Welcome Guest ( Log In | Register )

> Teresa of the Faint Smile, Adventures of a Stringy Bosmer
SubRosa
post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Post #1


Ancient
Group Icon
Joined: 14-March 10
From: Between The Worlds



Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




* * *

Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

Screenshot

Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

This post has been edited by SubRosa: Jul 30 2020, 01:31 AM


--------------------
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post

Posts in this topic
SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Remko   I would love to read more about Morcant. In fact- ...   Sep 27 2010, 07:03 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Morcant in Anvil it is then. I ...   Sep 28 2010, 05:15 PM
Acadian   This was a very tightly wrapped chapter. Teresa a...   Sep 28 2010, 05:39 PM
treydog   Teresa’s thoughts on Nirn taking everything back i...   Sep 28 2010, 06:18 PM
haute ecole rider   what a wonderful foray into another Ayleid ruin...   Sep 28 2010, 06:19 PM
Destri Melarg   Despite the voice of Eric Cartman ringing in my e...   Sep 29 2010, 05:24 PM
Remko   I have to be frank, her duality when it comes to k...   Sep 30 2010, 01:47 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: I had forgotten all about Imp Chips! ...   Sep 30 2010, 04:46 PM
treydog   There is just something about that passage that ...   Sep 30 2010, 05:24 PM
Acadian   Very rich with spooky atmosphere and Teresa's ...   Sep 30 2010, 06:05 PM
haute ecole rider   What a wonderful description of Castle Magia! ...   Sep 30 2010, 06:11 PM
Destri Melarg   I don’t think I have ever expressed my admiration ...   Sep 30 2010, 08:03 PM
hazmick   I've missed out on commenting for the past two...   Oct 1 2010, 02:53 PM
SubRosa   treydog: I suspect the Emperor saw much more than ...   Oct 2 2010, 06:28 PM
haute ecole rider   Ah, yes, Teresa's first encounter with a ghost...   Oct 2 2010, 08:14 PM
Acadian   Oooh! This was exciting! I loved how y...   Oct 2 2010, 08:25 PM
treydog   This is combat writing at its finest- Teresa is ph...   Oct 3 2010, 02:48 AM
Destri Melarg   This was just as good the second time around! ...   Oct 4 2010, 08:26 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you h.e.r. Ghosts are one...   Oct 4 2010, 05:46 PM
haute ecole rider   Aha! So we will be seeing Nerussa soon, I hope...   Oct 4 2010, 10:11 PM
D.Foxy   I'm back, and I'm glad to see that the Ter...   Oct 5 2010, 02:14 AM
Acadian   I'm with Rider - I enjoyed hearing Teresa refl...   Oct 5 2010, 02:55 AM
Destri Melarg   Like the others said, this chapter was a good time...   Oct 6 2010, 02:45 AM
treydog   And I, for one, am glad. What sort of tree woul...   Oct 6 2010, 12:39 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Well, Teresa certainly hopes to...   Oct 6 2010, 05:29 PM
Acadian   How wonderful! A reflective return to the IC,...   Oct 6 2010, 08:00 PM
haute ecole rider   How wonderful to see Simplicia doing so well in Je...   Oct 6 2010, 10:16 PM
Linara   It's great to see an aftermath of the Oblivion...   Oct 6 2010, 11:52 PM
treydog   Yay, me. To provoke a positive reaction from o...   Oct 7 2010, 01:58 AM
Destri Melarg   I have never done the quest to find Shadowbanish w...   Oct 7 2010, 09:52 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you Acadian. As you know, girls are...   Oct 8 2010, 04:54 PM
haute ecole rider   Yaaaay, Vols! :twirl: Once he saves her life...   Oct 8 2010, 06:01 PM
Destri Melarg   Welcome back, Vols! My goodness, 'Rosa, i...   Oct 8 2010, 07:19 PM
Linara   That felt heartbreaking and somewhat resigned, but...   Oct 8 2010, 08:13 PM
Acadian   I wonder if doing dumb things when angry is a wo...   Oct 9 2010, 01:01 AM
treydog   Hooray! Vols is back! And interrupting T...   Oct 9 2010, 02:22 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I knew you would be happy to se...   Oct 10 2010, 05:04 PM
haute ecole rider   You know, this has got to be one of my all-time fa...   Oct 10 2010, 05:13 PM
treydog   Agree with everything our Lady of the Horses said....   Oct 10 2010, 07:30 PM
Destri Melarg   Make it three for three! It is hard to quanti...   Oct 10 2010, 09:07 PM
Linara   I had a feeling Vols was changing a bit, finally l...   Oct 10 2010, 09:14 PM
Acadian   You brought more than a faint smile to my face as ...   Oct 11 2010, 12:17 AM
D.Foxy   Am I the only one who notices that when Brekke is ...   Oct 11 2010, 01:02 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: This is one of my all time favo...   Oct 12 2010, 04:34 PM
Acadian   This was lovely! You wonderfully captured her...   Oct 12 2010, 06:55 PM
haute ecole rider   Acadian already said it all. So I'll just say...   Oct 12 2010, 07:30 PM
Linara   That was a beautiful chapter. I've always love...   Oct 13 2010, 02:48 AM
treydog   Teresa’s butterflies and doubts are universal. Ev...   Oct 13 2010, 08:54 PM
