Jerric's Story, A Nord's Adventures in Cyrodiil Options

[Grits]

haute ecole rider: I’m glad you enjoyed it! It was mostly taking care of business, but the characters made me want to linger.

SubRosa: You got it, and now Jerric has a reason to thank Maglir. I’m glad you approve of Savlian’s new job. The game’s treatment seemed abrupt and unsatisfying to me. Darnand disagrees with Sigrid on the subject of Jerric’s alchemy, and Felen will weigh in on the subject soon. Darnand would point out that if Jerric was a natural alchemist like Teresa, surely he would find a way to make himself smell better. Apricots and vanilla, aaaaah! Thank you, SubRosa!

Acadian: Thank you for your kind words, Acadian! Batul struck me as a no-nonsense survivor, and someone Jerric would have known well. To my surprise, she was ready with a joke. The passage you pointed out is important to understanding Jerric’s mindset throughout this chapter. Starting over has been postponed for him, and grieving has been interrupted. Thank you so much for drawing attention to it!



Chapter 8: Running, Part 1

When Jerric and Flash reached the rocks at the base of the Kvatch Road, Martin stepped out from his cover. He wore plain clothing under a dark grey cloak. His sturdy shoes looked well-worn, and Jerric guessed they were his own. A dagger hung from Martin’s belt. He carried rolled blankets and a small pack in his hands. Jerric took the bedroll and added it to Flash’s load. “Do you want to put that on Flash, or carry it?” Jerric asked him, nodding to the pack.

“Carry it.” Martin shrugged it over his shoulders. “Lead on.”

They started walking down the Gold Road. Meadowlarks trilled their joy from the thickets on both sides of the road. Flash playfully nudged Jerric’s back as they walked, snorting wetly on his neck. The sun shone warm in the cloudless sky. Jerric had a troubling feeling of disconnection. He had to look down at his stained surcoat to remember what was real. He realized that he needed to make a plan.

“I think we should take the road as far as Skingrad,” he decided. “I know a place to stop for food, and I need to get my sword recharged. We can cut north from there across the Imperial Reserve and hope we’re not seen leaving the road. What do you think, Brother Martin?”

“Just Martin now, I must leave the priest behind.” They walked a few more paces. “You will be recognized in your Kvatch cuirass. Young Rilian told your tale to everyone who came through the camp while he was recovering. That lad could be a bard.”

Jerric considered. “I suppose it won’t hurt to be seen going east. We could be heading almost anywhere in Cyrodiil. I’d like to push hard until we get to Skingrad. Only stop after sunset until moonrise, then keep going as soon as we have enough light. We can rest when we get away from people. Can you do it? Good. I’ll go into the Mages Guild, you and Flash should be safe hiding out around the Grateful Pass Stable. Shout if there’s trouble, you should get Tilmo from the stable and a Skingrad guard.” He dug into his daypack and pulled out Sigrid’s package. “Flatbread around some kind of meat. Here you go. Eat and then we’ll save our breath for walking.”

They passed a lot of folk on the road, and Jerric’s cuirass did attract attention. They kept moving each time someone hailed them, calling out their greetings and waving off the questions that followed. Jerric set a pace that had Martin trotting every few steps to keep up. The number of small caravans headed toward Kvatch made Jerric hopeful. Soon Sigrid will have some salt to put on her mystery sandwiches, he thought.

They got most of the way into Gnoll’s Meeting Camp before the residents had them surrounded, peppering them with questions. One lad’s piercing treble rang out over the other voices. “Jerric, aren’t you the Hero of Kvatch? The one who closed the gate and saved the city?” Jerric recognized the freckled face and solemn, dark brown eyes. Carmia’s boy, Faustino.

“The city was destroyed, no one saved it,” Jerric told him. He saw Faustino’s face fall, and he realized that they needed to believe in a hero. This isn’t about you, he told himself. He looked around at the other folk who were crowding him. “Savlian Matius is the Hero of Kvatch. Almost everyone that’s left alive, he got out of the city. He discovered that the Gate could be closed, and he led the fight that drove out the daedra. Savlian Matius serves the people now as Steward of the city.” Jerric took a breath. “Berich Inian is the Hero of Kvatch. He leads the City Guard now as Captain. Menien Goneld. Ilend Vonius. Many brave folk went in to close that Gate, and most of them were lost in the Deadlands. Those are the names of your heroes. They kept the daedra from your homes. Now there’s work to be done in Kvatch, and opportunity for those with the strong backs and stomachs to do it.” Martin stood beside Flash while Jerric made his speech, and Jerric could not read his expression. “They need food and supplies,” he continued. “In these times you don’t need to wield a sword to be a hero.”

Jerric saw questions on many faces, but he turned away from them. He caught Carmia’s eye. “A moment, Carmia.” She walked with him the few steps to the cookfire. The others talked amongst themselves now, comparing their versions of what he had just said. What rumors did I just start, he wondered. He turned his attention to Carmia. “I need food for a journey. I can’t explain, and I can’t pay you. There’s trouble.”

Carmia gave him a piercing look. “You’ve never asked anyone here for a favor, and I don’t expect you will again. And don’t let it out that I did one for you.” Carmia began filling a small sack with vegetables and apples. “I trust your trouble won’t follow you here.”

That was the risk he had not wanted to take. “If anyone asks about me, don’t try to lie. You can’t hide that I was here, but you don’t know where I’m going.” He kept his voice low. “I want to you consider moving to Kvatch this winter. Faustino’s already a hunter; he’ll thrive wherever you put him. It’s Lavina I’m thinking about. How old is she now, eight? She’s grown up wild out here, and free. But there’s a cost to that, too. I know why you made the choices you did, but now it doesn’t have to be that way. In Kvatch you can live inside city walls, and no one will care who you used to be. We lost all of our children, Carmia. Every one of them. Lavina would have a chance to be anyone she can be. Out here she won’t have many options, and you have to split the coins you get too many ways. You turned away from your old life, how are you going to feel when Lavina finds out the easiest way to earn is on her back? Matilene was hardly more than a kid when she tried to stick her hand down my drawers. And I guess you know the next fellow didn’t turn her down.”

“You’re one to judge Matilene. She’s taken plenty of drakes from you over the years.” Carmia shoved the filled sack against his middle hard enough to make him wince.

“Only after we were both old enough. I’m the last one to judge her, but you know most of her earnings go to drink. How much of that is so she can stand to smell the next stranger? I’m asking you if that’s what you want for your daughter.” Jerric made a show of handing something back to Carmia. She took the imaginary coins from his empty hand.

“City walls are a cage, Jerric. Lavina’s not yours, stay out of it.”

“I know she’s not, Carmia. Just like I know some day I’ll walk down here and see her looking at me with those hard eyes, just like the others. I’ve said more than you wanted to hear, but I’m not sorry.” He raised the sack of food. “Thank you for this, I won’t forget it.” He started up the path toward the road.

“Jerric!” Carmia called after him. He turned around at looked at her. “You’re not wrong,” she said. “I’ll think about it.”

Jerric nodded. He collected Flash and Martin, and they left the camp.

