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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
treydog   Herminia’s grandfather is a delight- in his own gr...   Nov 1 2010, 10:04 PM
Acadian   Herminia is wonderful and you have really brought ...   Nov 2 2010, 01:15 AM
Destri Melarg   History is invariably written by the winners. It ...   Nov 2 2010, 11:58 PM
SubRosa   Linara: There are a bunch of books in the ES games...   Nov 3 2010, 04:09 PM
ureniashtram   WHAT?! Pelinal's death was... This is simp...   Nov 3 2010, 05:05 PM
haute ecole rider   As someone who has performed the KotN questline se...   Nov 3 2010, 05:09 PM
Doommeister   Sage Rosa, you have truly earned the nickname ...   Nov 3 2010, 05:43 PM
Acadian   My goodness. This Herminia seems to know her stuf...   Nov 3 2010, 07:03 PM
Cardboard Box   And with this, it seems I'm going to have to c...   Nov 4 2010, 01:28 AM
D.Foxy   And let's not forget WHO it was who first note...   Nov 4 2010, 02:00 AM
Remko   Oh wow..... Pelinal a mad beast on a indriscrimina...   Nov 4 2010, 04:53 PM
treydog   It is always a pleasure to read a “true” history, ...   Nov 4 2010, 08:37 PM
Destri Melarg   From the opening paragraph of The Song of Pelinal:...   Nov 5 2010, 10:43 AM
SubRosa   ureniashtram: Good comparison to Vault 101. Althou...   Nov 5 2010, 06:00 PM
Acadian   Goodness. Teresa is certainly getting her septims...   Nov 5 2010, 06:38 PM
haute ecole rider   Wow! More history, and what history this was...   Nov 5 2010, 08:06 PM
ureniashtram   More history lessons! Herminia can sure make a...   Nov 5 2010, 11:05 PM
treydog   More excellent history. Please do consider writin...   Nov 6 2010, 02:16 AM
D.Foxy   GRRRRR. Fiend-friend ACADIAN :meh: has made all t...   Nov 6 2010, 02:54 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: I knew you would like the prince of parch...   Nov 7 2010, 04:39 PM
haute ecole rider   And now we are venturing to dip our toe into Destr...   Nov 7 2010, 06:56 PM
Acadian   My goodness! There is certainly some teasing ...   Nov 7 2010, 07:15 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 21.7 & Chapter 21.8 The rise and ulti...   Nov 8 2010, 12:25 AM
treydog   Hermina’s memories of Raminus give her an earthy...   Nov 8 2010, 08:15 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: That is just like those bards, ...   Nov 9 2010, 06:32 PM
Acadian   Yay! We all love Vols and here, he gets his v...   Nov 9 2010, 07:22 PM
SubRosa   Oops, his name isn't Decanus, that is a Roman ...   Nov 9 2010, 07:39 PM
haute ecole rider   Ooh, yeah, Vols! :twirl: Something about this...   Nov 9 2010, 08:28 PM
D.Foxy   I loved this chapter when it first came out - and ...   Nov 10 2010, 01:10 AM
haute ecole rider   I loved this chapter when it first came out - and...   Nov 10 2010, 03:38 AM
Destri Melarg   A harrrrd man is good to find. Always. Always. Al...   Nov 10 2010, 09:00 AM
D.Foxy   Yes Hautee....and a curvaceous hip is good to grin...   Nov 10 2010, 01:54 PM
Remko   You know Vols is one of my favourite chars in your...   Nov 10 2010, 02:28 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: You did indeed sort out my leftist commer...   Nov 11 2010, 05:26 PM
haute ecole rider   Woo Hoo Vols! There's so much I love here...   Nov 11 2010, 06:22 PM
Acadian   Thanks for the tweak to your previous chapter. It...   Nov 11 2010, 08:19 PM
D.Foxy   I said it then and I'll say it now... the who...   Nov 12 2010, 01:58 AM
Destri Melarg   Sorry ‘Rosa, you are just going to have to face it...   Nov 12 2010, 09:52 AM
Remko   YEAH! Centurion Volsinius.... I can imagine hi...   Nov 12 2010, 12:25 PM
treydog   It is always a treat to have a chapter from Vols’ ...   Nov 12 2010, 05:22 PM
mALX   These last two chapters were among my faves in the...   Nov 12 2010, 08:04 PM
Winter Wolf   I don't have a military bone in my whole body ...   Nov 12 2010, 11:58 PM
Linara   So I missed four or so posts, but I do have a few ...   Nov 13 2010, 01:22 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Deruptured it is then, 'o l...   Nov 13 2010, 06:19 PM
D.Foxy   You know, reading this brings back memories...many...   Nov 13 2010, 06:27 PM
haute ecole rider   Rosa, you had me until the very last screen shot. ...   Nov 13 2010, 06:56 PM
mALX   I've gotta go with my own image: http://hotl...   Nov 13 2010, 07:57 PM
Acadian   Smoldering is right! Your writing smoothly de...   Nov 13 2010, 08:06 PM
