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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Well it's not a knight actu...   Nov 21 2010, 07:42 PM
Verlox   Ahh! The natural order of things has been tor...   Nov 21 2010, 08:43 PM
haute ecole rider   I think this was better the second time around. I ...   Nov 21 2010, 09:44 PM
D.Foxy   I wonder if now Teresa (slightly) regrets the ange...   Nov 22 2010, 02:05 AM
Acadian   Old business regarding summoning: I believe you a...   Nov 22 2010, 02:06 AM
Winter Wolf   Great touch to see Teresa thinking on her feet wit...   Nov 22 2010, 08:54 AM
Destri Melarg   "Listen, what's your name…Teresa? give m...   Nov 22 2010, 05:46 PM
SubRosa   Verlox: Teresa has certainly had many surprises si...   Nov 23 2010, 06:10 PM
mALX   "Justin Morgan had a horse !!!...   Nov 23 2010, 06:23 PM
ureniashtram   So this chapter is all about fish and horses? :...   Nov 23 2010, 06:35 PM
haute ecole rider   Justinian Morganus, huh? Good to see! One ite...   Nov 23 2010, 09:11 PM
Acadian   What a rich aftermath/cleanup! Simply delight...   Nov 24 2010, 02:21 AM
Linara   Pappy! And also, Morganus...That one made me l...   Nov 24 2010, 05:41 AM
mALX   Pappy! And also, Morganus...That one made me ...   Nov 24 2010, 05:51 AM
Linara   Yeah, the helmet sort of...well its not a great ...   Nov 24 2010, 05:53 AM
mALX   Yeah, the helmet sort of...well its not a great...   Nov 24 2010, 06:15 AM
Destri Melarg   The legion enchanting saddles with feather spells,...   Nov 24 2010, 08:18 PM
SubRosa   mALX: As usual I was grappling with the horror of ...   Nov 25 2010, 06:36 PM
mALX   One of the things I love about Teresa - she is a c...   Nov 25 2010, 08:58 PM
haute ecole rider   Again a familiar segment, with some improvements. ...   Nov 26 2010, 12:41 AM
Acadian   Old business: The little 'song' for Teres...   Nov 26 2010, 01:06 AM
Linara   Ah..Faregyl Inn. I love that place, and how easy i...   Nov 26 2010, 04:22 AM
SubRosa   Next: Teresa gets better acquainted with some of t...   Nov 27 2010, 05:43 PM
mALX   You brought tears to my eyes the first time I read...   Nov 27 2010, 06:35 PM
haute ecole rider   I remember when I first read this that it was one ...   Nov 27 2010, 08:05 PM
Acadian   I've said it before - Perhaps young wood elves...   Nov 28 2010, 02:00 AM
Linara   :lol: A good chapter. You brought those charact...   Nov 29 2010, 05:57 AM
SubRosa   All: This was one of my favorite chapters to write...   Nov 29 2010, 05:17 PM
mALX   This has always been one of my fave chapters as we...   Nov 29 2010, 07:49 PM
haute ecole rider   I second mALX. Yes, that "Dearest mother -...   Nov 29 2010, 09:31 PM
Destri Melarg   Ah, back from the Holiday Wars! Nothing says ...   Nov 29 2010, 11:30 PM
Acadian   Another lovely episode. 'He is part of that...   Nov 30 2010, 02:28 AM
Linara   Wow, very nice. We see Teresa taking responsibilit...   Nov 30 2010, 05:29 AM
treydog   That will always be one of my favorite moments i...   Nov 30 2010, 10:39 PM
SubRosa   mALX & haute ecole rider: The" Dearest Mo...   Dec 1 2010, 05:45 PM
haute ecole rider   So Simplicia decides to play investigator, huh? I...   Dec 1 2010, 07:23 PM
Destri Melarg   Miss Jane Marple and Jessica Fletcher watch out, h...   Dec 1 2010, 09:41 PM
mALX   GAAAH!!! Agarmir and his henchmen wi...   Dec 1 2010, 09:49 PM
Acadian   Thank you for pausing to let Simplicia regale us w...   Dec 2 2010, 02:56 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I don't think Simplicia wil...   Dec 3 2010, 05:25 PM
haute ecole rider   What a wonderful chapter - full of surprises! ...   Dec 3 2010, 06:51 PM
Destri Melarg   Oh, and I have added Miss Jane Marple to my netfl...   Dec 3 2010, 11:16 PM
Acadian   Unexpected surprise is right! I figured we we...   Dec 4 2010, 02:16 AM
mALX   GAAAAH! I thought Vols killed the man that di...   Dec 4 2010, 12:53 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I like those street names! ...   Dec 5 2010, 06:57 PM
haute ecole rider   Another wonderful chapter with some familiar chara...   Dec 5 2010, 07:10 PM
hazmick   I've been gone for what? four months? And I co...   Dec 5 2010, 11:08 PM
mALX   SPEW!!! ROFL !!!! ...   Dec 6 2010, 12:55 AM
Acadian   Lovely, SubRosa! ^_^ I smiled at seeing Me...   Dec 6 2010, 02:29 AM
D.Foxy   If the hole of a ho is tilled with a hoe :P an...   Dec 6 2010, 02:32 AM