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The chapel bells rang four of the morning watch as Jerric jogged toward the Skingrad Mages Guild. Julianos, he thought. I’m sure I’m a stranger to you. He slipped quietly through the silent hall to the second floor living quarters. The central lounge was empty, but still lit by candles. Vigge’s door stood open, as did Erthor’s. Not a good sign, Jerric thought. He listened at Sulinus’ door and heard snoring. He listened at Adrienne’s door and heard nothing. Vigge’s most likely to be in there with Adrienne, he decided. Or maybe not, as he remembered the bathing room incident. He knocked softly on Adrienne’s door, then again louder. He opened it a crack. The room appeared to be dark. He opened the door wider and called out. “Apologies. It’s Jerric.” He pushed the door all the way open, and light from the lounge fell across the floor.

Adrienne slid down from the bed and strode to the door. Her blonde hair lay over her shoulder in a neat braid, and her bare feet made no sound on the thick rug. Bretons, Jerric thought. Put her in a nightgown, and even this frightening harpy looks sweetly pretty. “I trust you have a good reason for waking me?” she demanded.

Adrienne’s tone matched her expression in its severity. So much for appearances, thought Jerric. “I’m sorry to disturb you, Guild Master,” he said respectfully. “I’m looking for Vigge.”

“Vigge has gone to Kvatch,” she snapped. “Are you a member of the Guard now, Associate? I trust you didn’t steal that.” She indicated the wolf on his chest.

“No. It belonged to Captain Matius, he gave it to me. Steward Matius.” How did we miss Vigge on the road, Jerric wondered. Must have passed while we were at Gnoll’s Meeting. Get to the point. “Look, I need my sword recharged, and I can’t wait. I don’t even have enough coin to cover what it will cost. I know it’s not your problem. I’m asking you to help me.” Puppy dog eyes won’t work on this one, he thought. She probably eats puppies.

“I’m sure you don’t expect me to perform this task for you. You’ll find soul gems in the cabinet in Vigge’s workroom.” Jerric stood stunned while she glared up at him. “Well?”

“Nothing. Thank you.” Jerric retreated before she changed her mind or remembered she hadn’t mentioned payment.

Vigge’s cabinet contained baskets spilling over with soul gems, unmarked and disorganized. He glanced over at the door that he guessed Druja slept behind. No, he decided. I can figure this out myself. He held Chillrend in one hand and picked up a soul gem in the other. Like alchemy, he thought. Probably. He gingerly sent his magicka into the gem and discovered that it hummed with energy. Startled, he almost dropped it. He gave the gem a nudge with his will, and the energy buzzed through him on the way into Chillrend. He felt the gem crumble in his hand. The dust sifted away to nothing before it hit the floor. Huh, he thought. That felt kind of nice.

He picked up another gem and tested it. This one felt less powerful. Then he had an idea. He sent his magicka into Chillrend this time, and he was shocked at how much he learned. He had an instant sense of the sword’s power, the nature of its enchantment, and how much energy was left inside it. He even felt the void that could still be filled with magicka. He picked through the soul gems until he found one that closely matched Chillrend’s emptiness. Another nudge, and power thrilled through him again. Vigge has an excellent job, Jerric decided. He pocketed a handful of gems and headed for the door.

He spun around on the threshold and strode back to the kitchen before he could start feeling guilty. It’s for the Empire, he told himself. Cook will forgive me. He filled a bag and left, crunching on an apple.

[mALX]

I tried not to spam your thread with quotes, but could not help it on these two chapters.


All the interchanges between Jerric and the Kvatch residents were so natural, absolutley perfect blend of the comfortableness of people who have known each other all their lives - and the trauma and loss they just endured. All of them could have been quoted for examples - but this one was my favorite:

“Sigrid did, with the stone you brought back from inside that Gate. Look at the scabbard and figure it out.” She turned it in his hands.

“Atronach’s Redeemer. What, does this sword absorb magicka?” he asked, astonished.

The smith clapped him on the shoulder, and he staggered half a step. “You’re not as dumb as you look. She told me what to write.”

“Batul, I could kiss you. I can’t pay you for all of this.”

She barked a short laugh, probably the first heard in the encampment. “Go kiss Sigrid, you know you want to. Lion of Kvatch.” He gave her a quizzical look. “That’s what they’re calling you. On account of your crazy heroics. Or because you don’t know how to use a comb, one or the other.” She stepped back and looked him over again. Appraising her work, he decided. “You closed the Gate, and I got my tools back. Let’s call this one even. I’ll charge you next time, though, you can count on it.”

“Thank you, Batul.” This time the smile came more easily. “I mean for not eating my horse.” Jerric headed down the road toward Flash.

“Ha!” she called after him. “You’re just lucky we didn’t have any onions.”

This scene was a perfect ending to the Kvatch crisis:

Jerric took her hand and squeezed it for a moment. “Until then.” He clucked his tongue to Flash, and the two of them started down the road to meet Martin.

Sort of like the lone wanderer and dogmeat leaving the wasteland at the end of Fallout 3, lol. AWESOME !!!


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I love this (snipped) - what a perfect line !! :

Young Rilian told your tale to everyone ...That lad could be a bard.”

This has to be the best answer I've seen yet anywhere to answer the question, "Hey, aren't you the one they call the 'Hero of Kvatch'?" :

The city was destroyed, no one saved it,” Jerric told him. He saw Faustino’s face fall, and he realized that they needed to believe in a hero. This isn’t about you, he told himself. He looked around at the other folk who were crowding him. “Savlian Matius is the Hero of Kvatch. Almost everyone that’s left alive, he got out of the city. He discovered that the Gate could be closed, and he led the fight that drove out the daedra. Savlian Matius serves the people now as Steward of the city.” Jerric took a breath. “Berich Inian is the Hero of Kvatch. He leads the City Guard now as Captain. Menien Goneld. Ilend Vonius. Many brave folk went in to close that Gate, and most of them were lost in the Deadlands. Those are the names of your heroes. They kept the daedra from your homes. Now there’s work to be done in Kvatch, and opportunity for those with the strong backs and stomachs to do it.” Martin stood beside Flash while Jerric made his speech, and Jerric could not read his expression. “They need food and supplies,” he continued. “In these times you don’t need to wield a sword to be a hero.”

AWESOME !!!


This had me stunned breathless and speechless :

“I want to you consider moving to Kvatch this winter. Faustino’s already a hunter; he’ll thrive wherever you put him. It’s Lavina I’m thinking about. How old is she now, eight? She’s grown up wild out here, and free. But there’s a cost to that, too. I know why you made the choices you did, but now it doesn’t have to be that way. In Kvatch you can live inside city walls, and no one will care who you used to be. We lost all of our children, Carmia. Every one of them. Lavina would have a chance to be anyone she can be. Out here she won’t have many options, and you have to split the coins you get too many ways. You turned away from your old life, how are you going to feel when Lavina finds out the easiest way to earn is on her back? Matilene was hardly more than a kid when she tried to stick her hand down my drawers. And I guess you know the next fellow didn’t turn her down.”

“You’re one to judge Matilene. She’s taken plenty of drakes from you over the years.” Carmia shoved the filled sack against his middle hard enough to make him wince.

