Jerric's Story, A Nord's Adventures in Cyrodiil Options

[SubRosa]

Take a look at The House of Healing. It is a mod that adds a Healer's Guild to Weye.

Darnand's observation of the emptiness of the lower chambers was not only perceptive of him, but also a good piece of writing on your part. HWStG is indeed not likely to suffer packs of critters around it. At least not living packs. Something Slythe Seringi Slytherin found out.

I shared the same thoughts that Darnand had for Slythe at the end. He went out heroically, after jumping to all the wrong conclusions for all the right (if mad) reasons. But it still took guts, and selflessness, to go down there.

Darnand's reaction was both clever (turn invisible, think of ways to escape without a fight) as well as believable (his muscles feeling rigid).

I always did love the appearance of the storm astronauts atronachs (who ever came up with that atronach name anyway?). You made it seem quite daunting, with the shaking ground, gigantic swirling boulders, and the words "Big Bad" written all over it.

It was nice to see Darnand's invisibility not work. Many writers like to use at as the invulnerable shield it is in the game, and never stop to think that just as the player character can neutralize it, so should other beings as well. The jump spell was a good addition too. Is that a new idea of yours? Or are you thinking of simply a fortify athletics? In any case, it is an excellent spell for an adventurer to have. It would probably be handy in Valenwood, for jumping up into trees, or to go from one tree to another.

The battle between the Daedroth and the Astronaut turned out as I expected it would. But the 'droth did put up a good fight, and bought Darnand the time he needed to get a clear route out. Which is what he really needed. Only it looks like escape is not Darnand's plan after all. Those void salts might come in handy for rubbing on sore feet too, along with some warm water... His musing about the permanency of the atronach was spot on. How did it get there? and stay there? are the million septim questions.

That last picture looks like a Godzilla movie shot through a blue lens!


nits:
Wolves were considerably larger than Bretons.
Did you change the size of Cyrodiil wolves? Grey Wolves are usually only about 80 lbs and 3.5 - 5 feet long. Although a few rare individuals have been found much larger. If you do want them bigger, no complaints here. It would make them more dangerous opponents. If they were 6 feet long and weighed in at 200 lbs, then I could easily believe they would attack people.


A spell to give the atronach weakness to magicka
Not exactly a nit, but an observation. When I first read this I was confused, thinking you meant the atronach birthsign, and that the spell somehow conferred a weakness to magicka that the birthsign also caused. Only after reading it again did I realize you meant the Sunken One. I am not sure how many people might make the same mistake, but you might consider changing atronach to something like 'targets', 'victims', 'enemies', etc...

This post has been edited by SubRosa: Oct 14 2011, 03:23 PM

[Acadian]

Wonderfully gripping, Grits! Let me catch my breath.

’His dismissive thoughts about Seringi’s dedication now seemed disrespectful. Here lay a mer who had sacrificed himself to save others, Darnand included. That his death resulted from delusions made it sad, but no less noble. He tugged the blanket free of his belt.’
What a delightful and poignant observation for Darnand to make!

’The far end of the canyon was now blocked by a being comprised of floating boulders revolving around an insubstantial center. It resolved into a bipedal shape and then dissolved into swirling rocks again. Shock energy crackled over its entirety. Each stone was at least the size of Darnand’s torso. A quiet part of his mind observed that the Sunken One was in fact a storm atronach.’
By Mara! What a fantastically vivid description you provide here. In fact, especially when Darnand summoned his helper, you were stunningly effective at bringing both these Daedric titans to life.

’The storm atronach’s progress through the tunnel was alarmingly fast, but comfortingly noisy.’
Another smoothly efficient and evocative passage.

Right at the end, as he heads back down there, I wondered if Darnand had contracted a touch of Jerric’s ‘balls over brains’ thinking. I suppose the prospect of some void salts could tempt even the bookish Darnand to try Jerricish things.

[Thomas Kaira]

Wow, intense! Talk about finding yourself up cacat creek without a paddle! A Storm Atronach?

Good thing Darnand had that panic spell available, otherwise he would be nothing more than a pile of extra-crispy imp chips by now. I hear electro-fried is the way to go with them, but personally, I'm not interested in eating anything-a-la-Darnand.

