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post Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
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Hi all, welcome to Teresa 2.0. Some of you may recognize the stringy wood elf this fan fic is about from another forum. I am going to start reposting her adventures here. However, I have taken this opportunity
for a fresh start to go back over the story and do some work on it. Starting with an entirely new scene, which you see below.

I have decided to give up the idea of breaking things up into separate Acts like I did with Not A Hero and Moving Through Darkness. It was probably a little confusing. Instead I am just going to go with a single title and let it go on as long as it needs to, hence the new name.

You will also find that the first half of what used to be called Not A Hero has been heavily edited. Hopefully an improvement! The rest of the story will also receive a facelift, although generally not as great. There will probably be a few more entirely new chapters turning up between some of the old ones as well. So this is not the same story you might have seen on the other forum.


For people new to the TF, you might find it easier to catch up with the cliff notes version in the spoiler tags below:




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Chapter 1 –Warning

12th Second Seed, 3E433

The harsh croaking of a raven prompted Teresa to raise her green eyes from the only slightly bruised apple that she was eating. The alley behind the Tiber Septim Hotel was narrow, a thin gouge cut between massive stone buildings that loomed high to either side and cast its depths into dim shadow. Sacks filled with trash dotted the length of the lane, clustered in small islands near the back doors of every business and home.

The pale wood elf stood at one such mound of garbage, filled with slops and other castoffs. Rich people threw away the best food, she knew, making the back streets here in the Talos Plaza district a practical gold mine for street urchins like herself.

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Her scavenged lunch fell from suddenly nerveless fingers however, as she gazed down the alley and saw the figure of a man running in the shadows. He was clad in plain linens, the clothing of an ordinary plebeian. But there was nothing ordinary about the way he held a drawn sword in his hand, nor the blood that stained it.

Before the elf could bolt and run herself, the interloper was upon her. Now she could see he was an Imperial by his olive skin and dark hair. He reached out to her with his free hand, and as Teresa backed away she realized that it was not only his sword that was washed in blood, but the front of his tunic as well.

"You must warn them!" the Imperial croaked through the blood that flowed from his mouth. As she stared with wide eyes, Teresa was certain she could see tiny bubbles of air bursting up from the red flow. She had seen that before, from deep knife wounds to the chest. He was a dead man, she thought, he just did not know it yet.

His hand clutched at the shabby tunic of worn sack cloth that Teresa wore, grabbing a handful of the rough material. Teresa nearly jumped as his fingers pressed against one of her breasts. The sword fell from his other hand with a clatter of steel on stone, and the Imperial dropped to his knees, collapsing into her.

Teresa stared with wide eyes at the dying man, whose head was now buried in the valley between her small breasts. Her heart raced like a wild horse, and she felt her skin grow cold as Skyrim. Try as she might to flee, her feet seemed rooted to the spot however. All she could do was gape in growing horror as the man clutched at her willowy frame and spat blood over her already bedraggled clothing.

The sound of footsteps caused her to lift her eyes and gaze back down the way the Imperial had come. There stood a handful of figures wearing dark red robes, nearly black in the dim light. Hoods of the same material covered their heads, shrouding their faces in darkness. She saw blades in their hands as well. Not mortal steel, but rather monstrous, wavy knives, like the jagged teeth of some fearsome Daedra.

"They're going to kill the-" with that the Imperial's voice gave out, and she heard a rattling noise issue from his throat. It was like a dry breeze through an abandoned tenement. Then he fell limp at her feet, open eyes staring blankly back up at her from the pavement.

"Hey, what's going on back there!" came an iron growl from the other end of the alley. The clash of armored boots rang out between the high buildings, reverberating in the Bosmer's ears. Wrenching her gaze from the dead man, Teresa turned to see an Imperial Watchman charging down the alley toward her, dark eyes glittering like polished ebony within the 'T'-shaped slit in his full-faced helmet.