“Only after we were both old enough. I’m the last one to judge her, but you know most of her earnings go to drink. How much of that is so she can stand to smell the next stranger? I’m asking you if that’s what you want for your daughter.” Jerric made a show of handing something back to Carmia. She took the imaginary coins from his empty hand.

*****

Puppy dog eyes won’t work on this one, he thought. She probably eats puppies.

BWAAAHAAA !!!!


*****

The whole end of the chapter where Jerric learns how to recharge his weapons was incredible !!!


You have made Jerric feel like a living, breathing person we may know personally. Everytime I read your story I am struck by what a tremendously creative imagination you have; a huge ability to weave characters that are believable and memorable...and the skill and talent to form words that paint mental images in the readers mind.

AWESOME WRITE !!!! (as always !!!)

[SubRosa]

Ahh, time for a big bowl of grits for lunch!

Flatbread around some kind of meat.
Since Flash is still alive, we can guess that it is not horse. Still, there was a lot of two-legged meat that got cooked recently in Kvatch...

The city was destroyed, no one saved it,
This is something I always think when someone calls me the Hero of Kvatch in the game.

Now we see the payoff for your introduction of Gnoll's Meeting Camp. Not only a friendly stop for Jerric to gather supplies, but perhaps a jumping-off point for some people to help rebuild Kvatch? Jerric's speech was wonderful, pointing out all the heroes that helped mitigate the disaster at Kvatch, and who are still needed to put things right again.

Even better is his conversation with Carmia about her daughter. All truth there, and ugly truth at that.

Finally, a wonderful description of using soul gems to charge Chillrend.

Forgot to mention:
Darnand would point out that if Jerric was a natural alchemist like Teresa, surely he would find a way to make himself smell better.
It is not that he is not capable of it. Jerric is a man, so he has no desire to smell better. Or comb his hair, etc...

This post has been edited by SubRosa: Feb 24 2011, 01:45 AM

[Acadian]

'Jerric set a pace that had Martin trotting every few steps to keep up. '
What a delightful little nod to the game and exactly how followers tag along.

'Savlian Matius is the Hero of Kvatch.'
I have said, ever since meeting him at Kvatch, that when it comes to a noble selfless hero, he is the gritty real deal.

The whole scene with Carmia was powerful, poignant and very well-written.

Adrienne is one scary puppy-eating Breton! Wow. What a neat job you did with her.

And finally, Jerric discovers Vigge's whole little basket of sex toys soul gems and how nice they can make one feel.

[Zalphon]

I'm inclined to agree with Acadian about Salvian

[Captain Hammer]

So a quick stop in Skingrad, and we learn so much.

Others have commented on Jerric's attitude when he meets people following Kvatch.

What I found really interesting was Jerric's actions at the Skingrad Guildhall. His process of charging Chillrend and loading up on soulgems, his thoughts about taking an apple from the kitchen, and his dialogue with Adrienne (not to mention his thoughts about the sleeping arrangements) make it a great installment.

[Grits]

mALX: I appreciate your comments so much!! It helps me to learn which parts stand out for you. You are so encouraging!!! Jerric definitely went on a few little rants at Gnoll’s Meeting. Since he has been such an enthusiastic patron of brothels, I thought he should speak up about the darker aspects of the profession. Your kind words made my day, mALX!!

SubRosa: Two-legged meat !! Your comment inspired a remark that you will find in the section after this one!! You’re right about Gnoll’s Meeting. Who better to rebuild than those who have already scratched something out of nothing. Blurting out that the city was destroyed and then making his speech to change what he said was an important moment for Jerric, I’m glad you pointed it out. As was what he said to Carmia, he needed to acknowledge that it’s not all fun and games for the working girl. Thank you for your insightful comments, SubRosa!

Acadian: We’ve had a lot of where is Martin moments in the West Weald. Most memorably they passed too near Shardrock and got mixed up with the bears. Jerric killed one and got away, then he couldn’t find Martin. Kept getting the message that he’s unconscious. Eventually he had to go to the nearby shrine and keep fast travelling there until he caught Martin in a brief moment of consciousness. That episode didn’t quite make it into the story!!

The Carmia scene meant a lot to me, I’m glad to hear it came across well. I’m so glad you enjoyed Adrienne. I figure anyone who can lose one quarter of her employees is either very distracted or has a screw loose. Maybe both. And if Vigge has to play with little buzzing stones all day, who can blame him for… no, that’s still no excuse for his behavior. Thank you, Acadian!

Zalphon: Me too, Zalphon!

Captain Hammer: The late night visit to the Skingrad Mages Guild was a little like riding along in Jerric’s mind, and I was worried that I put too much Jerric-thought in it. You’ve eased my mind. He really started waking up when he got to Skingrad, and I wanted to show it. Thank you, Captain Hammer!



Chapter 8: Running, Part 2

Jerric, Martin, and Flash walked north through a rocky meadow valley. Sparse woodland lay behind and to the west, and denser forest rose up to the east. Flash snatched mouthfuls of grass as they went. The land had started to rise and fall in small hills under them. Their pace had slowed to accommodate the terrain. Tall trees blocked their view of the distant highlands, but Jerric had complete confidence in his sense of direction outdoors. As many times as they cut left or right to avoid the steepest hollows, he easily got them going straight again. No matter where they came out on the Black Road, he thought Weynon Priory should be easy to find.

Ferns and calf-high grasses swished against Jerric’s legs. A high breeze sifted through the treetops in the adjacent woods. They sounded as if they could speak to one another. The afternoon light made jewels of the late summer flowers peeking through the golden meadow grass. Jerric knew he should be drinking in the peace, but he wasn’t. Lack of sleep or decent food had worn down his nerves. He had to keep his mind from drifting back to Kvatch, and it wanted to go there the way a tongue can’t help testing a sore tooth. He needed to feel that clear sense of purpose again. Instead he felt irritable. He looked over at the source of his annoyance.

Martin looked down at his feet as they walked. His shoulders slumped, and he moved as if his pack was filled with stones. This sad little man is my emperor, thought Jerric. He has to lead us into war. Enough of this. “Tired?” Jerric asked him. “Hungry? What’s the problem, Martin?” He let anger give his voice a hard edge.

Martin shook his head. “Kvatch,” he said morosely. His voice sounded heavy with regret. “I wish I had never gone there. I brought destruction down on them.” He sighed. “I blame myself.”

“I blame you, too,” Jerric shot back. Martin looked over at him, startled. Jerric returned his stare until he saw an answering anger in Martin. “That’s right. It’s unfair. This has nothing to do with who you are. It’s what you are. So you can try to hide from it, or do what you need to do. Are you going to keep hiding?”

Martin drew himself up. He looked extremely affronted. “Of course not.”

“Good. You said you’d left the priest behind, but you need to leave the rest of it, too. These are your last days as just Martin. You need to do what it takes so you’ll be ready for what’s coming. When the people look to you, they’ll want to see an emperor.” Jerric watched Martin as they walked. I hope I know what I’m doing, he thought. He was surprised to feel his annoyance receding.

