Jerric's Story, A Nord's Adventures in Cyrodiil Options

[haute ecole rider]

Foxy's lecture is spot-on. The natural preference for (male) mates with an MHC complex different from our (women) own has an evolutionary advantage in that it maintains genetic diversity, which is vital from a species standpoint. Less chance of hereditary predisposition to devastating disease, resistance to hostile bugs, and so forth means increased chance of survival to reproduction.

Interesting stuff, isn't it?

[Grits]

SubRosa: As the daughter of social climbers, Abiene definitely comes from the part of Imperial-dominated society who insists on discretion. I got that from the in-game gossip about people hooking up. As you pointed out, Abiene is trying to keep up appearances for her family. Jerric doesn’t come from that world, and neither does Carahil. Even with the Nine there can be wildly different standards of behavior. Dibella’s priests are referred to as orgiasts who offer erotic instruction, yet Alga is sick of being hounded about “Mara Mother Mild” and getting married in the chapel. One of the things that makes the ES world so interesting to play in for me is the variety that all of the cultures allows.

Abiene is going to Chorrol for awhile. She’s saying that when she thinks of home, it’s Anvil, not Leyawiin. There’s a little more on home and family in this section. Thank you so much for your comments, they are both thoughtful and thought-provoking!

haute ecole rider: You’re right, there’s more going on now than fun in the sack. I don’t think it’s a spoiler to say that things will get hectic before long. I’m so glad you like them both. It was nice to give them a relaxing day.

Acadian: To hear that their choices seemed right made me smile. I so enjoyed writing the lovely Loredas in Anvil. The second half of the day is next.

mALX: Abiene chose the activities, otherwise it would probably be “Let’s go out to the meadow and you can watch me play ball.” I love that you picked up on the opposing family situations, and the awkwardness that brings. They touch on it again in this section.

D. Foxy: Thank you, Professor Foxy!! Very interesting indeed, and extremely complicated. I never thought of fish having immune systems, but of course they do. You explained it perfectly. Then I went and read the article and had to go back and read your explanation again to clear my head.

And it’s great news. I am sometimes asked how Mr. Grits gets away with certain outrageous behavior, like going out with the guys on a weeknight. In the past I have said things like, “He’s a grown man. I don’t have him on a leash, except by special request like on his birthday.” Now I can say, “It’s the MHC. He let me sniff his chest.” Much more dignified.

Where we are: Loredas. Jerric and Abiene had some lunch and enjoyed each other’s company. Here is the rest of their day.




Chapter 10: Septims, Part 14

Jerric stepped into the glass garden house and held the door for Abiene. Humid air closed around them like a blanket. He quickly removed his doublet and took her cloak. The ceiling was high enough to accommodate palm trees and great hanging vines, and the building stretched the length of the chapel. The atmosphere was heavy with exotic scents.

Small, tropical finches streaked through the branches, adding their splashes of color to the high greenery. Giant blue and violet tree frogs were visible crouched on limbs over the paths. Colorful mushrooms carpeted the shady areas, and the sunny spots were bright with flowers. Jerric and Abiene strolled along the walkways, keeping pace with the other Anvilites who were out enjoying the afternoon.

“Look at that couple, there,” Abiene said, indicating a Bosmer and an older-looking Imperial man. The Bosmer wore a gown of sapphire velvet, accented with panels of paler blue silk. Her auburn hair was swept to the top of her head and ornamented with an arrangement of gold and blue ribbons. Platform heels gave her inches of extra height. Her companion wore a russet velvet doublet and short, puffy breeches, with hose of the same color. His shoes were also made of velvet. Jerric hoped for the man’s sake that the afternoon would remain free of rain. Jerric leaned down to catch Abiene’s soft words. “What do you suppose is their story?” she asked.

“I don’t know them.”

“I don’t either, that’s perfect. We can make something up.”

“They met when they both were young,” Jerric suggested after a moment. “She could be his age, it wouldn’t show on her. They’re here in Anvil for the holidays, maybe visiting the pack of kids they had over the years. Maybe grandkids, so they got out of the house for the afternoon to save their sanity. They’re going out tonight. Probably some event at the castle, I doubt she plans to walk far in those shoes.” He glanced over at Abiene to see how he did.

“Boring,” she sighed. “He was a young noble living in Valenwood. One day his hunting party was set upon by bandits, and she happened by and saved his life. No one else survived. She nursed him back to health in the forest. They fell in love, of course. When he had healed enough to return to his home, he discovered that in his absence, his enemies had sullied his good name with lies! She helped him seek justice. They left a swath of bloody vengeance in their wake. When finally his honor was satisfied, they took the gold of their vanquished foes and set out to see the world. Every day they wear silk and jewels, and in their ship they sleep on a bed of the softest feathers.” She gave him a triumphant glance. “Oh, and they’re here in Anvil for the chatapay.”

Jerric laughed. “Close, but you made one mistake. The Bosmer is an assassin, sent to kill the noble long ago. She hired the bandits that attacked his hunting party. During the battle she was so impressed by his swordsmanship that she instantly fell for him. She’s waiting to complete her contract until he lies dying anyway. Then at the last moment she’ll take his life, fulfilling her honor.”

Abiene looked thoughtful. “Then how do you explain her shoes? She must be ready at any moment to defend him, in case someone else picked up his contract.”