"You there! Put down your weapons and surrender." The legionary had his arming sword out now, and before the wood elf knew it, he was standing before her. He took a moment to first glance down at the dead man at Teresa's feet, and then the blood that washed her tunic.

"I didn't-" Teresa gasped, feeling her blood turn to ice with the understanding of how things must look to the watchman. Then the steel gauntlet of his left hand was reaching out for her, and the words slipped from her throat.

"You'll hang for this street meat!" the legionary growled.

With that Teresa finally felt her body come back under her control. Twisting away from watchman's grasp, she sprang for the other end of the alley. Her eyes saw that the red-robed figures were gone now. Then her view swam as her foot caught upon the corpse of the Imperial. She felt herself falling, and her head slammed against something hard as she came to a stop.

Her vision narrowed, as if she were within a tunnel. She was vaguely aware of the thin, blue slit of the sky above her, flanked by the grey stone of buildings to either side. She thought she saw a dark bird spread its wings in that sliver of light. But then the shape dissolved, and turned into the steel helmet of the legionary, looming closer and closer. Finally, darkness consumed her.

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SubRosa   Teresa of the Faint Smile   Mar 19 2010, 10:56 PM
Thomas Kaira   :evillol: I would suggest a certain hammer, ...   Jan 23 2011, 08:33 PM
Olen   Good part, I like the additional background you ga...   Jan 23 2011, 09:33 PM
Acadian   This was great how you selected and controlled you...   Jan 24 2011, 03:03 AM
Jacki Dice   I like this line :) As they say, knowledge i...   Jan 24 2011, 03:14 AM
mALX   I noticed in the Construction Set for Henantier...   Jan 24 2011, 03:34 PM
Cardboard Box   I noticed in the Construction Set for Henantier...   Jan 25 2011, 12:24 AM
mALX   I noticed in the Construction Set for Henantier...   Jan 25 2011, 09:48 PM
Linara   Darn, I keep missing the posts. Still, I like read...   Jan 25 2011, 06:35 AM
Grits   Geen-Rana, what a lovely, aquatic-sounding name...   Jan 25 2011, 03:52 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Yes, and so it begins! You ...   Jan 26 2011, 04:38 PM
Thomas Kaira   Spooky... I don't think I'd want to get...   Jan 26 2011, 09:03 PM
Olen   I'd forgotten what a good quest this was. You...   Jan 26 2011, 11:51 PM
haute ecole rider   And here we are inside the imagination of M.C. Esc...   Jan 27 2011, 12:43 AM
Acadian   'he is certainly not a Peeping Tovas.' Thi...   Jan 27 2011, 01:30 AM
SubRosa   Stringy wood elf? :blink: By Raven, you need a l...   Jan 27 2011, 03:59 AM
Jacki Dice   My word! Teresa is nude!! :O :P I lik...   Jan 27 2011, 02:53 AM
Acadian   Oh noes! I was just joshin'! Teresa ...   Jan 27 2011, 05:07 AM
SubRosa   Thomas Kaira: Actually I picked that one to write ...   Jan 29 2011, 07:30 PM
haute ecole rider   You've captured the pitfalls and traps that ch...   Jan 29 2011, 07:52 PM
Grits   Strategically placed ebony orb, nice! There ar...   Jan 29 2011, 11:20 PM
Olen   Great part, you caught the tension well, though I ...   Jan 30 2011, 01:29 AM
Acadian   Very creepy and very neat! You really capture...   Jan 30 2011, 02:57 AM
Jacki Dice   I love how you fleshed out this chapter. Its gener...   Jan 30 2011, 06:39 AM
