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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Thomas Kaira   Why do I get the feeling our crimson-haired maiden...   Dec 20 2010, 05:29 AM
Destri Melarg   I’m with TK, placing this chapter after the events...   Dec 20 2010, 08:02 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: I am glad you liked Silverbridge. Expect ...   Dec 21 2010, 05:30 PM
Olen   Well a ruin with a friendly inhabitant, that's...   Dec 21 2010, 07:04 PM
mALX   Uh...uh...has the moratorium been lifted? I ... s...   Dec 21 2010, 08:28 PM
hazmick   What a nice fellow Carandial is! You've do...   Dec 21 2010, 11:12 PM
Winter Wolf   I am still trying to catch up. Damn you for writin...   Dec 22 2010, 12:44 AM
Acadian   "Hail friend," she called out in a clear...   Dec 22 2010, 02:06 AM
SubRosa   Olen: There are several people in this chapter to ...   Dec 23 2010, 03:17 PM
mALX   This chapter touches the heart of the reader, Tere...   Dec 23 2010, 04:19 PM
Thomas Kaira   A most warm welcome from the city of Bravil! S...   Dec 23 2010, 06:26 PM
hazmick   Wonderful, I like what you've done with Bravil...   Dec 24 2010, 12:37 AM
Acadian   This was lovely! :) Opening scene: Ah, co...   Dec 24 2010, 02:21 AM
SubRosa   mALX: It has been so many words and chapters since...   Dec 25 2010, 05:45 PM
hazmick   Teresa could not help but to notice the way the d...   Dec 26 2010, 10:33 AM
Acadian   I loved every moment of this! Let me say aga...   Dec 25 2010, 09:13 PM
mALX   Tadrose is smoking in that screenie !!...   Dec 26 2010, 12:32 AM
SubRosa   Acadian: Evaluating is right, and plenty of that g...   Dec 27 2010, 06:49 PM
hazmick   I like it, you have done a great job describing th...   Dec 27 2010, 07:04 PM
Grits   First Tadrose and now Gaius screenies, zing! *...   Dec 27 2010, 07:44 PM
Thomas Kaira   It never ceases to amaze me how you can stick so t...   Dec 27 2010, 11:32 PM
Acadian   I heard a rumor the other day that the FG was look...   Dec 28 2010, 02:43 AM
SubRosa   hazmick: Well, Teresa would like to see herself an...   Dec 29 2010, 05:11 PM
Olen   Well there's a fair few parts of this gone up,...   Dec 29 2010, 06:53 PM
hazmick   Haha, Pappy better not mess with this Bosmer. (Eve...   Dec 29 2010, 07:43 PM
Acadian   I liked it! Plenty of sparks here! The i...   Dec 30 2010, 02:55 AM
Grits   "What on Nirn are you babbling about?" ...   Dec 30 2010, 03:11 PM
mALX   This was one of my fave chapters before, and still...   Dec 30 2010, 07:53 PM
SubRosa   Olen: I have always liked Bravil, although I would...   Dec 31 2010, 06:14 PM
Thomas Kaira   This is going to be an interesting relationship....   Dec 31 2010, 08:53 PM
hazmick   Aaaw, no Tadrose. :( But there was Pappy, arche...   Jan 1 2011, 01:33 AM
Acadian   I smiled all the way through this. Simply deligh...   Jan 1 2011, 01:46 AM
mALX   Teresa's first inklings of temper, she handled...   Jan 1 2011, 05:29 PM
Olen   I like Pappy, the fact that he isn't coming ac...   Jan 2 2011, 04:22 PM
SubRosa   Thomas Kaira: Teresa's six aimed shots a minut...   Jan 2 2011, 07:04 PM
mALX   Whew! Poor Teresa - and poor Pappy, lol. Di...   Jan 2 2011, 07:52 PM
Thomas Kaira   Do I sense... Chemistry? Teresa, you are just ful...   Jan 2 2011, 09:42 PM
Jacki Dice   Ok well I was going to wait until I was all caught...   Jan 2 2011, 10:23 PM
Olen   You caught the intensity of her emotion well, and ...   Jan 3 2011, 12:49 AM
Acadian   Old business: Thank you for sharing your thoughts...   Jan 3 2011, 01:38 AM
hazmick   Woah there! Just calm yourself young Bosmer...   Jan 3 2011, 12:16 PM
SubRosa   mALX: I feel sorry for Pappy too, more than I do f...   Jan 4 2011, 05:55 PM
Olen   Good part. I'd wondered if Teresa might feel ...   Jan 4 2011, 07:30 PM
Acadian   So nice to calm down a bit after getting so riled ...   Jan 5 2011, 01:51 AM
Jacki Dice   I second Acadian's thoughts on the way you mad...   Jan 5 2011, 02:42 AM
Grits   I looked up Baa Baa Black Sheep, and soon the firs...   Jan 5 2011, 07:16 PM
SubRosa   Olen: I am just ignoring the whole Night Mother...   Jan 6 2011, 10:40 PM
Olen   Agreed on the whole thing about the Night Mother s...   Jan 6 2011, 11:57 PM
Winter Wolf   What a delighful chapter!! I would say wi...   Jan 7 2011, 01:20 AM
Acadian   To everything wise Wolf of the Winter said - ditto...   Jan 7 2011, 02:27 AM