Jerric shrugged. “Women look good in heels.”

“Jerric! My dear Abiene!” They looked over to find Thaurron approaching. “A fine day, is it not?” Abiene bent when the Bosmer reached them, and he kissed her cheeks in greeting. “I missed you at the market. No packages?” He raised his own parcel. “I was fortunate to find what I needed. Sparky has been naughty again, and I have a few things of Carahil’s to replace.”

“Where is the little fellow?” asked Jerric. “We could have used him earlier for aerial defense.”

“Oh, I dare not bring him in here. Too many blossoms to rip and toss about. And he has only recently stopped flying into windows; walls made entirely of glass might prove difficult to explain. Besides, the guards only tolerate him because they think he’s a summoning. He’s quite popular Harborside, however. Some of his ruder mannerisms are considered quaint by the sailors.”

“We’re headed to the harbor later,” Abiene said. “Jerric is going to show me the view from the lighthouse. Will you join us?”

“No, my dear, but I thank you for the kind invitation.” He glanced around and sighed. Jerric realized that his face did not hold its customary sparkle. “This garden house was a favorite spot of Donrehdil’s,” Thaurron said to Jerric. He decided that Carahil was not the only mer who seemed to read his mind. “I come here every Loredas when the light is good to remember her. She loved the soft air in here, and the smell of damp soil. It reminded her of our home in Silvenar.”

“We’ll leave you to it, then,” said Jerric. He felt he was at risk of sweating through his shirt.

“Who’s Donrehdil?” Jerric asked when they had reached cool air again. He held Abiene’s cloak for her.

“His late wife. I don’t know much about it, and I don’t want to pry. He’s mourned her for years. Sometimes he’s just sad for awhile.” Abiene’s face looked thoughtful. “I can’t say why it comes over him, it just does.”

“He’s a friend to you.” Jerric wanted to ask without making it a question.

Abiene looked up with a gentle smile. “Yes. I suppose he’s part of the family I’ve made for myself here. Carahil, too, though I’m not as close to her. And Felen. He’s so deep in his studies most of the time, but he’s quick to take action when it’s required. I know I can count on him, if I should need him.”

“What about Darnand? He’s lived here almost as long as you have.”

“I care a great deal for Darnand,” she said quietly. “In some ways he reminds me of my Papa. He’s brilliant, and I have tremendous respect for him.” Her expression became pensive again. “I’m glad he’s going with you on your travels. It’s absurd that the guild requires him to collect recommendations. I doubt he would have taken the time from his work without you to drag him away. He should make spells for you at the University, Jerric. Combinations of weakness and elemental destruction. Summoning with invisibility, so that you will not be the target. A spell that will trap the soul’s energy as it kills.”

Jerric found himself impressed again. “You rank higher than either of us. You could make those spells for me.”

Abiene shook her head. “My knowledge is deep, but narrow. Darnand is a true Mage.”

“I don’t know how far we’ll get with the recommendations, but you’ve given me good reason to take the time. I couldn’t make those spells you thought up, even if they’d let me. But you’re right, Darnand could.” He shrugged back into his doublet. “Come on, we’ll go out the Castle Gate and walk along the waterfront. We have plenty of time to get to the top of the lighthouse before the sun sets.”

As they walked through the chapel garden to the street, Jerric glanced back over at Abiene. How did this woman end up on my arm, he wondered. I wish that I could keep her there.

A band of minstrels had assembled on the street while they were in the glass house. They began their song with a flourish as Jerric and Abiene reached them.

“Oh, no,” Jerric groaned when he recognized the music.

“It’s the Ballad of Kvatch! We have to stay and listen, they’re playing it for you.”

“I thought folk would stop recognizing me when you cut that scar off.”

Abiene glanced up at him. “That wasn’t your most recognizable feature.”

“It’s a long song,” Jerric complained. “And they should leave storytelling to the bards.”

“It’s a compliment. Be nice.”

It seemed a lifetime later when they stepped out the Castle Gate. Jerric saw that the tide was in. “Let’s look at the marsh first,” he suggested.

They walked down the footpath to their left, away from the harbor. Low tide on a Loredas would bring industrious children with their buckets and clamming rakes, but for now the mud flats were a hunting ground for birds. Two great green herons stepped slowly along the water’s edge, hiding their shadows in the tall marsh grass. Jerric watched one stop with a leg lifted. Its long bill shot into the water and came up with a silvery fish. A flip into the air and a single gulp later, and only the spreading ripples told of what had happened.

Sedge wrens filled the air with their liquid song. Their orange and brown plumage blended in with the yellow grass. Jerric turned his mind away from the harbor’s clamor and listened to the marsh. Soft chuckles told him that snow geese were nearby, but hidden. Water gurgled as it lapped up into crab burrows in the mud. He followed a sound like rocks clicking together until he spotted clapper rails wading out on a sandbar. His eyes lifted farther and found a skiff manned by teenagers checking their crab pots. Their splashing and distant exclamations carried over the water.

Abiene took his arm again, her face alight with wonder. “It’s beautiful,” she breathed. “I never knew.”

They stayed in the marsh for some time, walking the dry path along the high ground. Jerric told tales of his childhood, exploring with Rhano and his cousins. Abiene simply listened. Her dark eyes seemed to hold the quiet his heart was seeking.