Thomas Kaira   Now there's a gauntlet. Great bit of edge-of-y...   Jan 30 2011, 07:21 AM
mALX   WOO HOO! Teresa in the buff! The red lig...   Feb 1 2011, 12:34 AM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: Is that Schrödinger's Cat? ...   Feb 1 2011, 06:41 PM
Olen   Good camera positioning for that last screenie :P ...   Feb 1 2011, 09:09 PM
haute ecole rider   And once again we are treated to wonderful, strate...   Feb 1 2011, 09:10 PM
mALX   Screenshot I love this screenshot for the camera...   Feb 1 2011, 10:25 PM
Acadian   Very well done! I was right on the edge of my...   Feb 2 2011, 02:25 AM
Thomas Kaira   Been a long time since the Oblivion Crisis ended,...   Feb 2 2011, 02:58 AM
Jacki Dice   Um...pardon me, good Well of Reason... you're ...   Feb 2 2011, 03:44 AM
Linara   Gah, the tests! I don't like this quest, p...   Feb 3 2011, 01:32 AM
SubRosa   Olen: I worked hard to get that last picture! ...   Feb 4 2011, 05:45 PM
mALX   mALX: I guess now the question is which character...   Feb 6 2011, 03:21 PM
haute ecole rider   this is the one test that freaked me out! But...   Feb 4 2011, 07:27 PM
Linara   For some reason I forgot about the test of Faith. ...   Feb 4 2011, 09:33 PM
Acadian   'One is a test of faith, Teresa thought, no wo...   Feb 5 2011, 01:42 AM
haute ecole rider   'One is a test of faith, Teresa thought, no w...   Feb 5 2011, 02:02 AM
Jacki Dice   'Looking at the outfit, she did find herself...   Feb 6 2011, 01:18 AM
D.Foxy   'Twas not Foxie, but aye sweet Dox...er...er.....   Feb 5 2011, 02:06 AM
Jacki Dice   Syl's dress! I've always loved it. Too...   Feb 5 2011, 04:22 AM
mALX   I drowned so many times in this quest - unable to ...   Feb 5 2011, 06:04 AM
Thomas Kaira   Let me explain a little further... the scrolls are...   Feb 5 2011, 10:55 AM
SubRosa   Let me explain a little further... the scrolls ar...   Feb 6 2011, 04:35 AM
Thomas Kaira   <snip> And thus we must remember that all...   Feb 6 2011, 05:08 AM
Olen   Heh, well... He also seems to be a accomplished ...   Feb 5 2011, 03:10 PM
mALX   'Looking at the outfit, she did find herself ...   Feb 5 2011, 11:00 PM
SubRosa   schrödinger's ecole rider: That was always the...   Feb 7 2011, 05:36 PM
mALX   What is the green coloring that surrounds Teresa? ...   Feb 7 2011, 05:59 PM
haute ecole rider   @mALX: The green coloring is the enchantment infus...   Feb 7 2011, 06:57 PM
Olen   Good part, as ever. As mALX said, you really have...   Feb 7 2011, 07:43 PM
Thomas Kaira   @mALX, rider: Actually, I believe Rosa already exp...   Feb 7 2011, 08:21 PM
Captain Hammer   And another thread I'm caught up on. SubRosa,...   Feb 7 2011, 09:21 PM
Grits   I am so relieved! I had no idea how Teresa was...   Feb 8 2011, 12:06 AM
Acadian   I can see why you left this one for last! Wow...   Feb 8 2011, 02:09 AM
SubRosa   mALX: I am not positive what is causing the green ...   Feb 10 2011, 05:51 PM
Captain Hammer   "I have a natural talent for percussion inst...   Feb 11 2011, 03:52 PM
haute ecole rider   Oblivion! is right! Just a few short month...   Feb 10 2011, 06:48 PM
Thomas Kaira   To your comment: Considering I love to mod the liv...   Feb 10 2011, 09:16 PM
Acadian   Poor Teresa finally gets Henantier all put back to...   Feb 11 2011, 02:45 AM
Grits   "Yes, of course," Henantier said. He ste...   Feb 11 2011, 03:30 AM