mALX   The first screenshot (Chapter 27.1) - is that new ...   Jan 8 2011, 01:25 AM
D.Foxy   "Raven, that is hot!!" And so i...   Jan 8 2011, 07:48 AM
SubRosa   Olen: Ancondil is a lot of fun to write, because h...   Jan 8 2011, 07:27 PM
Olen   Bravo! Eliot, and The Hollow Men which is my ...   Jan 8 2011, 08:08 PM
mALX   Uh, I think I missed the naked Redguard in the tow...   Jan 8 2011, 08:08 PM
Grits   Where at dinner his words had been filled with mir...   Jan 8 2011, 08:39 PM
hazmick   I have missed a couple of great chapters. An Altme...   Jan 8 2011, 11:37 PM
Jacki Dice   So very true! Just as complicated as women s...   Jan 9 2011, 02:32 AM
Acadian   For mALX's question regarding the naked Redgua...   Jan 9 2011, 03:20 AM
D.Foxy   "Oh." Ancondil blinked. He looked as if ...   Jan 9 2011, 03:48 AM
Linara   Finally caught up, and man did I miss a lot. I lik...   Jan 10 2011, 02:42 AM
SubRosa   All: I have always kept track of the passage of mo...   Jan 10 2011, 05:51 PM
hazmick   How could anyone like this? she wondered. She wo...   Jan 12 2011, 11:55 PM
Olen   Hmm I can only agree on black tea, now put the mil...   Jan 10 2011, 09:05 PM
Cardboard Box   Hmm I can only agree on black tea, now put the mi...   Jan 11 2011, 12:06 AM
Acadian   Thank you for bringing our little Bravil guildhall...   Jan 11 2011, 02:16 AM
Grits   “Several sets of stairs cut along its length, lead...   Jan 12 2011, 02:52 AM
Jacki Dice   Gag! Once again, I'm on Teresa's sid...   Jan 12 2011, 07:55 AM
SubRosa   Olen: Yes indeed, for all of the strides our strin...   Jan 12 2011, 05:55 PM
Acadian   Another lovely and rich epsisode! *contented ...   Jan 13 2011, 01:59 AM
mALX   You have modded Bravil !!! Do I remem...   Jan 14 2011, 09:01 AM
Grits   Teresa made a mental note to herself to try to lo...   Jan 14 2011, 05:05 PM
SubRosa   hazmick: The rest of this chapter is all about wha...   Jan 14 2011, 05:11 PM
haute ecole rider   I really loved reading how Teresa learned new spel...   Jan 14 2011, 06:42 PM
mALX   I agree, you created an atmosphere of personality ...   Jan 14 2011, 09:38 PM
Acadian   Much to like here, again! Elven vs human fe...   Jan 15 2011, 02:48 AM
Jacki Dice   I love this! It develops the characters so w...   Jan 15 2011, 05:50 AM
hazmick   Haa-Rei also needs to visit the mages guild in Bra...   Jan 15 2011, 12:19 PM
Olen   Good part, I like how you've developed the Bra...   Jan 16 2011, 04:13 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Maybe those spells are in the g...   Jan 16 2011, 06:40 PM
mALX   Aradroth! And what a powerful description of ...   Jan 16 2011, 07:30 PM
haute ecole rider   I see that the tragedy that is Kvatch continues to...   Jan 16 2011, 07:51 PM
Olen   Another part... lucky me. Aradroth, now there...   Jan 16 2011, 11:10 PM
Thomas Kaira   Got a little behind, there. Well, I'm back up ...   Jan 17 2011, 01:14 AM
Acadian   A beautiful episode from the mistress of character...   Jan 17 2011, 04:02 AM
Jacki Dice   This is one of my favorite chapters as it touches ...   Jan 18 2011, 06:00 AM
Grits   Then the high elf managed a crooked smile, as if ...   Jan 19 2011, 08:48 PM
Zalphon   You make stuff feel really real, Subrosa :) That...   Jan 20 2011, 02:53 AM
SubRosa   mALX: Awkwardness certainly describes Teresa! ...   Jan 20 2011, 05:56 PM
haute ecole rider   And so begins one of the straaangest quests in Cyr...   Jan 20 2011, 07:14 PM
Olen   I like this quest (though when I first did it the ...   Jan 20 2011, 10:06 PM
Acadian   What a deliciously complex conversation! At...   Jan 21 2011, 01:48 AM
Thomas Kaira   Well, at least some felafel, then! :P ...   Jan 21 2011, 02:02 AM
Jacki Dice   :blink: ... ..... ....... :rofl: Poor Teresa...   Jan 21 2011, 02:39 AM
D.Foxy   Cumming between women and their clothing....tsk, t...   Jan 21 2011, 03:20 AM
mALX   ... etc. :whistle: You missed the real line,...   Jan 22 2011, 06:57 PM
D.Foxy   You caught that line because of your recent kidney...   Jan 23 2011, 02:23 AM
mALX   You caught that line because of your recent kidne...   Jan 23 2011, 12:49 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Thank you H.E.R. This one did n...   Jan 23 2011, 07:44 PM
haute ecole rider   Yes, and so it begins! I personally think thi...   Jan 23 2011, 08:19 PM
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