Dagon would turn this all to blood and fire, he thought. There is no price too high to stop him.

When the sun had dropped into the west, Jerric led them back to the harbor. A different crowd of folk paraded there, far louder and more varied than Chapelgate’s genteel pedestrians.

Jerric noticed an Imperial woman in gaudy attire approaching them, underdressed for the weather. Her thin blouse appeared to be unfastened in the front, secured only by the brief vest she wore over it. Her skirt fluttered open as she walked, exposing most of her legs as they emerged in turn with her swaggering walk. Rolling your hips that much without dislocating one must take some practice, Jerric thought. “Hey there, Nord,” she called out. She stopped when she reached them. “Remember me?”

Jerric froze. This type of situation never became comfortable, no matter how many times it repeated itself. He tried to picture the woman from several different angles, but he still didn’t recognize her. “Let me guess. Was there drink involved? Sometimes that makes me, uh, friendly.”

The woman smiled and looked Abiene up and down. She placed a hand on her hip, swaying on her feet. “Is this your lady?”

“Uh…” Jerric wasn’t sure how much Abiene would allow him to admit. He struggled to decide what answer would be to her advantage. “I’m sorry, I don’t remember you.”

“Oh, you don’t have anything to be sorry for,” she gushed. “Here, this might bring it back.” Without further discussion, she lifted her skirt. The woman didn’t seem to favor undergarments below her waist, either. Abiene gasped at the spectacle, and Jerric knew immediately who the woman was. The name that came to his mind was unlikely to be what she called herself, however.

“Yeah, I remember you. That’s an unusual place to wear jewelry. You know, I pissed glass for a week after I met you. I hope you got yourself to a chapel.” He glanced over at Abiene. She tore her gaze away from the woman’s sparkling embellishments and leveled a glare at him. Several emotions seemed to battle for control of her face, none of them good. “Say, when was that again? Had to be a couple of years ago. You might have been at the University, Abiene.”

“Well I may not remember when, but I sure remember you,” the woman declared. “Hung like an ogre and twice as—”

“All right, put your skirt back together,” Jerric interrupted. “There’s a lady present. We have to go.”

“What a shame, I have a new piercing I’d like to show you.”

His mind ground to a halt, curiosity threatening to overcome his last shred of sense. Abiene yanked his arm and got him moving.

“Let’s walk along the waterfront,” she said in an acid tone as they walked, imitating him. “Great idea, Jerric.”

“Well if you ever have to heal one of those, now you won’t be surprised. That just can’t be good for you.” He glanced cautiously at her face, hoping that the humor of the situation would soon present itself to her. “I think she was drunk. And who knows anything about an ogre’s package? They wear those ogre drawers.” Abiene’s lips seemed to twitch. He tried to sound affronted. “I mean, a minotaur, sure. That would have been a real compliment. Those fellows just swing in the breeze, everyone—”

“All right, you can stop,” Abiene laughed. “I suppose it was the pox that she gave you.”

“Yeah,” he admitted.

“I should teach you to cure your own diseases. For my own benefit, at least.”

“Well, you can’t catch by it breathing the same air, so I think we’re safe this time. That would be a good spell to know, though. Let’s add it to my list.”

“There’s no need to go out and catch another dose for practice,” Abiene pointed out.

“Thanks. I’ll remember that.”

They hiked up the long, shallow steps to the lighthouse, then climbed the spiraling staircase within. Jerric paused before the final ladder to let Abiene catch her breath, but she wasn’t winded. “Are you afraid of heights?” she asked.

“No. Are you?”

“Not at all.” She started up the ladder. “Just a little worried about falling.”

The sky glowed nearly every color but green as the sun went down. Wind gusted through the lighthouse’s open top. The fire wasn’t yet lit, so they kept back a few steps from the railing. Jerric knew the landmarks they could see, but the moment didn’t seem right for a lecture. He stood with Abiene at his side, her hand clasped in his. Her hair lifted in the breeze, and her cloak wrapped around his legs.

Abiene turned to face him. “No, keep watching the sunset,” she said. “Don’t pay attention to me. I just want to look at you.” She took his chin in her hand and lifted it back toward the sky.

“All right.” He smiled, knowing she could see it. “But you’re making me think of bedchamber things now.”

“Let’s enjoy the peace, such as it is.” She pulled his arm around her shoulders and wrapped hers around his waist. He could hear gulls crying, and ships’ bells in the harbor. Music floated up from the taverns, along with distant voices raised in shouts. The calm sea reflected all the warm colors of sunset, until the horizon was only visible as the brightest layer of blazing light.

“I have an idea,” he whispered into Abiene’s hair. “But we only have a moment before the sun is down.”

“No,” Abiene murmured back. “I’m taking you to dinner next, so keep your trousers buttoned. The restaurant I told you about. It’s called A Taste of Camlorn.”

“Breton food.”

“Yes. Goose guts and snails the size of your fist. I can’t wait to see you try something new.”

“At the top of the lighthouse would be something new.”

“With the lighthouse keeper watching? He’ll be here any moment to light the fire. I can see that headline in The Black Horse Courier. ‘Anvil Healer Cited for Public Acts of Extreme Lewdness. Local Nord Receives Accolades for Same.’” She reached up and ran her fingertips along his jaw. “We should come back another time when he’s busy. And it’s a little warmer.”