Darnand dried his sweaty hands and pushed himself to his feet in the corridor. Many rituals involved purification with a solution of void salts. They were rare and extremely difficult to procure without arousing suspicion. It would also be prudent to put Seringi’s remains to rest.

Uh oh... is Darnand being overcome by The Adventurer's Folly? Risking one's life for the sake of valuables? I hope he doesn't let Abiene hear about this, I am very sure she would be quite less than pleased if she did.

[mALX]

GAAAAH !!! That isn't what I meant !! I was talking about her writing a deeply emotional letter that Darnand might see, which would cause a terrible rift between the two friends !!! (and if that voyeur guy found it, he'd be sure to tell everyone within earshot). URK !!

Oh no, he didn't use chameleon so when he grabbed the stick it dispelled the invisibility !! ARGH !!! Riveting story from the first impact tremor of the Atronach! Like Acadian, I found myself holding my breath and my heart pounding till Darnand was safely out ... how like him to analyze it even as he is catching his breath! But for him to go back in? ARGH !!! Awesome Write !!

[D.Foxy]

You know, I must confess a guilty secret...I always level and power up my characters to an insanely high level before getting into boss fights so that I don't quite get as high an adrenalin rush as you do when youfight bosses at a 'just adequate' level.

What you've done, Grits my girl, is as Gritty as your handle! We can all smell the battle, taste the fear, and see the action as our hero uses every bit of his skills (some not quite legal, heheh) to survive...

A very very big thumbs up!

[Grits]

King Coin: It was fun, I did a little in-game research with a real storm atronach and a summoned daedroth, since the game gives you a leveled one. They went to melee right away almost every time, the storm atronach got off at most one shock spell. The second summoned daedroth usually finished the atronach with its first strike. That cave makes a good spot for daedra battles. You’re right, a bad foot would have been the end for Darnand. The spell helped his landing. He’s getting a lot of Illusion practice in the field. Thank you, KC!

SubRosa: Indeed, unlike our gray wolves, Cyrodiil’s wolves here are bigger than a Breton. They do not behave completely like our North American wolves, either. Thank you for pointing out that confusing sentence, I changed it so that it was clear he was thinking of his target. (And not Jerric ) The jump spell comes from Morrowind, but I don’t know anything about it but the name. I put it vaguely in the school of Alteration, but that’s just a guess. A Fortify spell would have worked, too, maybe Acrobatics? I think that a lot of spells would be combinations of effects from different schools. Feather plus Fortify Acrobatics for Jump, perhaps. That mod looks like something I would enjoy with Abiene. The charges of necromancy and vivisection mentioned in the Introduction sound pretty similar to my own ideas. I’m sure she would enjoy the wardrobe upgrade. I have her in the white monk’s robes. Thank you, SubRosa!

Acadian: Balls over brains, LOL! That’s Jerric to a T. Darnand’s lapses in judgment tend to be brains over sense. I suppose that’s why Abiene was happy that the ballsy but even more sensible Lildereth might join them, though I am only now connecting all of the dots. Of course, Darnand is preeeeetty sure the second daedroth got the storm atronach. Thank you for your encouraging words. Thanks to your advice over this past almost year, I enjoyed writing this difficult part as much as any of the friendly banter.

Thomas Kaira: Yes, there is nothing about his trek back into the cavern that would please Abiene. He might even get shouted at by Jerric, who still has to run away from them. With the Apprentice birthsign, electro-fried Breton is right.

mALX: Oh, you’re so right about Abiene’s letter, anything from the heart would be too incriminating. That invisibility works great when you’re only practicing! Another way Darnand’s plans did not stand up to combat, which as you pointed out he started analyzing before it was even over. My first thought when I realized that Darnand was going back in was, this plan is not mALX-approved!! LOL. Thank you, mALX!

D.Foxy: Thank you, Foxy! I think this was my first battle with no weapons. I would not be surprised in the game if my character whipped around and started cursing me through the screen during some fights. Here’s the result of Darnand’s first game encounter with a troll.


Where we are: Darnand found Slythe Seringi’s remains and met the storm atronach called the Sunken One. We left him heading back down into the cavern to investigate the hopefully dead storm atronach. This episode concludes our Kvatch chapter. There might be a little delay before we move on. The back problem I have been griping about has escalated, fingers crossed for a Superior Convalescence spell at the healer tomorrow.