“You’re right,” Martin said, finally. He lifted his head and looked out over the meadow. “Dwelling on the past will not advance our cause. I must view it as self-indulgence, for it serves no other purpose. It is time I looked to the future.”

Flash snorted and stopped in his tracks. Unease tickled the back of Jerric’s neck. “Or maybe the right now,” he said. He gestured for Flash to wait, but the horse was not moving forward. “There’s something…” Jerric loosened Chillrend and slipped his shield over his arm. He moved forward cautiously, looking to the right into the woods. They were on the edge of a darker, denser part of the forest. Jerric had hoped to escape the predators from both the meadows and the forest by staying along the border, but now he thought he might have exposed them to both kinds. Jerric heard brush cracking to pieces in the woods. The ground began to shake with the thunder of something heavy galloping at them. “Martin, run!” Chillrend rang joyously in his hand, but his gut clenched with alarm. He saw the dark shape, and a grunting roar confirmed it. “Bear!” he shouted.

He stumbled over the uneven ground as he ran toward the menace. The ferns concealed fallen logs that tripped his feet. He held his shield arm out for balance and brought Chillrend up. The bear looked like a black mountain bearing down on him, and its open maw was a fanged cave. I should try to scare it, Jerric thought. He called up his fire spell and cast it at the charging beast. The flare hissed against the fur along its side. The bear lowered its head away from the flames, but it didn’t slow down. Jerric stepped and slashed at its burned shoulder as it stormed past him. Pale fat peeled open over raw muscle under his newly sharpened blade. He was impressed for a fleeting instant until his heels hit something hard. The bear thundered to a halt and turned around, bawling out its pain and fury. Jerric saw treetops and sky as he toppled over onto his back. His elbows slipped on the crushed ferns, but his feet found the log that had tripped him. Pushing against it got him nowhere. The bear reared up over the log, spittle frothing out in ropes. Blue light flashed, and Jerric sent his fire spell crackling over the bear again. The bear let its breath out in a deafening roar. Jerric rolled frantically to the side as it bulk crashed down onto him. He heard a dry snap like wood breaking. Pain blocked out the rest of the world for a moment, until he realized the bear was on him. The stench of burned hair filled Jerric’s mouth and nose. His mind screamed with panic over its labored grunting. Then the bear flashed blue and was gone. Martin stood in its place.

Jerric looked down and saw that his knee was somehow facing the wrong way. He realized that he was shouting. “Aaaah, my mother fetching leg, you skiit-sniffing coochka!” he howled. Martin had begun to reach for him, but he drew back, his face full of alarm. “Not you, the bear! Dammit, pull it straight!” Jerric heard a rippling laugh, and his stomach lurched with more than pain. “Spriggan! Pull it, Martin!” Martin did. While Jerric screamed again, Martin healed him. Jerric stared at him for an instant in shock. Then he scrambled to his knees, searching for Chillrend. “Run, Martin!”

The spriggan’s balletic leaps made her seem to float over the ground as she approached. Jerric’s hand found Chillrend, then his legs launched him at the spriggan. The pain’s sudden disappearance left adrenaline surging through him. The spriggan scribed graceful arcs in the air with her arms, giggling. Before she could finish her spell, Jerric had reached her. He dropped his weight behind his wolf shield and bashed her to the ground. Her legs felt hard under his, even through his armor. He raised Chillrend and chopped at her torso and neck. Chips of bark and wood flew through the air. She struggled under him, but not for long.

Jerric pushed himself to his feet, shaking. Bile rose in his throat, and he swallowed it down. He turned to look at Martin walking toward him up the small rise, through some small shrubs. He saw Flash grazing down in the meadow beyond, unperturbed. His stomach heaved up some more bitter liquid, and this time Jerric leaned to spit it out. Martin opened his mouth to speak.

A splintering crack sounded from the shrubbery behind Jerric. He saw Martin’s face change in an instant. Blue frost filled his hands, and his battle cry rang through the air. “For Akatosh!” he called with majestic fury. The air froze along Jerric’s side as the frost hurtled past him. For a moment Jerric didn’t know whether to turn and attack or kneel at Martin’s feet. He heard the shrub’s leaves softly crackling as they curled up from the frost, and he turned to look. There was no other sound or motion. Whatever it was, he thought that Martin must have killed it.

Jerric motioned for Martin to stay back. Sword at the ready, he moved behind the shrub to investigate. Then he shook his head and laughed in relief. A large rat lay curled on its side, frozen solid. “That’s one powerful frost spell,” Jerric remarked. He dropped the rat in front of Martin. It bounced a little when it hit the ground. “Here’s your kill. Dragonborn.”

Martin viewed his prize. “At least we can eat mine,” he replied. The grim sovereign was gone from his face, and a smile played around his eyes.

Jerric nudged the rat with his boot. “I guess. If we had a few days to thaw it.” He eyed Martin. “You’re not going to ask me to carry it along, are you?”

Martin gave him an arch look. “I’m not going to order you to bring it, no.” Then he laughed. “I suppose we could burn your kill and cook mine on its fire.”

They walked back down to the meadow. Jerric’s tension eased as his heart rate returned to normal. “I’m no hunter,” he admitted. “I guess it’s raw carrots and dry bread again, until something else attacks us.” He clucked his tongue to Flash and started walking. “Maybe we’ll run afoul of a murderous deer.”

“A rogue sheep would also be welcome.”

They walked in the sun for several minutes. “Martin,” Jerric said.

Martin looked across at him. “Yes, Jerric?”

“They say you have dragon blood in your veins. Do you think it’s true?”

“I think it’s true that the Septims had the dragon blood. I’ll be certain what flows through my veins when I hold the Amulet of Kings.”

“Well, I think I got a look at the dragon back there. If you’re killed before we get to the priory, do you think Jauffre will give me the Amulet of Kings? I’d light the Dragonfires for you.”

Martin looked disconcerted. “Well, Jerric, I don’t think it works that way.”

“Oh,” Jerric replied. “So the next time we’re attacked, how about if you stay behind me?” Jerric made an attempt to look stern.

“Oh, of course.” Martin looked mildly embarrassed. “I suppose I should have run when you shouted.”

“I suppose,” Jerric replied. “But thanks for killing the bear.” He dug into his daypack and passed bread and carrots to Martin. Flash nudged his back again, so he bit off chunks of carrot and handed them to Flash as they walked. Jerric decided that their argument and the following fight with the forest creatures had lightened the mood considerably.

“What do you know of the Doom Stones, Jerric?” Martin asked. His easy tone confirmed Jerric’s thoughts.

“Nothing. I don’t even know what you’re talking about. What are Doom Stones? Even if it’s a long story, I have the time to hear it.”

“Magical standing stones, they can be found throughout Cyrodiil. They are covered with runes that glow at night. Doom Stones stand in stone circles. They are named for the stars and heavenly features.”

“What do they do?”

“Nothing any more, most believe. Some think their magics are still at work, just unknown to us.”

“All right. Why are you telling me this?”

“You know how the gods watch us, and guide us with their unseen hands.”

“I’ve heard of it,” Jerric replied wryly.

“It is my theory that the Doom Stones only respond to those the gods deem worthy. I have sought out several of these stones, and had no success unraveling their mysteries.”