He caught her fingers and kissed them. “All right, if you’re sure. I want to know what you had in mind. I was only thinking of one act of moderate lewdness.” His stomach gurgled loudly. “Goose guts. I can’t wait.”

This post has been edited by Grits: May 20 2011, 12:17 AM

[haute ecole rider]

If that couple in the glass house was Heinrich Oaken-Hull and his Bosmer wife, I believe you got the man's race wrong - Heinrich is a Nord. If you had a different couple in mind, then never mind. I did enjoy the stories Jerric and Abiene made up. His story tugged at my heartstrings, but hers was real drama! But his embellishment wasn't bad either! I had to laugh at their stories getting wilder and wilder, then deteriorate into a discussion of the value of high heels for women.

Thaurron was a real treat, talking about his imp's antics and mentioning his dear departed wife. The discussion of Darnand's abilities was interesting, as were the suggested custom spells Abiene came up with. Somehow I never think of those when I'm playing the MQ - but then I'm always doing that one first before starting any other questlines.

Loved loved loved the description of the marsh outside the city, especially the birds. Though when you mentioned the clicking sound, I immediately thought of mudcrabs!

The encounter with the prostitute/streetwalker cracked me up! Jerric's responses to her questions - "Let me guess. Was drink involved? It somehow makes me more friendly." Heh heh. Then when she showed off her -umm- embellishments and bragged about her newest addition, his momentary spark of interest - curiosity? - was hilarious! Abiene took that in stride pretty well, I thought.

Then the sweet scene atop the lighthouse! That's one of my favorite places to watch the sun go down (high in the Valus Mountains is another). The way it ends is typical of this pair.

You certainly covered a lot of ground for a half-day spent doing nothing. But we learned even more of our favorite characters here, and that's important. Loved it!

[mALX]

The band striking up the "Ballad of Kvatch" when Jerric approached was a very touching reminder of what he has done since his last time in Anvil - loved that respect they showed him !!!

"What a shame, I have a new piercing I'd like to show you."

His mind ground to a halt, curiosity threatening to overcome his last shred of sense. Abiene yanked his arm and got him moving.

'Anvil Healer Cited for Public Acts of Extreme Lewdness. Local Nord Receives Accolades for Same.'

Both of these had me rolling laughing!

The chemistry between them seems awkward and stilted when they are trying too hard to find something other than sex to base their relationship on. Maybe they should have had sex and then spent the rest of the day together trying to see what else they had to base a relationship on, lol.

The differences between their personalities become pronounced when Abiene is in charge of the festivities, her idea of a fun day together getting to know Jerric/vice versa reminds me of the proverbial singles ads in the papers: "Love conversation and long walks on beaches..."

This staid day she planned is at such odd varience to how wild and free she is in the bedroom - and how wild and free Jerric is. Maybe he brings out the best in her ... and he should plan their next "day standing up," Lol.

It is amazing how clearly you have defined their characters, AWESOME WRITE !!!!


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This post has been edited by mALX: May 19 2011, 05:00 PM

[SubRosa]

I always figured that the human cultures were more patriarchal than the elven ones. At least that is what I am going for in the TF. This is all purely my opinion, so do not hesitate to ignore every bit of it. I got the idea because aside from Alessia, normally only men can be Emperors. It only falls to a woman if there are no penises left near the Ruby Throne. The same with the Counties, women only become Countess if their husband the Count dies, or vanishes to become a master thief (I am still not sure how the chick became Countess in Bruma). Since Patriarchy also means double standards, I figure that just like up until recently IRL, human men can piledrive all the women they want with no social repercussions. But a woman who tries that would have to keep it hidden, or be dishonored and disowned, as you see in Jane Austen's novels.

I am sure there would be priestesses of Dibella who would regularly have sex with the congregation. That was a very common feature in pagan religions. Christians call it temple prostitution, but that is not accurate at all. The priestesses were performing the heiros gamos - or sacred marriage - which insured the continued fertility of not only mortals, but the land, and the gods themselves, as well as reinforcing the bonds between the physical and spirit worlds. Again though I picture it only being the men who get hump like madmen in the chapel, and the women have to be chaste and pure. Likewise, those priestesses were not marrying material. This also leaves room for there being a Prostitutes Guild in Cyrodiil. It creates a culture where women are held to Austenian ideals of fidelity, but men can be complete man-whores (which again is basically RL anway, except Regency Era men did not have temples or official businessplaces to have sex with strangers in). Note that in Ancient Rome, men having sex from prostitutes or slaves was not considered infidelity. The first was simply a business transaction, and the second a man using his property.

I picture the elven cultures as being radically different, with women being on more or less equal terms with men, not only legally and socially, but sexually as well. I got that idea from Barenziah's biography, where it is said that all young dark elf women are promiscuous (which is of course another way of saying they have sex as much as men do). There is not much else in the game that reinforces the idea though, as even she could not be Queen of Morrowind once her son became old enough to rule. So clearly Bethesda has the elf nations thought out as being just as patriarchal as the human ones. But I like the idea because it provides a contrast with humans, and actually creates a tangible difference between the races other than pointy ears. In Oblivion, the ears and skin tone often seems like the only difference between them.