Chapter 12 part 11

“So as it turned out, the second daedroth had finished the storm atronach.” Darnand needed a moment to catch his breath. Climbing the Kvatch plateau while relating the day’s adventure had left him winded, despite his new devotion to exercise. Lildereth set a challenging pace even loaded with her pack and weapons. Ulfe padded along beside Lildereth, occasionally stopping to investigate a scent then trotting to catch back up. The three of them had not passed anyone else out this late on the Kvatch Road.

The light from Lildereth’s spell made a pool around them, but it left her face in shadow. “What did you do with the body?” she asked.

“I scraped the void salts from the individual stones,” Darnand replied. “I lacked an adequate implement, so I used a conjured dagger. I must admit to some satisfaction, binding a daedric spirit for the purpose of…” Lildereth was giving him a look. “Of course, you meant the flax farmer. I carried the pieces back and buried them at his farm. Some… residue and small bits of him remain in the cavern under a cairn I made from the boulders of his Sunken One. The grave at the farm is shallow but secure. I performed an invocation to Arkay over it.”

“What was the offering?”

Darnand was scandalized. “I do not know. I did not disturb it.”

That earned him another look. “You didn’t…”

“I did not open the sack. I simply left it where he placed it in the cave.”

Lildereth shook her head. “Yet you might have taken his very flesh and bones.”

Darnand snorted. “You refer to my treatment of the undead. Seringi’s remains had not been prepared with the proper rituals. Though some would have harvested his heart and skin for their potions.” He realized what she might be wondering. Now it was Darnand’s turn to glare. “I am not a necromancer.”

The guard at the edge of the plateau nodded them through the checkpoint from under his hood. The wind had picked up since Darnand encountered Lildereth outside the stables. Or rather since Ulfe romped up and nearly put him on his back with her greeting. Their breath made thick clouds for the breeze to carry away.

“It’s going to snow,” Lildereth observed. “If we are unlucky, we will have freezing rain. It was no accident that we met on the road. I was waiting for you. May I share your tent tonight?”

“Of course,” Darnand said, surprised. “I am certain that Jerric will not object. Though it is only fair that I should warn you.”

Lildereth asked the question with her face. He could do without her sharp tongue, but Darnand realized that he had missed some of her quieter ways.

“He is troubled by dreams,” Darnand explained. “He thrashes, shouts, and kicks like a horse. I have learned when to wake him, but a peaceful night will not be found under our canvas.”

“It’s late to make a shelter down in the trees, and I’m tired. I suppose a person cannot help what he does when he is asleep.”

“Occasionally he fondles himself,” Darnand added. “At least I think he is sleeping.”

Lildereth rolled her eyes. “I remember that from the guild hall. Dead drunk and still humping the mattress.”

They found the tent poles decorated with Jerric’s clothing. Gentle snores from inside informed them of his status. Darnand held the tent flap open, and Lildereth ducked under his arm. Darnand tripped over Jerric’s boots as he entered.

They took in the spectacle by the light of Lildereth’s spell. Jerric sprawled sideways across the tent, naked as the day he was born. His head rested on Darnand’s bedroll and one foot was tangled in his own. He had flung a brawny forearm over his face.

“Do you see a blade within his reach?” Darnand murmured. “Sometimes when he awakens...”

Lildereth snorted. “Nords.” She tugged her cloak tighter around herself. “He does not smell as bad as I expected.”

“He keeps his person cleaner than his clothing.” Darnand was pleased that he had thought to wash up at Seringi’s well. Under his soiled robe, he was ready for his bedroll. Some of Jerric’s habits had proven prudent on the road.

Jerric lifted his arm and squinted at them. “Kahve?” he asked hopefully.

“It is still tonight,” said Darnand. “Though much of it has passed.”

Ulfe crowded between them and stepped across Jerric. Her tail lashed their legs as she passed.

“Ulfe!” cried Jerric, then “Oof!” as she dropped onto his belly. Jerric attempted to rise as Ulfe rolled over onto her back. A tangle of furry limbs ensued.

“By the Nine!” cried Darnand. “Put on some trousers or sit on your own blankets! It is unclear to me how a man can own three swords, yet not a single bedrobe.”