“Unraveling their… What did you do, exactly?”

“I went to the stones and sat within the rings. I fasted, prayed, and cast spells upon the stones. I made… offerings. Both during daylight hours and at night. Nothing.”

“But clearly you’re not unknown to the Divines.”

“I did not always follow the Nine. My deeds of renown would not cause them to smile upon me. My life since I converted and became a priest of Akatosh has been a quiet one of study and reflection. You, however, have certainly gained the attention of the gods. I wonder if you would be able to activate a Doom Stone’s magic?”

“What do you think would happen? This isn’t a good time to get struck by lightning. And you need to tell me more about these evil deeds of yours. Should I sleep with one eye open?”

“You have nothing to fear from me. Pride and hunger for power moved me in the past, and I suffered for it. People died. My friends died. But that is past.”

“So, back to the stones.”

“Yes. Some of them are named for the birthsigns, and some for the heavens. The reason is lost in the mists of time, but I believe that they were named with a purpose. Perhaps they impart powers to the supplicant, powers similar to the ones granted by the stars at our birth.”

“That’s interesting. I could use some extra powers. All right, Martin, you bring this up now because…?”

“I believe I am familiar with this area. We’re near the shrine of Sanguine. We will pass within a short distance of one of the Heaven Stones.” Martin looked over at Jerric. “The Jone Stone,” he intoned.

Jerric kept walking. “All right, let’s go see.” Martin’s eyebrows went up. “You thought it would be hard to convince me? They say curiosity killed the Khajiit, but I’m a Nord so we don’t have to worry. Lead the way. We’re going to have to limit the offerings, though. We don’t have much to give, and I’d like my blood to stay inside me.”

“I think we should reach it by nightfall.”

“So,” Jerric said a few moments later. “The shrine of Sanguine?”

“A story for another time,” replied Martin.

By the time Jerric had begun to doubt that Martin knew where he was going, he stopped them at the top of a wooded hill. Dusk shrouded the rocks and fallen logs, but a ring of tall stones below them stood out from their surroundings. These stones were a light tan color, unlike the grey outcrops that sprinkled the forest and adjacent meadows. As they drew near, Jerric saw that the area between the outer ring of stones and the central monolith was empty, blackened ground. He began to get an uneasy feeling. He gave Flash the signal to wait. Martin led him to the front of the monolith. It stood easily three times Jerric’s height. Red runes flared to life as they watched, glowing with an angry light. “Uh, Martin…” said Jerric.

He felt Martin’s hand on his back. “Step into the ring. The stars shine upon the stone, we have arrived in time to witness it.” Martin’s hand pressed against him. “Go ahead.” Jerric stepped gingerly onto the black dirt and faced the glowing stone. “Try kneeling,” Martin suggested.

“No way,” Jerric said nervously. “Any gods who’re watching would know it was a lie. I’m about to piss myself and run, not kneel. Do you think there’s going to be fire?” Martin didn’t answer. He shifted his feet and held his hands out to the stone. “All right, here I go.” The stone shuddered silently to life under his hands, but he didn’t flinch. He sent his will gently into it, the way he had with the soul gems. To his relief there was no flash of fire. Instead he had the sense that he was somehow being filled, or becoming denser. He stood for a long moment against the stone. Then he stepped back to Martin.

“Well, it was worth a try,” Martin sighed. “I thank you for your indulgence.”

Jerric stared at him. “You mean you didn’t notice anything? Something happened, Martin. I got Jone’s gift, or something. Here, I’ll try it.” Jerric held his hands out slightly to the side and felt for the new something. “It’s not a spell,” he said. “It’s a whole new part of me. I think it’s like my Woad. It’s not connected to my magicka. Stand back and watch. I’ll try it.” Jerric reached for his new power, and it slipped over and through him like it had always been there. “I feel… I have no idea. What do you think it did? Hit me, maybe it’s a shield.”

“Well,” said Martin, “You’re invisible.”

Jerric held out his hands. “Ha ha! Look at that. Invisible! And I don’t even know any illusion spells. Martin, this is outstanding! You have to try it.”

“Oh no, I don’t think I should seek anything from the gods right now, if they are even the source of this power. It is enough that you have brought me new understanding. I thank you for it.”

Martin’s reluctance made Jerric remember his unease. He hoped the new power didn’t come with a price he didn’t know about. “Well I guess we should camp near here,” he said. “No fire tonight. Let’s find a spot out on the edge of the meadow. Flash can graze, and there will be more moonlight.” He started walking away, then he remembered Martin couldn’t see him. “Invisible!” he called out. “There’s something more, too. I guess I’ll have to study on it.”

This post has been edited by Grits: Feb 27 2011, 03:43 AM

[haute ecole rider]

Yaaay for the pep talk! Martin certainly needed a kick in the tush to get him out of his blue funk. I noticed it worked on Jerric too, though how Jerric could kick himself in the tush is beyond me.

Loved the encounter with the bear and the spriggan. Those things are almost as bad as the will o'wisps! I never know if that damned bear charging me is a real one, or just one of those beeyoches' summons. Sometimes I hear that annoying giggle, other times the first thing I hear is the whoosh of the spell. Sometimes nothing at all, just that black mountain of fur coming at me!

And I loved the discussion of the Doom Stones. It felt pretty true to what little we have about them in the Lore. Though most of it are just hearsay, and not really contemporaneous accounts, but still . . .

S'more!

[SubRosa]

He had to keep his mind from drifting back to Kvatch, and it wanted to go there the way a tongue can’t help testing a sore tooth.
This was a wonderful metaphor.

Poor Jerric! I know what it feels like to dislocate a knee. I did it myself years ago, and had to pop it back in place myself. The pain was indescribable. My leg has never been the same since.

A rousing battle with the spriggan and her black bear! I see not everyone has the luck of Teresa, who would have petted one and probably watered the other!

They say curiosity killed the Khajiit, but I’m a Nord so we don’t have to worry.
But satisfaction brought the Khajiit back! Nords are not quite so fortunate however...

Finally, I loved Jerric's reaction to the doomstone. The ones that are surrounded by flowers and other plants all look nice and inviting. The ones that are all blasted and burned dirt always give me the heebie jeebies too!


nits:
Why is he telling me this, Jerric wondered. “Why are you telling me this?” he asked.
It seems redundant for Jerric to think it, then say it immediately. I think you can just drop the part about him thinking it.

I wonder if you would be able to activate a Doom Stone’s magic.
I think you probably want a question mark at the end, rather than a paragraph.

[ghastley]

Hey, I want some healing like that! Broken femur one minute, running at a Spriggan the next! But that's exactly what the healing magic in the game allows, so that's just the way to write it.

I'll second Haute's comment about the summoned and real bears, except that I usually kill the Spriggan and then it's panic when the bear with her doesn't disappear, because it wasn't hers.

Nice frozen rat piece. Balances the intensity of the Spriggan encounter perfectly.

[Acadian]

It's memories of wood elves!!!
'the way a tongue can’t help testing a sore tooth.'
This conjures images of the stringy redhead sticking that tongue into the spot where Vols knocked out a molar.
'I hope I know what I’m doing'
This, on the other hand could apply to quite a few of the decisions made by another wood elf - a scrawny blonde.