My impression, from Abiene's Saturalia especially, was that you were going for the same kind of culture among Imperials. At least concerning the restrictions on women. It looks like I was wrong (which is a good thing for women in Jerric's Story!). No worries there. It is your writing, so it is your world to create.

But anyway, back from imaginings, and to the current episode.

I loved the greenhouse. Such a lovely place. A bosmer would feel right at home. Abiene's story about the couple was definitely much better than Jerric's! Well, except for his addendum.

“That wasn’t your most recognizable feature.”
Well then, maybe Jerric should start wearing his pants in public!

I loved Jerric's discomfort at the song praising him. It seems he shares something in common with Julian there.

The clammers scouring the shore at low tide was a good touch of realism. That was a very common activity from shoreside villages IRL.

And wasn't that a nice meeting with that girl in the marsh! You know, I pissed glass for a week after I met you. I hope you got yourself to a chapel.” If Abiene was not already mortified, I am sure his added information put her over the edge!

Goose guts and snails the size of your fist.
Ewww! No wonder those Bretons are so scrawny.

All in all, that was a nice, pleasant date had by Jerric and Abiene. It is nice to see them being a couple.

This post has been edited by SubRosa: May 19 2011, 09:27 PM

[Acadian]

'Sparky has been naughty again, and I have a few things of Carahil’s to replace.”
Ah, the price of pet ownership.

Making up stories about strangers was great fun and very much something an intimate couple might do. The whole idea of the glass house/garden was wonderful.

Donrehdil was from Silvenar! How neat!

'Abiene shook her head. “My knowledge is deep, but narrow. Darnand is a true Mage.”
What a lovely way of describing that Abiene's path is more specialized!

This was a fabulous afternoon, topped off by a wonderful sunset and the promise of the guts of a goose!

Nit: “It’s a complement. Be nice.”
I expect you wanted 'compliment' here.

[Captain Hammer]

I am finding Jerric to be more and more interesting with each chapter.

The fight with the thieves: A nice blend of tactical planning, and Murphy's First Law of Combat. Jerric's plans most definitely did not survive contact with the enemy. And after, he begins to go over the things he needs to do better, the things he forgot in the middle of combat, the habits he needs to form for next time. He demonstrates the qualities needed for a man that's not only going to survive the Oblivion Crisis, but one who plans doing his part to stop it.

Then, Jerric spends the day with Abienne. They start the morning with the real breakfast of champions, though apparently Abienne got multiple servings waiting for Jerric to finish off.

I do have to compliment your use of double-entendre. The 'pet-cat-named-Vidkun' sequence was hilarious. Though, if I were Jerric, I would have been a lot more worried if Abienne really had used 'Vidkun' as a name for . . . you know what, nevermind. Let's move on.

Their afternoon in Anvil is a delightful sequence, and you manage the blend of romance, advice, and strategic planning so very nicely.

‘There goes a man on his way to a killing. Maybe he’ll stop and do some raping first.’
That's just hilarious.

‘Anvil Healer Cited for Public Acts of Extreme Lewdness. Local Nord Receives Accolades for Same.’
So is that. Actually, it made me think of something great for Awtwyr's return trip to Kvatch. Swap out 'Anvil Healer' for 'Shornhelm Spellsword,' with Sigrid as the local Nord and Awtwyr getting an earful from Matius. It won't actually happen, so I'm putting it here for you to think about in case Abienne ever does agree to some nice, open-sky bedroll games.

Just beware of the mosquitoes. They can really prick you.

[D.Foxy]

Grits, It's official. I am now LOL ROFL SLAL (Screaming Like a Loon).

And Now I Officially Declare that what follows is ALL HER FAULT.

IDEA for Genital Jewellery: Pohoosee Rings with small bells that are each tuned to a different note and will ring only at certain vibrations...so that two humpers who really know how to hump can produce a TUNE while they hump.

Hoes near military bases can opt for the "Star Spangled Banner" tune package.

[mALX]

I am finding Jerric to be more and more interesting with each chapter.

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Just beware of the mosquitoes. They can really prick you.

If Jerric's mosquito is the size of an ogre's, shouldn't it be called a dragonfly or something? What about a giant carpenter ant? OH! How about a behe-moth!

[Thomas Kaira]

Mmm... Daggerfall sounds like my kind of city! Escargot and Foie Gras, Ratatouille and Steak Tartar (Jerric would like that one, I think)!

And thank you for painting an image I will take to my grave. Please do not ever give me the displeasure of meeting that harlot again.

I am now completely caught up, too. It's been a good day, and only made better by your writing.

[Grits]

haute ecole rider: That wasn’t Heinrich and Hasathil, just a random couple. By that time of day Hasathil should be behind the stables. I’m glad you enjoyed their normal afternoon, especially the marsh. I loved giving Jerric that walk, since there’s so little left from his childhood. Luckily Abiene just called Jerric by another man’s name, otherwise she might have been a little more vocal about their chat with the bejeweled woman.

mALX: You’re right, their time together has highlighted more differences between them. They’re definitely a mismatch in many ways. You bring up an important point, something that Jerric gets to ask Abiene soon: how can she be so wild and free with him in private, and so buttoned-down in public? It’s also the question Abiene has to deal with for herself, and decide if she wants to be just one or the other. She knows he’s not going to be the guy in the velvet shoes. It means a lot to me that you have picked up on this! One thing she got right for their day was staying outdoors. It could have been all art galleries, lectures, and museums! If only someone was in town to give a talk about rat libido…

SubRosa: I definitely am trying to carry over that patriarchal society you describe so well from Abiene’s Saturalia for Imperials and members other races who have adopted their culture. I’m sure I’ve created confusion by trying to explain! It’s just one layer of the cake in Jerric’s Story. The main point here for Jerric and Abiene is how culture and family have shaped them differently, and what it would mean for each of them if they were to stay together. I’m in complete agreement about equality in mer societies, I think because I see them spending far less of their lifespan pregnant or with small children. That would be a huge difference for them compared to human women, and something that’s not addressed in the game.