“Only Imperials get dressed for sleeping. Anyway I wasn’t asleep. I was just resting my eyes for a moment. I was going to get back up after nightfall. It’s good to see you, Lildereth.” Darnand and Lildereth remained in the doorway until the Nord and the dog situated themselves. Jerric shifted to his own bedroll and pulled a blanket across his lap. Ulfe flopped down with her head on Jerric’s knee. He reached over her for the wine bottle. Lildereth unloaded her burdens while Darnand lit the candle.

“Do you mind if I share your tent tonight?” Lildereth asked Jerric. She sat down cross-legged with her back to the door. “I believe it is going to snow.”

Darnand watched half a dozen thoughts flit over Jerric’s face while he opened the wine. “Sure,” Jerric finally said. “I hope it snows. Might be freezing rain.” He took a swig and passed it to Lildereth. “I thought that wood elves—”

“Lildereth found a Doomstone,” Darnand interrupted before the two of them could get started. He sat down on his blankets and unrolled his map. The three of them bent their heads over it.

“Here,” she said. “And there is another one here, near this smudge. I thought I had seen standing stones there before.”

“Before what?” asked Jerric, yawning. Darnand looked at Lildereth, curious if Jerric’s clumsy fishing would net any new information.

“Before you made me reconsider my sleeping arrangements,” she replied.

“About that…” Jerric let go of Ulfe’s ear and scratched a hand through his hair.

“I have already warned her,” Darnand told him.

“Apologies in advance,” said Jerric.

Lildereth nodded to the back of the tent. “I’ll sleep behind the packs where you can’t kick me. Ulfe likes to stretch out, though. She’ll go outside if she wants to.”

The dog’s tail thumped Darnand’s pillow when they looked at her.

“We will all be warmer,” Darnand said doubtfully. The Nord and the hound made the eight-man tent seem like a double.

“Especially since Carmia put beans in the stew again,” grinned Jerric, cutting his eyes back at Lildereth.

The mer did not return his smile. “Are you planning to go into the city again tonight? Darnand told me you helped with the ghosts.”

Jerric stared down at his hands on Ulfe’s neck, jesting gone from his face. “Yeah.”

He looks even more haggard than he did this morning, Darnand decided. He shared a glance with Lildereth as she passed the bottle. “How many more days do you think you will need to spend with Vigge?” Darnand asked Jerric.

“Not sure.” Jerric ran a hand through his hair again. “A couple of the spells are complicated, and recharging isn’t easy to learn. I’ll have a better idea after tomorrow.”

Lildereth placed her fingertips on Jerric’s knee. Her tone lacked its customary edge. “You will concentrate better with more rest. Stay here tonight. Bring a large stone into the tent, and I will show you how my tribe stayed warm without campfires. Darnand will tell us about his victory at Sandstone Cavern. You can pet the dog and moan that you missed your second dinner. Stay out of the city tonight, Jerric. What you are seeking is not there.”

After a moment Jerric looked up and grinned again. “That snow excuse is a pile of imp chips. You can just admit that you missed me.”

This post has been edited by Grits: Oct 17 2011, 07:20 PM

[haute ecole rider]

First let me apologize for being remiss in commenting on your wonderful developments of late. RL and school has conspired to steal me away from here. Do not fear, I have been keeping up with Jerric, Darnand and Lildereth! (And Ulfe! How wonderful to see her again!)

I liked how you chose to gloss over the second trip through Sandstone Cave. I'm sure we've all been through it enough. It was the second quest I ever completed (after Go Fish) that didn't have anything to do with the MQ. Yet I can't help wondering if the Sunken One has anything to do with the devastation at Kvatch. OTOH, what about Hackdirt? Both Serengi's disappearance and Hackdirt have that classic Chthullu mythos about them. In any case, that quest gave me such the creeps that I played through it only once or twice since (and I've played with six or seven characters by now).

Oh, and the way Lildereth and Darnand discuss Jerric is too funny! It goes a long way to show the depth of their friendship that they would talk of Jerric so and still look after him in the throes of his PTSD. Yes, I can see that is still an issue, and ghost-hunting may not be enough to purge Jerric of those signs. But we'll see.

[SubRosa]

That was some troll! Talk about barely squeaking by.

Though some would have harvested his heart and skin for their potions
Ewww!

“I am not a necromancer.”
Not yet at least...