Ok, sorry. Couldn't resist. ^

The pep talk and bear/sprig encounter were magnificent. Martin got the pep talk that he understandably needed. He also got a chance to show his grit. More charge in and kill 'em by Jerric. I'm glad you paused their trek to bring us this scene. It blended heart pounding action with rich character development. Fabulous touch with the iced rat cube.

[mALX]

Martin shook his head. “Kvatch,” he said morosely. His voice sounded heavy with regret. “I wish I had never gone there. I brought destruction down on them.” He sighed. “I blame myself.”

“I blame you, too,” Jerric shot back. Martin looked over at him, startled. Jerric returned his stare until he saw an answering anger in Martin. “That’s right. It’s unfair. This has nothing to do with who you are. It’s what you are. So you can try to hide from it, or do what you need to do. Are you going to keep hiding?”

Martin drew himself up. He looked extremely affronted. “Of course not.”

“Good. You said you’d left the priest behind, but you need to leave the rest of it, too. These are your last days as just Martin. You need to do what it takes so you’ll be ready for what’s coming. When the people look to you, they’ll want to see an emperor.” Jerric watched Martin as they walked. I hope I know what I’m doing, he thought. He was surprised to feel his annoyance receding.

I am in awe of how you come up with these perfect injections !! You have made an amazing character in Jerric; everything we know about these quests becomes secondary, a backdrop to your story !! Your ability is extraordinary !!!

[Jacki Dice]

the way a tongue can’t help testing a sore tooth

Oh my this is so true! ...stupid wisdom tooth....

“I blame you, too,” Jerric shot back. Martin looked over at him, startled. Jerric returned his stare until he saw an answering anger in Martin. “That’s right. It’s unfair. This has nothing to do with who you are. It’s what you are. So you can try to hide from it, or do what you need to do. Are you going to keep hiding?”

His anger is so true. Its so natural to want to pin it on someone, whether its fair or not

They say curiosity killed the Khajiit, but I’m a Nord so we don’t have to worry.

This made me laugh! A certain other Nord felt the same way, and now look at his mess!

[Grits]

haute ecole rider: He’s very flexible. The doomstone part was a little tricky, because Martin had to get it a little wrong with the renown points. Reading the lore and then figuring out what an undereducated Nord would know has been fun. Especially since he has eclectic reading habits. Glad you liked it!!

SubRosa: Dislocated knee, yikes! Yeah, that’s the kind of pain that removes all other immediate concerns. I had a hip situation occur, but I didn’t have to see it go back in. Just heard it. No yoga for me. But hey, now we know when a storm is coming. If Jerric ‘watered’ the spriggan, it would sure keep the deer away from her! Thank you for the nits, I changed them. Glad you liked the doomstone part. I had never seen a scary one until the Jone stone.

ghastly: That’s exactly how it was for Jerric. Gaaaaaah oh I’m all right now. The superfast healing was a touch of Martin Septim badassery, Jerric couldn’t have pulled it off. Yep, the dead spriggan victory dance cut short by a real bear. Bears are scary, especially when they roar in surround sound right behind my ear. Glad you liked the frozen rat.

Acadian: Oh my gosh you’re right, it’s the wood elf tribute episode!!! As I recall, another Bosmer also recently encountered a bear. And a fourth is presently in Chorrol which is near where… well, that connection is a little thin. I actually did check to make sure I didn’t write ‘what we’re doing.’ The doomstone side trip is due to Buffy’s influence, by the way. I never bothered to figure them out before. Thank you, Acadian!

mALX: I could not write anything for Jerric and Martin until they had that little spat. They ran all over the Imperial Reserve in the game, and nothing. No rapport at all. I was really stumped for awhile! I thought, oh great, my main character hates Martin. Is it too late to abandon the MQ?! I have a bunch of non-quest stuff coming up in a little while. I enjoyed Maxical’s extended stay in the Bloodworks so much, it inspired me to go ahead and make stuff up!! Thank you so much, mALX!!

Jacki Dice: Wisdom teeth, ugh! That quote was the turning point for Jerric and Martin, thanks for pointing it out. It took me forever to figure out what the problem was. I’d better keep Jerric away from Niben Bay! I’m off to save the world… oh look, a door. I really shouldn’t go in there. Oh hey, butterflies.




Chapter 8: Running, Part 3

Abiene stood in the guild hall library, bored nearly senseless. Her student was late, and Marc Gulitte had her cornered. His impromptu lecture on destruction magic held no interest for her. Neither did he. Marc paused to take a breath. A commotion from downstairs reached them, even through the closed door. Abiene bolted for the stairs without excusing herself from Marc’s company. Days of waiting for news from Kvatch had frayed her nerves. Every time the front door opened, it made her jump. She had held on tightly to her hope. Now she was afraid to lose even that.

Darnand and Felen had returned from Kvatch, and the other mages were mobbing them for news. Her eyes searched behind them for Jerric’s broad frame. Now I’ll know, she thought. Her stomach clenched with fear. “Settle,” Carahil said from her office doorway. Her quiet voice commanded attention. “Felen and Darnand, do you need a moment to refresh yourselves? We will gather in the dining room. No, let them pass. We shall all listen to the news together.”

The travelers dropped their packs and went straight to the dining room. Felen began as soon as they had assembled. “Of our guild’s Kvatch chapter, Sigrid alone survived. She will remain in Kvatch.” He held his hand up to silence the burst of chatter. “Vigge the Cautious from Skingrad has joined Sigrid, as has our own Glafeviel. The Kvatch guild hall is a tent, but they are operating. Feather and healing magic are in greatest demand. They can use all of the alchemy supplies we send them.” Felen paused. Abiene felt her heart pounding in her throat. “The Lion of Kvatch is Jerric,” he announced. “We did not see him ourselves. Sigrid spoke to him after the battle. He has left Kvatch, his destination unknown. We made a list of the survivors who are living in the encampment, as well as those who departed but are known to have survived. Here, Carahil.” Felen handed over the parchment.

Chaos broke out again as everyone wanted to see the list, but Carahil’s stern gaze quieted them. “Peace,” she said. “There are too many of us who want to look and too few names on this list. I shall read them out. We have held on to hope, but soon we may be grieving. Please allow me to finish.”

Abiene leaned back against the stone archway, arms wrapped around herself to still her shaking. She had already accepted Kvatch as lost, and Sigrid’s survival seemed almost odd to her. She watched Darnand slip out the dining room door. I’ll give him a little time, she decided. Then she closed her eyes and let the tears come. Jerric is alive, she thought. Somewhere, he’s alive. The depth of her relief showed her just how frightened she had been.

She felt a hand on her arm and opened her eyes again. Thaurron stood before her, face broken with grief. Her heart went out to him, and she held him as he sobbed against her shoulder. When he calms, I’ll look for Darnand, she decided. She watched her own tears fall onto Thaurron’s shoulder.

