM
treydog   And now I return to my regular spamming. However,...   Aug 20 2010, 09:09 PM
SubRosa   hazmick: Thank you hazmick. Your remark about the ...   Aug 21 2010, 06:00 PM
hazmick   "I'm gonna be a courtesan when I grow up,...   Aug 21 2010, 06:39 PM
Acadian   I'm delighted you are going to spend some time...   Aug 21 2010, 07:03 PM
haute ecole rider   Ahh, gang names! Dandy Bandits, Tamriel Terro...   Aug 21 2010, 07:35 PM
MyCat   "But it was from ahead that the sound racing ...   Aug 22 2010, 04:47 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: Thank you hazmick. Adanrel is indeed the ...   Aug 23 2010, 04:13 PM
D.Foxy   CLIFFHANGERING should be a Crime punishable by bei...   Aug 23 2010, 04:20 PM
haute ecole rider   Man! Except maybe for the fight in Jensine...   Aug 23 2010, 04:35 PM
treydog   12.1 One of the (many) things I like about your w...   Aug 23 2010, 05:30 PM
hazmick   Ok, no waterfront. what about ''Meth's...   Aug 23 2010, 07:07 PM
Acadian   Whew! Let me catch my breath. Not only did y...   Aug 24 2010, 02:26 AM
D.Foxy   I censored myself. I like being here, and don...   Aug 24 2010, 02:29 AM
Olen   They were quite a couple of chapters, certainly ac...   Aug 24 2010, 12:06 PM
Winter Wolf   Wow, what a fantastic volume of work this has turn...   Aug 25 2010, 07:43 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Thank you foxy. This chapter is finished. ...   Aug 25 2010, 05:06 PM
D.Foxy   Didn't see THAT one coming....oh Rosie you are...   Aug 25 2010, 05:11 PM
hazmick   well played :P Very dramatic, it just goes to sh...   Aug 25 2010, 05:41 PM
haute ecole rider   Oh yeah! So THAT'S how Dreth ends up in ja...   Aug 25 2010, 06:46 PM
Kazaera   Yay more Teresa! I am really loving the flash...   Aug 25 2010, 06:57 PM
Acadian   Very clever SubRosa! My goodness you put a to...   Aug 25 2010, 08:19 PM
haute ecole rider   - I seem to recall flooding ancient Arenas for a ...   Aug 25 2010, 08:32 PM
Olen   Another tense, and tightly plotted installment. I...   Aug 25 2010, 09:26 PM
treydog   14.1 Another good bit of world- (and society) buil...   Aug 26 2010, 04:33 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Thank you fox. I am glad what the girls we...   Aug 27 2010, 05:34 PM
D.Foxy   Oh, what a slick plotter you are, Rosa... ... i...   Aug 27 2010, 05:45 PM
hazmick   The grey prince? well well. Your story has brought...   Aug 27 2010, 05:53 PM
treydog   There are so many little touches of genius here th...   Aug 27 2010, 06:11 PM
haute ecole rider   First the nit: It's all right, cuz it's ...   Aug 27 2010, 06:11 PM
Acadian   Very nicely done! The prank almost got way ...   Aug 28 2010, 12:08 AM
Olen   I like the idea of where her flare and heal spells...   Aug 28 2010, 06:57 PM
SubRosa   I have found the man to play Chance (For those of ...   Aug 29 2010, 01:19 AM
hazmick   Tears of the Sun is such a great film...anyway, he...   Aug 29 2010, 02:33 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Slicker than snot on a marble? :D hazm...   Aug 29 2010, 05:11 PM
D.Foxy   Well, it's a fox. I keep seeing her in the dis...   Aug 29 2010, 05:27 PM
haute ecole rider   I thought the same thing as foxy, too! Though ...   Aug 29 2010, 05:35 PM
hazmick   :O oh no! Dreth is gonna be on the streets ag...   Aug 29 2010, 05:36 PM
Olen   And back to the present. You wove it in well, the...   Aug 29 2010, 05:57 PM
treydog   This was a brilliant wrap-up to a brilliant chapte...   Aug 30 2010, 01:56 AM
Acadian   What a wonderful conclusion! I love how smoot...   Aug 30 2010, 03:58 AM
Remko   I really enjoyed that little peek into Teresa...   Aug 30 2010, 04:59 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: I did not think you were insecure about yo...   Sep 2 2010, 06:02 PM
treydog   Oh Noes! :O Not FO3! It will swallow...   Sep 2 2010, 09:58 PM
D.Foxy   So, Rosa got FO3 in the male, and wants to see wha...   Sep 3 2010, 01:34 AM
Destri Melarg   I finally get a block of time to become current wi...   Sep 8 2010, 08:22 AM
SubRosa   treydog: No fear of leaving Teresa behind for the ...   Sep 14 2010, 04:33 PM