Dead drunk and still humping the mattress.
Well, at least he is not pooping or peeing all over it, because he thinks he is in the bathroom. That seems to be the standard drunken male activity, especially when someone else is sleeping in the bed already.

It is unclear to me how a man can own three swords, yet not a single bedrobe.
Change that to three dogs, and you have a redneck!

“Especially since Carmia put beans in the stew again,” grinned Jerric, cutting his eyes back at Lildereth.
Yikes! I think sleeping out in the snow is looking better and better...

All in all a fun episode that shows the camaraderie that has grown between the Terrible Trio since they first met.



nits:
The guard at the edge of the plateau nodded {to} them through from under his hood.
I think you might have wanted a to or at where I inserted it above.

[mALX]

Very powerful that Lildereth understood the cause of Jerric's downhill spin since they arrived in Kvatch - and that Darnand noticed it as well. Jerric's swing from the brash jokes to the (almost helplessness) glimpse of inner turmoil facing what Kvatch has done to him - another hugely powerful moment. AWESOME WRITE !!!!

[Acadian]

First, best wishes for your back and a speedy recovery.

Gosh, we had so much fun snooping over Abiene’s shoulder as she wrote her letters a couple episodes ago. Then we traveled along with Darnand for his academic assessment and evaluation of a freaking monster that shook the ground! And finally, here, you bring all but Abiene into such delightfully close quarters again!

This episode was wonderful. I’m with Rider is thinking it was nice that you sort of just ‘reviewed’ Darnand’s return to the dungeon. That provided more ink to lavish upon the wonderful interplay among your characters. I love the Quintessential Quartet of Darnand, Lilderith, Ulfe and the big fellow. The interaction among the four of them in what must have seemed a tiny tent was priceless and such fun to read! Some very touching stuff near the end.

You know that I identify so strongly with Lildereth and how you portray her. What a fabulous touch for her to allude to magically heating a large stone to help stay warm.

[Thomas Kaira]

Yipes! Sorry to hear about your back. Best thing you can do now is spend as little time on your feet as you can until you can be seen. And no heavy lifting!

I really enjoyed the back-and-forthing between Darnand, Lildereth, and later Jerric. Always bickering about something, but every time, always entertaining.

Hmm, Standing Stones, eh? Not just doomstones anymore now that Skyrim is just around the corner?

I agree with Lildereth about getting away from Kvatch. It was probably too soon for Jerric to return, considering how he is still deeply haunted by his prior experiences and suffering night terrors. He may have found closure, but I feel he is now farther away from finding peace. Seeing all the suffering within the city walls firsthand again, that's rough. He may act tough, but it is getting more and more difficult for him to hide just how torn up he is inside.

Some time away from it all sounds like a great idea.

[mALX]

GAAAAH !!! I didn't know that was what you meant till I saw Acadian's comment !!! ARGH !!! I hope your back gets better, that is an awful place to hurt !!! URK !!! I'm so sorry you haven't been feeling well !!!

[King Coin]

Yay! Lildereth is back with us! She and Darnand are getting into it already! I like how they think differently. Darnand is all about the magical details, and Lildereth is more concerned about the mer.

Jerric’s such a wonderful tentmate.

“That snow excuse is a pile of imp chips. You can just admit that you missed me.”
This screen shot comes to mind

And I can tell Jerric missed her too, he hasn’t been this much of an --- in a while. I'm glad the three of them are together again.

Great chapter Grits! And get well!

This post has been edited by King Coin: Oct 18 2011, 03:49 AM

[TheBrume]

I like the contrast between Lildereth and Darnand. I look forward to further chapters feuturing the three of them together once more.

Only Imperials get dressed for sleeping.

I liked this, it reminded me that this is still in the TES universe. And it was funny.

[McBadgere]

Excellent...Lovely place to start reading...Very...Descriptive... ...

Look forward to more...

[Grits]

Folks, thank you very much for the well wishes, and for your patience! After the first two weeks of Physical Torture Therapy, I’m… still not able to sit down. But at least I’m walking. I made myself a standing work station at the kitchen counter (i.e. laptop on a pile of dictionaries), so back to the story!

haute ecole rider: The gang is here whenever you can find the time, I’m glad you’re reading. (I miss Julian, no pressure, I’m just sayin.’ ) Hackdirt creeps me out, too. I have some dark ideas brewing for that quest. I’m glad you enjoyed L & D’s frank discussion about their tentmate. Instead of blaming it on the dog, these two (and Ulfe) can blame it on the Nord.