mALX   Hugely powerful chapter - HUGE!!! Wh...   Dec 6 2010, 09:00 AM
Destri Melarg   I did try one of the Miss Marple's from 1987 ...   Dec 6 2010, 11:37 PM
Petra Arkanian   Wow. Good work, although thats not saying much, co...   Dec 7 2010, 02:00 AM
Olen   Well I've caught up. This piece just keeps ge...   Dec 7 2010, 04:22 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Perhaps Dynari and Methie have ...   Dec 7 2010, 05:59 PM
Olen   I liked that part, it was good fun. Disguse in pl...   Dec 7 2010, 09:14 PM
hazmick   The words "let's get out of here." s...   Dec 7 2010, 09:39 PM
treydog   I just loved that contextual comment- it is thos...   Dec 7 2010, 09:43 PM
Destri Melarg   So many wonderful little character rendering detai...   Dec 8 2010, 03:02 AM
Acadian   What a lovely episode, and so fun to read! I...   Dec 8 2010, 03:06 AM
D.Foxy   "Five drakes apiece, and we'll open an Ob...   Dec 8 2010, 06:48 AM
mALX   Foxy got my favorite quote already, but there were...   Dec 9 2010, 12:55 AM
SubRosa   Olen: The last scene was a fun one to write becaus...   Dec 9 2010, 05:36 PM
hazmick   "I don't usually keep with foreign stuff...   Dec 9 2010, 06:40 PM
Olen   Now that was interesting, it's the first time ...   Dec 9 2010, 07:40 PM
Destri Melarg   You ability to play on the subtext of a chapter is...   Dec 9 2010, 10:08 PM
Acadian   Another great installment of Simplicia's myste...   Dec 10 2010, 02:19 AM
Thomas Kaira   So, what is going to happen in that graveyard... w...   Dec 10 2010, 11:09 PM
mALX   Awesome Write, SubRosa !!! The depth ...   Dec 10 2010, 11:34 PM
SubRosa   hazmick: That line was inspired by the LOTR movies...   Dec 11 2010, 06:19 PM
D.Foxy   GRRRRR....trust you to end your chapter on a cliff...   Dec 11 2010, 06:28 PM
mALX   GRRRRR....trust you to end your chapter on a clif...   Dec 11 2010, 06:39 PM
hazmick   WOW! :D . No more cuddly Vols indeed. Your ...   Dec 12 2010, 12:45 AM
Acadian   Lots to like here! You remind us that a profe...   Dec 12 2010, 02:21 AM
Grits   "That was munition plate, Volsinius thought a...   Dec 12 2010, 04:18 AM
Olen   Good part, shows the Legion as more intelligent an...   Dec 12 2010, 02:04 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: There are a couple of moves and their coun...   Dec 13 2010, 05:37 PM
D.Foxy   Very, very good, my Rose. I did the same techniqu...   Dec 13 2010, 05:48 PM
mALX   WHEW !!! That is probably the best fi...   Dec 13 2010, 06:21 PM
Thomas Kaira   Aaand... we have a typical bloodbath in the name o...   Dec 13 2010, 08:51 PM
Destri Melarg   Chapter 25.6 – Unfriendly Competition Grits alrea...   Dec 13 2010, 08:58 PM
Acadian   A smoothly written and gritty combat sequence that...   Dec 14 2010, 02:53 AM
hazmick   Just when I thought this story couldn't get an...   Dec 14 2010, 06:50 PM
SubRosa   D.Foxy: Sorry Cliff. If I had put the last two seg...   Dec 15 2010, 06:11 PM
Thomas Kaira   And Vols has a new guardian angel! That was a ...   Dec 15 2010, 08:52 PM
hazmick   Methredhel is awesome! Magicka and a bow?...   Dec 15 2010, 08:15 PM
mALX   Getting the set-up of everything from Methredhel...   Dec 15 2010, 08:49 PM
Destri Melarg   First Teresa and now Methredhel, Adanrel seems to ...   Dec 15 2010, 09:26 PM
Olen   Exciting last couple of parts. The contrast betwe...   Dec 15 2010, 10:27 PM
Acadian   This was brilliant! Ending the last episode i...   Dec 16 2010, 02:03 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: Teresa would love to explore the wilds of...   Dec 17 2010, 05:28 PM
mALX   This chapter has to be added to my favorites - Awe...   Dec 17 2010, 05:58 PM
hazmick   Simplicia was amazing! Thoronir better do what...   Dec 17 2010, 06:52 PM
Destri Melarg   So Simplicia is not above a touch of blackmail, eh...   Dec 17 2010, 07:13 PM
Thomas Kaira   (On the topic of the moons) It's a lot easier...   Dec 17 2010, 09:45 PM
Acadian   Simplicia really shows us her street smarts here. ...   Dec 18 2010, 02:07 AM
SubRosa   mALX: One of the downsides to Oblivion is that man...   Dec 19 2010, 07:12 AM
hazmick   Beautifully done 'Rosa. I think you may have j...   Dec 19 2010, 11:36 AM
Olen   Great stuff. 25.9 - well that I didn't see ...   Dec 19 2010, 03:11 PM
Acadian   *contented sigh* This was a lovely episode. I...   Dec 19 2010, 11:50 PM
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