From Jerric’s frank comments to the glitter girl, it seems he could use another lesson with Arvena. I’m glad you enjoyed the garden house, I was thinking about all of my favorite wood elves when I wrote it! It was a fun afternoon to write, I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

Acadian: Thank you for the nit, I fixed it. I'm glad you enjoyed the glass house. Anvil has a Hammerfell flavor, but I wanted to give it a little Bosmer influence, too. I don’t know much about Valenwood, but it seems like the most fascinating place!

Captain Hammer: I’m so glad Jerric’s evolution has kept your interest. Thank you for your endorsement of his plan for the thieves, he’s learning! I’m glad you’re enjoying the humor. Jerric does seem to get himself into situations. Best of luck to Awtwyr, should he decide to scale Kvatch’s icy peaks.

D. Foxy: Jolly Bellz: the Kitten Collection, inspired by D. Foxy. Sounds like a market opportunity. Just remember when you hear the National Anthem, you’re supposed to stand up!

Thomas Kaira: I’m glad you saw through Abiene’s teasing about the cuisine. Unsettling images abound when you roll with Jerric of the TMI.

Where we are: Abiene and Jerric spent Loredas together in Anvil. Now Jerric and Darnand have some sirens to entrap.




Chapter 10: Septims, Part 15

Darnand stepped into The Flowing Bowl and stood for a moment letting his eyes get used to the light. A smoky haze hung in the room, the mark of a poorly drawing chimney and the patrons’ bad habits. At ten bells of the evening watch, the crowd was still fairly calm. The serious drinking would begin after midnight, or so Jerric had told him.

The tavern contained an assemblage of wood elves partly concealed by a forest of Nords. Darnand’s eyes sorted through the blond heads and broad shoulders until he spotted Jerric’s. Seated alone at the back of the room, hunched over a tankard. Did Jerric see him? Darnand squinted until Jerric’s raised eyebrow told him to get on with it.

He approached the bar. A sharp-featured Bosmer with his dark hair in a topknot greeted him with a smile. “Welcome to The Flowing Bowl. I'm Maenlorn. My twin's name is Caenlorn. How to tell us apart? I'm in brown. He's in blue. Simple, really.”

“Good evening, Maenlorn. How do you do?”

The Bosmer looked taken aback. “I’m… What can I get you?”

“I will have a beer, if you please.” Darnand glanced around at his fellow patrons. Most appeared to be dockworkers or seamen by their rough clothing. Norbert Lelles was the exception in his neat doublet and unstained trousers. Lelles gave him a nod of recognition, which Darnand returned. Lelles appeared to be in conversation with an Imperial woman. Her skirt gave away her gender more than her brutally short haircut. Darnand watched her for a moment before deciding that she was not one of the sirens. Her expression looked sweetly vacant as she spoke earnestly to Lelles, and her posture was in no way inviting.

As he scanned the room, Darnand noticed that nearly everyone in the tavern wore a blade at their hip, males and females alike. He looked down to meet the beatific smile of another dark-skinned Bosmer. “Greetings,” said the mer. “I’m Thurindil, son of Julianos and Mohi-Titona, Queen of Akavir. Mother's coming for me in the dragon ships. I don't like these itchy clothes, but I have to wear them or it frightens the fish."

“Indeed,” Darnand replied. This mer makes only marginally less sense than some others, he thought. “We each have our burdens to bear.”

"Don't mind him. He's not right in the head. Poor fellow." Darnand found a hard-looking Breton woman at his elbow. His stomach gave a nervous jump.

“Good evening,” he said to her. “May I offer you a drink?”

She gave him a scathing glance. "I'm Mirabelle Monet. I run the Fo'c's'le, a boarding house for sailors. Perhaps you’ve heard of me. Sorry, I reserve my beds for seamen." She stepped over to Thurindil and slipped her arm around his shoulders. The Bosmer rested his head on her breast, smiling.

“Your beer, Breton.” Maenlorn made the exchange with him, and Darnand found an empty table. He sat so that he could see most of the room, including Jerric. He tried not to look at him. Then he felt that he was being obvious by not looking. He glanced over.

An Argonian with a blazing orange scalp leaned down with his fist braced on Jerric’s table, talking to him. Jerric’s face still held a neutral expression, but he somehow looked quietly menacing. He did not collect those scars playing patty-cake, Darnand reminded himself. Jerric gave the Argonian a brief nod, and the lizard-man backed away a step before turning. Jerric’s eyes met Darnand’s. Jerric gave his head a small shake.

“Well met, Breton,” came a sultry voice. A dark-haired Imperial woman stood by Darnand’s table, one hand on her slim hip. She wore a red and purple velvet gown trimmed with gold that had seen better days. The suggestion in her smile did not match her cold eyes. She looked vaguely familiar.