SubRosa: Jerric might not be the ideal roommate. He might end up sleeping out in the snow! Thank you for the nit, I fixed it.

mALX: I’m glad you pointed out that moment where they weren’t fooled by Jerric’s clowning around. You won’t see many gentle words from Lildereth, thank you for drawing attention to her insight.

Acadian: Quintessential Quartet, I love it. Jerric does displace a lot of air in that tent. I was actually thinking of you when I wrote the part about Lildereth’s warming stone, I’m so glad you liked it.

Thomas Kaira: You and Lildereth are absolutely right about Jerric and Kvatch. He doesn’t know how to deal with guilt, and both being there and leaving again are piling it on.

King Coin: You’re so right, Jerric only teases the ones he cares about. Thank you for pointing out the difference in Lildereth’s and Darnand’s outlooks. It makes them fun to write.

TheBrume: That was the first time it was only Darnand and Lildereth, so it was fun to focus on the two of them, if only for a few paragraphs. I’m actually not even sure how long Lildereth will stick around this time, so I’m glad you’re enjoying it.

McBadgere: Welcome to the story, Brock! I’m glad you’re reading. Here’s some more.


Where we are: Darnand got his recommendation from Sigrid Firewalker, head of the Kvatch Mages Guild chapter. Jerric spent some time learning new spells and training with Vigge the Cautious, as well as helping the priests and Kvatch Guard deal with some of Kvatch’s newly undead residents. Now Jerric, Darnand, Lildereth, Ulfe, and the horses have left Kvatch, heading eventually to Skingrad. Their path is not the most direct one.




Chapter 13: Skingrad, Part 1


Jerric lay on the frozen ground watching the sun set over the Colovian foothills. Magnus glowed behind a haze of pink, though the sky was clear above. Two days of snow in Kvatch had been followed by two more of melting rain. Then cold had settled back over the West Weald. Their path took them northeast from Kvatch into the rocky hills below the Colovian Mountains. Fir trees and winter-bare maples grew widely scattered here, but the ground was mostly open meadows of deer-cropped grass with patches of thigh high heather and mountain sedge.

Lildereth had found the standing stones just after mid-day. They took the afternoon to set up camp nearby and survey the surrounding area. Lildereth returned from her scouting mission with two iron swords, a haunch of venison, and no comment. Jerric considered their camp secure.

The cold ground didn’t bother him, but he could feel Darnand shifting uncomfortably at his side. The two of them had found a fairly level spot sheltered from the wind by a boulder. The Doomstones stood slightly downhill from their position. Darnand had decided to pass the time until sunset by filling in some details on his map. Jerric’s back provided the work surface.

“Try not to breathe so much,” Darnand admonished. “I could almost think that we are at sea.”

Jerric saved his comment for later. He turned his head to look at the Doomstones. The largest stone stood within an arrangement of shorter ones much like the Jone Stone that Martin had shown him. These stones also stood in a circle of ominously blackened ground. Four of the stones were roughly cruciform in shape. Rusted chains hung from metal rings set into the rock. “You know, I think those stones with the chains mark compass points,” Jerric remarked. “Look, you can tell by the sun’s angle.”

“Your back rises when you speak.”

“I wonder what they were for. Something unpleasant, I’d wager.”

“Some sacrifices are made willingly. Be still.”

Jerric snorted into the crook of his arm. “I guess some change their minds or they wouldn’t need chains. Why don’t you mark your map back at the camp? We could be sparring right now instead of just sitting here.”

“Ulfe’s curiosity would prove more ruinous than your lack of repose.”

Darnand had a point. The hound seemed to enjoy shoving her head between the Breton and whatever he was attempting to do. Jerric’s camp chores usually involved blades or a hot calcinator, and Lildereth could send Ulfe away with a look when she needed to. The burden of Ulfe’s affection often fell on Darnand.

Jerric heard Darnand rummaging in his shoulder bag. Its weight lifted from Jerric’s legs, and his friend stood up. “I have finished,” said Darnand. He held the map in his hands. “Are you certain you will be able to find our camp in the dark? I did not want to mark it.”

Jerric climbed to his feet. “Yeah. It’ll still be where we left it, even if it’s not on your map.”

