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SubRosa
post Sep 7 2010, 05:19 PM
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Would that strange library be the realm of a certain Daedric Prince named Herman? wink.gif

I loved the Argonian's drinking tea with nightshade in it. I hope no one else tried drinking from the same pot! ohmy.gif

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You use the word "strange" several times in the opening sequence. You might want to go back and see about changing a few instances with other synonyms.

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Destri Melarg
post Sep 8 2010, 09:21 AM
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Forgive me for not commenting sooner. Real life has a nasty habit of upsetting the best laid plans.

Chapter 2.0

Now I can add a Marsh Ranger to the pantheon of friends that I have met through this forum. Like the others I was struck by the simple yet telling details that you incorporated into this chapter. The color of Haa-Rei’s scales as an indication of health was already pointed out, as was the falling asleep submerged in the bathtub. But I liked the using of stones from the fireplace to heat the tub as well.

Chapter 2.0 (continued)

I can’t believe that Haa-Rei decided to do business with Rasheeda. The prices she charges?! Every time I’m in her shop I have to quell the urge to strangle her with her own apron! Why are all the Redguards in Cyrodiil such skinflints? The note that she gives him is an excellent way to underscore just how mean spirited she really is. Now I really do want to go to Chorrol and strangle her!

Chapter 2.1

Haa-Rei finds himself in Apocrypha . . . and has the strength to leave it?! That, in itself, makes him a very unique individual indeed. Like the others said, I’m going to enjoy this!


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post Sep 11 2010, 06:17 PM
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This is definitely a good story smile.gif


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post Oct 1 2010, 03:09 PM
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hey guys! I know you've all been waiting for another post but you'll have to hold on for a while longer.

A new chapter should be surfacing later in October, I've just got Morrowind GOTY and Fallout 3 GOTY is on the way...

As for the latest chapter: You are a perceptive bunch, Haa-Rei will indeed become further involved with Mr.Mora-- It's going to be different from the in-game quest (In-game, you have to be a certain waay through the main quest) so Haa-Rei will have to improve his skills somewhat. We will also be meeting some of my other Oblivion chars along the way. biggrin.gif

Thanks for being patient and for the kind comments! biggrin.gif


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post Oct 1 2010, 03:37 PM
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QUOTE(hazmick @ Oct 1 2010, 10:09 AM) *

hey guys! I know you've all been waiting for another post but you'll have to hold on for a while longer.

A new chapter should be surfacing later in October, I've just got Morrowind GOTY and Fallout 3 GOTY is on the way...

As for the latest chapter: You are a perceptive bunch, Haa-Rei will indeed become further involved with Mr.Mora-- It's going to be different from the in-game quest (In-game, you have to be a certain waay through the main quest) so Haa-Rei will have to improve his skills somewhat. We will also be meeting some of my other Oblivion chars along the way. biggrin.gif

Thanks for being patient and for the kind comments! biggrin.gif



I had no doubt you would add your own touches to the Mora quest! You will love FO3 GOTY !!!! I downloaded the DLC separately after playing through two games - all the DLC for that game is Awesome !!!!


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post Oct 1 2010, 04:30 PM
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QUOTE(hazmick @ Oct 1 2010, 10:09 AM) *

hey guys! I know you've all been waiting for another post but you'll have to hold on for a while longer.

A new chapter should be surfacing later in October, I've just got Morrowind GOTY and Fallout 3 GOTY is on the way...


SNIP

That just means we will expect FO3 and Morrowind fan-fics in addition to Haa-Rei. Demanding? Who us?

Enjoy the games and we will wait for new adventures.


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post Jul 21 2011, 12:30 PM
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I love the detail that Hee-Rei improved his wardrobe at the prison. He slept underwater in the cold tub! I love his dry humor. From his interview it sounds like our nightshade-sipping bibliophilic Marsh Ranger has been busy. Perhaps he’d like to tell us a little more of his story? Please? smile.gif


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