hazmick   Welcome back from the wasteland! Very nice cha...   Sep 14 2010, 04:51 PM
Destri Melarg   Welcome back indeed! I see your time in the w...   Sep 14 2010, 08:03 PM
haute ecole rider   You sure know how to ratchet up the tension over t...   Sep 14 2010, 09:00 PM
treydog   Beautiful descriptions which show Teresa's env...   Sep 14 2010, 09:29 PM
Acadian   Welcome back, SubRosa and Teresa! Oh how we...   Sep 15 2010, 02:36 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: Thank you haz. It is nice to be back to t...   Sep 16 2010, 04:16 PM
hazmick   A very action-packed chapter here, well done! ...   Sep 16 2010, 04:44 PM
D.Foxy   Hmmm.... far be it for me to be a spoilsport nitp...   Sep 16 2010, 05:00 PM
treydog   The conjurer’s taunts add a lot of flavor- esp. th...   Sep 16 2010, 05:47 PM
Acadian   So much to love here!!!! :D The...   Sep 16 2010, 06:31 PM
Destri Melarg   Despite her turning down Baurus’ offer, it appears...   Sep 17 2010, 12:16 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: Thank you haz. One of the things I want t...   Sep 18 2010, 06:30 PM
treydog   This is one of those perfect SubRosa chapters, wit...   Sep 18 2010, 08:25 PM
hazmick   Nightshade tea? :D :D Yum! It sounds awfully...   Sep 18 2010, 10:02 PM
Acadian   Yes, another lovely chapter. 'Water makes h...   Sep 18 2010, 10:47 PM
Destri Melarg   You have obviously taken a page from Hautee’s Book...   Sep 18 2010, 10:52 PM
haute ecole rider   So we have another character whose origins lie in ...   Sep 19 2010, 02:06 AM
D.Foxy   After the thunder of battle, a soft coda of fellow...   Sep 19 2010, 02:26 AM
SubRosa   treydog: That last segment was extremely difficult...   Sep 20 2010, 05:13 PM
haute ecole rider   Well done. It is good to return to that grotto tha...   Sep 20 2010, 05:25 PM
D.Foxy   So, Teresa has found Yggdrasil? I hope she will no...   Sep 20 2010, 05:28 PM
Acadian   Oooh! I like Morcant! This is a beaut...   Sep 20 2010, 06:37 PM
hazmick   :D it's OK, Teresa can drink nightshade tea w...   Sep 20 2010, 08:01 PM
treydog   You have always shown yourself to be wise in what ...   Sep 20 2010, 08:57 PM
Destri Melarg   The word Temple conjured images in my mind that we...   Sep 20 2010, 11:38 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I was glad to finally get back ...   Sep 22 2010, 05:11 PM
D.Foxy   Indeed. I felt the same way when I first went up i...   Sep 22 2010, 05:17 PM
hazmick   A beautiful chapter Rosa! The bond between Mor...   Sep 22 2010, 05:53 PM
treydog   Teresa (Mallory) speaks! This entire epis...   Sep 22 2010, 09:02 PM
haute ecole rider   The back road between Bruma and Cheydinhal (that g...   Sep 22 2010, 09:20 PM
Destri Melarg   Taygete? Wasn’t she the one nymph who got away? ...   Sep 23 2010, 01:31 AM
Acadian   Oh, I'm with you, Teresa. This was beautiful...   Sep 23 2010, 03:21 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Thank you arctic fox, that was exactly the...   Sep 24 2010, 05:36 PM
haute ecole rider   Loved this chapter - from the mountain climb to th...   Sep 24 2010, 05:53 PM
Acadian   Another beautiful day! I enviously point o...   Sep 24 2010, 07:03 PM
treydog   True, as anyone who has impetuously free-climbed...   Sep 24 2010, 08:55 PM
Destri Melarg   So if summoning a grizzly takes years, does that m...   Sep 24 2010, 09:05 PM
hazmick   Morcant is awesome, shield spells and bear summoni...   Sep 25 2010, 04:16 PM
SubRosa   h.e.r. Thank you. Whenever I see a bear sit like t...   Sep 26 2010, 05:50 PM
haute ecole rider   Absolutely, I would love to see Morcant in Anvil...   Sep 26 2010, 06:49 PM
hazmick   I love it! eresa is getting quite good at this...   Sep 26 2010, 10:41 PM
Acadian   A leftover from the previous story regarding how s...   Sep 27 2010, 01:40 AM
Destri Melarg   At first I thought that I had ventured into some a...   Sep 27 2010, 06:01 AM
treydog   You add a great deal of depth, not just to your ch...   Sep 27 2010, 04:38 PM
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