A pained look crossed Darnand’s face. “You refer to when Lildereth pointed toward Miscarcand, and I consulted my map.”

“Yeah, I refer to that.”

“I was verifying its accuracy, not doubting her.”

“The next time you verify its accuracy when she’s showing you something, she’s going to stick the map up your backside. I hope that thought comforts you while you’re extracting it.”

Darnand’s face looked as pale as a ghost under the sun’s last rays. “I shall not insult her that way again.” He ran a hand over his eyes. “Gods help me. Do you suppose that is why she declined to join us this evening?”

“No. I don’t think she holds a grudge. Just gets her vengeance over with and moves on. Anyway, didn’t you see her when we passed by these stones? Skittish as a deer, and our camp’s two solid miles away. She doesn’t like strange magic. And by that I mean unfamiliar. Her magic is as strange as any I’ve seen.”

Darnand nodded. “There is much I would learn about Bosmer magic. Lildereth manipulates physical energy as naturally as an Altmer controls the mystic. I tried to speak with her about it, but I am afraid I only made her impatient.”

“You’re not alone in that. At least she hasn’t shot you. Yet.”

“Why do you suppose she remains with us?”

“You mean besides your charm and my wit?” Jerric grinned. Darnand’s face stayed serious. “I think she’s looking for something. Maybe she’ll need help when she finds it. Anyway, I’m glad she’s coming along, whatever her reasons.”

“As am I.”

The two men walked down to the ring of stones. “I’m only guessing that we need to wait until the stars are out,” said Jerric. “That’s what Mar—That’s what, uh, Marcus said about the Jone Stone, and he was right.”

Darnand looked Jerric straight in the eye. “I know that the man’s name is Martin. You talk in your sleep.”

Alarm stopped Jerric’s breath. “What other names have I said?” Darnand looked uncomfortable. Jerric felt like he might vomit. “Out with it, Breton. You can’t keep my own secrets from me.”

“There is little else that I recognize. Your muttering is unintelligible, and it rarely wakes me anymore. You can only be understood when you are the most distressed. You often shout a warning to someone called Martin. And you sometimes call out for… your mother.”

Jerric let out his breath and scratched a hand through his hair. “Probably in the dreams where I’m dying. I’ve heard folk cry for their Ma in every kind of language, right at the end. I guess I’m no different.”

Darnand looked doubtful. “I do not think you are in jeopardy, Jerric. Rather, it sounds as if she might be. I expect that if you do not remember all of those dreams, it is a blessing.” Darnand winced. “A vapid phrase, but no less suitable.”

“So you say it’s not the spicy dreams that make me wake up sweaty.” He might not tell me if I’ve been saying Abiene’s name, Jerric realized.

“If I suspected that you were flailing in the arms of Dibella, you would awaken alone.” Darnand suddenly gripped Jerric’s arm. “The center stone!”

Runes and symbols glowed red in the faint starlight. Jerric stepped carefully up to examine them. The runes meant nothing to him, but some of the markings looked familiar. “It’s a star map, Darnand. This might be one of the Birthsign Stones.” He ran his fingers over the markings. “It’s the Atronach!”

“Are you certain?” Darnand’s voice came from outside the circle. He sounded tense.

“I know the stars that marked my own birth. I’m going to try to invoke the blessing, or whatever. Maybe you can tell what it does.” Jerric sent his will into the stone, announcing his presence rather than demanding. Power stirred under his palms immediately. He felt welcomed, as if the Stone had been waiting for only him. The feeling of being more than he was a moment before drifted over him. He stepped back away from the Stone, slightly dazed.

“Jerric?” Darnand sounded extremely edgy. When Jerric turned, he noticed that it was fully dark.

“Yeah.” Jerric walked over to where Darnand waited. The Breton took a few steps back, and Jerric left the circle of stones. “It gave me something, but I don’t know what.”

“I have read that the Atronach has the power to grant the Arcane Well to deserving mortals, but I could not comprehend the context from the fragment I found. I hypothesized that the author meant the stars themselves might bestow the power. Perhaps the stars act through these stones.”

“I don’t know. Stand back, I’ll try it.” Jerric reached for his new power. After a moment he was still puzzled. “I feel the same.”