D.Foxy   The difference is you preposition yourself to deli...   Oct 14 2010, 02:32 AM
Destri Melarg   Like hautee said, everything has already been poin...   Oct 14 2010, 09:44 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: I have always liked that line about the r...   Oct 14 2010, 11:08 PM
haute ecole rider   It just hit me why Nerussa's tale is soooo fam...   Oct 14 2010, 11:49 PM
Linara   Cheers! After nineteen chapters it's final...   Oct 14 2010, 11:50 PM
Acadian   Simply beautiful, SubRosa! You really do just...   Oct 15 2010, 02:45 AM
treydog   Once more, you show your brilliant skill with conv...   Oct 15 2010, 08:37 PM
Destri Melarg   I wonder how the Reman Dynasty would feel knowing ...   Oct 16 2010, 10:24 AM
haute ecole rider   AMEN!!   Oct 16 2010, 02:19 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Memoirs of a Geisha was one of ...   Oct 16 2010, 07:58 PM
haute ecole rider   Afterglow is right! They don't need to ope...   Oct 16 2010, 08:22 PM
treydog   So many wonderful passages here that I cannot quot...   Oct 16 2010, 09:29 PM
Acadian   I had more than a faint smile during this entire b...   Oct 16 2010, 11:57 PM
Linara   Sigh. Wonderful, I can say nothing more.   Oct 17 2010, 04:38 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I loved Memoirs. Especially in ...   Oct 18 2010, 04:28 PM
D.Foxy   I kissed you in my dreams before I ever saw your f...   Oct 18 2010, 04:56 PM
Linara   If that's a Foxy poem I want one! Anyway b...   Oct 18 2010, 05:15 PM
Acadian   What a superb display of many things here! ...   Oct 18 2010, 07:07 PM
treydog   Even though I knew what was going to happen, this ...   Oct 19 2010, 08:55 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 19.3 – Dibella’s Dance Add another to the...   Oct 19 2010, 10:33 PM
Doommeister   Rosa I have to congratulate you. I've just fin...   Oct 20 2010, 08:28 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Looks like someone was reading Mary Shelly...   Oct 20 2010, 04:19 PM
Acadian   I was laughing, then crying, then laughing, then c...   Oct 20 2010, 06:44 PM
Destri Melarg   This made my day! :lol: Maybe she should be...   Oct 20 2010, 09:19 PM
haute ecole rider   As heartbreaking as the scene with Adanarel was, i...   Oct 20 2010, 09:48 PM
treydog   If I can write a line good enough for you to steal...   Oct 21 2010, 01:53 AM
Linara   Reconciliation. We knew it was coming, at least wi...   Oct 21 2010, 06:05 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Thank you paladin. Hope your trip to see ...   Oct 24 2010, 05:14 PM
D.Foxy   And have I ever told you, Rosy, what a great write...   Oct 24 2010, 05:42 PM
haute ecole rider   And I echo Fox here. I found myself nodding along...   Oct 24 2010, 06:01 PM
treydog   Two things- first, Teresa does! Second- I lo...   Oct 24 2010, 07:21 PM
Destri Melarg   I bet that wasn’t as uncomfortable a conversation ...   Oct 25 2010, 08:30 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Nope, never! :lol: haute ecole rid...   Oct 26 2010, 04:48 PM
haute ecole rider   So that's what we need to do with all that mon...   Oct 26 2010, 07:30 PM
Destri Melarg   It seems that your knowledge of the Tamrielic pant...   Oct 26 2010, 10:10 PM
Acadian   I got to read two stories! I. No worries T...   Oct 27 2010, 12:26 AM
Linara   So that's where all the rich people keep their...   Oct 27 2010, 02:37 AM
treydog   The way you bring the city to life is always a joy...   Oct 27 2010, 09:00 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I understand that in Daggerfall...   Oct 28 2010, 05:39 PM
haute ecole rider   That last sentence is so true! And we meet Ra...   Oct 28 2010, 06:44 PM
SubRosa   OOps, I forgot to mention something. In the past I...   Oct 28 2010, 08:01 PM
Linara   Oh no, Kristen Stewart! I mean, umm, anyway, t...   Oct 28 2010, 08:25 PM
treydog   The return of Buffy’s “green bags”! Better ...   Oct 28 2010, 08:37 PM
Acadian   WooHoo! I was smiling (more than a faint one ...   Oct 29 2010, 02:33 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: It is always fun writing Raminu...   Oct 30 2010, 05:36 PM
D.Foxy   Gods.... What a teacher that woman is! As one...   Oct 30 2010, 05:52 PM
Acadian   This was wonderful! :P I see you may be he...   Oct 30 2010, 06:58 PM
haute ecole rider   I always love your world-building chapters - they ...   Oct 30 2010, 08:32 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 21.3 – The Last King Of The Ayleids It se...   Nov 1 2010, 10:48 AM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: You might change your opinion when you fin...   Nov 1 2010, 05:05 PM
Linara   Yay, a history lesson! Hmm, I don't think ...   Nov 1 2010, 05:23 PM
haute ecole rider   Great job of world-building here. Loved the histor...   Nov 1 2010, 05:26 PM
22 Pages V « < 4 5 6 7 8 > » 


Reply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:

 

- Lo-Fi Version Time is now: 3rd February 2026 - 02:04 PM