Olen   Well other people have got to the funny line befor...   Feb 11 2011, 07:30 PM
ghastley   I'd think daub and wattle was deliberate, as t...   Feb 12 2011, 01:34 AM
Jacki Dice   :lol: Poor Henantier! You can't blame hi...   Feb 12 2011, 05:46 AM
haute ecole rider   That was hilarious! Maybe red headed women are...   Feb 12 2011, 04:47 PM
SubRosa   naughty red rider: Indeed, you hit the nail on the...   Feb 12 2011, 05:57 PM
ghastley   "Of course I'm right," Teresa said,...   Feb 12 2011, 06:06 PM
Captain Hammer   Ah, the Feather effect. "Helping turn wimpy m...   Feb 14 2011, 01:37 AM
haute ecole rider   Wonderful conversation between Teresa and Henantie...   Feb 12 2011, 06:07 PM
mALX   I loved the scene when Henantier has his senses ba...   Feb 12 2011, 06:09 PM
mALX   Chapter 28.9 This is one of the places that bring...   Feb 12 2011, 06:17 PM
Olen   Excellent :). It points out a use for summons wh...   Feb 13 2011, 10:04 PM
Acadian   Firstly, let me not bore you with an excuse for be...   Feb 14 2011, 01:12 AM
Thomas Kaira   I'm glad to see the frugal Feather spell is at...   Feb 14 2011, 02:34 AM
SubRosa   (Sir Graves) ghastley: He needs to get some experi...   Feb 14 2011, 05:49 PM
haute ecole rider   Whew! I'm tired just reading that workout...   Feb 14 2011, 06:35 PM
Captain Hammer   Excellent chapter, I must say. Reminds me of a sto...   Feb 14 2011, 06:41 PM
ghastley   I like the way you've managed to make the town...   Feb 14 2011, 07:40 PM
Thomas Kaira   A nice, brisk jog to start the morning right. Noth...   Feb 14 2011, 11:25 PM
Acadian   I agree with Rider, a great tour of the city! ...   Feb 15 2011, 02:06 AM
Grits   Chapter 28.9 Teresa felt a faint smile creep acros...   Feb 15 2011, 03:39 AM
Jacki Dice   Brings me back to my cross-country meets -bleh- ...   Feb 15 2011, 05:36 AM
Olen   Slightly odd... not one I've ever heard of. ...   Feb 15 2011, 12:17 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: The workout has only begun...   Feb 16 2011, 06:39 PM
Jacki Dice   Aww. I liked this part especially. I know I worr...   Feb 16 2011, 07:03 PM
haute ecole rider   Really enjoyed the camaraderie that typifies the B...   Feb 16 2011, 07:21 PM
Thomas Kaira   A nice, crusty Ciabatta loaf with pure Extra Virgi...   Feb 17 2011, 12:48 AM
Captain Hammer   Ladies and Gentlemen, if you ever want a demonst...   Feb 17 2011, 01:31 AM
Acadian   A very nice continuation in a 'day in the life...   Feb 17 2011, 04:02 AM
Grits   I’m sure I will not surprise you with my enthusias...   Feb 17 2011, 04:22 PM
mALX   ROFL !!! That had me rolling !...   Feb 18 2011, 07:35 AM
SubRosa   Jacki Dice: Teresa will just have to hope that a c...   Feb 18 2011, 05:20 PM
mALX   This chapter is so filled with stuff to quote - fi...   Feb 18 2011, 05:37 PM
haute ecole rider   This made me laugh! I've met guys (and a ...   Feb 18 2011, 07:09 PM
ghastley   Looks like Teresa's getting close to underst...   Feb 18 2011, 07:32 PM
Olen   Oooh two parts... and both good. Meeting the othe...   Feb 18 2011, 08:40 PM
ghastley   ... I liked Pappy's attempt to beef her up wi...   Feb 18 2011, 08:58 PM
Acadian   Old business: Oh, on the bloom spell, I think you...   Feb 19 2011, 02:11 AM
D.Foxy   Rosa, this latest chapter gets the DFoxy seal of a...   Feb 19 2011, 02:56 AM
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