“Good evening.” Do not appear too eager, he told himself. This might not be one of them. He let his eyes wander over her figure disinterestedly.

“Are you alone?” she asked.

“Indeed. Are you?”

“I have a friend, Signy. She wants to talk to you. She likes Bretons. I think you’ll like what she has to say.” Darnand kept his eyes on the woman’s backside as she walked away.

A Nord woman approached immediately. Tall, blonde and busty, she was the physical opposite of the Imperial. He stopped noticing her clothing when his gaze reached her cleavage. This has to be them, Darnand decided.

"I haven’t seen you here before,” she purred. “Awww, and you’re all alone too. How sad. Well, if you’re up to it we can solve that little problem. You see, me and Faustina here are lonely too, and we’ve been looking for someone. You look like just what we need.”

Excellent, Darnand thought. Now I do not have to drink the rest of this swill. “Your appearance appeals to me. Which one is Faustina, that one there?”

“That’s her. I’ll tell you what. We have a cozy farmhouse not far from here where we could... well... get to know each other much, much better. You know the old Gweden place? Meet us there around eleven bells. I can promise you a night of fun you won’t soon forget."

“What kind of fun? That is a long way to walk for a conversation.”

“Do I really have to spell it out for you? You’re a man, and I’m a woman with a certain desire. You figure out the rest.”

“I shall see you in approximately one hour. Make sure to bring your friend. She is thin for my taste, but I am certain I will find a use for her.”

The disgust that passed across Signy’s face matched what he was feeling, but she put a smile on over it. Darnand stood and headed for the door, forcing himself not to look at Jerric. He passed Faustina on the way out.

“Can’t wait to see you later,” she said flirtatiously. “Don’t keep us waiting."

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Jerric pounded on the Gweden farmhouse door with all of his strength. Darnand was inside, the door was locked, and it sounded as if the house was being torn down from within. Gogan and Maelona were nowhere in sight. He backed up and crashed into the door with his shoulder. Screams, howls, and roars from inside drowned out the sound of his shouting.

Darnand had followed the plan to the letter, and Jerric had trailed him to the farmhouse, keeping out of sight. Darnand hadn’t been inside long before the noise started.

Jerric crashed against the door again, and silence fell over the house. “Darnand!” he shouted. When he heard the lock working, he stepped back and drew his sword.

Darnand pulled the door open and stood holding on to the frame. Jerric stared at him in shock. He looked as if he had been dragged through a slaughterhouse. Jerric reached out and flicked something meaty off of Darnand’s shoulder. The thick stench coming from inside the cottage filled his throat. He grabbed Darnand by the front of his robe and pulled him out into the moonlit farmyard.

“Are you hurt?” Jerric asked. Darnand’s robe appeared to be intact, but it was wet with blood. Darnand shook his head. His eyes were big, and he was not focusing on anything. “What happened?”

Darnand didn’t reply right away, so Jerric put away his sword and gave him a shake. “Daedroth,” Darnand said.

Jerric thought for a moment. “You summoned a daedroth?” Darnand nodded. “Inside a cottage?” He went to the door and looked in at the single room, and then he really wished that he hadn’t. He went back to Darnand. “Let’s get you back to the guild hall. We’ll tell the Guard later.” Jerric was worried that Darnand’s calm would erupt into something else at any moment. “Are you wearing trousers under there? Good.” He stripped off Darnand’s stinking robe and cleaned his face with a dry section. Blood trickled down out of his soaked hair, so Jerric rubbed the robe over it. It reminded him how he used to clean Rhano up after a night out. Rhano’s mother had always struggled with her son’s Nord side. “Here, put on my shirt. That’s good enough for now, let’s go.”

They turned to find Gogan and Maelona walking up the hill carrying torches. They both wore the russet surcoats of the Anvil City Guard. “You’re late,” Jerric gritted through his teeth. He thought Darnand’s fragile calm would not be bolstered by him shouting. “Where were you?”

Maelona and Gogan stared at Darnand. Jerric noticed that he still looked quite bloody in the torchlight. Jerric stayed with Darnand while the other two went to the farmhouse’s open door. Maelona gagged, and when Gogan threw up on her boots, she also lost her dinner. They completed the obligatory spitting and mouth wiping, then they rejoined Darnand and Jerric.

Darnand seemed ready to talk to them. “I did as you asked. The weasel-faced one is called Faustina. She said we could have some fun, her Nord friend likes Bretons. I met them here and you didn’t come. They had swords and a Khajiit. I had to fight them.” He looked at Jerric. “I heard you but I couldn’t reach the door.”

“How many were there?” Maelona asked.

“Three. Faustina, Signy, and a Khajiit. I didn’t hear her name.” Darnand looked back at Jerric, his face sick. “I should have removed my clothing as they asked. Then you might have had time to arrest them.”

“First time?” Gogan asked Jerric.

“Yeah.” Jerric saw that Darnand had started shaking. He reached for Gogan’s torch. “I’m sure you law enforcers can sort out the parts. We’ll pick up his reward tomorrow. And it better be good!”

Darnand was silent the whole way back to the guild hall. By the time they passed into the Chapelgate district, he was shivering with the cold. Jerric simply kept him moving.