Destri Melarg   Bless you, Acadian, for not subjecting us to more ...   Nov 13 2010, 11:32 PM
Linara   I'll second that. Nice screenies in the cha...   Nov 13 2010, 11:41 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Truer words have not been spoken. As much ...   Nov 15 2010, 05:49 PM
Linara   Well Teresa seems to have escaped that situation r...   Nov 15 2010, 06:25 PM
haute ecole rider   A great way to extricate oneself from an awkward s...   Nov 15 2010, 07:49 PM
mALX   A great way to extricate oneself from an awkward ...   Nov 15 2010, 08:16 PM
SubRosa   That's not beefcake, This is beefcake! :D   Nov 15 2010, 09:01 PM
mALX   That's not beefcake, This is beefcake! :...   Nov 15 2010, 09:29 PM
haute ecole rider   @mALX: Nah, too cute. The ultimate beefcake movie...   Nov 15 2010, 10:08 PM
mALX   @mALX: Nah, too cute. How can you top so much hot...   Nov 15 2010, 10:15 PM
treydog   Will comment on the most recent update when I have...   Nov 15 2010, 11:45 PM
Cardboard Box   Unfortunately there are a lot of dysmorphia suffer...   Nov 16 2010, 12:13 AM
Destri Melarg   On the other hand, for Destri's sake, I do en...   Nov 16 2010, 12:46 AM
mALX   That is for my benefit?! :blink: I can cert...   Nov 16 2010, 12:59 AM
Acadian   And how very much the prerogative of a young wom...   Nov 16 2010, 03:00 AM
treydog   You handled the encounter with a dignity and aplom...   Nov 17 2010, 06:13 PM
SubRosa   Linara: Indeed, Teresa is steadily growing up and ...   Nov 17 2010, 07:41 PM
Linara   Cliffhanger! And the plot thickens...Also, are...   Nov 17 2010, 08:35 PM
mALX   SPEW! "Say hello to my leetle friend.....   Nov 17 2010, 08:46 PM
haute ecole rider   I recall this scene from the original, and how it ...   Nov 17 2010, 09:28 PM
Destri Melarg   Once again, Raven proves to be Teresa’s salvation....   Nov 17 2010, 10:07 PM
Acadian   This was a relaxing day picking 'shrooms until...   Nov 18 2010, 02:26 AM
D.Foxy   Once again a whooping HELL YEAH for realism in a c...   Nov 18 2010, 03:06 PM
treydog   This is one I remember from before, and it has onl...   Nov 18 2010, 10:53 PM
SubRosa   double post   Nov 19 2010, 05:55 PM
SubRosa   Linara: Of course there are black and white Khajii...   Nov 19 2010, 05:57 PM
mALX   "Frickin laser beam eyes" - SPEW ...   Nov 19 2010, 06:12 PM
D.Foxy   WOW!!! I never realised that just as ...   Nov 19 2010, 06:53 PM
haute ecole rider   Ahh, yes, the knight in shining armor astride a wh...   Nov 19 2010, 06:57 PM
Linara   Lol! Silly me, I have one of those myself...Pr...   Nov 19 2010, 07:11 PM
D.Foxy   OH and P.S. rosa... next time you have a character...   Nov 19 2010, 07:11 PM
D.Foxy   LINARA HAS A DOUBLE BARRELLED D....K???? :blink:...   Nov 19 2010, 07:13 PM
Linara   LINARA HAS A DOUBLE BARRELLED D....K???? :blink...   Nov 19 2010, 07:20 PM
SubRosa   LINARA HAS A DOUBLE BARRELLED D....K???? I am s...   Nov 19 2010, 07:23 PM
mALX   I am sure she means her vagina. That's Re...   Nov 19 2010, 08:19 PM
Linara   Actually, Linara doesn't know the messes she g...   Nov 19 2010, 07:36 PM
ureniashtram   jdsfhweufhsdfjnsdfnsdufhwbgf fshfusdhofsdfhusdofhs...   Nov 19 2010, 08:58 PM
Linara   I'm innocent! I didn't know what I was...   Nov 19 2010, 09:20 PM
haute ecole rider   I'm not! Innocent, that is. *Puts hand on...   Nov 19 2010, 10:03 PM
mALX   I'm not! Innocent, that is. *Puts hand o...   Nov 19 2010, 10:13 PM
mALX   Next chapter...the unveiling and screenie of the ...   Nov 19 2010, 10:21 PM
Destri Melarg   [/url] [i]"When I get angry, Mr. Bigglesworth...   Nov 20 2010, 12:53 AM
SubRosa   I believe that the legionary rode between Teresa...   Nov 20 2010, 01:04 AM
haute ecole rider   Just re-read the part I was questioning earlier. M...   Nov 20 2010, 01:36 AM
Acadian   Heartpoundingly excellent! Great pace and bu...   Nov 20 2010, 02:30 AM
Linara   Thank goodness I'm not the only one!   Nov 20 2010, 03:07 AM
D.Foxy   And now, having made my joke, I do withdraw my ju...   Nov 20 2010, 08:38 AM
D.Foxy   The reason for the above edit, Lin, is Sage Rosa, ...   Nov 20 2010, 08:43 AM
Linara   While there is something to be said for the edit b...   Nov 20 2010, 09:57 PM
SubRosa   Don't pay any attention to him Linara. I for o...   Nov 21 2010, 12:31 AM
Verlox   Ah, a heroic and manly rescue! I am most enter...   Nov 21 2010, 02:49 AM
treydog   Outside the context of all we know of Teresa, th...   Nov 21 2010, 02:55 AM
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