It was more than an hour later when Abiene found Darnand in the library. He sat gripping a quill pen, hunched over piles of parchment. His damp hair still held the marks of his comb. As she watched, a curl fell over his forehead. I wonder what he’s working on, she thought. Maybe notes from his trip. She stepped over to his table, standing in front of the window’s light. Her fingers wanted to reach out and smooth his hair. After a moment, he glanced up in irritation. Her stomach dropped. Then the polite mask slipped over his expression, like she’d seen when he spoke to other people. It hurt to see it on his face when he looked at her. “Yes?” he asked. His voice sounded neutral, at best.

“Never mind,” she said hastily. “You’re busy, it can wait.”

His eyes were back on his work before she finished speaking. She walked back to the stairs, flushed with embarrassment. She felt a surge of annoyance for giving him this kind of influence over her mood. I guess that’s why it’s called a crush, she told herself ruefully. As she reached for the door handle, Darnand spoke. “Abiene.” She saw he was really looking at her this time. “Apologies. Are you free after dinner this evening? I would like to walk with you. We could speak then.”

She tried to keep her expression cool, but it was hopeless. “Yes, that would be nice,” she said with a smile. “After dinner, I’ll see you then.”

___

Jerric and Martin stood looking down at the dead boar. The struggle had left the grass trampled and bloody, but he had killed the boar without burning or freezing it. Martin put out his hand and slapped Jerric’s arm. “This is much better than the last thing you killed,” Martin told him.

“You didn’t want charred troll for dinner? It might have been better than the wolf we ate last night.” Jerric heaved the boar onto a slanted rock so that Martin could hold it up. The rock supported most of the weight.

“The wolf was tough and dry, that is true. Your cooking skills were not at fault,” Martin added quickly. “I confess, I would be reluctant to dine upon something that goes about on two legs.” Martin held the boar’s hind feet while Jerric gutted it. He turned his face away, Jerric guessed from the smell.

“Two legs and two fists, I’d say. Anyway, troll fat is bad for you. I doubt troll meat is any better.” Jerric moved the carcass to the ground, away from the slippery pile of guts. He knelt and began turning the body into meat with his knife. “Cook it here, or wait? We might not find a safe campsite.”

Martin broke off some ferns to wrap the meat. “Let’s cook some here and eat it, then look for a safe site tonight. Perhaps we shall have two meals today.”

“All right.” Jerric leaned his head back to get some clean air. “Let’s do the rest of the potatoes while we’re at it. If you watch the pot, I’ll go gather us some greens. And maybe some mushrooms. We can let Flash graze while he waits.” Jerric smiled down at the carcass. “I’m sure glad this fellow tried to kill us.”

By nightfall Jerric had found a sheltered place to camp, and they decided to risk a small fire. Even if someone smelled the smoke, they wouldn't be able to easily see it. They had dined on fatty meat cut from the boar’s belly and fried in Jerric’s pan. Now Martin cleaned the skillet with dry grass while Jerric mixed up some potions. They sat companionably on opposite sides of the fire. The pines sighed above them in the light wind. Jerric thought how easy it was to pretend they were just out camping. The sounds of the fire and his pestle grinding flax seeds and mushroom caps could take him to almost any night in the last decade or so.

A piece of wood snapped in the fire, sending up a glittering veil of sparks. Martin spoke. "Do you remember the day I met you, when your mother first brought you to the chapel for lessons? You were at that gangly age, all legs and feet.”

Jerric looked across at Martin. His hands didn’t need his attention to finish their work. “I was eleven.” Tonight he didn’t mind thinking about home as it used to be. “She made me learn to heal myself before she let me go out with the caravan. Then I helped the cook for years while I trained before they let me carry a blade.”

“I had just come to Kvatch when we met. That was a dark time for me, Jerric. The deeds you asked me about.” Martin tossed the grass into the fire and pulled up a clean bundle. “When she went back out the door, the sun shone through and lit you up like a torch. Look at this boy, I thought. Unspoiled, and full of promise. See how the sun loves him.” Brother Martin looked at him intently. “Jerric, this might sound strange.”

Jerric made his hands still and gave Martin his attention. “All right. I’m listening.”

“When you came to speak to me at the fire in the encampment, of course I knew who you were. But more than that, when you walked up I remembered that moment. I had tended you as you slept after the battle, and I helped Oleta with your healing. But I didn’t remember that day until you came to speak to me.”

The hairs stood up on Jerric’s neck. “Go on,” he said.

“I am afraid my words will be disquieting. You told me you know we are both part of a plan. Perhaps you wonder why it was so easy to convince me. I believe that day in the chapel you were pointed out to me. Singled out for what was to come.”

Chills ran over Jerric’s skin. He thought for a moment. “Maybe you can help me understand something your father said to me. The Emperor. He said ‘In your face I behold the sun’s companion. The dawn of Akatosh’s bright glory may banish the coming darkness.’ That was right before he died. The Dragonfires are out, right? So the darkness he spoke of is now. We’re in the darkness.” Jerric scratched his hands through his hair. “He said the dawn of Akatosh’s glory. The sun brings dawn. Did he mean Akatosh is the sun? And now you tell me the sun pointed to me the first time my feet hit the floor inside Akatosh’s chapel. You’re right. I feel like a puppet.”

Martin rubbed his chin, the grass in his hands apparently forgotten. “The Emperor saw you as the sun’s companion. What do you think that means?”

Jerric picked up his mortar and pestle again. “Well right now I’m your companion. I guess you have some work to do if you’re supposed to be the sun.” He ground the seeds some more. Almost ready for the water, he noticed. “What do the Dragonfires do, exactly?”

“They keep a magical barrier between Mundus and the planes of Oblivion.”

“So the Oblivion Gate couldn’t be opened until the Dragonfires were out. That’s why they came for you, it has to be. So they could keep the Dragonfires from being lit again. Kvatch wasn’t the whole plan. We may be in the darkness, but there’s more coming.” Jerric was surprised that the idea didn’t carry fear with it. Only a sense of knowing. “I’d better not wear the Kvatch Wolf until you’re safe. At least not the surcoat.” He dipped a fingertip into the mush to test it. “What did you say I was, unspoiled? Ha! How long did you hold on to that idea?”

Martin smiled absently. Jerric guessed that he was one who could talk and think at the same time. “At least a few moments. I've always wondered what kind of trouble you might have caused with that frost spell I wasn’t supposed to teach you."

"That frost is still my favorite spell, I can throw it harder and faster than anything else. Back then I tried to freeze my nephew's bath water, but it didn't work. We're almost the same age. There are always pranks in the making with my family. Where’s your family, are they safe?"

“My parents were older when I came to them, and they have both been gone for many years. We lived on a farm near Chorrol until I was grown. I was told that my natural mother died in childbed.” Martin stirred the fire. “I don’t tell you this as a priest, but as a son myself. Your mother often spoke to Akatosh on your behalf.”

"I was a terror," Jerric admitted. "I'm sure I used up all the grace she might have gained for me. My family was my life. I’m sorry you’ve gone so long without yours, Martin.”

Martin was silent for a moment, then he spoke again. "What are you going to do after this? Do you have any place to go after Weynon Priory?"

"I haven't thought much about it. I have friends in Anvil. Mages Guild. Or my Fa's partner, he'll give me work. I don't know."

"Have you ever thought of attending the Arcane University?"