They stepped into the Mages Guild’s empty front hall. “You need a bath,” Jerric told Darnand. “Can you handle it?”

Darnand looked at him as if he had said something foolish. “Where is your shirt?”

Jerric eyed it, hanging open halfway down Darnand’s chest. He decided not to explain. “What were you about to do?”

“Take a bath. Wash the blood out of my hair. Lie awake and listen to dead women screaming.”

Jerric thought that sounded accurate. “Good night, then. I’m headed to the beach.” He wished he had better words for the situation.

Darnand nodded solemnly. “See you tomorrow.”

This post has been edited by Grits: May 23 2011, 06:43 PM

[haute ecole rider]

So Darnand panicked and summoned a daedroth? Yikes! That sounds as bad as the slaughter of Julian's family! Ugh!

Great depiction of shell shock afterwards. And how appropriate that it's Jerric that helps Darnand through it this time, considering that Darnand helped Jerric with his PTSD on the latter's arrival in Anvil.

[mALX]

Sorry, I reserve my beds for seamen." She stepped over to Thurindil and slipped her arm around his shoulders. The Bosmer rested his head on her breast, smiling.

ROFL !!! Mirabelle Monet must have a different type of seamen in mind with Thurindil, he is decidedly a landlubber, ROFL !!! His mosquito must be a real "ketch" - maybe it is a "De Havilland Mosquito," I heard they have an arresting hook...GAAAAH! Foxy must really be back, I see dherty in-you-endo!

The weasel-faced one

SPEW!!! ROFL !!!

“I should have removed my clothing as they asked.

Poor Darnand, bless his little heart! ROFL !!!

I absolutely love this chapter!!! You have a knack and ability for knowing exactly when to back off at just the right moments - NOT give play by play/blow by blow details - leaving scenes like this to the imagination with just teasers for information - Huge Talent !!!! Gotta add this to my favorite Jerric episodes, AWESOME WRITE !!!!

[SubRosa]

The tavern contained an assemblage of wood elves partly concealed by a forest of Nords.
I loved your metaphors here.

I also loved how Maenlorn was taken aback by Darnand's greeting, because it wasn't rude!

Excellent, Darnand thought. Now I do not have to drink the rest of this swill.
That is our Darnand alright!

And Darnand opens a can of whoopass on the sirens! Yuck! You handled his shellshock quite well, and the heaving stomachs of the typically useless city guard. Now if Abiene could only see him at at time like this, he might stand a chance with her after all!

[mALX]

And Darnand opens a can of whoopass on the sirens! Yuck! You handled his shellshock quite well, and the heaving stomachs of the typically useless city guard. Now if Abiene could only see him at at time like this, he might stand a chance with her after all!

Yes, I was in whoops over the puke fest that took place after seeing Darnand's handiwork too !!

BOLD: ROFL !!!!

[Acadian]

What a great bar scene! You really captured that place. Darnand being 'out of place' while Jerric fit right in made it priceless.

What a fabulous idea to have used a summoned daedroth! That would certainly create the mayhem you described! Whatever it takes, and Darnand was smart enough to do what he needed to in order to more than even the odds to his favor.

“Take a bath. Wash the blood out of my hair. Lie awake and listen to dead women screaming.”
This is brilliant for its unusually striking blend of humor, truth and sadness. Perfect!

[D.Foxy]

“Take a bath. Wash the blood out of my hair. Lie awake and listen to dead women screaming.”


Man, now....THAT....IS....W.R.I.T.I.N.G!!!!!


Malx, I was going to do something with "Seamen" and "Semen" but now you have come prematurely into this thread and I shall just have to keep my semen to myself.



Er...

Um...


OH DEAR. ME and my BIG MOUTH.

[Thomas Kaira]

Wow. Calamity and mutilation galore today. This is the second update I've read through today where people have been torn apart in a very physical way.

See what they say? You mess with the nerds, and you die a horrible death. We may be easy to pick on when young, but once we grow up, we can make our bullies' lives a living hell. Darnand fits this perfectly, and now the whole world will know not to *shablamz!* with him.

Let's hope he wears notoriety well.

[Captain Hammer]

So, Darnand gets some experience in a bar, including the ever-popular tavern pick-up routine. 'Course, he's operating at a different game, and so are the Sirens, but you can't let those little things get in your way. At the rate he's going, he'll soon be cruising the local taverns each night, at least until Carahil warns him off for inviting too many strangers to the guild-hall at night.

Then there's this little gem:

“You summoned a daedroth?” Darnand nodded. “Inside a cottage?”

Well, where else? I mean, even Darnand can't seem to be in multiple places at one time, and he was clearly in the cottage. Jerric maintains his fabulous propensity of ignoring the obviously practical on-all-fronts solutions that Darnand has a knack for finding.

I'd get a lot of water-tight sacks for the clean-up. And see about selling the place cheap once it's clean. Maybe have a chapel priest perform a cleansing to be on the safe side. Then hopefully get an old legionary to retire on the farm and discourage similar efforts in the future.

[ghastley]

I have to echo everyone's admiration of the way you describe the carnage without describing the carnage, but everyone else's reaction to it.

I do hope no Daedroth was harmed in the making of this scene!

In my Gweden Brothel mod the player has the additional complication of keeping Tsarrina alive. Darnand would not have done too well with that constraint.