“The Arcane Well allows the recipient to absorb some spells into their own magicka. Additionally, it allows a greater reserve of magicka, for a time.”

“Thus the name,” said Jerric.

Darnand blinked at him. “Indeed.”

“It’s a power with properties like the ones the stars marked me with at birth. If it was Sun’s Dusk, I’d think your hypothesis might be correct. But right now it’s Morning Star, and we’re under the Ritual. I believe that if the gift comes from the stars, it must come through some other power, through the Stone.” Darnand was staring. “What?”

“Nothing. Please, continue.”

“I know why I don’t feel any different. You might feel magicka filling your Arcane Well, but I don’t. The Atronach also delivers a curse. My magicka is stunted. If I drank some magicka potion, I’d feel the Well.” Jerric thought for a moment. “How do you suppose it works?”

Darnand’s eyes were round. “It makes you smarter.”

Jerric laughed and thumped him on the shoulder. “Good one. Go ahead, now you try it.”

“I shall decline this opportunity. I had not considered that the Stone might also convey a curse. Of course, you would not notice,” Darnand continued quickly, “but it is a risk I should not take.”

“All right, then. Anyway, how would we know if it made you smarter?” Jerric laughed again. “I’m starving. Let’s go back to camp. By now Lildereth has probably dragged half of the mountain into the tent to keep us warm. I can see well enough to find the way. You keep your light spell in your own eyes.”

Darnand spoke after they had walked for a few moments. “The day after tomorrow is Meridia’s summoning day. I expect we will reach the shrine in time.”

“Uh huh,” Jerric agreed. “I already know that. What’s really on your mind?”

Darnand sounded uncertain. “Well…”

“Yeah?”

Darnand cleared his throat. “While you are still under the influence of the Arcane Well, I have a few theories I would like to discuss with you.”




Screenshot: Jerric at the Atronach Stone

This post has been edited by Grits: Oct 27 2011, 11:50 PM

[SubRosa]

A nice little talk about the Doomstones. I have often wondered about those chains too. Although I never ran toward sacrifices. That doesn't seem very Cyrodiilic. I always imagined that either the stones were chained together, and something hung from them, or that there was a structure of wood around or atop them that the chains somehow connected to.

The hound seemed to enjoy shoving her head between the Breton and whatever he was attempting to do.
An excellent description of dogness!

Her magic is as strange as any I’ve seen.


You can’t keep my own secrets from me.
I think we can argue with that!

So if Jerric is at the Astronaut Stone, shouldn't he get a spacesuit? Or a rocket?

[mALX]

Darnand's fears about entering that circle were a great touch, as was bringing out Lildereth's aversion to it and different magic - huge details !!!

Darnand cleared his throat. “While you are still under the influence of the Arcane Well, I have a few theories I would like to discuss with you.”

ROFL !!! Very typical Darnand !!! He better hurry, he only has like 120 seconds to pick Jerric's enhanced brain, lol.

I love how they are discovering the powers of these stones !! Tremendous immersion into the different facets of magic in Cyrodiil !! Darnand's gentle way of letting Jerric know about the talking in his sleep - kind of makes you wonder if he heard more than he is telling. Awesome Write !!

[Acadian]

It was fun with the two fellows and their four footed girl, talking about the pointy eared one.

You do the banter between them all very well – even when Lildereth is not there, she is. I like that her magic seems different.

Interesting stuff about the stones.

I can see Jerric’s concern about blabbing in his sleep.

So, is Meridia’s shrine on the menu? That could portend some black-robed trouble – that Darnand would no doubt find irresistibly fascinating.

This post has been edited by Acadian: Oct 28 2011, 01:42 AM

[King Coin]

Lildereth deadly as usual and quiet for a change. Maybe that’s just because Jerric and Darnand were too busy to tease.

I like Darnand’s comments. ‘Stop breathing so I can write neatly.’

Lol. Darnand and his map getting intolerable?

Hey I agree with Jerric. Whatever her reasons, I’m happy Lildereth has stayed. I AM very curious about why she’s skittish. Is there something about this area that she knows, or is Jerric correct in his assumption? We will see.

Jerric’s got dreams that rival Aravi’s. I wonder if she’sanything like Jerric is in her sleep?

Darnand’s eyes were round. “It makes you smarter.”
I have to agree!

Theories to discuss? Maybe even test? Can’t wait!