Jerric snorted. “School didn’t work for me, I left when I was twelve. My penmanship was awful, and my writing worse. I remember an essay we had to write about a trip we took to Trumbe, do you know that place? I was thinking how the arches rose up like the mountains, and the low buildings must have spread out like the sea. Looking up at the heights from the solid ground reminded me that we can’t change the lot we have been given, but we can hope to rise above it. I wondered if the beings who could think up such a place had the cruelty it must have taken to build it. Maybe they had slaves who were willing to do the dirty work for them, against their own kind. Then when I tried to write, all that came out was ‘White stones are old,’ and I forgot if ‘stones’ has an E in it, and four words filled up half of the parchment. It was humiliating.” Jerric was surprised at how bitter the memory still tasted. “Besides, there’s far too much sitting still.”

"You have half a dozen books in your pack. Your books probably weigh more than our food supply. Are they for trade?"

"No, they're mine," said Jerric. "I just haven't felt like reading since... Anyway, they’re just for fun."

"What do you mean?" asked Martin.

"It's reading what I want to know, not some assignment." Jerric searched for an explanation. "It's like pleasing yourself with a book." Martin's eyebrows went up, and Jerric felt his cheeks burn. "No, that’s not what I meant. Apologies, Martin."

"I wasn't born a priest, Jerric," Martin remarked.

Jerric poured some water into the mortar and swirled it around. The last of the water went down his throat, then he held the empty water bag and looked at it. “This one has Jerric’s Juice,” he said to himself, out loud. “Remember.” He started slowly pouring the gloppy liquid into the water bag’s mouth.

“Is that a potion?” asked Martin. “Jerric Juice?”

“Jerric’s Juice,” Jerric corrected him. “Yes. It restores my magicka. Sign of the Atronach. I’m out of bottles, I should have grabbed some in Skingrad.”

“Oh,” Martin said. He sounded genuinely interested. “Is it supposed to be so… lumpy?”

“Are you an alchemist?”

“Not at all,” said Martin.

“Then yes, it’s supposed to be very lumpy.” Jerric tipped up the mortar and drank the last of the gritty solution. The magicka that bloomed inside him brought a familiar comfort. “Where did you learn that frost, Martin? I don’t suppose they teach that at priest school.”

“I began my study with the Mages Guild.” Martin stared into the fire. “I left the guild when I was an apprentice.”

Jerric could tell that subject was closed. He finished putting away his equipment. “I think I’m ready for sleep,” he said.

“You have given me some things to ponder,” Martin replied. “I will stay awake a little longer. If you dream, do you want me to wake you?”

“No. I might get a little more this time, if I dream.” He rolled himself into his blanket. “Maybe if I don’t wake up, it will stop. It’s the same every time. I don’t think it’s just remembering.” He closed his eyes. “Sorry if I disturb you, Martin.”

This post has been edited by Grits: Mar 1 2011, 05:20 PM

[SubRosa]

Home for lunch, and just in time for a bowl of Grits!

Poor Abiene, trapped by Marc Gillette and one of his lectures on shaving!

So Vigge has gone to Kvatch? I wonder what the sleeping arrangements are like there? One thing is for certain, everyone visiting the Skingrad chapter will be breathing a sigh of relief!

And Abiene cannot decide who she wants, Darnand or Jerric? Well, she could not have picked two more polar opposites that is for certain! What about Vidkun though? She seems to have completely forgotten about him.

So the hobbits are cooking dinner in the wilderness. I half-expected Jerric to pull out his box of spices from the Shire to season the boar!

A piece of wood snapped in the fire, sending up a glittering veil of sparks.
This was a wonderful line of description, that really sets the scene.

I guess you have some work to do if you’re supposed to be the sun.
Unless he is the son, as Julian has pondered in an alternate reality.

"It's like pleasing yourself with a book."
It seems The Lusty Argonian Maid is at the top of Jerric's reading list!

This post has been edited by SubRosa: Mar 1 2011, 10:26 PM

[haute ecole rider]

This was a wonderful male bonding moment. I really enjoyed the reminiscing that the two men shared - it made them more real and less cardboard.

I wonder how Vigge and Sigrid are getting along? Somehow I don't see our Sigrid letting dear old Vigge getting away with the antics he pulled in Skingrad!

The scene in the Anvil Mages Guild when Carahil read off the names of the survivors really brought home the devastation that was Kvatch. It makes me think of the people crowding around the telegraph offices after every Civil War battle, searching for names of loved ones on the list of dead and wounded.

[ghastley]

“Are you an alchemist?”

“Not at all,” said Martin.

“Then yes, it’s supposed to be very lumpy.”

Loved this bit.

[mALX]

“Vigge the Cautious from Skingrad has joined Sigrid,

SPEW!!! OMG, ROFL !!!! Poor Sigrid, I foresee deflated breasties when next we spot her.

She had already accepted Kvatch as lost, and Sigrid’s survival seemed almost odd to her.

Sigrid will always float to the surface !!!

When she went back out the door, the sun shone through and lit you up like a torch ... See how the sun loves him.”

“When you came to speak to me at the fire in the encampment, ... I remembered that moment. I had tended you ... But I didn’t remember that day until you came to speak to me.”

The hairs stood up on Jerric’s neck.

You told me you know we are both part of a plan ... why it was so easy to convince me...that day in the chapel you were pointed out to me. Singled out for what was to come.”

Chills ran over Jerric’s skin. ‘In your face I behold the sun’s companion. The dawn of Akatosh’s bright glory may banish the coming darkness.’ That was right before he died. The Dragonfires are out, right? So the darkness he spoke of is now. We’re in the darkness.”

“The Emperor saw you as the sun’s companion.

"Well right now I’m your companion.

they came for you, ... So they could keep the Dragonfires from being lit again. Kvatch wasn’t the whole plan. We may be in the darkness, but there’s more coming.”

the idea didn’t carry fear with it. Only a sense of knowing

Powerful, POWERFUL !!! I got chill bumps reading this whole section !!!

It's like pleasing yourself with a book."

ROFL !!! You must have set that line in there specifically for Foxy and me to stumble across and spew - I was laughing before I even saw the end of that line and Martin's reaction below, lol.

Martin's eyebrows went up,

- AHA !!!! So Martin and Foxy think alike !!!! Uh oh, I do see trouble now !!!

“This one has Jerric’s Juice,”


“Is that a potion?”... “Is it supposed to be so… lumpy?”

“Are you an alchemist?”

“Not at all,” said Martin.

“Then yes, it’s supposed to be very lumpy.”

ROFL !!!! What great characters you create !!!!


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[Acadian]

I enjoyed seeing how you reflected the devastation to the Kvatch guild via the Anvil guild. I'm glad Sigrid has some company (and I hope Vigge causes no trouble). Wonderful that the Kvatch chapter is still operating, albeit from a tent.

Nice hunting/dinner scene with Martin and Jerric.

'Jerric looked across at Martin. His hands didn’t need his attention to finish their work.'
I really liked this phrasing!

[D.Foxy]

Poor Sigrid, I foresee deflated breasties when next we spot her.


... You mean....he was a bottle fed baby, too???